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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
aaaawwww part 12 and 13 were tooo sweet, thanks soooo much for updating soon, i really apreceate it, 😳 oh i can't wait for akash to tell manya that he loves her, yyyyeeeeaaaayyyyy 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Soooooooooooooo cute soni! I Cant wait at all for the next parts!!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
LOVED ITT! just FAB 😛 continue sooon pls 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 14:

Manya stood still, staring at Akash confusedly. He was wearing blue jeans and a light blue T-shirt, holding a red rose in his hands. The rain had him wet, and he was staring deeply into Manya's eyes confidently.
He walked upto her and held out the rose.
Manya looked at it, still confused, but smiled a bit. She held the rose from his hands. Akash held out his hand again.
A: One more dance?
Manya laughed. She held his hand and once more they swayed to the music.
M: Akash?
A: Hmm?
M: Yeh sab kya hai?
Akash let go of her and stared at her.
A: Uh...
Manya raised her eyebrows.
A: Ek pyar ki kahani bathaoon, Manya?
M: What?
A: Ek pyar ki kahani?
Manya shrugged but smiled.
M: Okay...
A: Ek ladka tha, Manya. Ussai ek ladki se bahut chir thi. Patha hai kyun?
M: Kyun?
He walked close to her, making her breathe heavily.
A: Kyunki woh hamesha ussai jagarti rehti thi.
M: Aur phir?
A: Phir ek din oos ladke ko oos ka wohi jagarna pyara lagne laga. Jab woh tanha tha, tho ussai oos ladki ki awaaz sunai dhaine lagi. Choti choti baat per woh ladki yaad aane lagi...
Manya edged away from him nervously but he walked closer again.
M: Phir...?
A: Woh ladka jahan bhi jaata tha, ussai woh ladki dikhai dhaiti thi. Oos ladki ki muskurahat mein oos ki haseen chupne lagi. Oos ladki ki awaaz mein oos ne dunya ki saari khoobsurat sur paa li...
M: Phir...?
Akash walked close to her. He touched her cheek softly, making her close her eyes. He moved the hair from her face and tucked it behind her ear.
A: Oos ki zulfein ussai shyam lagne lagi, aur oos ka deedar subha.
M: Aur...?
A: Aur dheere dheere oos ladke ko samaj aya ki baat kya thi. Woh ladka oos ladki se pyar kerna laga tha...
M: Aur..?
A: Woh ladka jab bhi ussai dekhta tha, tho ussai aisa lagta tha jaise ki yeh dunya bahut khoobsurat hai. Jaise ki iss dunya mein khilte hue rang hi rang hain...
M: Aur...?
A: Aur ussai aise laga jaise ki...woh ladki oos ka sab kuch ban gayee. Woh jahan bhi hota tha na, sirf oos ke baare mein sochta rehta tha. Oos ki ek jhalak ke liye saari saari raat bahaar intezar kerta tha, iss umeed ki saath ke woh kabhi na kabhi tho bahaar aye gi...
M: Aur...?
A: Aur phir oos ladke ne yeh theh kiya...ki woh oos ladki ko apne dil ka haal bataye ga...
Manya looked up at him, her heart racing. Akash was so close to her that she could even hear his heartbeat match hers.
M: Kaise?
A: Aise...
He held out his arms and let the water fall on him.
A: Yeh paani ki boondhein dekh rahi ho na, Manya?
M: Haan...
Akash stood straight and smiled at her flirtatiously.
A: Tumhe patha hai, Manya? Kal raat hum yahin khare thay, issi baarish ke neeche. Tum tho andher chali gayee, lakein main saari raat yahan kherra raha...
M: Kyun?
A: Kyun ki main jaanta tha ki yehi baarish ki boondhein tumhe chooh ker mujhe chooh rahi thi...
Manya stared at him, her mouth a bit open. Akash walked back close to her and held her arm lightly. Manya flinched at his touch nervously.
A: Main jahan bhi jaata hoon, sirf tumhara ehsaas mere saath hota hai. Main tumhare saath har pal rehna chahta hoon. Tumhari parchai nahin bana chahta kyunki parchai bhi handhere mein saath chod dhaiti hai. Main tumhara saath dhaina chahta, din aur shyam.
Manya felt her breath go from her at that moment. She finally inhaled deeply.
M: Kyun?
A: Kyun ki...I love you, Manya.
Manya tried to swallow her spit but every part of her body just stayed stoned.
A: Tumhare saath har ek bithaya hua pal mere dil mein kaidh hai, Manya. Maine aaj tak istherhan ka ehsaas nahin paya. I've never felt so..so..FREE before..
A slow smile began to form in the corner's of Manya's mouth.
A: Har pal aisa lagta hai ki jaise yeh dunya...bahut haseen hai...tumhe patha hai...jo cheezein mujhe kabhi nahin achi lagti thi, aaj kal woh achi lagne lagi hain...
Manya smiled.
A: Asmaan ko dekhta hoon, tho tumhara chehra nazar aata hai...yeh saari dunya mujhe, Manya..tumhari..tumhari parchaii lagti hai..
Manya closed her eyes as he came inches away from her, speaking almost in her neck.
A: Tumhe dekh ker lagta hai ki tumhare naksh mein khuda hai...tumhari aankhein mein dekhta hoon tho aisa lagta hai jaise ki sagar khud mere paas agaya ho...tumhari haseen ko dekhta hoon tho aisa lagta hai ki chand khud zameen per agaya ho...
Manya opened her eyes softly.
A: I love you, Manya.


Edited by sonikudi1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE! THANKS FOR UPDATING! I know that you are busy so I wait for the next part tomorrow BUT if you have time PLEASE please update! Good job! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
OMG tht waz soooo cute 😳 😊
plzz update soon Sonia!!!i'm dyin to noe wat wud Manya say!!! 😭 😆
Edited by s3exicuti4lyfe - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
that was really good sonia!!! keep it coming!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
finally, pyar ka isshar hogaya, wwwwooowwww akash was sssssssoooooooo romantic, oye hoye, main toh marr hi gaye 😳 😆 😆 plzzzz continue thankkk uuu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
akash is reallyy romantic i love tht part how he said i love you to manya i hope manya also love him back cant wait to read
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 15:

Manya stared at Akash. The words played,
Hai tere hi dum se meri chahat ka jahan...
Tere Jaisa Ashiq sabko milta hai kahan...

Akash held her hands tightly.
A: I can do anything for you, Manya. Kuch bhi...
Tujh pe sanam...meri jaan nisaar...
A tear of joy rolled down Manya's cheek. Akash stared at it. He suddenly bent down. Manya shut her eyes tightly as he lightly kissed the wet stained spot. As he stood up again, Manya opened her eyes slowly.
A: Mujhe itna badnaseeb na banao Manya ki main tumhare ansoon ka karan ban jaoon.
Manya almost smiled at his words. Akash looked at her.
A: Ab-ab itna intezar bhi muth karao na-
Manya laughed.
M: I love you, too Akash!
Shyly, she hugged him tightly the moment she said those words. Akash couldn't believe his ears.
A: Manya, did you just-
M: I LOVE YOU!
Akash laughed and wrapped his arms around her, feeling her embrace. Manya laughed, her head resting on his chest. She could hear his heartbeat, and she knew very well that, that heart was only hers now.



Manya woke up in the dorm room on an early Saturday morning. She sat up straight and suddenly looked up.
The room was decorated with flowers and heart balloons. Laughing, Manya jumped out of bed.
Roopa came in the room and laughed.
R: Deewana ho aapka, aur deewangee hum sahein?
Manya laughed. She held the balloons in her hands and hugged them tightly. She saw a teddy bear lying on her bed. She picked it up and took out the card it was holding. She read Akash's familiar scribbly handwriting.
Manya, tumhe oos kahani ki shuruaat tho bathana hi bhool gaya! Aur main shuruaat iss liye keh raha hoon, kyunki tumne yeh tho kabhi suna hoga, real love stories don't have happy endings because real love stories never end? Well, oos ladke ko oos ki sapnu ki rani mil gayee, Manya. Aur ab woh jahan bhi hota hai, sirf yehi sochta hai ki kab woh mile gi, kab woh nazar ayegi...I love you, Manya.
Manya giggled. She looked at her table and saw another wrapped present. She opened it up and saw her picture with Akash, where Akash was pulling her back with her dupatta and she was looking back.
Manya smiled as she waved her hand across the picture.
M: I love you, Akash. I love you!
She took the card and picture and placed them under her pillow, smiling.
M: How sweet!
Kicking the balloons happily, she went to the restroom, singing "Kuch To Hone Laga Hai" from Baghban.



Akash frowned.
A: Yeh ladki kabhi mujhe MILTI kyun nahin hai? Poora college chaan maara, where is she?!
Rehan looked at him and laughed.
R: Majnu sahib, aapko Laila chuth per hai.
A: Oh, thanks!
He raced up the stairs and to the roof. Sure enough, there was Manya, hanging clothes on a clothesline. Akash laughed.
A: Lo. College mein bhi yehi kaam!
He crept up behind her and grabbed her waist.
M: Akash!
Akash laughed and held her tightly.
A: I loove you, I love you, I love you!
Manya laughed. He picked her up and swung her around.
M: Akaaash!
Akash set her on her feet again.
A: Sweetheart, ek main hoon ki din raat tumhare baare mein sochta hoon. Aur ek tum ho ki...yeh KAPDE dry ker rahi ho?
Manya laughed.
M: Ab kya karun? Bahut koshish ki, tumhari yaad hi nahin ayee.
Akash's smile fell. Manya turned back to the clothes and giggled secretly to herself.
A: What?
M: Haan!
Akash went in front of her and looked at her through the clothes.
A: Tumhe meri yaad nain ayee?
M: Nain, sorry.
A: TUMHE MERI YAAD NAHIN AYEE!!
He jumped at her through the clothes. She shrieked and jumped backwards, laughing. Akash grabbed her again and tickled her.
M: AKAAAASH!!
The clothes that were hanging suddenly fell over them. A yellow dupatta flew over their heads as the stood up.
Akash stared at Manya, the dupatta covering their heads.
The music played as Manya looked down shyly. Akash smiled and held her face in his hands softly.
A: Aye, Manya...
M: Hmm?
A: I love you.
Manya smiled. Those words meant EVERYTHING to her.
M: I love you, too.
A: But I love you more!
Manya laughed as he hugged her, the dupatta still around them.
A: Yeh dupatta dekh rahi ho, Manya?
M: Hmm..
A: I never want it to fly away.
Manya looked at him.
M: Kyun?
A: Kyunki iss ke neeche sirf main aur tum hain, iss dunya se dooooorr...
Manya smiled.
M: Lakein jab pyar sacha hota hai na, tho dunya ko maiine nahin rakhti.
Akash held out his hand.
A: Promise to never let go, Manya?
Manya stared at his hand. She slid her hand in it and smiled.
M: I promise to never let go, Akash.
Akash smiled as they both hugged tightly.



Akash sat out in the night, looking up at the dorm rooms. He frowned.
A: Come on, Manya...
The moon stood high in the sky, shining down on him.
A: Manyaa...
As if on cue, Manya appeared in the doorway. Akash stood up excitedly. Even though they were together most of the day, watching her again made him feel like it was the first time they were meeting!
Manya raced upto him and grabbed him in a tight hug. He held her tightly.
M: Sorry! Intezar kerna perra?
A: So what? I knew tum zaroor aao gi.
M: Itna yakeen hai mujhper?
A: Khud se bhi zyada, Manya!
They held onto each other, looking up at the moon.
Oof Kya Samaan Jawan Hai...
Agosh mein chandni hai...
Bikhri hai jo yahan wahan...
Woh pyar ki roshni hai...

A: Manya?
M: Hmm?
A: Promise me tum kabhi mujhe chod ker nahin jao gi.
M: Main tumhe kyun chod ker jaoon gi?
A: I don't know.
Manya laughed. She rested her head on his chest.
M: I promise, Akash. I promise.



Akash jumped up away from Manya the next morning as Khanna Sir stood over them. They were leaning against a tree, Akash laying on Manya's legs as she stroked his hair.
K: Akash Rathod. Yeh college hai, Yash Chopra ki koi film nahin!
Manya blushed.
M: I'm sorry, sir.
A: Yeah, uh...
K: Akash, come with me. Mujhe tumse koi kaam hai.
Akash frowned and looked at Manya.
A: Abhi?!
K: YES! Did I NOT make myself clear?
Akash groaned and stood up, following Khanna Sir. He turned and blew Manya a kiss. Manya laughed.
A: I'll be RIGHT BACK!!
Manya nodded and stayed against the tree, waiting.
After about half an hour, a kid raced upto Manya. He handed her a note. Manya looked at it.
Hey, jaan! I'm baack!
Manya laughed.
M: Yeh Akash bhi na!


Edited by sonikudi1 - 16 years ago
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