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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mumbai Rain

When Saras-Kumud planned to have a rainy date in Mumbai I was excited for their romantic rain scenes.Wished for a rain dance too.But they didn't even show a rain scene in Saraswatichandra.They wasted a
good opportunity by cancelling their date.So I am writing an OS where Samud have a romantic rain dance.I really worked hard to create the rain pics of Samud.Hope u all liked it.



Kumud got bored in the Mumbai flat.Suddenly she heard some sound and looked outside through the window.Her face blossomed seeing the rain drops falling down.She extended her hand outside to feel the rain drops.
K:Wish Saras was with me now.

Saras who was in his office was also viewing the beautiful rain outside.
He remembered in Ratnanagiri Kumud dancing in rain when she felt he too loves her.


Seeing him watch her she blushed.
She turned off her face due to shyness
and ran away.He smiled admiring her.

He danced alone in the balcony feeling the rain drops of love.

He smiled:Kumud,I know how much you love rain.That day we both danced individually in rain.Now we are together.We will be together in rain.
He rang up Kumud.
She was excited:Saras...Rain...
S:I know.I am also watching it now.This is Mumbai's this year's first rain.Very special.We are also first time in Mumbai.So let us make this rainy moment special.
K:Means?
S:I am coming there now.Get dressed up.
We will go out in rain.I heard that Mumbai rain is very romantic.
Kumud was excited:Oh Saras...I can't wait.I will get ready now.

Kumud wore a beautiful anarkali.Saras came home.Seeing her in the anarkali his eyes brightened.She blushed.He extended his arms towards her.She held them.They walked to the car.
Keeping the car windows open Saras drove the car.
Kumud was giggling with thrill when rain drops fell on her face.

On the way he stopped the car.
K:Why did you stop the car?
S:No one is seen in this area.We will have privacy here.Get down Kumud.
She got down.
He held her hand pulling her closer to him.
She blushed:Saras!
S:Kumud...we could never dance together in rain.How can we waste this romantic rain like that?Let us dance.
Kumud was surprised:Saras?
He held her closer and danced intimately.
A beautiful romantic sensuous dance...

Yeh Saajish Hain Boondon Ki Koi Khwaahish Hain Chup Chup Si... (2)
Dekho Na Dekho Na...
He twirled her around.
Hawa Kuchh Haule Haule Zubaan Se Kya Kuchh Bole
Kyon Duuri Hain Ab Darmayaan
Dekho Na Dekho Na...
He caressed her face romantically and moved closer to her face.She blushed.
Phir Na Hawayen Hogi Itani Besharam
Phir Na Dag Mag Dag Mag Honge Yeh Kadam... (2)
They shared a passionate eye lock.
Haa Saawan Yeh Seedha Nahi Khufia Bada
Kuchh Toh Baraste Hue Keh Raha
Samjho Na... Samjho Na...
He rubbed her shoulder with his chin.
Hawa Kuchh Haule Haule Zubaan Se Kya Kuchh Bole
Kyon Duuri Hain Ab Darmayaan
Dekho Na Dekho Na...
He held her down and swayed rhythmically to the music of rain.

Jugnu Jaise Chahat Dekho Jale Mujhe
Meethi Si Mushkil Hain Koi Kya Kare )... (2)

His hands travelled all over her hands in a sensuous manner.She was lost in him.

Hothon Ki Arzi Aaise Thukraaon Na
Saanson Ki Marzi Ko Jhuthlaaon Na
Chhuu Lo Na Chhu Lo Na... (2)
His arms fell on her waist.She circled her arms around his shoulders.

Hawa Kuchh Haule Haule Zubaan Se Kya Kuchh Bole
Na Duuri Hain Ab Darmayaan


Dekho Na Dekho Na... (3)

He tickled her waist with his fingers making her giggle.

Dekho Na Hmm Hmm Hmm
Hmm Hmm Hmm Dekho Na(Fanaa).
K:Thank you Saras for making this rain so special.
S:Thank you Kumud for making this rain so romantic with your love.
She blushed.

The end
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well compose post frnd liked it.
These cvs not writing on mumbai rain and denying us a beautiful samud romantic moments.
If well written it could have been one of the best scenes of our JENAM and would have definetly set fire onscreen.
But cvs r crap cvs.
People blamed JENAM for not doing close scenes bt it were the cvs who hindered such scenes of our JENAM.
Really sad. 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a lovely rain romance OS
Pictures were beautiful
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin my way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow, thanku so much Jasmine 😊

plz do continue, SC ended n we Samudians are feeling so low 😔

Ur Samud fanfictions will surely cheer us. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww superb well written jasmine 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous OS Jasmine, you should write more. 😊
Wish we had got this scene instead of the crap that they showed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I would be very happy to write samud ffs.But no readers.So how can I write?😭

Originally posted by: Gul.S_Ef


wow, thanku so much Jasmine 😊

plz do continue, SC ended n we Samudians are feeling so low 😔

Ur Samud fanfictions will surely cheer us. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dont be disheartened jasmine i will always visit this forum and give my comments.
There r many like me.
Here we have beautiful memories of our SAMUD/JENAM which we can never abandon.
Looking forward to ur more ffs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thx.i get disheartened seeing one word comments.plz read n comment on samud ff raaz n encourage jezz 2 write more.i'm thankful 2 her 4 keeping samud alive

Originally posted by: JENAMTheBest

Dont be disheartened jasmine i will always visit this forum and give my comments.
There r many like me.
Here we have beautiful memories of our SAMUD/JENAM which we can never abandon.
Looking forward to ur more ffs.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab OS! Well written
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