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Naina Bhatt

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Posted: 12 years ago

Maybe...I feel they should make SAJDA TERE PYAAR MEIN -2 ...they can again put the question pyaar ya farz... Here Is My Dream I Had The Day The Serial Got Over...😭🥺😔

'Like Aaliya will get married and settled and will b leading a happy life...when suddenly Ranveer will have to go on a mission... she'ill b scared to leave him but she'ill have to... (pyaar ya farz)...After his mission's gonna get over Aaliya Will b waiting for him...she gets a call...and she lyk heard he's dead... She Anyways wants to go to Delhi...Where his mission was... She goes to the superior to talk 2 but him...but he is surprised at this. and then talks to her later on that he is sad at this but its a part and parcel of this job...she'll be disgusted at this... once she'ill b called again and will b told to reach in an area... with gr8 difficulty she reach a deserted area... sumone calls her from back she does'int turn cuz the sound is so...so unfamiliar... someone puts a hanky on her mouth... and she faints...she gets up in a dark room...she is tied with a tight...she is worried and thinks about her previous mission...the nice moments they had...and she remembers the way ranveer told her to open the knot the way he told her to... she does it anyway she opens it with gr8 difficulty and determination to save Ranveer ... she feels sumthing's fishy... she does hear sum murmuring sounds and goes through the maze of empty boxes... she reaches there and see's Ranveer tied to a pole... very tired...he had no food...sweating and drenched in sweat...she goes and hugs him... comforts him...

Okay how was that!!! Phew...Plz Give Me A Feed back...i really feel it should gone on and on...

anyways i'am sure i'll update another one tomorrow...Pakka...

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Hanz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It totally awesome. 👏 Please continue

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Karishma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome dude!! Kash ye agar sach me badal jata!!

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tvpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice piece of writing feeling watching the episode.what's going to happen next?

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zainab03

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow loved it and to be honest while I was reading it I could picture it in my head.. Kash we could have seen it in real life :( but can't wait to read the rest

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Naina Bhatt

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thnx All of you for ur lovely comments!!!!!!!!!!! mein aur lik deti thi...lekin mom ne mujhe jagaa diya... i din't want to get up from the bed...such a nice dream it was... anyways,here's the next bit...

•Aha now comes the good part...Mp Actually escapes from jail!!!!!!!!!! He Actually managed to escape...He Managed to take more boys into his cheap business... and surprisingly she finds Rishi there . He was really frustrated that Ranveer came into Aaliya's life... And Started To Have Drugs Again……… (there was an article that he would turn negative…….. Just added that into my story) infact he started providing drugs to others too...…….. Rishi is lyk Mp's secretary… He spilled the beans to mp……. Mp did come to no that Mehreen had tricked him… But Rishi told Mp everything…..what her actual name was and all that…….. Now he is on a verge of spoiling RaNya's life……... Poor Aaliya... Poor Ranveer... Now that Aaliya was under Mp's control... He would do anything... Spoil her life... He was actually thinking of getting himself married to Aaliya... But he was kinda... Doubtful on that... He thought of not repeating that stupidity again... A person lyk him would never b tricked by a stupid girl... Who only looked lyk Julia... Now that he was made a fool by her... He never wanted to do it again... Ahaa he thought to himself why not shoot her down... No one would come to no... He shared this idea to Rishi... He was quite reluctant in doing this.. He still did love Aaliya a bit from inside... He told Mp to drop that idea... Cuz that ATB officer was still there... Rishi was thinking to himself... He's such a pest...u no always poking his nose into everything... Mp told Rishi to put her inside a dark room.. More like a barrier to the next room.. Where her beloved Ranveer sat there... Rishi talked to Aaliya and told her that he would release her if she was ready to marry him...Aaliya was disgusted...she rather starve and die... But she was gonna do anything to rescue Ranveer... Who had no fault..

pheww!! kaisa tha... such bataon yaaron...

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kriti ( Neha)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wah wah wah wah 👏👏...superbb dear...love it...plz write more...i too have so many dreams abt. RANYA but feel nervous to write...😕...but u did a fabulous job dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: krt09
wah wah wah wah 👏👏...superbb dear...love it...plz write more...i too have so many dreams abt. RANYA but feel nervous to write...😕...but u did a fabulous job dear...

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hey dear pleas don't feel nrvous to write your dreams not everyone are professionals in writting and practice make perfect so please do write i am looking forward to read some of your work

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Hanz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome parts please continue the story is getting better. By the way are making this a FF or SS

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Naina Bhatt

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@krt09- u should write stories... u may never no i might fall in luv with it!!!!!!!

Thnx All of u... i feel more free to write this ss's... thnx all for ur encouragement... here's the next ...but its going to be quite elongated cuz we all now that our RanYa is in a tight situation...

'She was thinking to herself that Ranveer never had a nice life... Now because of her stupid , foolish friend...And she herself...he had to suffer... She sat there with everything rotating in her mind... She fell asleep soon... Dreaming all types of nightmares... Getting Ranveer's screams in her dreams.. She got up with a start and shouted 'Ranveer'... She was helpless...she tried her mobile..but there was no network...She couldn't get over the fact that Rishi did it all...Uff no sleep at all ... How could she on the hard rock like structure...on the other hand Ranveer was starving there without food...She tried to sleep wondering when will the sun rise... When will a new morning start...when will it without the devils around them...Ranveer on the other hand was damn worried... He was thinking of Aaliya being treated like a stray dog... He tried to get such thoughts out of his mind...cuz he knew that Mp would never resort to such things... Or will he...He couldin't help thinking...but how did Aaliya get into this mess?????and how did he get into this mess but how???? He couldn't recollect it...all he remembers is being hit by something strong, hard , something painful , because of which his head started bleeding...

' The next morning he woke up as well as Aaliya did... Ahaaa Mp came up with a new deal... He knew Ranveer would'int agree... But tried it on him... You may never know it might work cuz he has the girl... He told to Ranveer " Tum mujhe sare important defence ke kagzaad de do me tumhe Aaliya de dunga"... He was like beat that Ranveer Chauhan... U can never win against me...Aaliya wanted to open her mouth and say... Plz Ranveer I don't make much difference... Its only one dying ... Save the country...that's much more important... She was anyways gripped by two people...and if she opens her mouth... Then Ranveer will be finished...What could she do...she had no idea...Well how does Mp plan everything accordingly...he brain must be quite sharp...

...K Done... i'll quite probably be updating everyday...So cheers to Sajda Tere Pyaar Mein forum For encouraging me...and cheers to RanYa... (there is no special reason for that but RanYa is lyk a pole star in the night sky to everyone's lives)... ;)

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