SP fanfic 'Pyar to hona hi tha' Last Ep.23 p.54 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: naz_u54

hmm...ok im so confused
but great episode
hai simz di im confused to
but it was great
anyways i think

nandani will come back as nahar and maybe saahil as saloni
and sagar and sayani...hmmm
cant wait for next episode

Thanks dear. You got one rightπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: naz_u54

oook now i kind of get it
lol
still cute
hmm...hurry up and post next episode im dying to see what happens next πŸ˜ƒ

thanks a lot dear. I will post it as soon as I can. It is getting better and cuter.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ramas

thanks a lot dear. I will post it as soon as I can. It is getting better and cuter.

no prob di....

i will be waiting

yes it is!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: naz_u54

no prob di....

i will be waiting

yes it is!!

thanks dear. will try to post one by this weekend
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pop77

NICE part..they exchange..waiting for next part..

yes they are exchanged. boy became girl and girl became boy.😊

so saahil and sagar are now sayani and salomi

smita is soham and nandini ia Nahar.😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Iam working on next episode and will be posted soon like in an hour or 2,
Edited by ramas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

mai yahin hun aadha likhke lunch banane me lagi thi. My son is here na.

will start back now. promise to give you good episode.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

mai yahin hun aadha likhke lunch banane me lagi thi. My son is here na.

will start back now. promise to give you good episode.

teek hai...im waitingπŸ˜†

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Posted: 16 years ago
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raksha where are you? waiting πŸ˜ƒ ..
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Episode # 8 Nahar saloni love from childhood

Nahar is becoming more and more protective of saloni. Trishla is very surprised sometimes. All 3 mothers have become friends by now. Seema and deepa were always friends but now Trishla joins them too. On Nahar's 8th birthday they all dance and have fun. Later Trishla takes them to a movie. Just 3 of them enjoy the movie. Nahar is seating between Sayani and Saloni. For some reason saloni gets scared seeing a fire and blood and clutches Nahar's hand very tight. Nahar feels very good and holds saloni with other hand and squeezes her hand whispering don't worry I am here. If you don't like scene close your eyes. Naahr does not understand his feelings. But feels happy with Saloni depending on him. Sayani is watching them amd feels jealous. She tries to tell Nahar to switch seat but Nahar ignores.

Trishla watching all 3 of them smiles. Later they go for ice cream. Saloni drops her ice cream and about to cry. Nahar gives her his ice cream saying saloni have this one. I am not hungry and I don't like this flavor today. Saloni says No. But Nahar forcefully gives her. Sayani too offers seeing Nahar. But saloni says No. trishla later gets all 3 another ice cream and thinks of Nahar having crush on saloni.

One day a boy is teasing saloni in the lunch break while Nahar is playing with other kids. Saloni tries to hit the boy. Boy pushes Saloni on the ground. Nahar watches the boy pushing Saloni and quickly runs to him and starts hitting and kicking him. The boy starts bleeding . sayani is comforting saloni who also has a bleeding knee. Naharr then hugs crying saloni and wipes her tears and blows her knee. Teacher comes and takes care of saloni and boy .. Nahar gets scolding and note for home from teacher.

Nahar's dad laughs it off reading the note. But Trisihla says I don't like this kind of behavior. Why Nahar is doing this? Sujansingh tells her. He is just our little boy who is growing and likes to save his friends. Trishla goes to meet teacher. As teacher is showing her little boys' wound both Saloni and sayani rushes there and Saloni shows her bruise and tells teacher and Trishla: Aunty he pushed me and hurt me first and he was teasing me. Nahar only came to protect me or else I would have gotten hurt more. Sayani too said: aunty that boys is mean and always bothers us. Teacher asks them all to sit down and says sorry to Trishla and that she will from now on keep an eye on that little boy.. saloni Nahar and sayani became leaders in their classes and no one dare to bother them Nahar's love for saloni was growing by leaps and bounces.

One more year passed and Nahar got in 5th grade and had to leave school. Sayani and saloni were very upset, sayani still comforted saloni saying we can still meet after school as the school is not very far. Last day of school all 3 of them hugged and cried.

Sayani said why bother about next year. why don't we all enjoy the vacation. Naahr said he can't be with them as he has to go visit his uncle for a month in Mumbai. But they can come and visit him. Sayani was so happy as her mausi too lived in Mumbai. She asks her mom can we go to see mausi in Mumbai? Seema was surprised as sayani hated leaving saloni and Nahar.


After she talked to Trishla she realized why sayani wanted to go there. Seena asked sayani: what about saloni? Sayani replied: saloni can go to her mausi. Seema was laughing inside when sayani told her plz do not invite saloni mom. If you do I won't go. Seema promised her she won't and began to wonder what is happening with sayani . As sayani was always so caring and always wanted to take saloni with her every where she went. When Seema told Trishla about sayani wants to go to Mumbai and she can't go,
Trishla told her she can come with us and stay few days then I will drop her to your sister's house.

When Nahar finds out that sayani is going with them. He is happy but then he realizes he will miss Saloni. He asks his mom can we please take saloni with us. Trishla explains: beta we can not ask saloni to go with us. . The reason sayni is going with us because her mausi lives in Mumbai. Nahar is heart broken. He calls Saloni in the park close to their house. Saloni tells her mom she wants to go play in the park. She meets Nahar in the park. She finds out Nahar sayani are going to Mumbai for a month. Saloni is sad and starts crying.

Who will I play with now? My 2 best friends are leaving. says Saloni cryingly. Nahar comforts her wiping her tears. I will try my best to take you with us. Saloni hugs Nahar and thanks him. Nahar goes home and tells Trishla he will only go if saloni goes with them.

Trishla gets worried. She consoles him I will try to take saloni with us for few days if her parents will sent her. Trishla talks to sujansingh again about not liking Nahar's behavior. Sujan again laughs off saying your son knows what he likes. He is just a little boy and they all have crushes. Our son has crush on Saloni. There is nothing wrong with it. He will grow out of it.

Saloni goes home and asks her mom deepa if they had any relative in Mumbai. Deepa says no but why? Saloni says both Nahar and sayani are going to Mumbai and I want to go too.

Deepa says: beta you can not go there, I will send you to Udaypur at your mama's place for vacation. Saloni says no. Saloni does not eat dinner that night. Next morning her mom goes to wake up saloni and finds she has a fever. She tells Udaysingh about Saloni wanting to go to Mumbai.

Udaysingh goes to Saloni and says : beta hum jaldise Mumbai jane wale hai . Nahar sayni ja rahe hai na. Ab tum jaldi se khana khao aur thik ho jao.

Saloni screams: Mama jaldi se khana do bahut bhukh lagi hai. Saloni's mom sits by her side and feeds her, After that she gives Saloni medicine and make her sleep saying she needs to get better to go with Nahar and sayani.

After saloni goes to sleep her mom questions Udaysingh how can we go there and where will we stay?. Udaysingh calms her saying: do not worry. I have a friend there who also rents properties in Mumbai. We can go and spend 2 weeks there, Kids will be happy too. Saloni is better that night and calls Nahar and sayani. Nahar jumps with joy and hugs Trishla.

When Seema finds out Deepa and Udaysingh are going to Mumbai. She asks them to take sayani along. Sayani is not to happy. Finally they all end up going to Mumbai together.

First 15 days Udaysingh forcefully keeps Nahar Saloni and Sayani together, They visit zoo rides and movies and many places and have so much fun. Finally saloni gets separated from sayani and Nahar unwillingly. But she is happy she had best time in her life. Sayani is happy she can now spend time with Nahar alone . But Nahar is unhappy. He hugs saloni and says goodbye sadly when Sal and her family leaves.

In a day or 2 Nahar tells trishla I want to go home. I don't like here. sayani says but we can play together. Nahar says: I want saloni to play with us too, It is no fun without her. Finally week later. They leave for jaipur. Nahar calls Saloni and tells her we are coming in the evening. Deepa invites them for dinner that night.

Nahar is so happy seeing saloni. Saloni takes him to her room and shows him around. sayani hamgs around her family. When they come out Trishla sees Nahar's happiness and wonders what is going to happen when they grow up.


To be continued.


Edited by ramas - 16 years ago
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