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Posted: 16 years ago
aaaawwww it's ok sonia, have fun with your parents 😉 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
PLEASE UPDATE today! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE maks akash and manya together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 21:


Manya's whole body was shaking as the police told their search results to Om who had rushed over to help Manya.
Manya watched Om silently as the police officer informed him.
M: Mujhe batiye na!!
Om looked at Manya with a worried expression. Manya stared at him, shocked.
M: Om-?
Om: I'm sorry, Manya. I'm so sorry...
Manya stared at him, confused.
M: Kyun? Akash-kahan hai Akash?
She looked around, bewildered.
M: Yeh Akash bhi na! Hamesha mujhe aise hi satata hai!
Om's eyes filled up. He held her shoulders calmly.
Om: Manya-Akash-Akash is-no more!!
Manya glared at him. Suddenly, she reached up and slapped him. Om held his cheek but didn't say anything.
M: Tumhari himat kaise hui, Om! Mere Akash ko maarna chahte ho na tum?
Om: WHAT? Manya, meri baat suno-
Manya pushed him away angrily.
M: Don't touch me! Tum achai dost NAHIN ho! Mere Akash ko mujhse cheenna chahte ho!
Om shook his head with blurry watered eyes.
Om: Manya, aise muth kaho. Akash ki body nahin mili, aur oos paani mein crocdiles ka existance hai, Manya. Aur jis jagga se Akash girra, that's the prime location of those kind of animals-
Manya clasped her hands to her ears, screaming.
M: BAAAAAAASSSSS!!!!!!!! MERE AKASH KO KUCH NAHIN!!!!
Om grabbed her, shaking her hard.
Om: Khosh mein aao, Manya! AKASH TUMHARE SAAMNE GIRRA THA! HE'S NO MORE!!!
Manya hit his chest, shaking her head.
M: Tum jhoote hoo!!!
Om shook his head.
Om: Hamari dosti ki kasam, Manya.
M: Tumhari dosti jhooti hai!!!
Om stared at her painfully.
Om: Main sach keh raha hoon, Manya.
M: JHOOT! SAB KUCH JHOOT!! HAR KASAM JHOOTI HAI!!
Om: LAKEIN AKASH KI KASAM THO JHOOTI NAHIN HAI!!
Manya stared up at him, shocked.
Om: MUJHE TUMHARE AUR AKASH KE PYAR KI KASAM THAT HE'S GONE, MANYA!
Manya's eyes opened wide for a second in shock. Om stared, hurt by his friend's pain, as she fell to the ground on her knees. She stared down at the cliff, Akash's falling scene playing in her mind.
Dil judai bina hi tut gaye,
The scene where Akash's hand slipped from hers played.
Huth mile bina hut chut gaye...!
Manya stood up, looking around herself in shock, seeing images of herself and Akash playing around there a few hours ago.
Ki likhe ne lekh kismat ne
Baar baar raun akhiyan,
Tenu jo na vekh sakiyan...

Om walked over to her, placing his hand on her shoulder. She pushed it away slightly and walked to the cliff, staring down.
Om stood there, watching her sadly.
M: AKAAAAAAASSSSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Om shut his eyes in pain. The police cleared out, leaving Manya and Om alone. Manya stared at the waterfall.
Kho leya hai yaar khud rabb ne
Kattaan main kiven din
Teri saun tere bin
Main taan jiyaan na maraan

Just as Om reached out to Manya, Manya suddenly pictured Akash's falling image in her mind. Suddenly, she lunged her body forward, falling into the falls.
Om's eyes opened wide.
Om: MAAAAAAAAANYAAAAAA!!
He raced forward, staring at the cliff, shocked. The sad music of "Tum Kya Jano" played as Manya's body fell into the hard waves, disappearing completely from Om's view.

So sorry for the short update, but I seriously have to go now 😕 😭 I promise I'll try to hurry it up this time!



Edited by sonikudi1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh my god, AKASH IS DEAD, AND MANYA JUMPED OFF THE CLIFFFFF,NNNNOOOOOOOOO, 😭 😭 😭 i can't believe it, i'm totally shocked. i hope both of them be ok, plzzzzzzz cont soon sonia 😭 😭 😭 , love ya and hope you had a good time with your parents 😳 😳 😳
loved the part, just tttooooooo amazing, you know how to bring new twists and new climax to the story 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
i am alsoo shokedd tht akash dead soo doo manya plzzzzzzzzzzzzz contuiedd longggg partt plzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx Jiya and Shafoo! I might not be able to update later today (yep, you guessed it, parents issues 😆 ) so I'm updating earlier in a few😊

Edited by sonikudi1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
no i dont want akash 2 be dead and manya nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooo
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 22:



Om stared in shock as Manya's body was pulled out of the water. The police officer shook his head.
P: Yeh tho inki kismat hai ki hum aur hamari search team abhi kareeb hi thay. Verna...inke saath bhi wohi ho sakta tha jo-jo Akash ke saath hua-
Om closed his eyes in pain and opened them as a soaking wet and passed out Manya was taken to the hospital.



The doctor came out of the room and looked at an expecting Om.
Om: Doctor, how is she?
D: Mr. Prakash, Manya has-Manya has lost her memory.
Om's eyes opened wide in shock.
Om: WHAT?
D: Yes. Her head hit a rock, causing a fracture to her head. She is suffering amnesia.
Om: Oh my God-
He sat on the bench, shocked.
D: But this is not permanent. Her memory can come back, but only after she witnesses an event that changes, or changed, her life.
Om held his head, crying.
Om: Yeh tumne kyun kiya, Manya! Ek baar mere baare mein tho soch laiti!
MM rushed to the hospital, crying once Om told her the news.
MM: Meri bachi! Meri choti se bachi ke saath yeh kya ho gaya!
Om held her shoulders, crying.
D: You may see her now. We have informed her that you are her mother.
Om and MM opened the door to Manya. She was laying still, her head bandaged, her eyes looking out the window into space.
MM: Manya?
Manya's head turned slightly, a blank expression on her face.
M: Aap-?
MM: Main Ma hoon tumhari, beti!
Manya's expression didn't change much as MM hugged her tightly. She looked at Om, a puzzled expression appearing on her face.
M: Yeh-
MM stood up, wiping her tears.
MM: Yeh Om hai, Manya.
Om: Main Om, Manya, tumhara bachp-
MM suddenly cut him off.
MM: Tumhara hone vaala pati, Manya.
The room spun around Om as he stared at MM, shocked. Manya's eyes grew a bit wider as she stared at him, blinking slowly.



Om settled Manya in her bedroom back at home with a smile.
Om: I'll just be back.
Manya simply nodded, looking up at the ceiling blankly. Om walked downstairs to MM angrily.
Om: Aunty! Yeh aapne-
MM suddenly opened her dupatta in front of him as if begging, crying.
MM: Meri bachi ki zindagi bacha lo, Om!
Om stared at her quizzically.
MM: Oos ki zindagi ruk gayee hai, Om. Usko ek nain zindagi dhay dho! Ussai haq hai jeene ka, Om, aur main jaanti hoon ki yeh haq tumse acha ussai aur koi nahin dhay sakta!
Om shook his head.
Om: Woh Akash se pyar kerti hai, Aunty!
MM: Lakein Akash ja chuka hai, beta! Uske saath saath kahin meri Manya bhi na kho jaye, Om!
She fell to his feet, crying.
MM: Main jaanti hoon tum ussai hamesha khush rakho ge, Om. Ussai koi aanch nahin aane dho ge! Meri jholi mein meri beti ki khushiyaan daal dho, Om!
Om looked up the stairs painfully towards Manya's room.
Om: Teek hai, Aunty. Teek hai...



After two days, Manya walked with Om on the beach.
M: Main aapse ek baat poochoon?
Om looked up at her face. Her expression was blank again. He couldn't remember the last time he had seen her smile.
Om: Tum mujhe 'aap' kyun kehti ho, Manya? 'Tum' kaho na.
Manya looked at him.
M: Aa-tum-kya main tumse pyar kerti thi?
Om looked up sadly, surprised at the question. He sighed and looked away, remembering the time Manya and Om used to be best friends.
Om: Haan...
Manya grew silent.
Om: Lakein, uh, ek accident mein tum cliff se neeche gir gayee, aur-aur-yeh sab ho gaya...
Manya licked her lips.
M: Chalo!
Om: Kahan?
M: Ussi cliff per!
Om stared at her, shocked.
Om: WHAT?
M: Haan! Please, mujhe dekhna hai!
Om shook his head.
Om: No way. NEVER.
Manya frowned.
M: Main aapse phir kabhi pyar ker hi nahin sakti thi. Aap tho meri baat bhi nahin maante!
Om frowned.
Om: Manya, yeh kya bachpana hai?
M: Mera haq hai yeh jaane ka, Om!
Om stared at her. This was the first time after her memory loss she had called him Om.
Om sighed.
Om: Chalo, Manya.



Manya stared at the hill, wondering how that day must have been. She was probably with Om, since he knew all about it. Were they up on the hill having a sweet romantic day?
M: Yeh jagga kitni khoobsurat hai, na?
Om nodded. Manya looked around. Suddenly, in her mind, she imagined a boy yelling "Kiss of Love" and a girl running, laughing. A slow, confused smile spread across her lips.
Om looked up and stared. She had just smiled!
Om: Muskura kyun rahi ho?
M: Huh? Oh, kuch nain-
She wakled to the cliff once again. Om walked with her, his heart racing, afraid.
Om: Manya, peeche raho yahan se-
Manya rolled her eyes and looked down.
M: Wow. Yahan se girne ke baadh mein zinda hoon?
Om nodded with a smile.
Suddenly, Manya felt the wind blow. She heard a boy scream her name. She suddenly felt as if her dupatta was slipping from her neck. She saw the red color of it flowing in the air, falling in the waves.
M: NAHIN--!!
Her hand reached out suddenly. Om looked at her, shocked.
M: Mera dupatta-
Manya brought her hand back quietly then, confused. Om stared at her.
Om: Tumhara dupatta? Tumhara dupatta tumhare gale mein hai, Manya.
Manya felt her neck and noticed her dupatta was still there.
Om: Chalo yahan se, Manya. Please, let's go.
Manya followed him away, shaking her head. She stopped all of a sudden.
A distant cry echoed in her mind.
"Maaaanyaaaa...!!"
Manya clasped her hands to her ears. Om turned.
Om: Manya! Tum teek ho, Manya?
Manya gulped, nodding her head.
M: Haan, main-main teek hoon.
They were on the bridge, walking back to the hillstation, when Om's foot slipped into the one of the broken wood pieces.
Manya's eyes opened in wide shock. Although it was only Om slipping, the scene of a boy falling down in the water played in her head. She held the ledge of the bridge, staring down below in the water waves.
M: AKASH--!!


Edited by sonikudi1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
manya yell akashhhhhhhhhhh i hope he is aliveee its a coolllllll parttttttt i want akash and manya togther for everr.
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh my god, manya is gatting her memory back, and our hottie is dead, plzzzzzzzz don't kill him, i am begging you 😭 😭 😭
really nice sonia just loved it, these last few parts brought tears into my eyes 😭 😭
plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon, thank you 😳
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