Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
thank you soo muchh putt 11 part plzz contuied part 11 and manyy moree plzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

thank you soo muchh putt 11 part plzz contuied part 11 and manyy moree plzzzzzzzzzz

don't worry shafoo i will continue and very soon, i was just toooo busy to write and post. and i am very sorry for that. and ure welcome and thanks for liking my ff

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Posted: 16 years ago
that was really good! u shud continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
i will put part 11 part 2 up in a while but i promice before i go sleep it will be up and thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhh for the wonderful comments 🤗

love u all 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for the comments guys

here is part 11 part 2

om and manya raced downstairs and when they got there, they saw om's parents standing there with their suitcases next to them.
O: maaji, bauji, tum done kaha jarahey ho
OM: beta hum vapas apne gaaun ja rahey hai
M: lekin kyun
OD: humtoh yaha om ke look after kerne aye they, accident ke baad. aur ab tum dono ne shadi kerli hai, aur collage ko bhi chor diya hai toh ab humme lagta hai ki humara farz poora hogay hai.
M: lekin ithni jaldi
OM: kya karain beta humme toh jana hi hoga aur peechay humari zaroorat bhi hai
M: (almost crying) app dono vapas kab ao ge
OD: hum vapas tab ayenge jab humme humare aney vale pothay ya pothi ki khabar mile gi
om and manya looked at each other shyly. om went to go drop his parents of at the train sration, after a while when he came home, he saw manya in the kitchen, she was about to make the handi, when om came from behind and wrapped his arm's around her.
M: maaji aur bauji ko vhor aye sahi salamat
O: haan main chor aya hoon, vaise tum ab kya kerne vali ho
M: main kuch khane ke liye paka rahi hoon
O: ey biwi sahiba yeh sab choro aur jaldi se yppar jao tyar hone ke liye
M: lekin kyun
O: kyunki ajj raat tumhara pathi tumhe dinner per le jara hai
M: acha, ajj chand kaha se nikal aya
O: jab se tum iss dunya main ayi thi tab se, ab jao aur tyar ho jao
manya went upstairs to go and get ready, after half an hour manya came down wearing a georgous black and blue sari, with silver embridar. om looked at manya in suprise as she came down the stairs.
O: vaa, ajj toh tum bohth khubsurat lag rahi ho
M: main kitni khoobsurat lag rahi hoon
O: ithni khubsurat ki tumhe dek ke chand bhi chup jaye aur sari pariyaan bhi sharm se bhag jaye, sitarain bhi chamakna band ker daiy tumhe dek kar
manya looked at om and hugged him then started crying
O: ey havalharni, maine tumhari ithni tareef ki hai, aur tum ho ki yaha ro rahi ho, meri bhi tareef karo
M: (laughing and wiping her tears) emmm not bad om
O: bas, kithni piddu tareef thi
M: teek hai aggar tumhe meri tareef piddu lagthi hai toh main tumhari tareef bilkul nehi karoongi
om and manya left for thier dinner, the cr stopped infront of a big restraunt, they walked into a big empty hall, full with baloons, candels and roses.
a waiter led om and manya to their table, the table had a rose on it with candles
M: om yeh sab...
M: eh sab meri havaldarni ke liye,
anya smiled and they ordered dinner, while the dinner was coming a waiter put the song on, tumse hi from jab we met. om went down on one knee and held his hand out, manya looked at him and smiled, then she placed her hand in his, they both stood up and om wrapped his hands around manya's waist and manya wrappd her arms around his neck and rested her head on his chest, hey both slowly swayed around as the song came on...

Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

after they had dinner om and manya went for a walk along a river, manya had hwr arm linked into om's. it was quite cold and manya started shivering so om took his jacket off, put over her shoulders and wrapped her into his arms, they just looked into each othrs eyes, as the song pehli nazar main from race came on.......

sorry guys that it is quite short but i am toooooooooo tired to write any more. and sorry for any mistakes i will read through and edit it tomarrow

precap: om and manya were at the airport showing their passport, visa and tickets to the lady at the counter.
O: ke hua havaldarni tu khush nehi hai ki hum honeymoon per ja rahay hai
M: main khush toh hoon lekin mujhe vaha sab ki yaad ayegi, hum dono vaha akelay hoonge issi liye
someone came from behind and over heard the whole conversation.
person: tumko kisne kaha ki tum akelay ho, hum hai na tumhare saath
om and manya turned around suprised, when they turned around infront of them were standing...................

plzzzzz comment thank u 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
was standing akash right well maybe and ya continue sooon luv ur ff 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
its akash is standing front of them rigth plzzzzzzzzz contuied next partt
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok guys, thanks for the wonderful comments and there are loads of qusetions whether it is akash, well i'll give u a hint, there were 2 people standing there, one girl and one boy
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww i can't wait till the next update plz write sooon =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was awesome
Plzzz continue sooooooooon
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