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Posted: 16 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz contine the Akanya verse omanya moree partsssss plzz i am watingg to read more parts of story
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭Sorry to make u guyz wait so long anyway heres pt3 😊

Akah was getting ready when he suddenly thought why am i so eager to dance with Manya

Manya:Guyz mujhe is akash ke sath dance nahin karna
While manya is going to akash to tell him i'm ready
Om:Manya Tum itne der kyu laga rahin ho
Manya:Akash ko ye kahon na
Om:Akash to kabse ka niche hain
Manya:Mujhe laga ke woh.....
Om:kya woh woh chalo niche

Downstairs
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Downstairs akash is talking to gopu when he notices Manya in his head thinking wow she is so beautiful
Suddenly the lights turn off and the spot lights are on Akash and Manya
Akash:May I have thhis dance holdin out his hand 😳😳😳
Manya:Uh uh yes u may while putting her hand in his
And then sanju asks gopu and rehaan asks kiran and om asks rupa for the dance
After the dance they cut the cake while manya is cutting the cake she doesn't see her hand by the table and the knife cuts her by mistake!!!πŸ˜•


Precap: When akash sees this he screams manya and everyone hears and goes to her.

plz comment
Luv sanjana
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Edited by sanjana0264 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Wow Sanjana you have such a nice talent. It is a very nice fanfic. I am glad you started writing, especially since it is OManya verses Akanya...WOW!!! I hope to read more!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow it is wicked and awsome akanya vs omanya oooowwwww 2 bad karanya arn't in it 😭 😭 😭
anyways loved it and can't wait for the next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pst ssssssoooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
tttttttttthhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

keep up the good work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry for the delay guys anyway prt 3

Manyaa Akash screamed as he ran into the living room to help her
Om: Kya hua ise
Rupa: O my godd iski to naas kut gaii hai
Akash: Yaha koi hospital sabse nazdik
Gopu: Haan lekin kam se kam 30 minute to lag hi jayenge
Sanju: To le chal mondya
____________________At The Hospital_____________________

Every1 was waiting for the docs answer when the doctor came out of the room
Every1: Manya kaisi hai
D: Woh thik to hai laikin oski tabiat bhot hi nazook si hai. Ose araam ki zaroorat hai
Akash: Kya hum usse mil sakte hai
D: haan
Inside Manya's romm every1 was waiting for her too wakeup when she opened her eyes and rupa saw her.
Rupa: Dheko Manya ooth gayee
Manya: Mujhe hua kya tha
Om: Bhot long story hai
Akash: Maine kaha tha na ke tum se koi bhi chiz properly nahi hoti
Sanju: Tu chup hi rai

Sorry guys got to go but promise to put a longer prtnext time


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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that is awsome πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
i can't wait for the next part πŸ˜†
pppppppppplllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post ssssssssooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the comments heres prt 4 πŸ˜‰

In the hospital every one was worried when the doctor came in and said she is fine but usse bed rest ki zaroorat hai
Akash: kya hum usse mil sakte hai
D: yes
After they go inside
Manya: mujhe kys hua tha
OM: chod bhot hi lambi story hai
Akash: Maine kaha tha tumse koi kaam thik sai nahin hota
Sanju: Tu chup rai
Then the doctor comes in and says you can take her home paar isse rest ki zaroorat hai
Akash: Teasingly says or kit na rest karegi
Manya: Shut up akash
_______________Later that day___________________________

Manya was on her bed reading a magazine when Akash knocks on the door.
Manya: Come in. Akash tum
Akash: haan kyu main ander nahin asakta
Manya: Nahin asa nahin lekin u didn't have to knock
Akash: Anyway chalo khana tayar hai.
Manya: Tum jao mujhe bhook nahin hai
Akash: Manya zid mat karo or chalo tumne kal se kuch bhi nahin khaya hain
Manya: Thik hai tum jao main aati hoon
_____________________Down stairs________________________

Rupa was making something when om stepped in
Om:Kya kar rahin ho
Rupa: salad bana rahin hoon
Om: galdi karo
Rupa: Haat hain machime nahin

Precap: akash says u I luv U to manya

Thats all for now hope u liked 😎 it and plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment plzz or i won't rite anymore 😑


Edited by sanjana0264 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww sanju tat was sssssssssoooooooo
sssswwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeetttttttt i can't wait for the net parts πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good job. I loved it! Please continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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πŸ‘πŸ‘so thanks for the comments and actually akash won' be saying i luv u to manya until later on so here's part 5

Om: Accha baba sorry

Rupa: Okay tum jao or dheko Manya kaise hai

Om: okay any way mai ussi ki pas hi jaa rah tha

While they all were having lunch. Om said to Akash tu manya ko kabse jaanta hai.

Akash: Bachpan se. Lekin tum ne kyu pucha

Om: bas uhi

______________________Later That Day_________________________

The gang decided that they were going to go for a night walk.

Om: Kyu na hum night walk pe chale

Rupa: not a bad idea

Manya: Lekin

Akash : No lekin wekin hum sab jaainge

Manya:Okayyyyyy

Om: Or uake baad hum ghr aake spin the bottle khelenge

Everyone: Good idea

While they were going for a night walk akash held Manya's hand and said chalo mere saath

Manya: paar kaha

Akash: Chalo bhi na

Manya: akash kya hoa.

Akash: Ten tana surprise πŸ˜‰

Mnaya: yeh sab tum ne.....

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Manya mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Manya: kya

Akash: Me me me I I I mujhe I am in love

Manya: kisse

Akash: Woh lucky ladki ka naam hai........

Manya: Tumhe kaise pata ke woh ladki lucky hai

Akash: Kyu ke main special hi hoon or saab ladki muj par marti haiπŸ˜‰

Manya: Accha accha oska naam kya hai πŸ˜‰

He pulled Manya closer to him and said oska naam hai Manyaaaaa sharmaaaaπŸ˜ƒ

Manya: tum he jhoot bolna bhi nahin ata hai kya akash🀒

Akash: No manya main jhoot nahi bole rahan hoon i love you kab kahan kabse kya tum mujse pyaar karti ho❀️ ❀️

Manya: Main tumse pyaar kyu karoon.😳

Akash: Or hota to

Manya smiled and ran😳 as akash held her by her waist and pulled her close kya tum mujse pyaar kati ho

<><><><><><><>< ><> To Be Continued <><><><><><><>< ><><>

Thats all for now but plzzzzzz commentπŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Edited by sanjana0264 - 16 years ago
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