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Posted: 16 years ago
excellent update.. your such an awesome writer.. everyday i eagerly wait for ur updates.. keep up the good work!! can't wait for ur next update!!! 😊 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!hate dis OM!! 😡 😆 😆
plzz continue soon..i can't wait anymore! 😭 😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was sooooo nice, even though om is a big kabab main haddi, i think manya probably go into shock mode and akash might feel that she does love me, that would be soooooo sweet, thanks for the update, love you sonia 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
i cant wait for the next parts man please continue soon as possible it is so kwl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
cooolllllllll partt plzzzzzz contuied i want akash with manyaa yy didnt manya tell om the she dont love him she is only love akash
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 18:


A heavy wind blew as Akash's feet suddenly stopped from moving forward. He stood still for a second, leaves blowing around him. There was complete silence for a while, except the push of the wind.
From inside, Akash heard Roopa scream Manya's name. Akash's heart began to beat wildly.
A: Manya-kya hua ussai-
Panicking, he dropped his bag where it was and raced inside. He stood at the door and stared.
Manya was staring straight ahead, but Om had his arms around her shoulder.
Om: Manya, kya hua, Manya? Main hoon na, mujhe bathao!
Manya's head tilted and fell on Om's chest as she suddenly hugged him.
M: Om, tum mere bachpan ke dost ho na?
Akash felt his heart sink. He felt the room close in on him as anger boiled in his body.
Shaking his head, Akash walked away again. He sat in his car, without telling the college anything, and drove away in silence.




Manya raised her head from Om's chest.
M: Tum mere dost ho, Om. Lakein mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.
Roopa, Kiran and Rehan looked at each other and stood up.
R: Uh, hum...humein kuch kaam hai...
They went out of the cantene, leaving Manya and Om.
M: Mere kamre mein chalo ge, Om?
Om nodded and followed Manya to room 202. Manya entered and nervously bit her lower lip.
M: Om. Tum mere sabse achai dost ho. Bachpan se hum saath hi saare kaam karte aye hain. Aur haan, sabko lagta tha ki bade hoker tumhari aur meri jodi sabse zyada banai gi. Aur woh jodi aaj bhi hai, Om, lakein-
Om smiled sadly.
Om: Lakein woh jodi sirf dosti ki hai. Haina?
Manya stared at him, surprised.
M: Tumhe-
Om laughed, a hint of sadness in his voice.
Om: Manya, tum-
He walked over to her bed and reached under her pillow. Manya stared, shocked, as he took out the card Akash had given her and his picture.
M: Yeh tumhe kaise...!
Om smiled at her.
Om: Ek side per apna best friend kehti ho, aur yeh samajti ho that I won't know ki tumhare dil mein kya hai? Jab tum Akash ke peeche baagti hui gayee thi, mujhe samaj agaya tha ki kya hua. Aur phir meri nazar tumhare bed per perri, jahan se yeh card nazar araha tha.
Manya looked down guiltily.
M: I'm sorry, Om. I'm so sorry!
Om walked up to her.
Om: Kyun, Manya? Tum mujhse pyar nahin kerti, tho why should you be sorry, huh?
Tears slid down Manya's cheeks.
Om: Aye, Manya! Lakein itna zaroor bathao, ki oos din train station per phir tum-
M: Woh, Om, main...main vaise hi surprised hogayee thi, aur I just didn't move...
Om laughed.
Om: Tho agar tum surprised na hoti, tho mathlab tum kab ki jaa chuki hoti?!
Manya laughed, wiping her tears. Om held her shoulders.
Om: Tum meri sabse achi dost ho, Manya. Aur shiyad hamare beech yehi rishta rahe tho acha hoga. Haan, thodi umeed zaroor thi ki shiyad tum bhi-lakein-I guess Akash is the lucky guy?
Manya looked up suddenly, realizing Akash had left.
Om: Go, Manya. Jao. Rauko apne pyar ko.
M: Lakein, Om-tum-
Om: Main ja raha hoon London. Jab tumhare jaisi koi ladki mil jaye gi, tho phir ajaoon ga tumhare dhervaze per!
Manya laughed and hugged him tightly.
M: Hum hamesha best friends rahein ge na?
Om: Always, Manya. Tumhare yeh dost tumhare liye kabhi bhi, kuch bhi kerne ke liye thyar hai.
M: Om, I'm sorry.
Om: Sorry kyun, yaar?! Aray, pagli, tum mujhe ek baar keh ker tho dekhti. Tumhara yeh Om khushi se tumhara haath Akash ke haathoon mein dhaita. Tumne tho kuch kaha hi nahin!
Manya let go of him as he wiped her tears.
Om: Ab yeh Ekta jaisi serial ki heroine ki tarha rauna bandh karo, aur jao. Kisi ko shiyad tumhare pyar ki umeed hogi, Manya!




Akash stopped his car in front of the airport.
A: Main ja raha hoon, Manya. Tumse door. Main jaanta hoon ki main tumhe burra bala keh ker ja raha hoon. Lakein main jaanta hoon ki jo pal humne saath bithaye, woh tumhare liye koi mazaak nahin thay. Tum mujhse pyar kerti ho, Manya. Mujhe hamare pyar ki sachai per itna yakeen hai. Lakein phir bhi, tumne aisa kyun kiya, yeh shiyad main kabhi jaan nahin paoon ga.
He got out of the car and phoned Rehan, letting him know he was leaving the country for good.
R: WHAT? Kahan ja raha hai tu, Akash?!
A: Dad se meri baat hui thi. Woh New York mein hai, aur main bas unke paas ja raha hoon. Take care, Rehan. Aur-aur...thanks...tune jo bhi mere liye kiya, uske liye.
Before he got more emotional, Akash shut the phone. He picked up his bag and began to walk towards the airport when he realized his wallet was missing.
Groaning, he went back to the car. It was on the passenger seat, open. He picked it up and stared at it.
Manya's picture lay in it. Akash stared at it, tears filling up his eyes. It was the same picture Akash had presented her of them both together.
The song Lambi Judai from "Jannat" played as he stared at it.
Jin raston se guzra yeh dil tha
Manzil mili na pyaar na paya

He closed the wallet, shutting out Manya's picture, and walked in the airport.




Akash frowned as the announcement was made.
"The flight F17 leaving to New York will take off in twnety five minutes..."
Tere bin dil mera lage kahin na
Tere bin jaan mere jaye kahin na




The taxi came to a stop.
M: Kya hua!
D: Traffic jam hai, ji. Airport bas dus minute hi door hai, don't worry!
Manya pushed open the car door.
D: Aray, kahan ja rahi hain aap!
Manya raced between the cars, running.
Rabaaaa
Manya ran and ran as the music played. On the other side, Akash picked up his luggage and moved towards the gate just as Manya reached the airport.
M: AKAAAAAAASHH!!!!!!








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Posted: 16 years ago
wwwwwwooooowwwww, that was just amazing and om is such a good friend, but still a kabab main haddi 😆
thankkk uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ssssssssooooooooo much for posting, and plzzzzzzz post the next part AAASSSAAAPPP 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
that wass great finilyy manya with akashh om is reallyy good friendd plzzzzzzz contuied your next parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG tht waz AMAZING!!!plzz post ur next part ASAP!!!can't wait any longer!! 😭 😆
Edited by s3exicuti4lyfe - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 19:

Manya scanned the airport. She raced towards the security guard.
M: Where's the flight to New York?!
The security guard pointed to the gate where the passengers were checking in. Manya ran to it.
She saw Akash standing in line to give in his luggage. Manya sighed a sigh of relief.
M: AKASH!
Akash stopped moving and turned, shocked. He stared at her for a second, and then pulled out of line and came to her.
A: Tum? Yahan-
M: Akash!
She was crying, standing in front of him.
A: Manya...
M: Meri ek baat suno ge, Akash?
Akash stared into her tearfelt eyes.
A: Hmm?
Manya stepped forward.
M: Ek pyar ki kahan sunao tumhe?
Akash's eyes welled up with tears. He nodded slowly.
M: Ek ladki thi aur ek ladka tha. Woh ladki oos ladke se bahut pyar kerti thi, aur woh ladka bhi ussai bahut chahta tha...
A: Phir?
Manya didn't bother to wipe her tears. She looked at him in the eyes.
M: Phir ek din oos ladki ke best friend ne ussai keh diya ki woh ussai bahut pyar kerta hai. Woh kuch keh na payee. Derti thi ki oos dost ka dil na tod dhay jisne oos ka hamesha saath diya. Lakein woh oos ladke ko kaise chod dhaiti jise woh apni jaan bana chuki thi..
Akash's bag dropped from his hand and onto the ground.
A: Aur...?
M: Jab bhi woh ladki koshish kerti thi ki woh apne friend ko batha sake, oos ka friend koi aisi baat keh dhaita ki woh chup ho jaati. Aur phir ek din aise hi kamzor pal mein oos ladke ne oos ladki ko oos ke best friend ke saath dhekha, aur kuch aur hi samaj liya..
A: Aur?
M: Aur jab woh jaane laga, tho oos ladki ko ehsaas hua ki shiyad apne pyar ko kho ker woh apni dosti bhi na nibha sakti, aur oosne apne best friend ko sab kuch batha diya.
A: Aur?
M: Aur ooske best friend ne ussai kaha...ki shiyad oos ka intezar ker raha hoga. Aur woh ladki oos ladke ke paas chal perri..
Akash breathed in and stared at her.
A: Kaise?
Manya reached out and held his sleeves, crying.
M: Aise!
She leaped in his embrace, hugging him tightly, crying.
Akash closed his eyes. He wrapped his arms around her and held her tightly.
M: I'm sorry, Akash!
Akash didn't say anything. He held her in his arms tenderly.
M: I'm so sorry!
Akash shook his head and let go of her. Manya stared at him, shocked.
A: Nahin, Manya.
M: Akas-
A: I'm sorry, Manya. Lakein...ab bahut dher ho chuki hai...
Manya stared at him, shocked. She grabbed his sleeves.
M: Akash! It was just a misunderstanding! I swear, Akash! Main sirf tumse pyar kerti hoon! Main tumhare bina nahin ji sakti Akash!
Akash removed her hand from his sleeve and stepped backwards.
A: Bye, Manya.
Manya stared as he took his place back in line. She turned around slowly and walked out of the airport, in shock.
Chaar Dina Da,
Pyar O Rabba,
Lambi Judai, Lambi Judai...




Manya sat on the ledge of the lake, her back leaning against a tree. The moon was shining in the sky, and Manya silently watched her reflection in the calm water under the moonlight.
A kid came upto her and tapped her shoulder. Manya turned, surprised.
The kid handed her a flower and raced away. Manya looked at the flower, confused. Shrugging, she set it down.
After about five minutes, another kid came and gave her another rose.
M: Yeh kaun dhay raha hai?
The kid shrugged and ran away.
M: Hey!
Another kid came upto her and handed her another rose.
Manya stood up angrily.
M: Okay, what is going on?!
The kid raced away.
M: Vappas aao!
She was about to race after him when a tap on her shoulder made her turn.
M: Kya hai-
She stopped as she came face to face with a bouquet of roses.
M: Kaun hai?
The bouquet went down and Akash's sheepish smile appeared. Manya stared, open-eyed.
M: AKASH!
A: Hi, Manya.
Manya stared at him, puzzled. Hi?
M: Uh...hi...
Akash grinned.
A: Actually, tumhe ek pyar ki kahani bathani thi.
A slow smile spread across Manya's mouth.
M: Acha?
A: Hmm. Ek ladka tha, aur woh ek ladki se bahuuuuut pyar kerta tha.
M: Aur...?
Akash laughed.
A: Aur ussai oos ladki ko sathane mein bahuuuut maza aata tha!
Manya stared at, surprised.
M: AKASH!
Akash laughed. He dropped the bouquet and grabbed her, pulling her close.
M: No! Get off of me!
Akash laughed and grabbed her waist.
A: Aaj nahin chodoon ga!
M: No way! Airport mein mujhe itna rulaya, aur ab-
A: Kaha na maine! Sathane mein maza aata hai mujhe!
M: I hate you, Akash!
He turned her around and held her by the waist. He stared in her eyes. She felt herself melt in them.
A: You hate me?
M: I-
A: You hate me, Manya?
Manya shyly hugged him.
M: I love you, Akash!
Akash held her tightly, picking her off the ground. He looked up at the sky as the song came on,
Tum Kya Jano Dil Kerta Tumse Kitna Pyar...


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