TUM KYA JANO FF-PAGE 31|AM SUHAAG RAAT - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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sonikudi1 it is amazing the best please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Soni when are you posting the next part???!!! Can't wait! 😆 Amazing job on the last parts!!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its is soo coolllll i wish manya realiz akash love i think akash is one loved her soooo much
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yyyeeeaaayyy, manya ke dil ki ghanti bajgi, tring tring, 😆 ab bas i love you kehna baki hai, 😳 oh i totally loved it sonia, it was amazing, ttttooooooo gggggggooooooooooooooooddddddddddd 👏
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yyyeeeaaayyy, manya ke dil ki ghanti bajgi, tring tring, 😆 ab bas i love you kehna baki hai, 😳 oh i totally loved it sonia, it was amazing, ttttooooooo gggggggooooooooooooooooddddddddddd 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Soni it's been ages.... actually it's only been a couple of hours 😆 😆 😆 but STILL.... waiting for your next post! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANKS SO MUCH EVERYONE! I will update soon, I'm soooo sorry for the delay, but its my best friend's sweet 16 and I'm all busy with the preparations! I'll update as soon as I can! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 11:

Manya sat on the cantene table, her chin resting in her hand and her elbow on the table. Rehan smiled at her.
R: So you see, hum sab bahaar garden mein game khel rahe hain. Spin the bottle. Would you like to join us?
Manya shrugged her shoulders.
M: I suppose. Chalo!
Rehan smiled and walked out after her to the garden, where students were seated on the grass. Akash looked up as Rehan signaled him a thumbs-up sign, and Akash saw Manya approach. Akash grinned.
She was wearing a pink salwar kameez, looking a bit different than usual. Her hair was tied in a ponytail, and her dupatta hung loosely on her right shoulder. Akash stared at her, smiling in amazement. She took a seat across from him between Roopa and Goppu.
A: Okay, let's play!
G: Wait! Mera ek dost abhi nahin aya!
A: Too bad, Goppu.
G: But that's not fair! Tum Manya ka wait ker rahe thay, na!
Manya looked up at Akash. Akash narrowed his eyes at Goppu. Goppu shrugged.
G: You were, though.
Akash glared at him and picked up a little piece of rock, aiming it at Goppu's side just so it missed him.
G: Hey!!
A: SHUT UP! Now, let's play!
Manya looked at Akash suspiciously. As everyone spun the bottle, everyone challenged each other to do weird dares or tell the truth.
The bottle spun to Akash. Everyone clapped.
R: Main poochti hoon!
A: Okay, shoot!
R: Kya..tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai?
Akash's eyes suddenly flipped over to Manya. Manya lowered her eyebrows in suspicion as he smiled adoringly at her.
A: Kiya hai na.
K: Oooo!! Kise?!
Akash smiled at Manya. She suddenly blushed slightly and looked down, a shy smile creeping her mouth.
A: Jab woh samaj jayegi, phir batha dhoon ga!
Everyone hooted and whistled. Manya looked around, pretending not to be paying attention. Akash smiled to himself.
R: Okay, Manya, tumhari baari!
As all eye's turned to Manya, Akash suddenly pulled out a magnet and flipped it in a glass of Pepsi in front of him. As Manya looked at him again, he quickly looked away pretending as if nothing happened.
Manya smiled and spun the bottle. As Akash had planned, the bottle felt the magnetic pull of the magnet in the glass and stopped, facing Akash.
Akash grinned.
A: Well, well, well!
Manya rolled her tongue in his cheek.
A: Trut or dare, Manya?
M: Uh...
Akash bent over.
A: Obviously truth?
Manya looked at him, her face determined.
M: No. Dare.
Akash smiled.
A: Okay. Tumhe-
Just like Akash had wanted, Rehan butt in.
R: Tumhe Akash ke saath dance kerna hoga!
Everyone nodded and clapped.
K: Come on, Manya!
M: WHAT? No way!
K: Ohhh, come on!
M: Nahin, mujhe-
Akash stood up and held out his hand. The music of Tum Kya Jano played as Akash grinned.
A: Don't be a loser, Manya.
Manya looked up at him. Rehan reached over behind the tree and pulled out a Mp3 player.
M: Hey! Yeh kahan se-
R: Uh..mujhe yeh idea tha..that at least someone will get this dare..
Akash glared at him.
A: Uh, ANYWAYS, come on, Manya!
Manya smiled shyly and placed her hand in his. His heart raced as he closed his hand against hers, pulling her up.
Rehan turned up the music as Akash's hand closed against Manya's waist, as she looked at him nervously.
Oof kya samaa rangeen hai...
Ahosh mein chandni hai...

They swayed softly. Akash pulled Manya close to himself as her breathing grew a bit havier. Everyone was staring at them.
Bikhri hai jo yahan wahan...
Woh pyar ki roshni hai...

Akash spun Manya around and bought her back close to himself, smiling.
Everyone clapped as the dance ended. But Manya and Akash stood there, eyes locked, Akash's hands still around her waist. They were staring at each other, smiles at the corners of their mouths.
Roopa nudged Rehan, who nodded his head. She giggled.
Roopa: Ho gaya hai tujhko tho pyar sajna...lakh ker le tu...inkaar sajna...hai yeh pyar sajna...
Manya heard her singing and snapped back to reality. Blushing furiously, she stepped back. Akash's hands slid off her waist as she looked around, not meeting his gaze. He stared at her till she met his eyes, and then laughing, she raced back to the group. He grinned. Perfect much?


Manya tied her hair in a ponytail quickly, busily studying in the cantene. Akash walked in and stood by the door, leaning, staring at her. He smiled her hair fell loose again, and sighing angrily, she tied them back again. Her pen was between her teeth as she read the page carefully. The wind blew again and her hair fell down again.
Just as Manya reached up again to tie them, she felt her hair go back. Akash smiled, toucing her hair softly and pulling it back. Manya's breath stopped for a second as she in the mirror across the room that it was Akash. He held out his hand and shyly Manya placed her scrunchy in it. He took it, his fingers brushing hers. Manya licked her lips nervously as Akash tied her hair.
He let go of her hair and she turned slightly. She looked up at him, shyly and blushing.
M: Uh...
Akash looked at her teasingly.
A: You're welcome, Manya.
Manya rolled her eyes.
M: Meri Ma ne kaha tha ki jinhe aap apna maanthai ho, unhe thank you kehne ki koi zarurat nahin hoti.
She picked up her book and began to walk away when he grabbed her hand. Her breath stopped again for a second and she inhaled deeply as he pulled her closer. She looked up at him, his touch sending chills down her back.
A: Tum mujhe apna maanthi ho?
M: Uh, woh..uh..
Laughing lightly, she realeased her hand and ran away from him. She stopped at the door and turned. He raised his eyebrows.
She smiled at him and blnked her eyelashes slowly, as if saying "Yes" to his question. He opened his eyes a bit wider, and once she laughed and walked away, he punched the air with his fist.
A: YES!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW AMAZING! 😛 continue sooon please 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowow coollllllll partt plzzzzzzz contuied soon i cant wait to read
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