Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 15

Hi guys thanks for the comments and here is the next part,
Part 15,

Om ran in the office, while his dad went to a meeting and his mom went in with om,
D: please don't disturb her, let her sleep for a while,
O: ok docter
OM: om beta main ab ghar chalti hoon, vaha bohth kaam para hai, aur Tumhe bahu ke saath kuch waqt batane ka maoka mil jaye ga
O: (blushing) teek hai maa

About one hour later manya woke up and opened her eye's slowly, when her eyes were opened full, her mouth dropped in shock, the whole office was full of balloons and roses, and at the top going across the room was a 'sorry' banner, manya looked at it and kaughed slightly as she felt someone lifting her up, she screamed as om picked manya up in his arms and spun her around, manya laughed as om stopped spinning and sat manya on the desk, then he started singing 'zara se' from jannat

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa
Mein tere mein tere
Kadmoon mein rakh du yeh jahan
Mera ishq deewangi
Ohhhhoo..
Hai nahi hai nahi
Aashiq koi mujhsa tera
Tu mere liye bandagi
Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepanah.

Manya looked at om as tears filled her eyes,
O: manya main tumse vaada kerta hoon, in hassen ankoon main kabhi ansoon nehi anne doonga, aur Tumhare kadmoon main har khushi rak doonga, Tumhe aur humare bachey ko kabhi kissi cheez ki kami mehsoos kern e doonga,
M: om tum mujse aur humare bachay se itna pyar ker te ho,
O: main tum dono ko iss dunya se bhi zaada pyar kerta hoon,
Manya looked at om and embraced him in a tight hug.

.....................................Eight months later….....................................…
Manya was in bed sleeping when, someone came and kissed her slightly on the fore head, she opened her eye's and saw om,
O: manya mere saath chalo, tumhare liye ek surprise hai,
Om picked manya up in his arms and took her to the room next door to theirs, he put her down outside the room and opened the door, manya looked at the room, surprised,
O: surprise, yeh humare hone vale bachay ka kamra hai
M: wow it's gorgeous, yeh sab tumne ,
O: nehi manya yeh sab bachay ne kiya tha,
M: om….
O: ji havaldarni
M: ab chalo bhi na,
O: kaha?
M: priya ne phone kiya tha, ki voh yaha ah rahi hai, aur Tumhe usko pick kern eke liye jaana kai.
O: lekin mujhe Tumhe chorne ka maan nehi kerta,
M: tum ab ja te ho ya main maa ji ko bulaun
O: ok baba you win, main jata hoon
Om gave manya a kiss on her cheek and left, half an hour later the phone rings and manya picks it up, it be's priya,
M: hi priya
P: hi manya
M: priya tum airport per rook aur om abhi ata hi hoga
P: manya voh, main airport per nehi hoon, main abhi London main hoon, abhi pata chala ki hummare exams shuru hone vale hai,
M:ok main om ko phone ker ke batha doon gi,
P: ok bye,
Manya put the phone down and rang om on his mobile, he didn't pick up then after a few bells he eventually picked up,
M: hi om tum kaha ko,
O: mair airport per hoon, aur abhi tak priya bahar nehi aye
M: haan usne abhi phone kiya tha ki voh nehi ah paye gi,
O: ok toh main ghar ah gaha hoon, I love………..
BBBBAAAANNNNGGGG,
Manya heard a gun shot in the back ground
M: om, om tum teek toh ko, OOOOMMMMM…..
O: (sounding weak and in pain) Iiiii llloo,vvveee y,ou manya
Manya heard people screaming in the back ground, saying that om has just been shot,
M: OOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!
OM: (running to manya) kya hua beta
M: ooo, om
Om's mom picked up the phone and heard the people in the background saying that om has just been shot, om's mom drop's the phone on the floor and hears a scream, it was manya, she was on her knee's holding her stomach, om's mom quickly takes manya to the hospital, the same one where some people took om. They took manya into the operation theatre as well as om, two hours later the docter comes into the room where manya was in after the operation,
D: congratulations manya, Tumhe ladka hua hai.
M: docter ooo omm kaisa hai,
The docter looked at manya and passed her a letter………………

Sorry guys but there will be no precap, I want to keep the suspence alive, and thank you sooooo much for the comments I really loved and appreciated them, and plzzzz comment, because this ff is near the END,

Thankyou sooo much

jiya__X

wowowowowow what a cooll amazingg part i am wondringg what is in the letter om passing to manya cant wait for next part it is soo cool

really nice part 👏

u really now how to keep the suspens 😆 im like dying now.. becauz i wana know whats writhen in the letter..and i wana know if om is alive?
poor om 😭

god this suspens! 😆

Hi guys thanks sooooo much for the comments, and I think I should kill the suspence now, 😆

So here is part 16.

Two weeks later, at manya's house, someone knocked at the door, manya's mom went to go and open it, and there infront, was standing a boy holding a bouquet of flowers, manya's mom looked at his surprised,
MM: AKASH, beta tum, andhar ao na,
A: namastay aunty,
Akash came in and sat down,
MM: toh tumhara America ka trip kaisa tha, degree leli
A: America was great, aur degree bhi mil gaye, by the way manya aur om kaha hai,
Akash got up and looked at manya and om's wedding picture that was hung on the wall, manya's mom showed akash the way, to the room. She opened the room door, akash stepped in while manya's mom went to the kitchen. Akash was about to say something when he saw manya lying on the floor with her head on the bed, aksh looked at her and smiled, he thought she was sleeping so he was about to go out, when he heard something on the wall moving, akash turned around and switched the light on, when he turned around he noticed thet the room was filled with toy's and he was about to walk out, when he turned around one last time to see manya, she didn't move, when he looked at her his mouth dropped and the bouquet of flowers fell out his hand, manya was sitting in a white sari and on top on the wall was om's picture with a haar on it, tears filled akash's eyes, when he heard some crying sounds, he looked at manya as she go up and ran to the cot, she picked a baby up, and when she got up a letter fell on the floor, the letter that om gave to manya, the letter said,

meri havaldarni,
mujhe patha hai ki humara rishta janam janam ka hai, lekin main tumhe iss hi janam main chor ke ja raha hoon, mujhe maaf ker do, lekin shayad main tumhara sacha pyar mehi tha, joh bhi tumne kaha tha honeymoon per maine sab sun liya, ki tumhare dil main abhi bhi akash ke liye feelings hai, meri akri khwaish poori ker do gi, humare bete ka naam om prakash shikawat rako gi, aur apni zindagi ek naye ruk se jiyo gi, aur apne ankoon main kabhi ansoon ane nehi do gi, aur main vaada ker tha hoon, tumhara sacha pyar Tumhe vapas doonga, aur mujhe kabhi nehi bhool na, mujhe hamesha apne dil main zinda rakna, hamesh apne chehre per khushi lana, aur har jaman main tum mujhe paogi, ek dost ke roop main, manya ab mera waqt agaya hai jaane ke liye, bye manya, i love you,
tumhara om

akash read the letter and looked at manya, who hadn't noticed that akash was in the room,
A: manya,
M: (turning around), akash tum,
She looked at akash and embraced him in a big hug after putting the baby down, later akash and manya went and sat in the living room when the baby started crying, manya went inside and manya's mom came and told akash everything, what happened with om,
MM: beta main yeh chahti hoon ki manya bahar jaye, logoon ke nil jhule, phir shayad uska maan halka hojaye,
A: fikar math karo aunty, main kiran aur rehan ki shadi per abhi jar raha tha, hoon aur main manya ko mere saath lekar hi jaonga,

After making manya agree, akash and manya both went to the party, when they reached there, everyone looked at manya and the baby, shocked. Some ladies who were there started talking about manya,
L: deko toh, el widva shadi per aye hai, kithni abshagun hai, usko bahar nikalo,
L,2: iss ladki ko kissi kone main rak doh, pathi mar gaya, aur yaha shadi per aye hai, aur voh bhi iss bachey ke saath,
L: patha nehi yeh bacha kis khoon ka hai, shayad uska baap koi shirabi hoga,
L,2: haan, is ladki ko abhi yaha se nikalo, isse nay aha hone ka, na jeena ka haq hai, security bahar nikalo isse,
A security guard came and held manya's arm ready to drag her out, when a heavy hand covered his and and lifted it, it was akash's hand, he grabbed the security guard's arm and punched him in the face, and then he saw manya crying and the thoughts of what om wrote in the letter came to his head, he grabbed manya's hand and took her to the mandip, he got the sindoor and filled her maang with it. Manya looked up at akash shocked,
A: ab manya meri biwi hai, aur ab iss bachey ka baap main hoon, agar kissi ne manya ya uske bache ko kuch kaha toh voh pehle usse mujse gusar na ho ga, nahi yeh bacha najayaz hai, aur nahi manya vivwa hai, ab kissi ne ungali uttani hai, toh mujh per uttao kyunki maine manya se shadi ker li, aur agar kissi ka pathi mar jaye to iss ka mathlab yeh nehi hai ki voh aurat apni zindagi jeena chor de, us ladki ko apne pathi ko apne dil main zinda rakna chahiye, aur manya ne om ko apne dil main zinda raka, aur ajj main manya ko ek naye zindagi deta hoon, ab koi bhi nehi meri manya per koi ungali nehi uta sakta,
Manya looked at akash and all the memories of her and om ran through her head as the song, mohobat kabhi maine came on in the back ground,

Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho
Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera
Pehli nazar ka pehla nasha
Dil mein utarta jaaye sanam
Sharmake mujhse milna tera
Jaadoo sa karta jaaye sanam
Yeh beqarari aisi khumari
Pehle kabhi to mujhpe na hui
Kabhi dil pe yoon bekhudi to nahin thi
Kisise mujhe aashiqui to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho

Kitne hi chehre dekhe magar
Maine chuna hain bas ek tujhe
Har pal ho meri baahon mein tu
Mil jaaye aisi kismat mujhe
Dil yeh pukara tera nazara
Karta hi jaoon o jaan-e-jaan
Mujhe pehle itni khushi to nahin thi
Yoon mehki hui zindagi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho
Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera
Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho

Thanks for the comments and plzzzzz comment if you like it, sorry but there will be no precap
Jiya__x

woahhhhh!! nice twist....finally now a story of akash n manya! wohooo!!!

I LOVED IT!!!!OMG they finally are one now...update soon i can't wait to read da next part!!! 😊

finalyy u killed the suspens 😆 i was waiting for it 😊 ...
aaawww how sweet off akash! *btw love the twist*😳 continue sooon caint wait for the next part 😃

great man .u r amazing . i m happy that our akaash is back.and i just loved it. superb

jiyaaa itss reallyyyyy dammm amazingg i loved it everyone loved it cant wait to read next part

Hi guy's I'm sorry but this is my last part, I have exams are coming up so I have to revise for them, but as soon as my exams finish I will start a new ff and I promise it will be more interesting and longer, 😳

Part 17,

Akash and manya sat in the car and left, they didn't say anything to each other, but they kept stealing glances. As akash was driving the song, shiyad yahin toh pyar hai, from lucky came on in the background,

kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai

A: (thinking) kya Maine teek kiya, manya mere baare main kya soch rahi hogi,
M: (thinking) akash yeh tumne kya kiya, mera dimak kherra ki tumne galath kiya, lekin mera dil, patha nahi, Om main kya karoon mujhe tumhari bohath zarurat hai.

Later when they reached Manya's house manya took Om to her bedroom and akash told Manya's mom everything that happened.

In the bedroom manya put om on the bad and sat next to him,
M: om tum mujhe kyun chor ke chale gaye, mujhe tumhari bohath zarurat hai, tumne toh kaha tha ki tum mujhe kabhi chor ker nahi jao ge phir kaha ho tum om,
Manya dropped her head in her hands and started to cry,
O: main yahan hoon manya,
Manya lifted hr head in shock as she saw om standing at the end of he bed.
O: manya jo bhi akash ne kiya usne sahi kiya, manya yeh Kahani tumhari aur akash ki thi, main toh iss Kahani main twist tha, lekin uppar vale ko bhi humara saath rehna manzoor nahi tha, aur ab dekho tum aur akash ek hoge, manya meri akhiri khwaish yeh hi thi ki tum aur akash ke hogayee. Manya kya tum meri akhiri khwaish poori karogi na, aur yeh kabhi math soch na ki main tumhare saath nahin hoon, main hamesha hi tumhare saath hoon, udhar dekho, main hamesha hi tumhare saath hoon.
Om disappeared and manya looked at the side and there she saw her baby, om, who was smiling making gargle noises.

Half an hour later, akash was on his way out, he had reached the car, when someone called him, it was manya.
M: akashhhhh
Akash turned around, and looked at manya, just as he looked at her, his mouth dropped in shock. Manya was standing there wearing her wedding lehnga.
M: akash apne biwi aur bete ko apne saath nehi lekar jaoge,
Akash looked at manya as a tear ran down his cheek. And he ran to her and embraced her in a big hug.

Ten years later,
manya was infront of the mirror, getting ready when akash came from behind, scaring manya,

A: booo,
M: (jumping) akashhhh
A: manya tum kitni der lagati ho, humme om ke school function per bhi jana hai,
M: akash main tyaar hoon, tum pehle simran aur priya ko tyaar karo, (simran and priya, akash and manya's baby, simran 6 and priya 4 years old)
S n P: hum tyaar hai maa
M: ok hum sab chalte hai.

At om's school, manya, akash simran and priya sat on the front row, in the hall, as a teacher introduced om. Om came on stage and started singing.

O: Tum Na Hote To Ek Bhi Kadam Main To Chalta Nahin
Tum Se Hi Mili Hai Mujhe Aaj Ek Nayi Zindagi
Sach Main Kehta Hoon Is Jahan Mein Hai Tum Sa Koi Nahin
Ek Pal Ke Liye Tumhare Bin Mujhko Jina Nahin
Ho Meri Jaan Tum Papa Mere Bhagwan Tum Papa

Akash and manya ran on stage and hugged om, as priya and simran followed them. They all hugged each other, as the song yaadain yaad Aati hai from yaadain, came on in the background.

Baatein bhool jaati hainYaadein yaad aati hain

They all stood arm in arm facing the crowd as manya saw om standing at the back of the hall, smiling, om winked at manya and he gave hr a thumbs up, manya smiled at him. Om (her son) nudged her,

O: ey havaldarni, vaha ke dekraey ho, hum toh yaha hai, tohre paas.

Manya laughed as she got on her knee's and hugged him. Akash, priya and simran also hugged om as the song, yaadain came on and they had flashbacks of their journey, from the beginning to the end.


Song,

Nagme hain, shikwe hainKisse hain, baatein hain - 2Baatein bhool jaati hainYaadein yaad aati hain - 2Yeh yaadein kisi dil-o-jaanam keChal jaane ke baad aati hainYaadein, yaadein, yaadein


THE END.

I'm sorry that this part is very short, but my next ff will be longer, that's if you guy's want me to do another ff, thank you for all the love, support and apreceation that you guys gave towards my ff,

And last time, ppppplllllllllzzzzzzzz comment.

Jiya__x 😳