FF Sapno ki duniya mein..part 51 on p63 {19.03.09}

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I was bored so I was thinking let's make a Fanfic.It is my first Fanfic, so I hope you all will like it..😊

Fanfic: Sapno ki duniya mein

Episode 1
Do anjaane...Ek tha Nahar aur ek thi Saloni...Dono apne sapno ki duniya mein rehta hai...aur apne jeevan saathi ka intezaar kar rahe hai...

Nahar: Mere sapno ki rani kab aayengi tu...aaye ruth mastani kab aayengi tu...Beeti jaaye zindagani kab aayengi tu...Chali aa...tu chali aa...

Saloni: Mere sapno ki radj kumar...mujhe hai tera intezaar...aaja sajan ab aaja...

Aur ek dhin aise aaye tha ke Nahar aur Saloni ke sapnein haqeekat mein bangaya...Nahar chal raha tha..aur Saloni akeli chal rahi thi...Dono ko yeh nahin maloon thi ke woh dono kahan jaa rahi thi..lekhin manzil ek tha...Nahar rukh gaya tha aur Saloni bhi...Ek dusre ke saamne the...aur phir....

Nahar: Ek nazar mein bhi pyaar hota hai..maine suna tha....

Saloni: Aankhon aankhon mein hum tum khogaye deewane...

Nahar: Aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si adein hai....

Saloni: Dekhte hi dekhte dil khogaye..dil khogaye to pyaar tumse hogaya...

Ek dusre ke aankhon mein dekh done apne zindagi jhee liya hai...Nahar saloni ki aankhon mein unka sapno ke duniya dekha aur Saloni Nahar ke aankhon mein unki sapno ke duniya dekh liya....

Phir achanak koi Saloni ka naam pukaara....aur saloni bhag rahi hai...Nahar abhi hua pe hai..aur use yakeen nahin hai ke woh apne sapno ke rani mil gaye...Lekhin woh kahan chalengi...?

Kya Nahar Saloni ko dhoon paayenga..? Kya yeh sapna pura hogi...? Kya yeh sapno ki duniya haqeekat mein badal jaaye....?

I hope you all like it...I will continue it soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 2
Recap: Nahar and Saloni see each other for the first time in the Park. Someone calls Saloni and she leave from there...
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Nahar is at home and is thinking about the girl who he saw in the morning...

Jiske aanse se rang mein doobh kiya hai shyaam...soch raha hoon kise poochein use ladki ka naam...?

Nahar: Kahan mein dhoondon use ladkhi ko...? Shayed woh ladkhi kal subah phir waha pe aayengi...Mein kal subah uski intezaar karongi...same place, same time...

Next morning when Nahar wakes up...he smiles and think: ''Aaj mein use phir dekhongi...'' Nahar gets ready and take his motor and goes to the same place as Yesterday. Nahar intezaar kar rahe hai lehin use ladki ka koi pata nahin..after a couple hours...

Nahar: Mujhe ab ghar chal na hoga...sab mera intezaar kar rahe hongi..

At home:

Nahar arrives. Sab intezaar kar rahe the..

Bahbo: Kahan pe the tum Nahar..? Hum sab tumhaara intezaar kar rahe the.

Brijesh: Haan Nahar..Kahan the tum..? Aaj humein sab ek party mein jaana tha aur tum itni late aaya hai..

Tara: Choro yeh baatein...Jaa Nahar jhaldi se fresh hojaa..Hum sab intezaar karongi..

They all leave for the party...Brijesh ka bachpan ka dost ek party diya tha...they all arrive at the party..Saara parivaar is enjoying the part lekhin Nahar apne sapno ke duniya mein khoyein hai..Use ladkhi ke tasveer uske saamne hai..

Har taraf tuhi dekhi..tu hi tu dil mein rahein...

Brijesh ka dost ( Aman) aks for all the attention for a moment..All turns and look at him..He says ke aaj ek bahot special day hai..Iske wajah do hai..Ek hai ke maine faisla kiya hai ke mein Shaadi karongi...They all claps..He continue and say aur ek baath hai..aur woh yeh hai ke mein mein use ladkhi ko aap sabse milaongi aaj..Lekhin iske liye tum sab ko intezaar karna parenga...Woh abhi aa rahi hongi...

They all are enjoying the part when Nahar turn and see Saloni is entring the room...He smiles and: Yehi woh ladki thi..Yeh yahan pe kaise aaya..? Brijesh ke dost Saloni ko dekha tha aur woh uske paas gaya before Nahar..He welcome her and hugs her...

Nahar is shocked..and thinks by himself...Kya yeh Ladkhi hai jise Aman shaadi karongi...?


Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: naz_u54

real cute plese continue 😃

Thanks a lot..It's very different and it is my first FF...Lekhin mein soch rahi the ke mein ek FF banaongi jho todi si different hai..I use songs...and tells with the songs a story..I hope you will like it..

I'm not so good yet..but I will try it..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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reena it is great. 😊 loved it. 👏 Thanks. contine soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

reena it is great. 😊 loved it. 👏 Thanks. contine soon.

Thanks a lot Di...😊 I will continue very soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaanlover

Thanks a lot..It's very different and it is my first FF...Lekhin mein soch rahi the ke mein ek FF banaongi jho todi si different hai..I use songs...and tells with the songs a story..I hope you will like it..

I'm not so good yet..but I will try it..

very good....actually it was great dont worry i already like it

yes its different and good....you are very creative

the more u try the better u will get

hehe..now..i will keep on bothering you to continue

raksha di and tiff know....now i will bother you to update update hee

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: naz_u54

very good....actually it was great dont worry i already like it

yes its different and good....you are very creative

the more u try the better u will get

hehe..now..i will keep on bothering you to continue

raksha di and tiff know....now i will bother you to update update hee

Thank you very much 😊..

I'm glad that you like my story...Thanks a lot..I will continue it very soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 3
Nahar is shocked to see Aman with Saloni...

Dil judein bina hi toot gaye, Haath mile bina hi choot gaye, khel khale kismat ne...Baar baar rodh aankiyan tainu jho vo veh sakhiya...

Nahar walks to the garden. He is sad. He thinks about the moment when he saw Saloni for the first time. And how she walks in and hugs Aman.

At the party....Aman introduce Saloni at Brijesh and the whole family.

Aman: Yeh meri hone wali patni ke saheli hai. Yeh India pheli baar aaya...yeh special aaya hai humaare shaadi ke liye..

The whole Singh parivaar meets Saloni....They all talk with each other...

Aman: Dekho Nandini aagaye..

All turn around and dekh rahi hai ke Nandini kaise hai...Aman walks to her and goes with her to the stage..He ask for attention....

Aman: Yehi mere sapno ke rani hai...Nandini Mathur...Hamaare shaadi two weeks ke baath hoga..aur hum done aap sab ko invite karna chahta hoon..aap lokh suroor aana...

Aman goes to Brijesh with Nandini...He introduce her to him, and tells Nandini about their dosti...etc....

Tara: Aapko India kaise lagta hai...?

Saloni: Ab tak to bahot khoobsurat..Mein khal yahan pe aaye hoon..Abhi to mujhe bahot dekhna hai...Aap ki family bahot cute hai...Itna pyaar hai ab sab ke beech mein...So lovely...

Tara: Haan, hamaare parivaar mein bahot pyaar hai ek dusre ke liye... Mere devar to sabse pyaara hai..

Saloni: Aap ka devar...? Kahan pe hai woh..Maine to use nahin mila hai...?

Tara: Are Nahar kaha pe hai...? Woh to humaare saath aaya tha..Shayed woh garden mein hai...Tum jaaon naa...woh bahot handsome hai..Agar koi handsome garden mein hai to samajh le ke wohi Nahar hai...Saloni smiles....achcha mein jaati hoon..Mein bhi dekho ke aapka devar kitne handsome hai...

Saloni goes to the garden...Woh use dhoond rahe hai...Tab achanak use Nahar ko dekha...and thinks...Yehi woh ladka hai jho maine kal dekha tha...Yeh yahan pe kaise...? Nahar turns around and see Saloni in front of him...they look in each other eyes...

Aankhon aankhon mein hum tum khogaye deewane...

Nahar thinks..Aap mein ise kya kaho...yeh to Aman ke hone wale patni ho...and Saloni thinks...Mere sapno ke radj kumar yahan pe...kya yeh Tara ke devar hai...?

Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great 😊 plz do continue soon. lovely episode. 👏
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Originally posted by: ramas

great 😊 plz do continue soon. lovely episode. 👏

Thanks a lot Di..😊 I'm so glad that you like my story...I will continue very soon...Once again..Thanks

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