Story'Love@ First Sight' new ep .28 p. 121 - Page 9

Originally posted by: fijianbabe

great story

Thank you very much. keep posting comments.

Originally posted by: ramas

Raksha, My thoughts exactly, I couldn't have said it better myself!👏

Thanks mamis loved your comment.

you truly do have a wonderful talent to write👏

Originally posted by: mamis

You keep putting song dedication, it was very good and the song fitted perfectly...hope to hear more from you.👏

I will put more song dedication this time.

Originally posted by: 12234

no one comments on your song dedications because people have heard them before. You writing is soooooooooooo much better than those old compositions that no one finds them worthy enough to comment on. Your writing is great, wonderful, fantastic,etc, etc, etc. I don't think there are enough good words to describe how pleasant and creative your writing is. Seriously. Keep it up and I hope Nahar's sickness brings him and Saloni together. He has to get better and they have to have some cute, and romantic moments together in the next episode. You know what I'm talking about. :)

Thanks yaar. You boost up my writiing spirit so much.

Originally posted by: mamis

Thanks mamis loved your comment.

you truly do have a wonderful talent to write👏

Thanks again mamis

i will post next episode tomorrow.I will post preview shortly.

Preview Episode #5

Seeing Nahar sick saloni asks to use bathroom and cry there.
Sumer asks saloni to find out what is in Nahar's mind as Nahar refuses to meet girls to get married.
Sumer Narpat and Ambika leaves them alone.
Saloni takes care of Nahar and confesses her love for him crying very hard.
Nahar wipes her tears and he becomes romantic with her.
Sumer and Narpat Ambika shows up.
Nahar announces he selected saloni and they both like each other.
Sumer and Narpat gives shagun to Saloni and Nahar.
Next day Nahar takes Saloni to college. Saloni gives him gift and he gets romantic in the car.
Saloni tells Neel and Nita about Nahar . Neel feels sad.
Nahar and Saloni goes out in the evening. Nahar asks Neel and Nita to join them.
talking to Neel Nahar gets wierd feeling.
Read next episode to find out what does Nahar think or suspect about Neel and when he tells Saloni what he suspects How Saloni feels and much much more.

Originally posted by: navi18

omg.. i was totally awsome.. u shud b a writer.. keep up ur good work 👏

Thanks navi18. Keep reading. I am posting next episode tomorrow.

I will post next episode shortly.

Love at First Sight
Episode #5 Saloni's Love Confession

When Saloni sees Nahar lying in the bed and looks weak and pale her heart cries. Ambika reaches to Nahar and feels his forhead. Nahar wakes up and sees Ambika and sad Saloni. He tries to seat up. Ambika tells him to lie down. Nahar is looking at Saloni.
"Your head feels warm beta. Are you still running fever?" asks Ambika lovingly..
"I feel lot better auntyji but I still feel weak and have cough and headaches." says Nahar politely. Saloni tries to hide her tears and ask him to excuse her as she needs to use bathroom. Saloni goes in the bathroom and cries turning the faucet so no one can hear her. She comes out in few minutes and goes to Nahar and smiles at him. Nahar smiles back. But notices Saloni's eyes are red and realizes she has cried and feels bad.
"I want to go back because my wife is not well but Nahar is not letting me go back as he is not feeling well. I wish now he finds someone who can take care of him and the house. I showed him so many pictures but he refuse to go and look at those girls. I wish I could find out if he likes someone and he is not telling me or he is not ready for marriage yet." says Sumer worriedly. Saloni's face turns from worrisome to pale.

"Nahar beta if you are not feeling well come and stay with us and let your uncle go back home. Do consider us your family beta. You know how close we were with your family and we still are. I am like your mother beta." says Ambika lovingly.
"I was telling the same thing to Nahar. But I don't know what is bothering him for last few days. He refuses to come to your house. Saloni beta can you help me and talk to him and find out what is bothering him? May be he will tell you, he is very fond of you." says sumer looking at Saloni. Saloni blushes.

" Uncle there is nothing like that and Auntyji please don't feel bad. I do consider you like my mom. At times I miss my mom very much." says Nahar politely. He gets tears in his eyes. Saloni cannot see him crying and goes away saying I will be back with glass of water. Ambika comforts him and Narpat shows up. Saloni comes back with glass of water and hands to Nahar. Again their hands touch each other and Nahar and Saloni smiles at each other. Nahar thanks her and gives glass back to her. Narpat Ambika and Sumer smiles looking at them.

"Yes uncle I will try." replies Saloni politely. They all decide to go away leaving Nahar and Saloni alone. Saloni again looks at him and her heart is crying. She pulls the chair close to his bed and sits there. But she cannot open her mouth to tell him what she came to tell him. Finally she gathers courage telling herself look I do not want Nahar to suffer anymore. I have to tell him how I feel about him.
"Do you still have a bad headache ? Can I massage your forehead? Where is Vicks?" asks Saloni gathering courage.
"yes I have a bad headache and it has been bothering me so much. Thank you Saloniji." replies Nahar. Saloni sees a twinkle in his eyes. Nahar gives her Vicks.

Saloni takes out vicks and gently starts rubbing his forehead. Nahar closes his eyes. She sees a smile on his striking face. Her whole body feels like a big jolt of electric current running thru it. She feels like she wants to kiss him and Nahar opens his eyes. Saloni is thinking if Nahar read my thoughts I will die with embarrassment. She starts blushing. Nahar is watching her.
"You can stop now. I feel so much better already. Thanks." says Nahar holding her hand in his. Saloni keeps her hand in his without any hesitation. Nahar sees Saloni's face lighting up.
"I have something to tell you. Can you please close your eyes and look away." Says Saloni lovingly. Nahar closes his eyes and turns around.
"I am sorry. I did not reply that day when you told me that you like me. It has been killing me since. When I heard about your sickness I have been feeling very bad . I am the one who made you sick. I am very sorry. It is not like I did not want to reply. The fact is that I could not open my mouth. It was like some one glued my lips. But I will tell you today. I like you very much from the moment you held my hand in the bus and first time our eyes met. I love you very much and I cannot imagine my life without you." says Saloni sobbing. Nahar sits up and wipes her tears and comforts her.

" Saloniji please don't cry. You did not make me sick. It was the trip that I took that made me sick. The day we met I was not feeling that great. Then after coming home I felt very sick. Like I told you I knew your answer. It was written all over your face. Your face is just like your heart. A mirror any one can see thru. Your eyes and your face told me every time how you feel about me. Yes I love you very much too. I cannot imagine my life without you. My uncle and your parents know this too. That is why they left us alone. Please stop crying you are breaking my heart. I only want to see smile on your face. Please smile for me. We need to celebrate. Finally we found each other's love. I wish I can take you out and buy you something. But I have to take rain check. Can I have your masala tea? I miss that very much." says Nahar holding both her hands in his and kissing them. Saloni's face lights up. Suddenly they hear footsteps and Nahar lets go off Saloni's hands. But Sumer notices and smiles
"Uncle I found a girl for me and that is Saloniji. My dad also wanted her for me. So I like to honor his wish. I also know you are very fond of her. Thank you uncle I love you very much." says Nahar joyfully. Saloni is looking down and she is blushing.
"Thank you beta I love you very much also. I knew the first time I saw Saloni and you together at her house. We were trying to bring two of you together. We knew you 2 are made for each other. That is why God got you and her together in the bus. We have already decided for you 2 to get married. We also brought shagun today. The good news is yours and Saloni's horoscope matches very well. Saloni beta come here." says Sumer lovingly. Saloni bows to him.

"Be happy always and keep my Nahar happy too. My Nahar is a very good boy; he will really make you very happy. But sometimes he acts like a little child and he needs to be comforted. But I trust you beta to take care of my Nahar." says Sumer handing her khandani kangan as shagun. Narpat gives Nahar gold chain as shagun. Nahar bows to Ambika and Narpat. They hug him telling welcome to the family beta. Saloni smiles.
"Uncle I am making tea for everyone if it is ok?" asks Saloni politely.
"Nahar you already started my daughter ordering around. Saloni beta from today this is your house. You don't need to ask any one permission to do anything. I am giving my Nahar and the house keys to you. You take care of both. Do not refuse. This is an order he hands her keys. I want Nahar and you to bow to his parents." says Sumer laughing.
Nahar tries to get up Saloni gives him support. They both go to his parent's picture and bow. Nahar could not help but starts crying then they all cry hugging each other.
"We should not cry today. Nahar you should be happy you got the whole new family, A mother, father, Brother sister and a wife like Saloni. Come on smile. Now I am leaving tomorrow morning beta as you now have family full of people. I also have gotten my best friend back and a daughter like Saloni .It is a happy day for us." adds Sumer smiling.
"we also got a son. Thank you Sumer.' says Narpat hugging Sumer. They all feed each other sweets. Sumer forces Saloni and Nahar to feed each other. Saloni makes tea while Nahar rests. After tea Saloni asks Sumer to leave as she has to study for a quiz tomorrow. Sumer tells her Nahar is a good tutor and he can help with any subject as he was always a very bright student. Nahar smiles. Saloni tells him bye as she is leaving.
"I will pick you up tomorrow from the bus stop. I want to go to office for few hours. I am bored here and uncle is leaving in early morning. Just wait for me." says Nahar joyfully. Saloni nodes her head and leave.
Next morning as Saloni is waiting anxiously for Nahar. Nahar shows up. Saloni opens the door and sits in the car. Nahar is still coughing. Saloni gives him a gift box. Nahar opens it. It is a beautiful scarf with N engraved. Saloni had knitted scarf for him before and last night she knitted N on it.. Nahar is so happy to see the scarf and thanks her.

" How are you feeling today?. You look little better. But you still look weak. You should have stayed in bed. Please don't work hard take care of your health." Asks Saloni worriedly.
"Thank you for the gift and concern. You beat me to gift giving also. I was the one who should have given you first. It is very beautiful. I will cherish it for life. Did you make it? Thanks for coming in my life. I was very lonely before. Ever since I met you my life has become meaningful and joyful." declares Nahar happily. He takes Saloni's hand in his hand and kisses it.
"Yes I made it for you. I wanted to give you as a gift for saving my life but never gathered courage. Last night I made N after finishing my studies. Can I put it on you to see how it looks?" asks Saloni politely. Nahar stops the car. Saloni goes closer to him. Nahar comes forward same time Saloni comes forward. Saloni feel his breath and Nahar feels Saloni's. Nahar kisses her forhead. .She puts the scarf around his neck. Nahar puts his arms around Saloni's neck and kisses her cheeks. Saloni gently relieves herself saying she has to study. Nahar let's her go and looks in the rearview mirror. The scarf looks very beautiful and totally goes with his clothes. He looks at Saloni. she is hiding her face in the book. Her face is all red from blushing and he could hear her heart pounding. He smiles. At the college she gets down and tells Nahar to rest in the office. Nahat tells her he will. He will pick her up at 5 Saloni nodes her head.

At school Saloni tells Neel and Nita everything about Nahar. Neel jokes with Saloni you finally found some donkey(gaddha) who will marry you. Saloni runs after him but Neeta sees a sadness on Neel's face. Neel tells her he wants to see that gaddha oops Nahar. Saloni tells them they can meet him at 5. Neeta asks Neel why is he sad. Neel tells her we will loose our best friend. But in actuallity Neel had hearts for Saloni. At 5 nahar comes and Saloni introduces Nahar to Neel and Nita. Nahar asks them to join as he wants to know Saloni's best friends. Nita refuses but Neel accepts. SO they all go to restaurant. Nahar and Neel talks for a long time. Nahar tells Neel how good a singer Neel is. Nahar gets a feeling that Neel actually loves Saloni from all the talk and the way he looks at her.

In the car Nahar breaks to saloni that he has a feeling that Neel loves her.
"Can't be he is my best friend that is all. We have been friends from childhood and he never told Me anything or behaved any differently." says shocked Saloni. She now thinks about Neel and feels sad. Nahar notices and changes the subject.
to be continued

I will put song dedication shortly.Now your comments on this romantic episode