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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Hi everyone..Sorry for delay again..Nikki is not feeling well so we couldnt work on it and the part was delayed even more.Next part will be up by Fri HOPEFULLY!!But till then..Here's a promo..!

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Promo

"Kabhi Takraar..."
A: I was just being polite!
M: Yea Ryte..."Polite"(rolls eyes)
"Toh Kabhi..Ikraar.."
Akash and Manya are dancing in the rain.Akash goes on his knees and holds out his hands pretending to have a rose in his hand.
A: I love you Manya..
Akash and Manya look at each other.
"Kya hogi ab Pyar ki shuruvaat..??"

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This is it for now..Part 8 will be posted most likely on friday!

~Anu

Edited by *Adorable_Anu* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Hey guys...i was down wif fever so we couldn't work on e ff...thnx 2 all hu replied...we'll try to update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
wwwwooooooaaaaaaawwwwwwww that is awsome i can't wait for friday i am sooooooooooo impatiant 😆

plz cont soon
and i hope u get better nikki my pray's are with you 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
really googd so far! hope u feel better!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
i hope nikki gets well sooon 😉 my pray's are also with her 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

Thanks for the comments!And Happy Holi everyone!

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Part 8

Akash and Manya enter Manya's house,Akash is rubbing his arms with his hands bacause of the coolness.
M:Tum baitho..Main tumhare liye towel leker aati hoon.
Manya leaves.Akash looks around the interior of the house,impressed,and sits down.Manya comes back and hands Akash the towel.
M:Ye lo..
Akash takes the towel and wipes his hair vigorously,splashing water onto Manya.
M:(makes a face)Arggh..Akash!!
Akash looks up at Manya and stands up.
A:Ohh..Sorry..
Manya looks at Akash,surprised.
M:Sorry??Instead of saying something back,tum sorry keh rahe ho?Wow..Im surprised..and impressed..!
A:Eyy Madammosielle..Im just being polite..
M:Yea ryte..'Polite'(rolls her eyes)
A:Why?You dont like me being polite?
M:Hmm..Voh actually aaj tak kabhi tumhe polite hote dekha nahin na..isliye...First time you see..

Just then there's thunder and Manya get scared.
A:(laughs)
M:Shut up..!


After some time..
A:Kaisi host ho tum..koi tumahre ghar aata hai aur tum chai paani ke liya bhi nahin puchti.
M:Tumhe paani chahiye?
Akash makes a exaggerated happy face and nods his head excitedly.
M:Thik hai..yahin ruko..
Manya goes to the kitchen and fills a glass of ice cold water.She comes back and stands in front of Akash,smiling.She pulls Akash's shirt and pours the water down his shirt.Akash jumps from his seat and Manya starts laughing.
A:Paagal ladki..yeh kya kar diya!?
M:(sarcastically)Oooh..Im soo sorry!Voh glass galti se haath se fisal gaya.
A:Youuu....
Akash starts chasing Manya and they run to the backyard.Akash turns on the hose and sprays water all over Manya and laughs.
M:Ahhh..Akash!!
A:(sarcastically)Ooh..Im sorry..Hose galti se khul gaya!
They both start laughing and look at each other.The music of the song 'Tauba tumhare ye ishare' from 'Chalte Chalte' starts to play.It starts to rain and Manya starts to twirl in rain and play with the water.Akash just keeps staring at her.He moves towards her slowly,pulls her hand and spins her around making her fall into his arms.They both have an eyelock.They both dance in the rain.Akash spins her out and goes down on one knee.He holds out his hand,pretending to have a rose in it.
A:I love you Manya...

They both look at each other.
Manya is shocked and there's silence between them when Manya breaks the silence.
M:Kya kaha tumne?
Akash stands up.
A:Urh..Maine kuch kaha?Nahin toh..Main kyun kuch kahunga..Err..Chalo na Manya..Andar chalein.
He grabs Manya's hand and she releases it.
M:Nahin Akash..Tumne kuch kaha..Tumne kaha ki tum...(she stops)
A:(makes a cute face)Bolo Manya..Kya kaha maine?
M:Tum jaante ho tumne kya kaha Akash..
A:Main toh jaanta hoon..Lakin tum batao..kya kaha maine?
Manya blushes and runs inside.
A:Areyy..Manya!!(laughs)
He follows her.

Inside..
Akash and Manya grab their towels and dry themselves again.Manya avoids Akash's gaze.She goes and gets a pillow and blanket for Akash and passes it to him.
M:Tum so jao..Bahut raat ho chuki hai..
All this while Akash just keeps staring at her.
Akash puts the blanket on the couch and lies down.He closes his eyes pretending to sleep.Manya looks at him for the last time and goes to her own room.

She tries to sleep but keeps thinking what Akash said.The three words kept echoing through her mind.She sits up on her bed and closes her eyes.She gets flashbacks with all the moments spent with Akash.(All through the flashbacks the music of 'Tauba tumhare ye ishare' plays)She suddenly opens her eyes..
M:(to herself)Ye main..Akash ke baare mein kyun soch rahin hoon?..Kahin main usse...?
She shakes her head and smiles to herself.She lies down and goes to sleep.

Precap:
1 month leap..
Akash's bday and Holi celebrations.Both his bday and Holi are on the same day.

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Do comment!!And Happy Holi once again!

Anu & Niks

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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
Alright guys sorry 4 e delay...we had a major case of writers block so we couldn't update sooner...and y were u guys praying 4 me...it was a fever...i wasn't dying...but thnx neway...enjoy...the next part will be the holi special that will probably be up by tom...enjoyyyyyy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was toooo good and u never know when a simple fever starts to become serious well hope u r better now nikki and i can't wait for the next part 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
itss soo damm cooll i loved akash spending time in manya house
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing! was dying to read more of it! plzzz continue!
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