SS:Fanaa..An Impossible Love Story..!Chapter_3 updtd pg 20 - Page 6

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His deep oceanic eyes scan newspaper on breakfast table as his habit..Bahadur's bak bak was continued from last 20 minutes that made saras annoy..
"Aap 16 saal baad aye ho..Malik (Saras's grand father) ki death ke baad to bare saab ne yahan aana hi chhor dia.."
Saras seemed to be totaly 'uninterested'
"Shayad isi lie aap raat ko raasta bhi bhatak gaye. Wo to achha hua bare saab ka phone aagaya aur mein apko baahar leney pohanch gaya. Warna Aap to Desai House Pohanch jate.."
"Flashbacks of last night flashed infront of his eyes..nd he instantly asked
"Desai house??"
Bahadur happily continued as he love gossiping "Haveli ke peechhay unhi ka to ghar hai..Bohat achhe log hein..Vidyachatur ji Music school ke principal hein..Guniyal ji bohat achhi hein.."
Saras tried to arrange the puzzles in his mind but "Vidyachatur" and "Guniyal"..umm no..Not a single name suits on That Angelic Fairy..
Saras cutted his 'bak bak' and asked "Unke ghar mein or koi bhi hai?"
"Haan saab haina..Unki betiyaan..Sab bohat pyari bachiyan hein.."
He kept talking but saras lost in his thoughts..
"Interesting"
Bahadur while making tea for him "Saraswati babu Cheeni kitni lengey.."
Listened to his way of addressing Mr.Hoty Vyas made him chocked while eating.. "Kya kaha tumne?"
Bahadur innocently "Cheeni kitni lengey?"
Saras controlled "Us se pehle!"
Bahadur was confused..
Saras explained with fake grin "Call me 'Saras' sirf SARAS..ok?"
Bahadur understood nd served him tea..
His Brown leather jacked filled with his presence and Brown shades fitted his pencil nose..Carrying important file with him he left for Important meeting..
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Sunny "Mr.Bhala se meri baat hogae hai..He would discuss with u details tonight.."
Saras" (Yawned) ok!"
Sunny"Teri tabyat to theek hai?"
Saras was walking into the Garden beside haveli"han theek hun bas aaj meeting attend krke thora thak gaya..
Sunny"Islie to tujhe keh raha hun shadi kar ley ..Usey dekh kar teri sari thakawat dur hojayegi"
Saras laughed at his friends stupidity..
Sunny"Tu hans raha hai? mein sach keh rha hun yar..haan tujhe kbhi yakeen nhi ayega..tuney kabhi pyar jo nhi kia!"
Saras wondered"Achha to tuney kia hai?"
Sunny dreamily "Haan kia haina "Preeti is my love.."
Saras confused "Abhi last month to tuney Rohini se milwaya tha!"
Sunny hesitated"Haan..wo..Hmara break up hogaya bt now i found love of my life preeti"
Saras shook his head "Last time bhi tuney yahi kaha tha..Isey pyar nhi kehtey..Pyar to wo hota hai jab aap pehli baar kisi ko dekho to dil khud bta dey that she is ur Love"
Sunny"Arey yar meri chhor ,mujhe to har larki ko dekh ke aisa hi lagta hai par tujhe kisko dekh ke aisa lagey ga?"
Saras sniffed "Pta nhi yaar.."
Sunny Laughed "School se college,College se university,University sey Office tak..Har larki tujh pey marti hai even preeti ka bhi pehla crush tu hi tha..Pta nhi Mr.Hottie Vyas kisko dekhengey to unke dil ke guitar bjengey.."
Saras dreamily "Koi to hogi jisko dekh ke mera dil ruk jayega..Jisey dekh ke aisa lgey ga ke.."
His breath stopped seeing her Dream girl..
Sunny"Lagey ga key..??? Hello"
Saras"Sunny mein tujhe baad mein phone krta hun.."
Sunny confused"Ye lagey ga??"
Saras"Shut up u..I'll call u later..Bye"
Sunny laughed"Hello.. sun to..!"
He disconected the call nd rushed to her as he didnt wanted to miss this chance to meet her.
"Her pleasure was visible in her adorable smile her face was wearing..Her fingers must be soft same as flowers she was creasing..Few of them she was picking may be for her Vase..What a passion..?" Saras thought..
He cleared his throat standing close to her..Close enough to seek pleasure by scanning her without a blink..He was following her after his gaze..
"Oh her cute little Dots on her neck.." that made his throat parched..Like he is thirsty from ages.."She was just looking like a butterfly standing between colourful flowers..What lucky flowers she was touching...What name to give her..Which word use to describe what I'm feeling for her..Aah..! Precious..Just Precious..!"
He took more steps towards her..Doesn't wanted himself to lost in her sorcery and get missed again..
He tried to figure out a sentence of his 'Tutey phutey" Words..But naah..! "Mr.Hottie Vyas nor need to be formal neither to arrange his broken words..
He smilingly more then confidently spoke "Hi..Aap yahan?"
Her 'No response' proved She was busy..Her Lips stretching to the wide and gorgeous smile,Her twinkling eyes and her expressions showed that may be she was talking with the flowers..
He tried again "Excuse me.."
But she didnt even took notice of him..
He saw she was about to pick Yellow tulip,He held the flower
before her to pick it..
She at last then Looked at him..
"My God..Her eyes.. Deep oceanic eyes.."It was enough for him that he could see his face in her crystal black big round eyes..He was numb.."What magic she had in her eyes that made him lost..Her lashes..Oh her lashes..The way she blinked looking at him..Her frown made her little dot of forehead more adorable..Totally heart stoling atitude..Yes yes he lost..He lost her heart.."
Saras offered him Tulip that he picked..She looked at his hand,Looked up again to his eyes..He gave a lite smile..Like he was giving her his heart..She took it from him and ran away..Saras lips stretched into a wide smile..As he ran his fingers into his hairs..He cheered "Yes..!"

Saras's hot breaths were visible in cold weather..But it didn't matters him how the weather and what the time was..11 at night but he was still standing in his terris waiting for her..
"Kal to isi time dekha tha meine usey yahan phir ab tak aai kiun nahi?" He muttered rubbing his palms..He also had dinner in his bedroom just because he doesn't wanted to lose her glimpse..Desai house's lights he saw turned off..He sniffed dissapointedly turned to his bed..He took out his shoes..About to turned off his lamp..When he heared someone playing Piano..
His eyes twinkled and he rushed back to terris,opened the doors..Yes lights were ON..
He could see her half bed and dressing table beside hearth..He tried to see more if he could..His eyes fell on dresser mirror..Here she was..Sitting beside piano..Her hairs were dancing with cool breeze blowing..Making her more beautiful..God she looks gorgeous in opened hair..
Saras was amused with her this talent "Ofcourse what could you expect from a daughter of Principal of Music school..!"
He rested his elbows on the wooden edge,enjoying music with eyes fixed on her..He could hear her humming in the silence of cold nights..He closed his eyes listening her..
She stopped after a piano lesson ends..
He became desperate as he opened his eyes and found her chair empty..His eyes desperatly started searching for her..Thankfully end to his desperation..He was able to saw her angelic face again..When she came to the window to untied curtains..She spread it..But stopped..
Saras signaled her..waved his hand to her..
She Looked at him amazed..
He smiled "You sung very well..!"
Kumud smiled..
Saras's heart started hammering inside his muscular chest seeing her beautiful smile..
"May I know your beautiful name?"
She was looking at him with same expressions..
He continued "I'm Saras"
She thought for a moment than repeat "Saras!"
"Oh My God..He was about to faint..He never know that his name sounds such beautiful..He wanted to hear it again and again from her..Wanted her lips to say his name once more.."
His happiness knew no limits that Princess of Fairy tale..Girl of his dreams were addressed to him..
Servant knocked his room door that made her came out of her spell..
He rushed to his room..Servant informed him of Mr.Bhalla's call that he received..
He gave him Project details that were discussed with other Share holders in his absence..He agreed and decided to sign agreement tomorrow..
He disconnected the call happily..Now work on his project in ootie will start soon..
Saras went back to the terris but lights off..He sniffed but a playful smile graced his lips as he thought about her.. "Saras..
"
He repeated nd turned off his lamp..
Saras cleared her throat and pressed the door bell..
After few minuted a girl opened the door "Ji..kon?"
Saras turned and passed a formal smile "Good Morning..! Mein saras.."
She was confused..but he realised and edit soon "Mein Apke peechay wali haveli sey aaya hun..I'm Saras Vyas.."
Her face show stern expressions.. Just than an old man came out smilingly.."Kon hai kumari?"
Saras repeat his introduction..
Vidyachatur smiled and called him inside..
Saras sat on sofa was scanning the house looking around..His eyes were searching for her desperatly..
Guniyal met him.. "To Aap is haveli ke maalik hein..Achha kia aap aaye..Aap chaye lengey..!"
Saras smiled "Ji..kiun nahi..Bahadur bohat tareef karta hai ap logo ki to socha aap se mil lun.."
Vidyachatur "Bohat achha kia..Apki family kaisi hai.."
Saras "Ji sab theek hein.."
Guniyal brought tea and asked kusum standing there to serve saras..
Kusum carried her books from table "Mujhe college ke lie dair ho rhi hai.." Saying this she left..
But before saras and anyone else react..
Kumari handled "Mein serve krdeti hun"
Saras talks to them of everywhere..but..but his search remain uncomplished till last sip of his tea..
Saras granted leave greeting them very well..
Guniyal "Beta aatey raha karo tumse milke achha laga.."
Vidyachatur "Mein bhi school ke lie nikal raha hoon aao tumhein bahar tak chhor dun.."
Saras heavy steps showed her confusion.. "Isnt she home?"
Vidyachatur left and he hit floor with his shoe..
He sniffed looked up at bright clear sky..wait..He looked up turned..
"Here she was standing beside her window..Looking at him with amazment..He passed a sarcastic smile like they are doing conversation through eyes
"Kumud "Oh to ghar tak aagaye?"
Saras "Oh to jaan bujh kar saamney nahi aayin.."
Saras gave a challenging look raised his eye brow "Mein bhi dekhta hun..Kab tak Saras Vyas se chhupo gi..!"
The word escape his mouth "Interesting..!"

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Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow updated...will read soon 😳
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Originally posted by: ginya

wow updated...will read soon 😳

Thanx nikki Keep reading..Waiting for ur commentπŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Where was the pm meri jaan ! I am second !!!!!
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Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel


omg my pia 🀣 Now ur doing emotional blackmail πŸ€“ Itna excitedly wait πŸ€”
ok thn m gping to write but of not in next 3 hours so must be in nxt 6 hours ok?! 😳 No my dear as i said once..We scians are not me nd u..we r Hum..Yes We πŸ˜› so enough for eachother..Thanx alot once again..now let me write..ok 😊 else i'll keep chating wd u as m so enjoying talking to u πŸ˜†



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel


Divu nd Pia..I promise u..i swear..if anyone among u eill be the first one the nxt update i'll pm u before i update..now lets see who'll win among u πŸ˜†



I am second 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome seher ! I have commented on page 9 ;)
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oh sweet heart dont cry better luck nxt time..Ginya came wdout pm.. πŸ˜† I pm everyone. afterward. πŸ˜›
No worries the challenge wud be sane nxt time 😊 Love u loads sweety πŸ€—
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Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel


oh sweet heart dont cry better luck nxt time..Ginya came wdout pm.. πŸ˜† I pm everyone. afterward. πŸ˜›
No worries the challenge wud be sane nxt time 😊 Love u loads sweety πŸ€—



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