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Posted: 16 years ago

ok guys here is part 12 thank you soooo much for the wonderful comments

part 12
the next day
manya was still packing when om came in from behind.
O: ey havaldarni hum sirf do haftay ke liye ja rahey hai doh saal ke liye nahi
M: uf bas bhi karo om, aur mera bag toh tyar hai, yeh tumhare kapray hai jo main pack ker rahi hoon.
O: jaldi karo
M: lo ab ho gaye, ab tum yeh bag utao aur gadi tak lejao
manya went downstairs and om imatated what she just said
O: (imatating a girls voice) ab tum yeh bag utao aur gadi tak lejao, hu main pathi hoon ya nokar,
manya came back into the room laughing
M: nokar ho, ab bag ke saath neechay ao, tumari flight ko sirf do ghentay rehtay hain
om and manya left for the airport but before leaving they visited manya's mom. over there they met everyone and got their ashirvaad. from there om and manya left for the airport, when they got there, they let the luggage go through and showing their passport, visa and tickets to the lady at the counter.
O: ke hua havaldarni tu khush nehi hai ki hum honeymoon per ja rahay hai
M: main khush toh hoon lekin mujhe vaha sab ki yaad ayegi, hum dono vaha akelay hoonge issi liye
someone came from behind and over heard the whole conversation.
person: tumko kisne kaha ki tum akelay ho, hum hai na tumhare saath
om and manya turned around suprised, when they turned around infront of them were standing karan and roopa,
M: yum dono yaha
R: haan, hum bhi honeymoon ke liye aye hain
O: tum dono kaha ja rahe ho
K: PARIS,
M: wow thats great, hum bhi vaha ja rahe hai
K: vaise manya, yeh tumhara first time hai plane main safar kerna
M: haan toh
K: horror movies main tum itna dar thi do, aur plane main toh,
M: oh please karan
K: ok manya, ab main tumhe nehi daraunga, lekin aggar plane hijack jo gaya
M: (shocked and scared) kyaaa
R: shut up karan, aur manya ko darana band karo.
M: lekin aggar plane hijack hogaya, ya plane ko kuch ho gaya toh...
O: aye biwi, fikar math karo, main koon na tumhare saath.
after showing their passports and tickets, all four of them went to the check in lounge.
O: manya kya hua tum itni darri darri kyun ho
M: om aggar plane main kuch hogaya, ya plane ko khuch ko gaya toh,
O: tum abhi bhi, iss pagal karan ke baatoon ko sun rahi ho, uska maksad yeh hai ki vo tumhe daraye aur tum dar gaye, fikar math karo, main hoon na
manya looked at om and smiled, after a while all four of them went and departured into the plane, all of them got window seats, karan was sitting infront of manya, next to the window and roopa was sitting infront of om, who was sitting next to manya. the engine of the plane came on and manya placed her hand on om's arm's, as an air hostise came up to them.
AH: ma'am please can you tie your seat belt the plane is ready for departure
om looked at the air hostise then at manya, who had her eye's shut tightly praying, om leaned over and tied manya's seat belt for het, then he tied his own. manya looked at om and smiled, om looked at the air hostise giving her a thumbs up, the air hostised smiled at om,
AH: thank you sir, ma'am you are very lucky, apko ek bohth ki caring, responsable aur loving pathi mila hai, bhagvan kare ap dono ki jodi hamesha aise hi bani rahay.
the air hostise left and om looked at manya who was smiling shyly, the plane started to move and om put his arms around manya, manya looked at him and rested her head on his chest
O: manya fikar math karo, main hoon na, sab teek ho jayega aur jab hum vaha pohnchainge toh maine karan ko do jhapar denay hai
manya laughed as karan turned around
K: mujhe do jhapar kyun milainge,
O: kyunki tumne meri manya ko daraya hai
K: main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha
O: tu chup chap bet vaha verna maine tumhe plane ke uppar latka dena hai, jhande ki tarha
M: ek munite, om tum yaha karan ki besati ker rahe ho, lekin roopa vaha chup chap behti hai
K: voh iss liye kyunki yeh madam sahiba sau rahi hai,
an air hostise came over to them
AH: (pointing at karan) sir kya app sahi tarha bet saktay hai please.
om and manya started giggling, and karan started to go red, after the air hostise left om and manya burst out laughing, karan sat embarrassed, and looked out the window, karan gasped
M: kya hua karan
K: manya bahar toh deko
manya looked out her window confused, when she looked down she gasped aswell, out the window they saw all lights, every where, it looked like a small toy city, but it looked georgous, om also looked out the window, he put his face next to manya's and kissed her cheek softly, manya looked at om shyly and she the had her fear of being so high from the ground had gone, om and manya just looked into each others eyes as the song ajab si from om shanti om came on

Tere saath saath aisa….. Koi noor aaya hai
Chand teri roshni ka
Halka sa ek saaya hai
Teri nazaron ne dil ka Kiya jo asar
Asar yeh hua

Abb in mein hi doob ke ho jau paar
Yehi hai Dua

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saans se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saans se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai................

precap: om and manya went outside the airport, and then they saw a strech limo waiting outside for them, om led the way as manya, karan and roopa looked at om in suprise

ok guys thats all for today but i will post tomarrow and plzzzzzz comment

thank uπŸ˜‰

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i loved your part 12 noo its dammmm coollllll
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved it keep up the good work πŸ˜ƒ !
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok guys here is part 13 part 1 and thanks for the comments shafoo and bahar πŸ˜† and please if you read it and like it then plz post reply or i will think that you guys don't like it

part 1 of 13

om, manya, karan and roopa got of at the airport and over there infront of them was a strech limo waiting outside for them, om led the way as manya, karan and roopa looked at om in suprise,
M: yeh sab kya hai om
O: yeh ek tofa hai
R: kiski taraf se
O: akash ki taraf se
when manya heard akash's name a cold shiver went down her spin, and in her mind she said thank you akash.
K: lekin voh gabroo javaan hai kaha
R: akash toh america chala gaya apni parahi katham kerne.
all four of them went and sat into the limo and the limo dropped tham in front of a big hotel a guy name and opened the door for them
G: bonjour, sir, ma'am
the guy led the way into the hotel and inside the hotel there were loads of antiques and a big shanderlier in the middle of the hall, after getting the keys om and manya went to their suite and it was a very big and beutiful suite, om went to go and freshen up while manya just sat on the bed she found a letter it was from akash, the letter said

dear maddammossil
mujhe patha hai ki tum yeh soch rahi ho ki maine yeh kyun kiya, well shadi pe maine tum logoon ko toofa nehi diya so it is like a wedding present. i hope tum khush ho aur aggar om tumhe perishaan ker raha hai toh mujhe bathana, main us ko seeda ker doonga. aur i hope tumne mujhe maaf ker diya, and remember that me akash rathod 'the best' hamesha tumhara best friend rahega, aggar tumhe kissi ki bhi zaroorat ho toh mujhe yaad kerna aur main tumhare paas asjaunga aur mujhe kabhi math bhoolna

tumhara best and most handsome friend
akash
as manya read the lettera tear fell from her eye and landed on the letter.
M: akash jo bhi yumne mere liye biya voh main kabhi nehi bhool sakti hoon, aur om mujhe pareshaan nehi kar raha hai, voh mujhe bohth khush rakta hai, lekin tumne yeh kaise soch liya ki main tumhe bhoola sakti hoon akash, tum mera pehla pyar ho aur abhi bhi mere dil main tumhare liye feelings hai lekin kismat ko humara saath manzoor nehi hai issi liye om meri zindagi main aya hai, aur main usse pyar kerne lagi. akash i really miss you.
om over heard everything that manya said and came over to her and read the letter, then he tried to cheer her up.
later that day an invatation came for a couples party so manya and om spent most of the day getting ready, manya wore blach and fushia colour sari and om wore a kurta with jeans, om and manya were going to meet roopa and karan at the party, on the way to the party manya and om bumped into...... ............................................................ .........................................................

i am very very very sorry guys that this is a short part but i am having computer crisis right now so part 2 of 13 will be up tomarrow and plzzzzzzzzzzz comment if you want me to continue, also this ff will be finishing in less than a month cos my exams are comming up, but after that if you guys want, i will write another one, and it will be longer and better, so if you guys want me to write me another one then feel free to post or p.m me ok, and also give me idea's of which jodi you guys want,
akanya
omanya
or karanya
or even two of those jodi's or all three

thank you

jiya__x
Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyyyy jiyaa itss a amazinggg part and i want manya and akashh to be togther in the storyyy cozz manya still loved akash even she married she still have feeling for akash when akash come back om and manya reseving Akash from airpot some one shoot om its my idea i hope u liked it and put in your ff.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks really cute!!! i love ur FF's. plz continue!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

heyyyyy jiyaa itss a amazinggg part and i want manya and akashh to be togther in the storyyy cozz manya still loved akash even she married she still have feeling for akash when akash come back om and manya reseving Akash from airpot some one shoot om its my idea i hope u liked it and put in your ff.

i loved your idea, shaffo, i will use some of it, and don't worry you will find out very soon if it will be a akanya or omanya ff or both

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi guys i am too tired to write now so i will post the next part tomarrow thank you and sorry 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww that was so sweet plz write more soon =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved the part like always πŸ˜ƒ i also want akash and manya to be toghter at the end 😳 😳 i love ur ff so if u end this one..u sure start a new one okay! πŸ˜›
Edited by Bahar ^_^ - 16 years ago
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