Iqbal Khan-Jennifer Winget's new serial!! - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: best friends

yo lol..... ur story is gr8..... m waitin 4 the fourth part :) hope to read ur nest part soon :P ......... :D

yes di, all of us r waiting 4 ur next part😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
I was waiting for more people to compliment it 😳 😳

Will start the fourth one very soon!!

Promise 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Hi Sneha...
love the title...Pyar Ki Khamoshi πŸ‘
and waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
Ohh!!

I completely forgot. Will start writing now.

Thanx for reminding me. It will be posted tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
thanx πŸ‘ ur creativity simply rox! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
PART FOUR - PYAR KI KHAMOSHI

Jennifer's heart was racing however her confidence did not let her down. It gave her the strength and courage to walk into the room and finish what was left of the situation. Without a doubt, Jennifer entered the room. Iqbal was sitting up halfway on his bed. He took notice of Jennifer walking in. Jennifer took three steps forward and stopped where she was comfortable at standing.

"Maine aapki jaan bachayi" said Jennifer softly to Iqbal.

"Kitney paise chahiye?" Iqbal asked.

"Paise?" a rather confused and shocked Jennifer replied. Her heart sank within her.

"Nothing in this world is for free" said Iqbal.

"Im sorry but mujhe jaana chahiye" Jennifer said with dissapointment.

"Kal bhi aana" Iqbal replied with a smile on his face. He was charmed by her beauty and innocence.

Thats it guys. I could have written longer but im quite busy with my work. Will try to continue later 😊
Edited by sneha_2100 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
Iqbal sounds selfish and cruel

Love every part di πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
Aww thanx,

Somehow I felt it was not as good as the other parts but I was a bit lazy today πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
so then u should be prepared next time πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
Yeah I will!!

But there is a saying short and sweet. So I guess part 4 was just that πŸ˜‰
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