FF:ChanD TaruN Mein|Pg.34|ENDING

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I ended the last FF TeRe Ishq MeiN thinKing thaT thiS foRuM would be dead๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜†But now I see that there still loyal SZ fans!๐Ÿ‘And I thought...let's keep our SZ forum alive by our FF! And as you know, I only do FFs with my faV Akanya jodi, and theRefore this FF will be named Chand Tarun Mein...๐Ÿ˜ณSo be sure that this FF will contain the song Chand Tarun Mein alot๐Ÿ˜†

Character Sketch

Manya Sharma- A beautiful, talented girl who believes she should stand up for anything she does not support.

Akash Rathod- A rich, spoiled brat who is used to getting his way with everything, and of course, a typical flirt and every girl's dream!

Roopa- Akash's best friend, and Manya's new friend.

Om- Akash's other best friend. Speak perfect Hindi!

Goppu- Made fun of by Akash and Om.

Kiran, Rehan and Sanju are same as seen in SZ.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Karan- College's hunk until Akash came along. Thinks Manya is a behn-ji type of girl!

ProLogue

Manya Sharma is a new girl in SZ College. She believes she should stand up for who she is, and justify the wrong. The first day in SZ College, she enters wearing a pink churidaar dress, whereas most of the girls are wearing dresses. She is immediately caught in Karan's net, as he tries to flirt with her. But when he recieves a tight slap from Manya, he calls her Behnji and before Manya knows it she is known as this across the whole college. Just as she was entering her first class, she noticed a kid wearing glasses being teased of by two friends, one wearing a jacket and jeans with glasses. Manya approached them angrily, pulled the guy, and landed a hard slap across his face. The boy glares into her eyes, stunned with anger and rage.

Boy: Tumne Akash Rathod ko thapad maara?!

And just in case you would like to listen to the song to get a better idea or something, go to Youtube and type in Akash Manya and in the middle you will see a video by Akaanya123 that says AkashManya and Chand Taroon Mein next to it๐Ÿ˜ƒI was going to upload it..but its just too much work right now๐Ÿ˜†It's a cheapish VM by me, but just in case you want to get a vivid song detail๐Ÿ˜‰

So what say? Should I continue?๐Ÿ˜ณ




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Posted: 16 years ago
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yess plzzz contuie it soo amazinggg storyy it sound also coolllllll
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Posted: 16 years ago
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love all ur ff's ...plz continue ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Part 1:
Manya stared into the boy's eyes, apparently named Akash Rathod. He took off his glasses, ready to pound her or something. From the back, another mucular guy, Om, placed a hand on his shoulder.
Om: Jaane dhay na, Akash. Tu jaanta nain yeh kaun ai!
A: Kaun ai?
Om: Yeh..Manya Sharma hai. SZ ki nain BehNjI!!
Manya glared at him.
M: How dare you? Tum khudko samajte kya ho?!
A: Aye, Jaansi ki Rani! Humein samajne ki koi zarurat nain ai! Hum jo hain so hain!
M: Haan, woh tho main dekh rahi! Saand! Ganda! Ek..stupid mawali!
Akash stared at her, shocked. Om laughed.
Om: Waah, waah! Behnji ki himat tho dekh, Akash!
Akash laughed bitterly at Manya.
A: Tum jao aur kisi ko rakhi bandho, Manya Sharma. Hamare kaam mein dakhal andaazi muth karo!
M: Aur yeh hai tumhara kaam? Doosroon ko pareshan kerna?
A: Aur tumhara kaam kya hai? Doosroon ke kaam mein taang araana?
M: Saand kahin ke!
A: Aray, jaati yaan dhoon ek keench ke!
Manya opened her mouth in shock.
M: Bathameez bhi ho! Koi tameez nain hai!
A: Kyun? Tumhare bhai tmhe bahut tameez dhaite hain?!
M: How dare you! You stupid--
A: Is ki tho!
He lunged for her as she shrieked and jumped back. Roopa came over, running.
R: Akash! Om! Stop bothering her!
A: Kyun? Tumhe thung karun?
He winked at her as Roopa rolled her eyes.
R: Don't mind them, Manya.
M: Uh..tumhe mera naam kaise patha?
R: Oh, woh..uh..
Om: Saare college ko patha hai. Behnji!
Manya glared at him and lunged for him too. Roopa grabbed her.
R: Manya!
M: Yeh sab log jerks hain!
R: So tho hain!
A: Hey!
R: Anyways, I'm Roopa. Come on, class mein chalte hain. Chodo inhe!
Manya excused herself from Roopa before entering the classroom and got a drink of water. She was drinking when she felt someone tap her behind. She stood up, shocked. She turned around to see Karan laughing with his friends.
K: Oops, sorry, behnji!
M: Lagta hai pehla tapad bhool gaye ho tum!!
K: Aray, behne aise bolti hain? Hmm? Very bad, Manya. Jao, main tumse baath nain kerta. Tum mujhe rakhi naain pehna sakti ab!
Manya stared at him, pissed off.
M: Yeh kapde meri sharafat hain, Karan. Kamzori nahin!
K: Acha? Aisa hi hona chahiye. Verna college ke saare bhai tumhe kisi dress mein pasand nain karein ge!
They laughed and walked away, making Manya feel more than angry. She walked into the classroom, muttering curses.
She took an empty seat and sat down. She felt a push from behind. She turned around and saw Om seated.
M: Kya hai?!
Om: Rakhi bhi layee ho kya?
Manya gave him a dirty look and sat down. Akash came and sat down next to her, without acknowleding her. He saw her once and pretended to faint.
A: OH shoot. Yeh bhi hai yahan per!
Om: Akash, yaar, apni behn ko koi ais kahe ga!
A: Behn? Please! Yeh meri behn nain hai!
He bent closer to Manya, who moved back an inch. He almost leaned ontop of her and whispered,
A: Yeh tho meri naukerani hone ke laik bhi nain ai!
Manya opened her mouth in raging shock as Khanna Sir called for attention.
KS: Attention, class! May I remind you ke aaj shyam Spring Fling ka dance hai! Be sure to participate!
Om chuckled from behind.
Om: Manya, tum zaroor aana. Aur jitne bhi ladke dance kerein ge na, unhe rakhi baandthi jaana!
A: Aur har ladki ko apni bhabhi!
He laughed and slapped Om a five. Manya gave them both a dirty look, stood up, and changed her seat.

Precap:
Manya felt her cheeks frow furiously red as almost the whole group of people at the dance laughed at her. She felt tears coming in her eyes and said to herself,
M: Nain, Manya. Ab tu inhe dikha dhay!
She ran out the dance, ready with a brilliant plan.

Edited by sonikudi1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plzzzz continue soon....i luv ur concepts....very entertaining ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ๐Ÿ‘ again a fab ff from u ๐Ÿ˜ณ i was waiting for it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i just love the concept!
please continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

im waiting for the nexst part๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice
karan,akash and om are soo mean
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^i kno they r sooo mean! but i still love ur FFs. they r so good! i saw the video of chaan taroon mein. it was really good. wat movie was it from? it suited akash n manya so well. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
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there are soo mean to manya cant wait to read part 2 what is manya planing do in dance party.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank You!

PaRt 2:
Manya was leaving the college when she saw Akash and Om sitting on top of the hood of a car, laughing. Om nudged Akash and pointed to Manya walking.
A: Aye, Jaansi ki Rani! Chal ker jao gi?
M: Mera naam Manya Sharma hai!
A: Dekho tho! Naam tho aise le rahi hai jaisi ki--
M: Jaisi ki kya, huh? You think ki main istherhan ke kapde pehnthi hoon tho main koi cheap gharane se hoon?
A: Nain, nain, tum tho Taj Mahal mein rehti ho!
Om chuckled as Manya glared at them.
M: Aye, mawali! Mere Papa--
A: Mere papa, mere papa! Istherhan ke kapde pehn ker tumhe yeh badi badi baatein suit nain kerti, Manya.
Manya shook her head at him.
M: You're useless, Akash. Just useless!
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Manya picked up the phone as it was ringing loudly.
M: Hello?
R: Manya, main Roopa bol rahi hoon. Come on, get ready, main aur meri dost Kiran tumhe pick kerne arahe hain.
M: Pick kerne? Kyun?
R: Aray, yaar! The Spring Fling!
M: Roopa, tum jao. Main nahin arahi!
R: Manya! Tumhari reputation already doob rahi hai. Aur agar tum Spring Fling per nain jao gi tho--
M: I don't care about what others think, Roopa. Main nain arahi.
R: Please, Manya? Mere liye?
After a bit begging, Roopa got Manya to attend the college. Manya promised to meet Roopa in front of SZ instead. She took out a beautiful red churidaar dress and left for the dance.
As soon as Manya entered the dance, she saw eyes turn to her. People began to laugh and point at her. She saw Akash step out from under a light, wearing a black tux, smirking.
A: Lo. Tum tho dance mein bhi bhai doondne agayee!
Om: Seriously, yaar. Manya, rakhi ki thaali nain layee? Bas uski hii kammi hai!
K: Haan, verna tho tum Raksha Bandhan ki poori tyari mein ho!
Everyone started to laugh. Roopa put her hand on Manya's shoulder reassuringly as Kiran did the same.Manya felt her cheeks frow furiously red as almost the whole group of people at the dance laughed at her. She felt tears coming in her eyes and said to herself,
M: Nain, Manya. Ab tu inhe dikha dhay!
She ran out the dance, ready with a brilliant plan.
A: Baag gayee!!!
Manya heard the whole college's echo in her ears as she raced back home. She stood in front of her house, which was not a hut like Akash probably expected, but a huge, rich mansion. She raced upto her room and threw open her closet.
M: Bas! Main yeh kapde pehnthi hoon kyunki mujhe apna culture yaad hai. Lakein yeh dekhna chahte hain na? I'll show them!
She was looking through her closet when her eyes fell on a mask. It was a silver mask that covered her eyes. She picked it up and snapped her fingers. She raced down to her mother's closet and took a beautiful, white gown and put it on. She put on the mask and curled her hair. She looked in the mirror and realized she looked no less than Cinderella.
Manya stepped into the dance floor once again, her eyes hidden under the mask. Her heels clicked on the ground as everyone looked upto her.
Om: Yeh kaun ai?
K: Damn. Jo bhi hai, she's my typE!
Akash stared at the Manya walked in, oblivious to the fact that this was the same Manya Sharma. Akash walked to her slowly and stood in front of her. She stared at him in the eyes and stood tall.
A: Who are you?
Manya just smiled. Akash smiled back and held her hand.
A: Can I have this dance?
Manya suddenly thought back to the time Akash laughed at her. She looked over to where Goppu was standing, and as everyone's eyes followed her, she asked him to dance. Goppu smiled and placed his hand in hers. Akash stood up, raising his eyebrows. Karan hooted.
K: Teri tho baj gayee!
Akash raised his hand.
A: Akash Rathod ko aaj tak kisi ladki ne inkaar nahin kiya hai!
He walked upto Manya.
A: Tum ho kaun?
Manya spoke in a whisper to disguise her voice a bit.
M: Main jo koi bhi hoon, yeh tumhare liye jaana zaroori nahin hai!
She walked away when Akash grabbed her wrist from behind, smiling flirtatiously.
A: Akash Rathod ko koi na nahin kehta hai, Cinderella.
M: Lakein agar iss Cinderella ka Prince Charming tum ho hi nahin, tho iss mein woh kya ker sakti hai?
The song suddenly came on,
Dil Deewana Doondtha Hai, Ek Haseen Ladki...!
Akash looked around the room and laughed. He spun Manya around, letting go of her wrist, and sang,
A: Aye, Haseena bataa tera kya naam hai!
M: Mere naam se tujhko kya kaam hai!
A: Yun aankhein na dikha tu!
M: Yu baatein na banaa tu!
A: Manay gi tu na aise!
M: Dekhe hain tere jaise!!
The music suddenly changed and a softer song came on. Akash grabbed Manya, who glared at him, and laughed. He swayed her aroundi in his arms as she tried to push him away...
Na woh inkaar kerti hai,
Na woh ekraar kerti hai!
Humein phir bhi pata hai yeh,
Ke Woh Humi Se pyar Kerti Hai..

Manya turned and stared into his eyes. Akash stared back. The lights went dim as the spotlight fell on them.
A: Tum ho kaun?
Manya felt her heartbeat race up as she stared at him. Their faces were inches away from each other, and they were staring into each other's eyes. Manya's mind suddenly had images of when Akash laughed at her a while ago. She released Akash's arm and raced out of the dance. Akash stared, confused.
A: Hey! Cinderella!
Manya raced out, not even looking back once...
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Precap:
Manya entered the classroom and sat down. She looked over at Akash, who was in deep thought.
M: Oh My God. He thinks!
Akash looked over at her, surprised.
A: Kya?
M: Kuch nain!
Om: Akash, yaar, chod na oos baat ko.
A: Kaise chod dhoon? Mujhe tho woh Cinderella chahiye!
Manya stopped writing and looked up at him, shocked.
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