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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
please please please please rite soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
u guys are gonna kill me from makin us wait so much
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
I'm very sorry for the delay guys but we just got back our results and theres is a whole lot of stuff to do so we won't be able to update till next tue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok well please update as soon as you can
and i hope you do good with the whole lot of stuff and exam results ;]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Soooo sorry for the long wait guys...had lots to do...so without further ado...presenting....

Part 7

Rehaan walked up to Kiran and said
R: K - k - k - Kiran...k - k - k - kya tum mere saath dance karogi?

Kiran laughed and gave him her hand. They went to the dance floor and danced to 'Aa Khushi Se Khudkhushi Kar Le'. Suddenly, the lights dimmed and the host walked onto the stage.

H: Friends, hum apke liye ek game khelenge. Mere samne do bowls rakhe hue hain. In bowls mein chit rakhe hue hain, blue wale chit ladkon ke liye aur pink chit ladkiyon ke liye. Har chit par ek number hain aur har number ki ek jodi hai. Aap sab appropriate bowls mein se ek chit uthayenge. Jis number ko hum pukarenge, us jodi ko dance floor par aa kar DJ ke diye hue gaane par dance karma hoga. Toh, shure kare?

Everyone cheered and took a chit from their respective bowls. The host announced number 16. Gopu and Sanju danced to 'Tum Mile' from 'My Name Is Anthony Gonsalves'. After they danced everyone cheered and wolf – whistled.

Next the host called Number 5. Om and Manya stepped out. They went to the dance floor and the DJ put 'Maria Maria' from 'Partner'. Om and Manya started doing the salsa and for some reason Akash was feeling jealous. He walked towards them and circled the dancing pair, constantly keeping his eyes on them. Om spun Manya and she lost her balance. She gasped and closed her eyes, trying to brace herself for the fall but instead she ended up falling in Akash's arms. The lights then went on and everyone cheered for Om and Manya. Manya straightened up and both of them looked away from each other. Throughout the night Akash and Manya shared many stolen glances. At around 1 am, Manya felt the need for fresh air so she went up to the terrace. She pulled her flimsy shawl tighter around her and gazed up to the moon.

M: (Thinking) Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? Kyun main humesha Akash ke bare mein hi sochti rehti hoon?

While Manya was contemplating her feelings, Akash crept up to the terrace. Despite the slight wind, Akash could tell Manya was shivering. Well it was kinda cold in Mumbai nowadays. He walked up to her, took off her coat and wrapped it around her. Manya got startled and looked up at him.

M: Akash, you scared me...
A: (laughs) Tum kin khayalon mein khoyi hui ho?
M: Kuch nahin bas chand ko dekh rahi thi.
A: Lekin main to yaha khada hoon
M: Akash tum bhi na.

Both of them chuckled and fell into a companionable silence. Akash glanced toward Manya, who was bathed in moonlight.

A: (Muttering under his breath) Tumhare aage to chandni bhi dhal gayi
M: Tumne kuch kaha kya?
A: Err...nahin toh...

Suddenly there was a voice from below. It was Om

O: Akash!...Manya!
M: Akash hume chalna chahiye

Akash nods his head and gestured for Manya to lead the way. As she walked away from him, Akash thought

A: (Thinking) Akash, agar yeh tujhse pyaar karti hai toh zaroor paltegi.

Manya continued to walk away

A: (Whispering) Palat...(nothing happens)...palat...

Manya turns around

M: Tum aa rahe ho?
A: Err..haan

When she turned around again Akash smiled and started doing a victory dance. Manya happened to turn around again and caught him in mid dance

M: Akash yeh tum kya kar rehe ho?

Akash flushed(turned red) in embarrassment.

A: K – k – kuch nahin, chalein?

Akash and Manya went back down and joined the rest of the gang. There was no music playing and the spotlight was on the stage. Panch sir walked onto the stage and took the mike

PS: Attention students. Now is time to announce the Best Dresses Boy, Girl, Class and Most Romantic Couple. As you know, each class sent a team to represent their class, aur winning class ki team hai.....Cinnamon Hearts!!!

Manya's class cheered as MDM Jyotsna went upstage and took the plaque.

PS: Best Dresses boy hai.....Om Prakash Ravat!!!!

Everyone cheered as Om went upstage and took his trophy and crown. Panch sir called for attention.

PS: Aur ab, Best Dressed Girl hai, Manya Sharma!!!

Manya was beaming as she went upstage and took her crown and trophy. Everyone was cheering for her.

Rupa: (to Akash) Dekha Akash...Jeet gayi na humari Manya (Winks)
A: Toh maine kab kaha tha ki who har jayegi

Rupa just rolled her eyes.

PS: Attention please, ab announce karne ki bari hai, the Most Romantic Couple. And the winners are Manya Sharma and Akash Rathod!!!!

Akash and Manya looked at each other and their music started playing. Akash walked over to Manya and held out his hand.

A: Chalein...mademoiselle?

Manya smiled and took his hand. Akash lead the way upstage and they claimed their trophy.

Finally at the end of the dance, the gang left the school and climbed into Akash's SUV. He dropped Rehaan and Gopu at their shared flat and dropped the girls minus Manya at their respective houses. Om got off at Rupa's place, where he walked home, wanting some exercise before bed. Now the only person left was Manya. Akash was en route to Manya's house when it started to rain heavily. The finally reached Manya's house where they got off and ran to her porch

A: Ok..ab tum sahi salamat ghar pahunch chuki ho. Ab Om mujhe murder nahin karega.

Both off them laugh at Om's overprotective behavior towards Manya.

A: Ok...umm...byee..
M: Akash tum andar kyun nahin aate? Bahut barish ho rahi hai, bahut raat ho gayi hai aur tum kaafi bheeg bhi gaye ho.
A: Tumhare Mom – Dad ko bura nahin lagega?
M: Mom Dad apne dost ke Valentine's Party mein gaye hue hain aur sirf kal shaam ko hi lautenge
A: Are you sure about this
M: Haan Akash very sure. Tum jaldi se andar aa jao warna sardi ho jayegi.

Precap: Manya gives Akash a towel to dry himself.

Edited by nikki_rox - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
i'm the first to reply... 😉 ..
awesome nikki 👏
b/w i loved the ddlj scene u put hee 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
luv luv luv luv luv luv luv lu vlu vluvly
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
that was so sik it was totally amazing cant wait till the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
plzzz put some more partss plzzzzzzz its really amazing
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
plzzzz put some more parts of storyy
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