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Posted: 16 years ago
hi everyone, sorry for not posting, and i will defenetly start a new ff, cos this one is finishing very, very soon, but i am going to start my ff in the middle of may, cos in the biggining i have EXAMS 🀒 so after my exams i will start another one πŸ˜‰ 😳 and thank you soooooo much for all the love and support for my ff, it really means the world to me 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi friends and thanks for the sweet comments loved them, and here is part 2 of 13

on the way to the party, om and manya bumped into a couple.
Guy: oh i'm sorry, main dek ke nahin chal raha tha
M: it's ok, vaise meri bhi galati hai, main bhi chal ker nehi chal rahi thi.
Girl: by the way tum dono party per jarahey they
O: haan, hum vahi jarahey they
Boy:(taking his hand out) hi i'm angad khanna and this is my beutiful wife kripa khanna
M: hi i'm manya ra, prakash shikavat, aur yeh hai
A: om praksh shikavat
M: haan lekin tumhe kaise patha
A: voh aise kyunki iss ke gale main om lika hai
K: kaha
A: voh jo necklace hai om ke gale main us par kya lika hai
K: oh, om
They all laughed and went to the party; over there they met karan and roopa, but not only them, they also met another couple. Kajjal and dev (from kaajjal). They all sat down on one table and started to talk to each other, after a while a guy came up on stage.
G: ok ladies and gentlemen this night is not over, we still have our match made couples, so everyone come to the dance floor, but not with your partner, with someone else is partner.
Angad went on one knee and held his hand out infront of manya,
A: will you be my partner, seneorita
M: (looking at om) sure angad, my pleasure
O: ke tum humari partner bano gi
K: haan om, main zaroor banoon gi.
Om and kripa walked to the dance floor with angad and manya, karan asked kaajjal to dance and dev asked roopa. All of them danced to mauja hi mauja from ab e mt, then all of a sudden the muic changed and the song labon ko from bhool bhulaiyaa, as the song started angad wrapped his hands around manya's waist, and manya put her hands on his shoulders, looking at om. Om got jelous and did the same with kripa, angad kept giving kripa glances and om kept giving manya glances.


labon ko, labon pe, sajaao
kya ho tum, mujhe ab, bataao
todo to, khud ko tum
baahon mein meri
baahon mein meri
baahon mein meri
baahon mein
baahon mein meri
baahon mein meri
baahon mein meri
baahon mein


the music stopped and the spotlight went to a figure on the stage, manya looked at that figure, and when he turned around it was akash, he had the mike in his hands,
singing


tere ehsaaso mein
bheege lamhaato mein
mujhko dooba-ti-shnagi si hai
teri adaaon se
dilkash khataaon se
in lamho mein zindagi si hai
hayaa ko zaraa
bhool jao
meri hi tarah
pesh aao
kho bhi do
khud ko tum
raaton mein meri
raaton mein meri
raaton mein meri
raaton mein


as akash was singing he walked up to manya and grabbed her hand he spinned her around so manya had her back on his chest, manya closed her eyes as her back touched his chest, he put on hand around manya's waist and stood there, then akash spun manya around so that they were facing each other, akash slowly brought his face closer to manya's and he was abut to kiss her when, someone nudged her and when she looked up she saw om on stage, singing

labon ko, labon pe, sajaao
kya ho tum, mujhe ab, bataao
tere jazbaaton mein
mehki si saanson mein
ye jo mahak sandali si hai
dil ki panaahon mein
bikhri si aahon mein
sone ki khwahish jagi si hai
chehre se chehra
chupaao
seene ki dhadkan
sunaao
dekh lo, khud ko tum
aankhon mein meri
aankhon mein meri
aankhon mein meri
aankhon mein

om walked up to manya and gave her a rose, a tear fell from manya's eye, but she tried to look happy, angad came to manya and asked her what's wrong,
A: kya hua manya, tum itni upset kyun ho
M: kuch nehi angad, I'm just tired, om ko batha dena ki main apne kamrain main ja rahi hoon, soonay ke liye,
A: ok manya you take care,
Manya went to her room and when she reached her room she started crying and she fell on her knee's,
M: akash tum kyun mere yadoon main baar baar a rahe ko, main kitni bhi koshish kerti hoon tumhe bhulane ki, tum vappas meri yadoon main a jate ko, kyun mere dil main tumhare liye feelings hai, kyun tum mujhe satate ho din, raat, akash please meri zindagi se chale jao, main ab om ke saat hoon,
Manya saw akash coming closer to her
A: manya main tumhe kabhi akela mehi chor sakta hoon, na bloola sakta hoon, tum mere dil, aur dimaak main chaye ho, tum mujse door ho kar bhi mere paas hamesha ho thi ho, main ankhe band kerta hoon tho tum mere saamne hoti ho, main ankhe khool tha hoon toh, tum chali jati ho, cekin tum mere dil main doti ho,
Akash disappeared as the song 'yaad teri Aati hai' came on and manya kept thinking about all the fun times she had with akash,
Later that night, om came into the bedroom while manya was lying in bed, when she heard om come in she quickly wiped her tears and closed her eye's pretending to go to sleep. Om saw manya asleep and kissed her forehead lightly and went to go get changed

The next day all four of them went and travelled Paris, looking at the beautiful places there and admiring the Eiffel tower, but they did not go alone, angad and kripa joined them. Dev and kaajjal had left in the morning but they all promised to keep in touch…


Precap
Manya was about to walk out the door raging with anger when she fainted, om ran upto her and grabbed her. Om's dad saw manya faint so he came in and he called the docter, the docter did a check up on manya
D: om …………..

Sorry for the late post guys, but I have been very busy, but I promise that I will post quicker next time, and plzzzzzzzzzz do comment
😳
Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!!!! that was really good! nice twist to the story. n i love how angad n kripa n dev n kaajjal r there as well!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowow cant wait for part 14 it is amazingggggggg jiyaaaa
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww that was a sewwt updat plzupdate the next one soon =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi guys thank you sooooooooo much for the comments, they are all very appreciated 😳


here is part 14,
two weeks later,
om and manya had come back home after thier honeymoon and om's parents had come back from the village, with a suprise for om and manya.
O: bau ji yeh sab kya hai,
OD: beta yeh kuch companies hai jo maine tumhare aur manya ke naam ki hai aur kal suba tumhe kaam per jana
O: lekin bauji
OD: lekin kuch nehi, kal suba jaldi utt, jana kaam per jana hai,
O: teek hai bauji

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
om woke up to get ready for work and just before he was about to leave he saw manya lying on the bed sleeping. om walked up to her and sat on the bed next to her.
O: manya, kaash tum abhi jaag rahi hoti, aur mujhe goodluck wish kerne neechey ati, aur tum office main atti mere tiffin ke saath, aur hum dono office main bet kar vaha lunch kertay. lekin mem sahab yaha araam se sau rahi hai,
om walked out the room not realising that manya was awake and she over heard everything that om said. plus om didn't know that manya had something special planned for om and stayed awake all night preparing for it. straight after om left manya got out of bed and went into the kitchen to make all om's favourite dishes.
OM: beta main tumhari madath karoon
M: nehi maa ji main ajj unke liye kana khud banaungi aur unke paas lekar jaungi, office main.
OM: teek hai beta lekin haan om ko kana apne haatoon se kalana aur vaha khud bhi kana, suba se kuch nehi kaya na.
manya nodded. after making the food and putting it in a tiffin, manya went to go get changed and she took out a beutiful blue sari with silver colour embroidry done on it. after getting changed manya picked up the tiffen and went to om's office. over there she went straight to the reception and spoke to the receptionist.
R: yes ma'am how may i help you,
M: i am here to see om,
R: sorry ma'am but no one can go see him, they are strict orders from his dad,
M: but i...
R: if you argue we have to call security,
manya was determined to see om so she kept arguing with the receptionist,
M: deko main om se mile bina kehi nehi jaungi
R: SECUTITY, GET HER OUT OF HERE
the security guards were about to grab hold of manya's arm's when a heavy hand came and stopped it, manya turned around and her father in law was standing there furious,
OD: YEH SAB KYA HAI.
S: sir yeh ladki om sir ko milna chahti hai, aur yeh apni zid par arri hai
OD: tum janti ho yeh kaun hai, yeh manya hai, meri bahu aur om ki biwi,
S: sorry ma'am,
M: it's ok
OD: beta tum kaha kya ker rahi thi,
M: voh bauji main tiffin le kar aye thi,
OD:(laughing) main samaj gaya, om ka office vaha hai left par,
Manya went and stood outside the door, and knocked
O: come in
Manya didn't reply but she kept knocking, after a few minutes om got annoyed and went outside to look who it was, not noticing that manya had snuck into the room then he came out, she quickly put the tiffen on the table and hid behind the chair. Om came in annoyed and mad, and sat down. He noticed the Tiffin and he felt two hands wrap his eye's.
O: ab kaun agaya, aur meri zindagi main andera cha diya.
Manya went in front of him and crossed her arms, angrily.
M: toh main tumhari zindagi main andera chahti hoon,
O: haan
M: aur voh kaise,
O: voh aise, ki suba se nai good luck wish kiya mahi ek phone call
M: om main busy thi.
O: tum busy thi aur main yaha bhook se mar raha tha, atleast tumne kuch kaya hai, lekin maine suba se kuch nehi kaya, ab yeh kana vapas lejao aur maa ko kehdo ki main yeh kana nehi kaunga.
M: yeh kana maine banaya hai om
O: ab main harkis nehi kaunga,
Manya looked at om disgustedly and walked out the room, just as she was about to walk out she felt dizzy and she fainted, om ran up to her and grabbed her, he laid her down on the sofa and called the doctor, om's dad came to see om and he saw manya lying there. He asked om what happened so om let him in the whole story and his dad told him that manya was up all night for him and that she hadn't eaten anything all day. Om looked at manya shocked and guilty. The docter came and did manya's check up, about ten minuites later she came out the cabin to where om, his dad and mom were standing.
O: manya kaise hai
D: vo teek hai, kuch kaya nehi tha usne toh weakness ho gayi, but kafi common hai, iss halat main,
O: iss halat main, matlab kya hai docter, meri manya teek toh hai
D: don't worry om, manya is PREGNANT…………….



Thank you for the comments and the precap will be up later, sorry it is puite a short part but the next part will be longer. And plzzzzzzzzz comment 😳
Thank you


Jiya__x 😳

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ohhhhhhhh myy god manyaaaa pregentt i am shockeddd jiyaaaaaaaaa i hope everything is fine with her make om to tell akash good news about manya tht she is pregentt make akash shoked make akash retten he called om house then manya pick it up helloo who is this akash speak its me akash madamoislle i am coming back for india plzz tell om to pick from airpote make something like this i hope u liked my idea i cant wait for your next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww that was soo cute plz wirte more soon=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
waaoow really nice part 😳 soo is it om's child ore akash's?.. πŸ˜› baby boy ore girl πŸ˜ƒ ? ow im so exited to know 😳 pleasse continue soooooooon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
don't worry guys it is om's child and you will find out very soon if it is a girl or boy, but the next part will be up tomarrow, i hope you don't mind 😳
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