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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

the prob is that samud ffs have very few readers.so all d writers left their ffs unfinished.even I stopped writing ffs.Not bcz d readers were few.but bcz d comments were one word.i like detailed comments.but I hope u'll keep writing samud ffs,if not at least short stories n plz don't discount.i'll keep reading ur ffs n give u detailed comments.

cant wait 4 ur updates.plz update both Raaz n Phir mohabat soon.After ur exams plz come up with the season2 of SC to close the loopholes in d show


Yeah I know that there are only a few readers. Don't worry, I will keep writing and thanks a lot for encouraging me.

I will update both stories soon and the second season of SC too, but i'm really nervous about it as i don't know if it'll meet your expectations and if i will be able to do justice to the characters but i will give it a try.

Lastly, I think that you should continue writing, you are a very good writer and i will be there to give you detailed comments.

Take care...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
amazing update...
read d chapter wen u posted it..
but couldnt comment as i wasnt online...
aryan so cruel... he told lie to saras abt kumud... & now planning to spike kumud's drink... 😡😡
hope saras saves kumud... & doesnt get kumud wrong...
continue soon..
waiting 4 next part...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Thx a lot.U shud def come up with the season 2 of SC.I'm not forcing u 2 write a long ff as I know u hve other ffs 2 write.But plz write a ss to close all d loopholes.
when u r ready 2 start season2 plz inform me.I've a few requests

Originally posted by: Jess2014


Yeah I know that there are only a few readers. Don't worry, I will keep writing and thanks a lot for encouraging me.

I will update both stories soon and the second season of SC too, but i'm really nervous about it as i don't know if it'll meet your expectations and if i will be able to do justice to the characters but i will give it a try.

Lastly, I think that you should continue writing, you are a very good writer and i will be there to give you detailed comments.

Take care...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

amazing update...
read d chapter wen u posted it..
but couldnt comment as i wasnt online...
aryan so cruel... he told lie to saras abt kumud... & now planning to spike kumud's drink... 😡😡
hope saras saves kumud... & doesnt get kumud wrong...
continue soon..
waiting 4 next part...
thnks 4 d pm...

thanks hiya
All i can tell you is that there will be some major drama in the upcoming parts. 😉
Will continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thx a lot.U shud def come up with the season 2 of SC.I'm not forcing u 2 write a long ff as I know u hve other ffs 2 write.But plz write a ss to close all d loopholes.

when u r ready 2 start season2 plz inform me.I've a few requests

I will definitely write an ss or ff on season 2 of SC, i will inform you when i am going to start and feel free to send your requests.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jess2014

thanks hiya
All i can tell you is that there will be some major drama in the upcoming parts. 😉
Will continue soon.


kk wil wait 4 it...
btw nice title...
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988


kk wil wait 4 it...
btw nice title...

thanks, i was listening to the song and then i decided to put it as the title
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
poor kumud can't believe she ran away n no one thought t9 search for her
as for that little sh*t Aryan n partner in crime kusum I can't wait for their truth to be revealed to all
I can't believe they were using kumud to get kusums late fathers property disgusting
n now that there's a chance of them being caught they're trying to make out kumud is the golddigger
I really hope Saras doesn't trust his Bro blindly
thanks for pm plz keep em coming N continue soon
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Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Nice start

poor kumud can't believe she ran away n no one thought t9 search for her
as for that little sh*t Aryan n partner in crime kusum I can't wait for their truth to be revealed to all
I can't believe they were using kumud to get kusums late fathers property disgusting
n now that there's a chance of them being caught they're trying to make out kumud is the golddigger
I really hope Saras doesn't trust his Bro blindly
thanks for pm plz keep em coming N continue soon

thanks dear
Will continue soon 😊
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Part 4:



The lights focused on one spot only and Mr Singhania was standing in the middle of the room with a glass in his hands.

"Thanks you everyone for coming to this party, I want to raise a toast for the successful Merging of Diamonds Empire and Vyas Company."

There was a round of applause.

"And now, I would like to congratulate the one because of whom all this has been possible, Mr Saras Vyas," there was another round of applause," I would not take more time, so enjoy the party."

Kumud was standing in a corner, away from everyone, she was lost in her thoughts while Saras was speaking to some of his business partners.

"Are you sure you've understood what you need to do?"
The waiter nodded.

"Good," Aryan opened a packet and poured its contents in a glass containing juice , he then mixed it and gave it to the waiter. Then he slapped a bundle of notes in the tray which the waiter happily accepted.

He watched the waiter going towards Kumud and giving her the drink.
Kumud took the drink and took a sip.

Aryan went and hugged Kusum, "Our plan has worked baby,"
"Really? I love you."
"Kusum , how about we end this perfect night with a dance?"

"What do you mean?"

The lights went off, and the dj put on a track.

Teri meri.. raaton ne kiye hain kuch iraade
Mili hain jo ab ye mulakaatein
Koi jaadu hone ko hai
(Aryan started singing and walked towards Kusum)

Teri meri.. hui aankhon-aankhon mein jo baatein
Mili hain jo ab ye mulakatein
Koi jaadu hone ko hai..
(
Kusum slow danced with him while singing.)

Hona hai.. jo hona hai rahega hoke hi
Hota hai.. jo mil jata hai koi
Hoga ye.. hai jaana maine milke tumse hi
(Kusum and Aryan kept on dancing while other couples joined them on the dance floor)

Are you feeling it tonight
I am feeling it tonight
(Saras joined them and Aryan gave him a thumbs up)

Bang Bang, raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun..
( Saras pulled the nearest person to him as he did not have a partner but he didn't expect that it would be Kumud and she was giving him a smile, was he dreaming? And she also sang along and did all the steps, Saras forgot all his worries and carried on dancing)
Hey! aajkal aate jaate
Hey! aankhein karti hain baatein
Hey! aaj to aa jaana hai
Hey! aankhon ki baaton mein
Bas ek baat kar le
(Saras and Kumud did all the steps like Kat and Hrithik)

Hey! mujhe baahon mein tu bhar le
Hey! aur saari raat bhar ye
Hey! chalti rahe phir kahaani teri meri
(Aryan turned Kusum around and she came back colliding in his chest)
Teri meri.. teri meri aahon ke ishaare
Aa zara samajh lein hum wo saare

Ke hosh ab to khone ko hain
(Aryan and Kusum were happy to see their plan working but they were worried when they saw Saras dancing with her)
Bang bang take a little chance chance
Take a little dance dance
Now get your body movin'..


Bang bang, raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun
(Everyone ended the dance while Kusum signaled Aryan to distract Saras)

Saras was happy to see Kumud with a smile on her face.

"Why did the stop? I want to dance." Kumud said in a childidh voice with a silly grin on her face.

"Oh God," Saras realized that she was drunk.

"Hey, didn't you hear, I want to dance." She said while swinging her hands.
Saras had to do something before things get out of control,"Look Kumud, you're drunk, come let's go to your..."

"No! I want to dance," then she started humming the lyrics of the song.

"Kumud! Let's go," Saras held Kumud's wrist and was about to drag her out when Aryan came, "Bhaiya, there is one of our business partners who want to talk to you."

"Aryan, right now?" Aryan looked at Kumud and nodded at Saras.
"Look, I can't come now, Kumud is drunk and..."

"Bhaiya, Kusum and I will take her safely to her room.."

Saras seemed unsure, it was not that he didn't trust his brother but he didn't know why he was so protective when it came to Kumud.

At that moment, Mr Singhania came to talk to Saras and Aryan when he saw Kumud in that state, she was blabbering anything that came to her mind and was talking like a three year old.

"What happened to her?"
"I guess she's drunk, I was about to take her to her suite but.."
"But what..."
Aryan quickly butted in, he didn't want his lie to be caught," Actually, Mr Chaddha wanted to discuss something related to the cost of import."

"Oh, Saras, take care of her and I'll handle Mr Chaddha."
Aryan went away from there and kicked a chair. He was frustrated, everything had been going on smoothly but Saras interfered.

Saras held Kumud's hand and led her out of the ballroom but she ran away to the front of the hotel. Saras ran after her and when he finally caught up with her, it started raining.

Kumud ignored Saras and danced in the rain, she opened her arms and giggled.

"Why are you standing there, don't you like rains?" she asked him.

He couldn't help but smile and walked towards her, he slowly raised his hand to feel the rain.

He opened his eyes when she splashed some water on him and ran away. He stopped running when he met up with her.

They stood there staring at each other, he looked at her beauty. He ran his hands on her face and cupped her cheek. He brought his lips close to hers while she shivered.

Here's the next part, hope you liked it!

Love Jess ❤️


Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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