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Posted: 16 years ago
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vey nice i must say u are very talented 👏
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Part 3:

Manya stepped out of her room the next day, holding her notebook in her hands. She walked out of the dorm room building and into the college building.
From behind her, Manya heard a few giggles. She stopped and turned. Nobody was behind her. She began to walk again when she heard a bit more giggles. Spinning abruptly, she caught Akash and Rehan laughing.
M: Idiots!
Akash held his heart.
A: Don't break my heart, partner!
He walked past her, pushing her again. She stumbled again, but this time, didn't reach out to grab him. She fell on the bench, groaning furiously. Akash stopped and looked at her. He reached out his hand, raising his eyebrows. He sang the words,
A: Do you want a partner, oh partner?
The music of "Tum Kya Jano" played as Manya stared at his hand. She quickly slapped it away and stood up on her own, fixing her dupatta.
M: Tum kya khud ko Salman Khan samajte ho?
A: Nain. Akash Rathod samajta hoon.
He walked away, whistling the song, as Manya gave him a dirty look but followed him into the classroom.
Ms. Jyostna began to speak the moment everyone was seated.
J: This is law school. You will learn all the basics you need to become a successful lawyer. You will learn basic debating skills through the projects presented. Aapko jo maine kal partners assign kiya thay, today, you both will recieve your assignments. Okay?
Everyone stood up and walked to sit with their partners. Manya and Akash stayed seated. Akash looked up at the ceiling, expecting Manya to walk to him. Manya stayed where she was, refusing to walk to him.
A boy came and stood in front of Manya.
B: Can you please go sit with your partner? Mujhe yeh seat chahiye..
Akash smirked as Manya angrily stood up. Reluctantly, she walked to Akash and sat down. Akash grinned a victorious smile.
J: Akash, Manya, you both will be handling the case of divorce. Aapke scenario mein ek ladki aapke paas aati hai, expressing her case. Then a boy will. You choose who you want to fight for. Any problems?
Manya smiled and shook her head.
M: No, ma'am.
J: Good. Akash, I hope you take this seriously.
Akash grinned and leaned over to her.
A: Jiski teacher itni haseen ho, ussai aur kisi cheez ki fiker nahin hai!
Manya smirked. He looked over at her and rolled his eyes.
M: Akash, can we start the project now?
A: Jinka case hai, unhe tho aane dho. And plus, they're just acting. Abhi koi real case nahin aya.
M: So? It's still our job to pretend like this is a real case and--
Akash stood up, pushing her face away.
A: Hata sawan ki gata, yaar!
Manya gave him an irritated look. He stood up and walked to Roopa, who was talking to Goppu, her partner.
A: Hi, Roopa.
Manya grimaced angrily. She stood up and walked to him.
M: Akash. Tumhari partner tumhara intezar ker rahi hai!
A: Tho ussai bolo muth kare!
Manya waited, tapping her heel.
M: Akash!
Akash turned around.
A: Whatever, man! CHALO!
He made a face behind her back as she walked. She stopped but didn't turn.
M: Stop making faces behind my back!
As she walked away, Akash stared, puzzled.
A: Vakay mein hi churail hai!

Manya and Akash stepped out, sighing.
A: Kahan hain woh dhono?
M: Patha nain. I just asked Jyostna ma'am and she said to wait in he garden, woh aate hi hon ge.
They walked to the garden, sitting on a bench. Akash looked up, and suddenly stared.
The wind was pushing Manya's hair in her face. She was moving them from her eyes. Tum Kya Jano music played as he watched her.
She looked at him, and he quickly looked away. Manya stood up, sighing. She flung her dupatta over her shoulder, hitting his face.
He flinched at the touch but didn't say anything.
M: I knew it. You're just bad luck.
A: Excuse me! I could say the same for you, okay!
M: Tho kaho na. Kis ne rauka hai!
A: Main tumhari tarha BAKVAS nain kerta, actually!
M: Main bakvas nahin kerti!
A: Kerti ho na! Lakein tumne profession bil kul teek chunna hai! Judge sahaab tumhari bakvas se thung aker kahein ge, Manya Sharma, you win!
Manya raised her finger at him.
M: Watch it!
A: I'm watching it!
Manya groaned and turned around, shaking her head. Her foot suddenly tripped over a rock, and she went tumbling down.
Akash stared at first, but then burst out laughing. He laughed as he looked at Manya.
A: Nice job, Klutzilla!
He was laughing when he noticed a tear in Manya's eye. She held her foot, aching in pain.
A: Kya hua?
M: Shut up!
Akash looked at her as another tear slid down her cheek.
A: Ab--rau kyun rahi ho?
M: Kyunki mera dil ker raha hai!
Akash frowned. She stood up, trying to catch her balance, when her foot twisted in pain.
M: Ouch!
Akash frowned. He suddenly bent down, wrapping his arms around her legs. Akash picked up Manya in his arms, as Manya stared at him. The music of Tum Kya Jano played as he, looking straight ahead, walked with Manya back to the school building.
Akash walked to Manya's room. Manya almost smiled at him when he suddenly threw her on the bed.
M: Ouch!
A: Heavy churail. Bechara ek tumhara husband hoga. Oof, I feel bad for him already!
He rubbed his arms, shaking his head.
M: Excuse me! Mera husband iss dunya ka SABSE lucky hoga, you got that?!
A: Acha? Kyun? Tum khud ko Maduri Dixit samajti ho?
M: Nain. Manya Sharma samajti hoon.
She smiled, throwing his own comeback back at him. Akash rolled his eyes.
A: Manya Sharma. Yeah, tumhara husband sirf tab hi lucky hoga, agar woh Frankenstein hua!
M: AKAAASH!
A: What? Tumse aur koi shaadi karega bhi kaun, man! LOOK AT YOU!
Manya breathed in angrily.
M: How dare you!
A: I just dared, Manya Sharma, I just did!
Manya grabbed a pillow and whacked his head with it.
A: Hey, cheater!
He grabbed another and hit Manya with it. Manya and Akash began to hit each other back and forth. A laugh escaped Manya's throat. As Akash hit her, she suddenly flinched as her foot ached again.
Akash dropped the pillow, jumping to her. He suddenly leaned over to her leg, staring at it.
A: TUM TEEK HO NA, MANYA?
Manya looked up, surprised...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh my god, akash already has feeling for her, wwwooowwww that is great, i am totally DYING to read part 4 and 5 and 6 and 7 and so on 😆 😳 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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itss is sooo damm cuteee part cant wait for read next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow..it was awesome...and I yayyy!! At least he likes her in ur FF!!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Thanks everyone! Will be updating soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
wow that was amazing 👍🏼
keep up the good work 👏
plz continue 😃 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4:

Akash looked up and saw Manya staring at him quizzically.
Akash, tu pagal ho gaya hai! Kya ker raha hai tu? he thought to himself. He quickly let go of Manya's leg and stood up.
A: Main, uh, ja ker Ms. Jyostna se kehta hoon..that..uh, woh clients nahin aye--
With that, he raced out of the room, talking to himself. Manya watched him go away and laughed.
M: Yeh ladka bhi na...sach mein pagal hai!



The next day was a Saturday, meaning no classes. Most of the students were out in the field, chatting with their new and old friends. Akash and Rehan were talking with Roopa, and Rehan's new crush, Kiran. Akash kept teasing him about anything Kiran said. Rehan rolled his eyes and whispered,
R: Jab tujhe mohabbat hogi na, tho dekhna!
A: Mohabbat? Aray, hum tho hain hi deewane!
He laughed and turned around. He stopped when he saw Manya coming from inside, tying her hair in a light ponytail. She grinned as she saw Roopa and Kiran.
M: Hi, guys!
R: Hi, Manya! Isse mil, yeh hai Kiran!
Manya and Kiran introduced each other. Manya looked up and saw Akash looking at her.
M: Can I help you?
Akash cleared his throat quickly.
A: Uh..let's play a game, guys!
Manya rolled her eyes and shook her head, but the rest jumped up.
K: How cool!
A: Yeah, right?! Okay, EVERYONE gather around!
As a few more people, including Goppu, gathered around him, he nodded.
A: Let's play tug of war?
R: Perfect!
A: Okay, meri team mein...
He looked up at Manya, who was standing with her arms crossed. She saw him looking at her and stared back at him, puzzled.
A: Ma-Roopa!!
Manya rolled her eyes as Roopa smiled.
A: Doosri team ka captain...Manya Sharma?
M: No.
A: Kyun? Darr gayee?
Manya went close to him.
M: Darre mere dushman!
A: Lakein hum nain darre, Manya! Darr tho tum gayee!
M: Of what, huh?
A: Of losing to me!
M: I will NEVER lose to a loser like you!
A: Acha? Tho phir--shart lag jaye?
Manya narrowed her eyes at him.
M: No way.
A: Dekha? Chicken in the house!
Manya glared at him as he began to imitate a chicken.
A: Manya Sharma darr gayee!
M: SHUT UP! Bolo, kitni ki shart lagani hai?!
Akash grinned as he walked close to her, making her step back nervously.
A: Paise ki nahin. Jo haare ga, ussai winner jo bhi kahe ga, ussai kerna ho ga! Manzoor?
Manya glared at him.
M: Manzoor!
They stepped back as Goppu, from Manya's team, bought a rope.
A: Tum in kapdun mein khelo gi?
He looked at her up and down in her black churidaar dress.
Manya flung her tied ponytail backwards as Akash raised his eyebrows. She tied her dupatta at her waist.
M: Ready?
Akash grinned.
A: As always!
Both teams began to pull on the rope. Akash pulled with ease, smiling. Manya tugged harder, trying to bring the rope towards herself.
Akash cleared his throat. Manya looked at him, and he suddenly gave a flirty smile and winked. Manya, growing puzzled, loosened his grip on the rope. Akash grinned and tugged the rope hard, pulling Manya's team towards him.
Manya felt herself fall down...she tried to grab onto the rope but the rope fell down as well. She fell, and she closed her eyes tightly.
Manya felt breathing as she lay still. She felt her heart beat, but along with that, she felt someone's else's. She opened her eyes slowly...and saw Akash in front of her. Or rather, underneath her!
The instrumental music of the words Lag Jao Mere Seene Se Yaar from Tum Kya Jano played as they had an eyelock. Akash whispered,
A: Manya?
M: H-huh?
A: GET THE HECK OFF OF ME!!
Manya jumped at his scream, standing up. She was blushing furiously.
Akash stood up, shaking his head. He wiped his clothes.
A: Jab tum mere oopar gir rahi thi na, tho mujhe aisa laga jaise King Kong araha hai...oof the fear!
Manya looked at him angrily. She began to walk away when she felt him reach out and grab her wrist. She stopped, her heart racing for a second.
M: Maine tumhe kaha tha, don't touch me!
Akash let go of her wrist.
A: You're right. Jungli jaanwar ko choona nahin chahiye!
Manya spun around, glaring at him. He grinned and walked close to her.
M: Door raho, Akash-
A: Manya, tumhe bet yaad hai?
His face was inches from her now. She stared into his eyes.
M: Kaun si bet?
A: Jo abhi abhi humne lagaye thi. You have to do whatever I say...
M: Yaad hai!
Akash smiled victoriously.
A: Teek hai, phir. Ready for the bet to take action?
Manya stared at him, her eyes boring into his.
M: Ready!




Precap:
Akash stared at Manya as she walked down the aisle, her hands on her hips. He was almost surprised at the confidence she was walking in. He stood up from his seat slowly, staring at her. Rehan watched him and smirked. He sang slowly,
R: Mohabbat, mohabbat, mohabbat ho na jaye...!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waaaoooooooooow 😛 just Fab! i wanna know what manya is gona do 😳 loved it continue sooon 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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whatt a amazinggggggg part sonia it cooll cant wait for next part to read
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