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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2B:


Previously:

FLASHBACK:

Rohit started explaining what plan he had and the scene blurred...
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Back to the present,

Both Kumud and Pramad were brought back to the present time with Pramad's question," Kumud, I don't get one thing, why did he not looked shocked on seeing you? I mean, he looked sort of confused but it did not look like he knew you..Either, he is a really good actor or he has suffered from a memory loss.."

Kumud pondered for a while," I don't know Pramad, I did not want to reveal my name to him since you know that 8 years is a lot of time and I have changed since my school days, I no longer have that nerdy look and I was quite chubby back then but I still have the same face...I thought that maybe he forgot but it was really stupid of me to not tell my name to him..since there is zero possibility that he has forgotten me..."

"Especially, owing to the fact that you both were really close...it is next to impossible that he has really forgotten you, except if you consider my last suggestion, that he has lost his memory.." Pramad said.

" Maybe.. I don't know." Kumud said as she was on the verge of breaking down, it was a lot for her to handle in one day and she wanted to be alone...for her to think, to manage to get hold of one of the keys that could solve all the mysteries.

Pramad kept his hand on Kumud's shoulder," If he becomes a distraction, then I will be forced to kill..."

Kumud looked at Pramad with shock and pain written on her face but she did not utter a single word, she kept quiet and looked down.

"You still love him, don't you?" Pramad said, with some coldness in his voice,"You cannot hide your feelings for him and I know that we cannot eliminate him for no reasons, so I give you one month, try to know what he really is and what are his intentions, I will also do my best to search on him and if he is a spy, then..I am really sorry, but what you fear will come true...I just hope that he is proven innocent, because I'll be forced to hurt you by causing his death, against my will"

Pramad left the room by slamming the door shut and Kumud just slumped down on the floor and let her tears flow...she needed to let everything out, she was clearly moving on, she had forgotten him and all the memories related to him but now, all her efforts were futile and she had risked hers and Pramad's life as well as the society they were in. Thinking about all this, she dozed off...

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Next Day,

Kumud woke up with the sound of rain...It was still six in the morning and it was already raining like hell, as usual. Kumud stood and she wondered why she was sleeping on the floor but that led her to reminisce the previous day's happenings.

Pramad had already left as he needed to meet someone in another region and that left Kumud all alone with Saras. Kumud sighed as the thought of being alone with Saras made her scared...not really scared, but just anxious. However, she made up her mind to know the entire truth, and she was going to do that by conversing with her guest'.

Saras, on the other hand was sitting on the bed in the room allocated to him and he looked like he was in deep thoughts, well actually, he was.

"Why does that girl...what's her name? Yeah, Kyra, she looks so familiar and it looks like I have known her but I do not remember having known someone by that name, but I cannot come to a conclusion before knowing about her real identity and moreover, I don't know where that Solanki has fled after drugging me and injuring me on the same leg on which I limped previously but now, I can't walk properly due to that creep, once I get in contact with the higher authorities, I'll sack him out of his position as an inspector and for now, I will have to concentrate on my purpose for being here but , I have to be thankful that Kyra saved me, otherwise I would have died due to the effects of the dose, I don't even remember where I was heading to...however, who is she? Is she in the same society or has she been captive?" Saras mentally thought to himself.

Saras was working in the FBI in England and he was assigned for a mission in India. He had to unmask a society, one because of which many planes have been hijacked but till now, no one has been able to understand the case properly.

The society was formed some 10 years back and the society would target random flights on random dates... The person who had formed the society was Pramad's dad, Buddhi Dhan(BD), and the reason was owing to his wife's death in one flight which was from London to India. BD's wife was killed by a home minister's son. The home minister's son was heavily drunk in the plane and was behaving insolently and when BD's wife had slapped him since the home minister's son was trying to misbehave with a girl, the home minister's son just took out a gun and shot BD's wife and she died on the spot. When this news was taken to BD, he was furious and seeked for justice but no one helped him, the other passengers who were on board the plane were bribed to keep their mouths shut and the government authorities also refused to take any actions. BD felt dejected and he could not understand what to do, and that same day his brother-in-law had paid him a visit.

Flashback,

10 years back,

"BD, this is injust, no one is ready to witness, they claim that they do not know anything, and when we were shown the door when we seeked justice, this is not done, today this has happened to my sister, tomorrow, it may happen to someone else, but everyone is too selfish to care about all this, we should do something!" said Yash, BD's brother-in-law.

" But what can we do?! No one even pitied Pramad, who is crying for his mother right now." BD said broken down.

" There is only one thing that we can do, Revenge!"

"Yash, seriously, I cannot think of anything right now, and Revenge is beyond my thoughts..."
"Think of it BD, today you have lost your wife, tomorrow you may lose someone close to you and this cycle will continue and during all this, no one will even come to help you, they will be mute spectators on all the events, these people will not realize what is it to lose a dear one but we can show them that, and when these people will sail in the same boat as you, they will then realize your pain but for that to happen, we must take some incentives.."

"What are you talking about? Do you want me to become a terrorist now?!" Yelled BD.

"I never said that! I was talking of creating a secret society..." Yash started and BD probed him to continue," Well, I am not telling you to become a terrorist or whatever but through this society, we will show people how we were treated..."

"Oh really! Then do you think that the 2 of us will suffice to create this society...and if you mean to say that we will hijack planes or kill people, then we will go behind the bars the very minute and I cannot afford to do that, think of Pramad, he will be all alone, he is only 15 years!" BD retorted with sarcasm.

" So are you planning to sit here and keep quiet while all the people who have wronged us celebrate and party? The home minister has a long list of enemies, he had been unfair to a lot of people in the past and now his son has been following his foot steps.. and not only that there are a lot of commoners who were wrongly treated by some government authorities... think once we have assembled all these people, they are hungry for revenge and we can give them what they want, we are helping them in a sort of way and I can easily locate them... " Yash said, he had some contacts with underworld people since he was a drug dealer but very few people knew this and BD was himself unaware of all this.

" I don't know, I can't take a decision right now, I need to think." BD said." All right, but think well, your decision can change many things.." Yash said while going away.

End of Flashback,
Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
NOTE:
Hey everyone,

First of all, Eid Mubarak to all those who are celebrating.
I hope that you like this part of Raaz, and the past is being revealed slowly and it will be getting more interesting as the story progresses.I will try to be more regular on updates as from now on.


Don't forget to like and comment.


Thanks for your patience and support.
Take care,
Jess

Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

looks like its not an act Saras really has forgotten Kumud

wow Saras working with FBI

n Pramad has warned Kumud if Saras gets in there way he will kill him

wonder how thats gonna play out

cant believe Pramads dad is highjacking planes as a revenge tactic all those innocents

his BIL is really a BAD influence

looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
awesome update...
liked it very much...
u trully r a great writer..๐Ÿ‘
i every time read ur stories, ur updates i think this ...๐Ÿ˜ณ

pramad realises kumud still loves saras..
so pramad gives a months time to kumud to know him & his reason behind visiting this place as he doubts saras can b a spy, dangerous to their society...
kumud remembers her past & feels sad...
saras wakes up & remembers hw he landed here...
so he is a investigating officer.. here to investigate on this society.. so pramad's doubts r correct...
wil pramad know his real identity... & kill him as he warned kumud or wil kumud save him... or wil saras help kumud & this society in getting justice...?? huh so many questions..
felt bad for pramad... as his mother was killed & dint get justice..
so his dad & his uncle who is a drug dealer started this society..
they hijack sum planes..
i think they would b hijacking d persons related to that minister who did injustice...
too much suspense building up...
waiting 4 it to unfold...
continue soon...surely make it soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Thanks Jess for the most awaiting updated part๐Ÿ˜Š

The story is going quite interesting and intriguing too. Things are getting revealed slowly and steadily ๐Ÿ˜‰ It is really strange that Saras had forgotten Kumud when both were so close during their school days, though she had changed her looks a bit but still he should have recognized her. Kumud looked still have soft corner for Saras and the reaction of her when Pramad was giving her warning to harm saras in case he is from secret agency, hinting about her concern for saras๐Ÿ˜Š So it was Pramad's father BD who runs a society whose members were behind many plane hijacking cases to give the high authorities a taste of their own medicine by taking their revenge from them. But the question arises how kumud had come to be a part of their group?๐Ÿ˜• How was she related to Pramad? And most importantly how Kumud and saras had got separated from each other i.e through which plan of Saras's fake friends?

May be all these questions will be answered in the next part for which I am really excited๐Ÿ˜Š Hope it gets updated asap๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: YaSha0512

looks like its not an act Saras really has forgotten Kumud

wow Saras working with FBI

n Pramad has warned Kumud if Saras gets in there way he will kill him

wonder how thats gonna play out

cant believe Pramads dad is highjacking planes as a revenge tactic all those innocents

his BIL is really a BAD influence

looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


Hey dear ๐Ÿ˜Š

Saras is working with the FBI
and Pramad is weary of him, and
he will not hesitate to kill Saras if he becomes a threat to them.

Yes, Pramad's dad has resorted to illegal ways now
and his BIL is surely a bad influence

Will be updating soon

Take care...๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: samudbest

Thanks Jess for the most awaiting updated part๐Ÿ˜Š

The story is going quite interesting and intriguing too. Things are getting revealed slowly and steadily ๐Ÿ˜‰ It is really strange that Saras had forgotten Kumud when both were so close during their school days, though she had changed her looks a bit but still he should have recognized her. Kumud looked still have soft corner for Saras and the reaction of her when Pramad was giving her warning to harm saras in case he is from secret agency, hinting about her concern for saras๐Ÿ˜Š So it was Pramad's father BD who runs a society whose members were behind many plane hijacking cases to give the high authorities a taste of their own medicine by taking their revenge from them. But the question arises how kumud had come to be a part of their group?๐Ÿ˜• How was she related to Pramad? And most importantly how Kumud and saras had got separated from each other i.e through which plan of Saras's fake friends?

May be all these questions will be answered in the next part for which I am really excited๐Ÿ˜Š Hope it gets updated asap๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care๐Ÿ˜Š


Heyy dear

Yes, things are slowly getting revealed
and as the story will progress, more things will
be revealed ๐Ÿ˜‰

Well, whether Saras had forgotten Kumud or not
is something which will be revealed further and
more of the past will also surface then๐Ÿ˜Š

Yes, Kumud still cares for Saras, though, she is
confused about it but still she is concerned about
him ๐Ÿ˜Š

Indeed, the society was created by Pramad's father
just for revenge since no one helped him
when he was on the quest for justice and in the next part,
it will be revealed as to how Kumud became involved in
the society and also how Kumud and Saras were separated.

The next part will be updated soon๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š

Take care...๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dear
I am glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š
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You're welcome :)
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