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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: samudbest

Thanks Jess for finally giving the much awaited update of Raaz. I was waiting for it since long time and finally able to get it๐Ÿ˜‰

About this part I have no words to describe it. It was wonderful and mind blowing. The flashback part was so nicely written and I have enjoyed reading it. Feel good to see Kumari and Anushka in the part though for a short time but it made me to remember our favourite show SC๐Ÿ˜Š So kumud was attracted towards gautam who was from a rich family and had high effect on girls and Kumud was also one of them. It was really funny when Kumud bumped into him unknowingly and he said to himself, " There we go, another one"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ Loved the way he started spending time with Kumud ignoring his sycophant friends and they didn't like this change of behaviour of Gautam as they were dependent on him for fulfilling their bad habits. Now since they were planning to get rid her out of gautam's life, it makes me to eager what they were upto?๐Ÿ˜•

Very excited for the next part after reading this one.๐Ÿ˜‰

Hope you do update the next part much soon and I am also waiting for the update of EK Villain.๐Ÿ˜‰ But you can take time to give us high quality parts like this one, I won't mind that๐Ÿ˜Š



Hey ๐Ÿค—
Thanks a lot for the review,
I know I have taken a lot of time and in fact, I have
to thank all of you for your patience

I am glad that you liked this part
and I am happy that I have been able to do justice to the flashback scene.
Right, Kumud was attracted to Saras and they met by coincidence
and then he started spending time with her but his friends were not pleased
with his behaviour so they have planned something and you
will get to know what it is about in the next part which I will hopefully
update soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

I will try to update the next part as soon as I can
and I have updated the preview for Ek Villain,
the whole part might be updated by next weekend๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
FB scenes r so simple n sweet.Kumud fallen 4 heart throb of girls Saras.Since he knew that he had a lot of femal fans he didn't take it seriously.but there is an unknown attraction which made him ask her name.whn will he realize his luv 4 her?Will this leg prob lead 2 a new chapter in their life?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Jess2014


Hey ๐Ÿค—
Thanks a lot for the review,
I know I have taken a lot of time and in fact, I have
to thank all of you for your patience

I am glad that you liked this part
and I am happy that I have been able to do justice to the flashback scene.
Right, Kumud was attracted to Saras and they met by coincidence
and then he started spending time with her but his friends were not pleased
with his behaviour so they have planned something and you
will get to know what it is about in the next part which I will hopefully
update soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

I will try to update the next part as soon as I can
and I have updated the preview for Ek Villain,
the whole part might be updated by next weekend๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care๐Ÿ˜Š




Hi Jess๐Ÿค—

Maybe you have taken some time before updating this FF but after reading such a nice and amazing part it seems that it was worth the wait.๐Ÿ˜‰

I loved this much awaited part. All the Samud scenes in the flashback were so nicely written and it looked so real. The way Saras got attracted to Jenny after seeing her first time was so cute. But it seems the fake friends of gautam were planning something big to hurt Kumud or something like that that may change the life of Gautam and Jenny completely. But before that hope you will add some romantic scenes of Jenny and gautam๐Ÿ˜‰ I am very excited and eager too for reading the next part. Hope you update it soon๐Ÿ˜‰ And yes I did read the preview of EK VILLAIN and it was a nice one. Now waiting for the full updated part of it.

Take Care๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by samudbest - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
awesome update jess๐Ÿค—
loved it.. so amazingly written...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
so kumud telling pramad her past with saras...
flashback nice start...
kumud loves saras & her frnds teasing her... anushka & kumari her frnds... aww u included them in this story..๐Ÿ˜ณ
miss them ... miss saraswatichandra show so much...
saras knows kumud likes him.. een he likes her simplicity.. cant say whether he started loving her or not... may b with more flashback v wil know...๐Ÿ˜•
saras frnds hate her coz due to kumud's simplicity & influence saras left their dirty company & bad habits...๐Ÿ˜ณ
now saras frnds planning to throw kumud out of saras life๐Ÿ˜ก... hope they dont succeed.. but i know as it is flashback & samud not together now may b saras frnds succeeded...๐Ÿ˜ญ
saras hates science... but he said he was a scientist... was he saying d truth.. did he start learning science after he was seperated from kumud or as kumud felt he was surely lying & hiding sumthng...totally ๐Ÿ˜•...
sorry for late comment...
eagerly waiting 4 next part...
continue soon.. dont make us wait longer... plz
thnks 4 d pm...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

FB scenes r so simple n sweet.Kumud fallen 4 heart throb of girls Saras.Since he knew that he had a lot of femal fans he didn't take it seriously.but there is an unknown attraction which made him ask her name.whn will he realize his luv 4 her?Will this leg prob lead 2 a new chapter in their life?

I am glad that you liked the FB scenes Jasmine
All your questions will be answered
with the upcoming part ๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care...:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: samudbest




Hi Jess๐Ÿค—

Maybe you have taken some time before updating this FF but after reading such a nice and amazing part it seems that it was worth the wait.๐Ÿ˜‰

I loved this much awaited part. All the Samud scenes in the flashback were so nicely written and it looked so real. The way Saras got attracted to Jenny after seeing her first time was so cute. But it seems the fake friends of gautam were planning something big to hurt Kumud or something like that that may change the life of Gautam and Jenny completely. But before that hope you will add some romantic scenes of Jenny and gautam๐Ÿ˜‰ I am very excited and eager too for reading the next part. Hope you update it soon๐Ÿ˜‰ And yes I did read the preview of EK VILLAIN and it was a nice one. Now waiting for the full updated part of it.

Take Care๐Ÿ˜Š


Hey dear ๐Ÿค—

I am glad that you liked the part and
you did not mind the time I took for updating ๐Ÿ˜Š

All your questions will be answered with the
upcoming part, and yes Saras's so-called
friends have planned something, quite big
and there will be major consequences due
to their plan.

I am glad you liked the preview of Ek Villain and
I will update the whole part soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
interestin start
so kumud saved him from committing suicide
he lied too when he woke
in past kumuds presence made him steer away from using n dealing drugs
maybe he went back to it after they parted ways
looks like she was his light at the end of the tunnel
just hope she becomes that light again
wonder what those jerks planned??
thanks 4 pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

interestin start

so kumud saved him from committing suicide
he lied too when he woke
in past kumuds presence made him steer away from using n dealing drugs
maybe he went back to it after they parted ways
looks like she was his light at the end of the tunnel
just hope she becomes that light again
wonder what those jerks planned??
thanks 4 pm nplz keep em comin

Hey,
Thanks a lot,
I am glad you liked it

Yes, the story starts at the point where Saras
is trying to kill himself and Kumud saves him
and he resorted to lies when he got his consciousness back

The past reveals whatever transpired between the both of them
and more will be revealed in the upcoming part
which I will update soon hopefully

The plan which Saras's friends have thought
will also been known in the next part

Take care...๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Waiting for the update ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will be updated in some days ๐Ÿ˜‰

Take care,
Jess
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