SS:Fanaa..An Impossible Love Story..!Chapter_3 updtd pg 20

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"A tale of two Souls..Who were prisoned in eachothers love..Love that knows no limits..And crossing limits in ur love means to get Fanaa..For ur loved ones.."



Prologue;

Silence..Sometime Silence means what does it means..Sometime Silence has something store in it..Sometime it gives relief to desired one or Sometime it becomes reason of fear..
Silence actualy store silence in it but often It stores lots of screams,pain and sorrow in it..
But Silence is Silence so its duty is to be silent..

The Same silence found on a small town of Ootie..It was hard to drive on Vast roads of ooti that were filled with snow Specialy at midnight..

Taking the name of God atlast he reached the address his dad gave him.
He stepped out of the car finding the way more to get inside the Haveli..Continuos Snow fall made the easiest way more harder..His Auburn eyes were searching for a 'Self' atleast..Just then his cell phone rang..He received sunny's call "Kahan hai tu?Tu mujhe btaye bghair hi chala gaya..tuney to next week jana tha na phir aaj hi kiun? mujhe abhi uncle ne btaya.."
Saras made face "Dad ne bhej dia yar or yhan to koi dur dur tak nazar nhi aa raha..Mujhe to rasta bhi nhi pta!"
Sunny wondered "Kya tu ab tak nhi pohncha..Acha tu ruk mein uncle ko btata hun.."
Saras tried to talk more but he cutted the call in between..
"Is sey to mein kisi hotel mein ruk jata!"
His heart stoling eyes still searching around..Snow fall dropped on his silky hairs too, that making him more charming...
He heared someone singing..
"Hey wait..i forgot to turned the music off? No..i did"
A beautiful voice tickled his ears..He moved his sight to the voice direction and it stopped on "An object..No..A man..No.. Oh My goodness..
What she is doing at the time of night here..?"
A playful smile came across his lips and he kept staring..
She was collecting Galanthus-Snow bulb covered in a winter blanket of snow..
She is a goddess..Her immense beauty knocked at his heart's door..She looks like a fairy..Pure..Untouched..Beautiful just Beautiful..
Humming,unaware of anyone's presence,busy in her task..
His heart refused to beat.. Her Black shawl stucked with a plant..But she kept walking collecting flowers..His eyes were fixed on her..Dont know which type of pleasure that sight gave him but he lost everything around him..Her shawl slipped exposing her beautiful arms..But his gaze didnt silpped for a moment..
Her Backless blouse made him looked away but 'no' he cant resist...The panorama sent a shiver to his spine..
He settled his eyes again on her..Her creamy waist.."umm what the things were hanging through her dress waistlet or what..??"
But it doesnot matter he ignored, again looked up..Her hairs creasing her cheeks almost kissing them..His twinkling eyes has examined her each part he could examine from a side pose. He wanted of her 'More'..He wanted her to turn to him..He thought for a moment..May be wanted to settled his Jacket on her Delicate shoulders..Aah Filmy right?? But May be that give him excuse to have a short introduction..He took few steps towards her..
"Saab Aap kahan ja rahe hein..Wo haveli ka pichhwara (Backside) hai..Gate is taraf hai..
A voice coming behind stopped him..He immedietly settled his jacket back on its place nd turned..
Careful from his expressions not to get caught red handed..But still quite.
Servant "Chalie mere sath"
Saras turned back to look at her once more but..
"She was no where..May be she has left listening sudden voice of servant"
Carrying luggage he brought saras to haveli..
"Achha hua barey saab ka phone aagaya warna aap itni thand mein..Shayad rasta bhatak gaye they..Barey Saab ne mujhe kal hi btaya aap aa rhey hein..Ek hafte pehle btate to mein arangments krke rakhta"
It was so dark inside.."Light bs abhi aajayegi..Aaj bohat baraf par rhi hai bas isilie shayad.."
Saras seemed to be completely un interested..
Servant "Meine apka room Saaf krwa dia hai..Ek minute, mein abhi aaya"
Servant left to check last time if everything is fine..
Darkness filled in the room when servant took lantern away with him..
Saras soon came out of his trance but its better to follow him than wait for him in Darkness..Careful not to bump with any object he tried to walk but "Oouch..Something hit his leg.."
"Kahan gaya yeh?..Bahadur.." He called his name..
Thankfuly He noticed Golden light coming from left side..He marched towards light but the door was locked..He realised Bahadur went to right side so from where the light is coming..
To check the source of light he opened the door..Well furnished..Beautifuly decorated Bedroom..The light was peeping through the door of terris..He moved further nd opened it..The harsh snow fall and wind was blowing in virulent puffs..
His eyes twinkled seeing the light coming from back side Window of the house build on haveli's back side..
He shook his head nd turned back but wait..He stopped..Does his sight realy witness her beautiful face or its his illusion..
He immedietly turned and yes He could see her immense beauty through her dressing mirror..He took steps more he could to the Terris edge..
Her angelic face was more glowing in the golden light of hearth.Calmly rubbing her arms sitting beside to seek warmth from it..Once again he stopped breathing seeing her ruffling her silky hairs..
Instead of Minus temprature his palms became sweaty..His fingers started itching his side to touch her once..he didnt come to know why his hand wanted to reach her..
He was never ever heart throb but this time he could feel his heart ready to flew away..He could hear his heart hammering inside his mascular chest under five layer of cloths.Lucky drops of snow were melting, creasing her beautiful back downward..Her innocent smile on her angelic face,Oh her little dimple..

"Saab aap yahan kya kar rhey hein?"
Saras jerked hisself on his voice nd immedietly turned.. Bahadur added "Aapka kamra tayar hai chalie.."
Saras thought for a moment and ordered"Mujhe ye room chahie.."
Bahadur shocked "Lekin yahan to itni thand hai.Aap.."
Saras cutted "Mera saman yaha rakh do.."
Saying this Saras left Bahadur dumb folded..
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res !!! :)

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Oh my goodness, I'm damn so excited to read the story!

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Originally posted by: millee18

res !!! :)

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OH MY MY !
What a Fantastic Start Cheeky !!!
I Loved It !!
This Story is so Different Frm Others :)
Loved Ur Way Of Writing ! :)
Cont Soonish ! :D


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Wow...
What a start...!!!!!
Soulful story...very interesting...
Loved it...
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Soulful story...very interesting...</font>
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