Written Update: 24th January 2011

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Written Update: 24th January 2011
At Brijbhushan's party house;
Rehersal is going on in full swing when the academy director arrives. He gives some money to the peon and tells him something.
Peon takes the money and goes. On spotting the director, Krissh stops the rehersal.
The director says that he has two good news for them. One is that their Mauritius trip is now back on track and their passports are now ready.
Second is that if their practice continues to be as good as it is now, they can take two days off to go home.
Everyone is very happy to hear this. Pooja borrows Bhavna's phone to call home.
Ma receives the phone as Aarti is at work, so is their father.
She is very happy to hear Pooja's news. She promises to inform the others about the news and tells her to do well.
As Pooja keeps the phone, the peon arrives with a cake (Blackforest is what I think :πŸ˜ƒ)). The director says the cake is for their celebration and requests one of them to cut the cake.
The girls lead by Bhavana say that Pooja should cut the cake as she is the lead singer while the boys insist on Krissh.
Pooja finally ends the discussion by suggesting that Brijbhushanji can cut the cake. The director agrees. Krissh doesn't look pleased (hurt ego and all that).

At Brij's cabin, Brij is reminiscing the moments spent with Pooja. How she tied his hand with her chunni. Her saying she won't leave him. Her taking care of him in the hospital when suddenly Pooja arrives to call him.
He tells he will come off course, when Pooja spots the Poem scribbled on the Board.
(starting with "Mein murjha hi chuka tha suraj ki ..." Nice lines)
She enquires if he wrote it himself. He replies
"Kuch lahu gire kaagaz ki pannom mein,
...
Hum to dil ka dard kehthe he,
duniya use kavitha kehthi he. "
(Don't remember the exact lines but they were good as well.)

Pooja smiles and says they are very good.

Brijbhushan arrives to cut the cake. He and Pooja cut the cake together, His hand is placed over Pooja's over the knife. He gazes at Pooja all through while she seems oblivious to the attention.
(These are the whole Bhopal happening I believe. Please mention if I missed anything)

At Panchvati.
Aarti comes home looking desolate. She replies on the negative when Ma enquires if Pooja called. She gives the good news. Aarti says she wants to rest. Ma enquires about her but she says she has a headache. Finally she tells Ma about Siddharth and thay he is of the opinion that everything will be fine if they get married. Ma is very happy to hear this.

Precap.:
Some one arrives in the night and taps at Aatri's window.
No guesses there. Its obviously Siddharth Hmph!


NOTE:
I will be out of station on Thursday, so will not be able to do the thursday update. Someone will have to take over.
Please make the updaters list and new updates sticky.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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May i mention...ur grammar...vocabulary..writing style...everything is really good and structured πŸ‘,..Thanx a looot

and πŸ˜† the wy u said no guess...for who it ws on AaRTI;s window.LOOLL...u can see da fat bum and back..u can guess it sSiddart..looll..

Anywys well πŸ˜ƒdone
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