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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas


punjabi kuri i do not care about money. Why do you thing I am wrting here despite of all of you telling me to write book" With God's grace I got everything I need and so many loving wonderful freinds on IF


BTW never cared for materilistic possesions. I am a very content person. What matters to me is good heart that is always willing to help others also when I die people remember me for what I was and miss me. Thanks.



you are such a good person! I'm really happy that i have you as a didi.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Love at First Sight

Episode #11 Nahar's Hospitalization


They take saloni in the room. Doctor checks her out and says she will be fine. It is exhaustion and tension. Sumer signs consent form and they take Nahar for surgery. Surgery lasts few hours. Saloni also comes around. Docotrs ask her to rest so she can help Nahar get better when he comes out of surgery. Saloni says she can't rest. She waits outside operating room praying to mataji. Finally surgery is over and doctors come out and says the surgery was successful and Nahar should be ok. Just relax and wait for him to come out. They bring Nahar in the room within an hour. He is still unconscious. Nita comes with food. Sumr forces every one to eat saying we all need strength to make Nahar better.
Saloni eats little after getting lot of scolding from every one.They leave Saloni alone in the room with Nahar as doctor advises only one person can stay with him. Saloni takes his hand and kisses it.
"Nahar please wake up. What kind of punishment are you giving me. if you stay like this. I promise I will kill myself. I can't see you in this condition. God please give all his pain to me and make him better. I love him so much" says Saloni pleadingly.
She gets up and kisses him, her tears fall on his face. She again sits down and take his hand and cries. She moves around in the room anxiously Finally she sits next to him in the bed and put her head on his chest and stays in that position. Nurse comes and tells saloni not to move him much. Saloni gets up and sits by him and cry. Narpat Ambika comes back in the room and Saloni starts sobbing. They comfort her.
"Mama Why Nahar is still unconscious. I am so afraid. What will happen? When will he become conscious and talk to us. I can't see him like this lying in the bed with so much pain."says Saloni cryingly.
"Lado Nahar will be fine and we will have marriage in time. He may have scar or something but that's all. Have a faith in Matarani. She will take care of him and bring hin back to us. Just wait. He had a major surgery and so much sedation. It takes time. Do not cry in front of him. he will not like it beta. When he wakes up and sees you like this he will be more upset go and wash your face." says Ambika lovingly. Saloni goes in the bathroom and washes her face. Saloni decides to go to temple and pray for Nahar. Sahil takes her to temple. She sits in temple praying for Nahar. 2 hours passes and it is dark outside and temple is about to close. Saloni receives a phone call from Narpat suggesting Nahar is conscious now and wanting to see her. Saloni thanks matarani. They go back to hospital. Sumer Ambika narpat Neel shweta all are gathered around Nahar's bed. Saloni comes in the room.

"Beta open your eyes look who is here? Says Sumer lovingly. Nahar opens his eyes and sees Saloni and smiles and says Saloni. They all leave room. Nahar is trying to talk but Saloni sees lot of pain on his face. Saloni puts her hand on his mouth. She goes closer and kiss his forehead and his cheeks, Then she sits down and holds his hand.
"How are you feeling now. Do you still have lot of pain. You scared me so much. I thought I was going to die seeing you this way. Please get better fast. I can not wait any longer to marry you and be yours for ever." says Saloni lovingly She gets up and gently kisses his Lips. Nahar smiles and holds her closer with his other hand.

"I am fine. My pain is all gone seeing your face. I am also in hurry to marry you and make you mine and make love to you. I have lots of surprises for you. But I need to get out of this bed. I promise you I will marry you on the same day we were suppose to get married. I will be fine. How can I leave my saloni" says Nahar firmly and squeezes her hand tight.
Nurse comes in room and tells Nahar not to talk much if he wants to recover fast. Doctor comes and checks him and tells saloni it is miracle that he is out of danger and everything is looking great. If he recovers like this he can go home in 2-3 days. Saloni and Nahar are so happy.

"Nahar you gave us a scare. But you will be fine. I can see one very loving lady helped your recovery so fast. I heard your conversation and you will be able to marry in 2 weeks. But you have to rest a lot young man. You had a major surgery." Says Doctor smiling He leaves the room. Saloni and naahr smiles. Sumer comes in the room.
"beta you can go now and come back in the morning and good night rest. I will take care of our Nahar. I do not want you to be sick. You look very tired. Also you are needed for all the shopping. So you need lot of rest. Nahar will be only better if you are ok. I donot want my bahu getting sick near her wedding." Says Sumer lovingly. Naahr agrees too. Saloni leaves with Ambika and Narpat Sahil stays with Sumer. Sumer asks Neel to leave also saying he needed to handle business till Nahar is better.
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Next morning Saloni shows up with tea and breskfast for everyone. Saloni feeds Nahar. Neel comes and talks to naahr and leave. Finally saloni and naahr are alone in the room. Doctor has taken of IV and gives him permission to eat everything. Saloni sits by him and kisses him. Nahar tells her he is counting days. He can't wait to marry her. Saloni tells him me too. Aunty comes in and tells saloni to leave and finish her shopping. Saloni promises to come back in few hours as her mind will be here. Nahar tells her not to worry. Saloni buys few things. When she returns she asks narpat If she can stay with Naahr tonight? Then during day time they can do more shopping and she can help them with invitations too. Ambika agrees.

Saloni comes with dinner for kaki and Nahar. Narpat tells Sumer Saloni wants to stay with Naahr. Sumer agrees. They all leave Saloni and Nahar alone. Saloni feeds him dinner. She brought a nice romantic movie. Saloni sits by him and they watch movie together. During the movie Saloni falls a sleep. Nahar holds her and covers her and kisses her forehead. He cannot sleep and watches more tv and falls a sleep beside Saloni. In the middle of night Saloni wakes up and sees herself sleeping next to nahar. She blushes and gently kisses his forhead and moves to other bed and goes to sleep. They wake up with nurse coming for check up. Nurse annunces everything is looking so great even the wound is looking better. Doctor comes and tells her she can take him home tomorrow with the condtion of bed rest for few days. He joks that Saloni is a tonic for Nahar he is looking so better. Saloni blushes. Saloni leaves as Sumer comes. She finishes more shopping and comes back at night with another movie and Nahar's dinner.
She feeds him. Then they watch movie.

"Saloni do not got sleep watching such a romantic movie. Last night you fell a sleep so fast? Is my company that boring? " says nahar grabbing her close and kisses her.
"No I was just too tired. I want your company in every birth and I will never get tired of you. I love you so much. I want to rest so much now so I can spend so much time with you after our wedding. It is only 11 days left now. I hope these 11 days go fast." Says saloni lovingly and pulls Nahar closer and kisses his lips. Naahr holds her in his arms tight They lies in the bed and watch movie holding each others hands. Salono goes to sleep again in his arm. Naahr smiles and kisses her. Then naahr sleeps to turning off lights. He is so excited to go home.

Next morning Saloni takes him home. He recovers in 2 -3 days and they finish there shopping together. Then comes mehndi ki raat. Saloni gets mehendi from naahr's house. They have lots of guests and dancing and Siniging. Saloni and shweta dances for a while then other ladies dance while mehendiwali apples mehendi in Salonis hand and feet. Nahar calls Saloni and tells her he wants to see her so badly. Saloni says she misses him too and wants to see him too. Next day Nahar's stitches come off.. Then they have haldi rasam at both houses. Family members applies mehendi while singin somgs and have puja afterwards. After haldi Nahar goes to his new houses and finishes discussing last minutes details about decorations while Neel and Neeta check everything. Then Naahr finlizes mecedes car with neel and neeta that he wants to present to Saloni on their wedding night. They both feel so happy that saloni found such a nice man who cares so much about her. Nahar goes home and takes Sumer to see both car and house he got for Saloni. Sumer gets tears in his eyes saying bhisa will be so happy seeing all this. He is so happy that naahr Saloni loves each othr so much and he wants them so happy. Then go the hall where sangeet ceremony is held. Nahar gets ready fast and goes to room where Saloni is getting ready. He knocks the door. Shweta comes out. Nahar tells her he wants to talk to Saloni. Shweta goes out and closes the door. Saloni comes out from bathroom just wearing towel over underclothes as her clothes are lying on the table, She is about to take off towel and sees Nahar. She tells him please go out I want to change. She grabls clothes. Naahr takes it away from her hand. Saloni sees mischief in his eyes. "can you plese give my clothes back and go I will get dress in 2 minutes. " Nahar says no anf grabs her.He starts kissing her neck. then her back gently moving towel. Saloni holds towel tight and begs him to leave. She tells him. Please go from here. Someone will come and see us like this then I will feel like dying. We just have to wait one more day. Please. Ambika knocks the door. Saloni is mortified. But Shweta comes and tells Ambika Saloni is in shower. Nahar puts back towel and hands her clothes back and turns around. Saloni quickly puts back ghaghra choli and odhani. Then she comes near him and hugs him and kisses him.

"sorry I hope you did not feel bad. But this is not the time or place for this. What if mom had come inside? We have to wait one more day. I will be all yours tomorrow. It is not easy for me to stay away from you either. I also want you as much as you do. She hugs him real hard and kisses him. They hold each other. . Naahr kisses her and leave. Saloni gets ready. She comes out looking like a queen. Haldi has worked on her and her skin shines. Nahar too looks so handsome in kurta sherwani. They have invited singers so initially they sing and everyone dances. Then Nahar request Neel to sing. Neels says he will only sing if Saloni dances. Neel sings and Saloni dances like a flashing electricity. Nahar could not believe that he is marrying a person so full of talent yet so simple and so loving. He is totally memerized. After song and dance, Neel sings few songs and they all dance. Naahr could not keep up with saloni and feels embarrassed. Saloni realizes and slow down. Then Nahar asks Saloni to sing. Saloni initially refuses but hten sing the song
"mera piya ghar aaya ho ramji mea piya ghar aaya ho ramji"
every one dances till late night. Then Sumer asks them to stop as next day is the wedding day.

Edited by ramas - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 👏 wow! rakshadi!! what a romantic episode 😳 It was well written and totally entertaining!! and mercedes as a gift for Saloni!! lucky her! You described everything so well. 👏 Gr8 Job!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wo! Amazing! I loved it. Mercedes! wow! Someone's a lucky duck. I loved the way you made nahar dress up in a sherwani (hint, hint-i bet it was red 😆 ) wonderful episode. Very mischievious that nahar is! Coming in the room when saloni was coming out of the shower!!! 😆 I couldn't stop laughing. I was tingling as i was reading the episode, it was so good and cute! I could visualize all the scenes as they were very realistically written. Saloni-Nahar and perfect and i love the way you make their relationship flow with love. 👏 In the beginning i especially liked how you made saloni anxious and portrayed her impatience to be with nahar. "Tonic" is the perfect way to describe what saloni does for nahar. I love weddings and this was i could completely imagine. Thank you very much for continuing this fan-fic. I like it sooooooooo much that i can't tell you how much! My mouth just waters thinking of the tasty, savering episodes that will follow. I really can't wait for the wedding. I bet it will be grand and romantic (of course) and soooooooooooo cool!!!!! This beats the real storyline 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000x.
Seriously, i wish the real storyline could be really romantic as is this fan-fic. Problems can go around but they shouldn't come between nahar-saloni. Once again this is just a summary of how i feel. I really can't describe all the excitment and pleasure i feel when i read one of your fantastically written romantic episodes. All i can say is that you are a fabulous writer and saat phere forum is lucky to have you. Thank you so much for writing and i can't wait for the next episode!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
is there a song dedication rakshadidi? I always liked the ones you posted. They are so appropriate for the episode. I know you put in a song that saloni sang in the episode but please put a different one. You're good at thinking of them. I love reading them and then recalling the songs and being like ooooooooooooooo. I should have thought of that but of course i never will. 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

wahoo! that's how our writer should feel! 😃😉

Thank you ashima I am just speechless.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

oh no, no please dont take what i was saying in a wrong way. 😕i was saying that ur writings are so superb that you can make billions (if you would like to). and yes u r right....i fully agree about the part ... a good heart and always willing to help. 😊 i admire those people.you seem like a very caring, thankful, kind, nice, sweet person. 😳

Love, Ashima

Ashima I did not feel bad at all. I loved the part about bilions. I don't yhink authors make tahat much money and who cares.You too are nice sweet person.Nic e knowing youl😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 12234

yet your ideas run rakshadidi cause they're amazing. i love your writing so let your imagination run wild. by the way don't mind 😆 but when is the next episode coming up?

thank you for the confidence.

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow that was a superb episode!! sorry i couldnt read/comment earlier. i wasn't feeling well. 😕
anways....i loved it!!! it was so romantic and brilliant! saloni is soooo lucky! A MERCEDES!!!! 😃
can't wait for the next episode!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

you two are really out of this world.😊

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