Originally posted by: Artemis678
@ Mel Of You Can Write Here. Anytime.
@ Darine You Have To Slap Neel Cause Jay and Friends Are Ploting Something To Hurt Us. Rudra, Jay, Dutta, Amit, And Shiv Arent Humans. They Are Vampires, Werewolves and Wizards.
Nic , this chapter in just brilliant . Couldn't tell u how much I enjoyed reading it , the only sad part is total absence of mine . Never mind , u should write scripts u know, seriously ! That's great spicy stuff u wrote.👍🏼Originally posted by: Artemis678
Chapter 4. Rudra's Entry. And Amit's Buring Love.
The Wind Was Blowling Very Hard, Ria Looked Outside The College Campus Looks Something Is Going To Happen?? But What.
In The Dance Hall The Teacher Pair Mel With Cute Looking Guy. Ok Class Today We Are Going To Dance On This Aaro Nee Aaro From Urumi. Mel Blushed Red. Ok Um
Let's Practice. Then Amit Came To The Dance Hall. Since He Mel Loved To Dance.
Ria Was Walking Downstairs When The Wind Blew Her Scaf Towards Someone.
She Went To Grab It. But Fell In The Guy Arms. He Was Rudra Singh Rawat A Very Famous Business Man's Only Son and Grandson Of The Famous Rawats.
It So Happens His Parents Were Looking For A Girl To Get Him Married Too.
And Luck Or Sanjog Would Have It He Found Her.
Ria Smiled, At Him. Then Quicky Moved Away From Him. Iam So Sorry.
The Bell Rang. And Ria Ran Inside.
Wait Rudra Went After Her. Please Tell Your Name?
It's Ria. I Have To Go Bye.
Rudra Called Home. Mom I Have Found Your Daugter In Law.
At Dance Hall Amit Wanted To Kill That Guy.
Control Yourself Amit Control. His Dark Grey Eyes Were Full Of Mischelf.
Alright Mel You Want To Dance. Fine Dance But With Only Me. Not Other Guys. He Punched A Wall. and Hurt His Hand.
After The Dance, Mel Was Leaving, Everyone Left. Only Amit Is Left, He Came Up To Her Hello Mel.
Mel Said Nothing And Walked Off. But He Grabbed Her Hand And Pulled Her Towards Him.
You Know I Hate Mel You Dancing With Other Guys, Ha So What I Was Only Practing, Is A Crime,
No It's He So Close To Her, She Smell His Aftershave.
But In Turn Mel Gave It To Him, Well You See Amit I Know How To Dance And What's Your Problem If I Dance With Someone Else,
Looks Your Hole Famliy Has Problems.
Then Amit Grabbed Her and Pinned Mel To The Wall, Leave My Famliy Out Of This. Or Else, Or Else What? He Was To Going To Kiss Her, In Return He Got Slapped On The Face.
Remember That Slap Next Time You Will Try Something Dumb. and She Hurried Off.
Amit Looked, Shocked. For The First Time Ever A Girl Had Slapped Amit Tandon. He Smiled,
Mel Iam Done With You Yet.
Precap: Ria& Rudra Second Meeting.
I don't think it sounds good ! I think it sounds great . * Pulls cheeks of Ri n hugs her in congo *😉Originally posted by: Darine1980
He said that he found his family's bahu... Congrats Riia !!!! RIIA SINGH RAWAT, sounds good, na?
Originally posted by: Darine1980
He said that he found his family's bahu... Congrats Riia !!!! RIIA SINGH RAWAT, sounds good, na?
Sounds wonderful to me!😃
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