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Posted: 17 years ago

Love at First Sight

Episode #10 Nahar's Acquisition of his Father's Wealth

Nahar drops Saloni home. Ambika invites him in. Saloni tells him that finally Neel has accepted Nita and he will marry her after he settles. Thanks to Nahar those two got united.
"Saloni I knew what Nahar did was right thing. Neither Nita nor you were able to tell Neel anything. I am so proud of Nahar. You are very lucky to find life partner like Nahar. He is a true gem. I am proud of you beta." Says Ambika joyfully. Nahar leaves saying goodbye as he has early morning meeting.
In few days his partner is leaving so they are very busy with paper work and all. Nahar starts handling business himself. Neel starts with Nahar as time permits.. Neel spends as much time he gets after school and study. Neel is a fast learner. But he has a long way to go. Nahar has to travel a lot some times for a whole week. He spends very little time with saloni and they both miss each other.
Neel and Neeta are so much in love and are always together. Sometimes Saloni feels out of place with them and jealous too even though they include Saloni in everything.
" You stay so busy with your business and I miss you so much. Sometimes I even feel bad and neglected. I miss being with you very much. Neel and Neeta spend so much time together and I feel jealous. Why can't we spend time together like we used too .I Understand now you have to take care of your business but I can't help it. I hope this does not happen after our marriage. I want you all to myself." says Saloni lovingly hugging him and kissing him.
"Yes mam. Your wish is my command. .I am sorry to make you feel bad. I too miss being with you. But then I think this way let me establish the business. Then after our marriage I can spend all the time with you my darling Saloni. I will make up for all the time we missed and that is my promise. I will also have Neel to help me."says Nahar lovingly pulling Saloni closer and locking her lips with his.

Sumer calls and saloni tells him about Nahar being so busy and never have any time for her or anything else. Sumer promises Saloni he will do something about it. Sumer invites Nahar and Saloni at their estate. Saloni is so happy at the thought of spending so much time with him. Sumer invites Nahar saying you should put your priorities in order and take some break and come and spend some time with Saloni and us. Even Saloni was complaining. You need to make sure you do not ignore Saloni for your business. This time will not come back again in your life. Love you beta." says Sumer lovingly and firmly.

"Uncle I love to spend time with you and our family. We will be there. I promise to take care of Saloni and will not take her for granted.. Thank you for inviting us and your advice.
"Saloni what are you doing ? I have got 2 tickets for romantic movie this evening and we are going out for candle light dinner. So finish all your studies .I will pick you up in the evening." says naahr lovingly.
"Wow romantic movie and candle light dinner. Finally you found some time for me. I thought you totally forgot about me. I love too go out in the evening I Can't wait. Love you .Nahar." says saloni smiling.
"Saloni I love you too. I can never forget you. You are always in my heart. I will always have time for you. I hope I did not make you feel neglected or unhappy. If I did I am sorry. See you in the evening." Says Nahar politely.

In the evening Nahar shows up with roses and gift bag. He Hands them to Saloni kissing her forehead. Saloni opens the bag to find most beautiful dress. She hugs and thanks Nahar. Nahar asks her to change while he talks to Narpat and Ambika. They are happy to see them so happy. Saloni comes out and they leave.
" You look so beautiful in this dress saloni. I love you so much. We will have time of our life tonight darling". says Nahar hugging her and kissing her forehead in the car .Saloni thanks him. They watch movie holding each others hand and Saloni putting her head on Nahar 's shoulder and Nahar grabing her waist with his other hand. It turns out to be very romantic movie. They thoroughly enjoy movie and candle light dinner. By the time they finish dinner it is only 10 30 pm. Nahar takes her to his house saying he missed being alone with her. He will drop her home at midnight. Saloni agrees.
"I donot even want to go home and just stay with you. But we have to wait till we are married. Some times I feel so lonely and lost without you. I just want to cry especially when you are out of town. Look what you have done to me." says Saloni complaining.


"Saloni I feel the same way. I want to stay with you. But you have to finish school and I need to take care of business. I love you so much and never want you to cry. Besides we will have time together in estate. I am looking forward to that so much." says Nahar. They reach home. Saloni sits on the sofa. Nahar lies in her lap. Saloni plays with his hair. Then she kisses him. Nahar kisses her back and they hold each other and sit quietly. The clock chimes midnight. Nahar takes her home.
Christmas vacation arrives. Saloni Nahar goes to estate. Saloni is so excited. Saloni notices that Sumer is so happy to see Nahar. But aunty and kids are not happy. When they sit down and have lunch. They are talking about a friend who died leaving a wife and a small child behind. Aunty jumps in the conversation and says some people are manhoos looking at Nahar. Saloni notices Nahar's face turns pale hearing the word/

"Someone's dying does not make their family members manhoos. You should not blame a family member for other's death. It is God's way." says saloni in very angry and insulting tone. Nahar is almost in tears. Aunty starts yelling at Saloni .
."How can you talk to me this way? I expressed my opinion. You have no right to come in my house and talk to me this way. You must apologize to me or I am leaving this house." says kaki in threatening angry voice.
"I will only apologize to kaki after she apologizes to Nahar for hurting him and promise to never hurt him again uncle. "says saloni firmly.
"How can you talk to our mother this way after she raised Nahar and took care of him. You are an outsider. You have no right saying anything when Nahar is not saying anything. Why should my mother leave? You and Nahar should leave? How dare you insult my mother?" says Sumer's kids in very angry tone.
"Saloni has every right to say what she wants. She is a part of this family. I am ashamed to say you are my kids. This house property and business belongs to Nahar's dad. I am a mere care taker appointed by court because Nahar was young that time. I was paid good amount for that. You should be thankful to Nahar and respect him that he let us live in his house for years. How can you ask them to leave from their own house? I am giving everything back to him. Saloni take Nahar to his room we will talk later" Says Sumer sadly.
" I do not want anything uncle" says Nahar cryingly "But don't insult my Saloni". Saloni stops Nahar saying we will talk later and she grabs his hand and almost force him out of there.
Saloni takes him in his room. Nahar is still very upset and sobbs remembering his parents. Saloni makes him lie down and lies beside him and hugs and comforts him. She gently kisses his forehead and massges his back. Nahar calms down and they kiss each other.
"Do you trust me to make right decision for us.? If you trust me then let me handle this. You just support me as you promise me previously. I will not let any one ever hurt you." says saloni lovingly. Nahar nodds his head and kisses her lips. They hug each other very hard. Suddenly she hears knock on the door. She gets up and opens the door. Sumer comes in. Nahar sits up.
"Nahar beta are you alright? I am sorry about what happened today. Now whatever belongs to you. you have to take it and free me from my responsibility. I want to go and leave in my own home and live peacefully. We will wind up your business". says summer lovingly.


"Uncle we will accept part of business. I want to give 10% each to my cousins as I always consider my bother and sisters. And 10% for you. I will take the rest. Also I will take all the property that belongs to my dad. But I will still like you to live here. You have to accept these condition." says naahr politely. Summer agrees and leaves.
At the dinner table Sumer breaks the news. His kids oppose. But Sumer tells them that it is Nahar's generosity that they all will be paid very handsomely despite their ill treatment of him. They should apologize to Nahar. They all smile and apologize to Nahar. kaki also realizes her mistake and apologize. Saloni apologize to kaki. Nahar Saloni goes to his room. Naahr asks her to sleep in her lap as he feels so relieve today that years of bitterness has ended and all thanks to Saloni and uncle. Saloni sits while naahr lies in her lap and goes to sleep. Saloni dozes off sititng down. Late at night Naahr wakes up and make her sleep in his bed and covers her while he goes to sleep on the sofa.

Next day papers are drawn. Naahr signs all the papers. Then they go out for picnic near the ranch house. It is kind of cold. So Nahar covers saloni with blanket and hugs her. Saloni still feels cold. So Nahar takes her hands and rubs them with his. They they spends rest of the day in the ranch house. They both feel so happy for spending time together and things got resolved finally. Nahar thanks Saloni for looking after his interest. Saloni gets pretend angry and scolds him.
" Are we 2 separate. Why are you thanking me. Your pride is mine and vice versa. I love you so much and will never ever let hurt you. You are the best thing that happens to my life.' Says Saloni getting serious and hugs him.
They go back home with heavy heart this time. Nahar drops Saloni home.

Next few months Saloni is busy with her school, While Nahar is busy with his business, winding up his father's business. Naahr saloni barely gets to spend time together as his work load is two fold. Every time Saloni gets upset with him. He tells her to look forward to their wedding and prepare for it. They set up the muhuart for wedding 2 weeks after saloni's finals. Saloni is so excited. Nahar finally winds up his dad's business and gets big amount and decides to use part of money to buy big house and nice car and surprise sakoni at their wedding night.. He still is very busy with his business and wedding shopping and preparing his new house for Saloni's welcome. Kaki comes to help with shopping and preapartion. Nahar accompanies saloni for her shopping. Neel calls as some important client wants to see nahar. Saloni tells nahar to go as she wants to go few more shops before making up her mind. Nahar finishes his meeting and he is trying to rush back to saloni. He does not see a car turning and hits another car. People gathers there and someone takes him to hospital.and his cell rings. It is Neel on the phone. The person tells Neel what happened to Nahar. Neel calls saloni and ask where she is. Saloni asks about Nahar. Neel tells her he is still busy and he is coming there. Neel breaks news to Saloni. Neel notifies Sumer and Narpat. At hospital every one is waiting to find out Nahar's condition. Doctor comes and announces Nahar is in critical condition with head injury. They need to operate on him. Saloni faints hearing this.
To be continued

Edited by ramas - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow! What an episode 😃 Gr8 Job once again rakshadi. 👏 👏 👏 You are an excellent writer 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a great episode!
poor NAHAR
hope he gets well soon!

anyways... amazing writing, ramas...you are awesome!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 12234



YES!!! Roshni, i'm sorry, i haven't had a chance to meet you but i can already say that you're amazing 👏 !!!! High five! You made rakshadidi keep writing. Continue this story!!! It's fantabulous. A lot more is left. I mean they have to get married, go on a loooooooooooooog, wonderful, fantabulous, amazing, sexy, cool, romantic honeymoon, have kids, love each other, go through trials and tribulations TOGETHER (key word). You can't stop now!!!

ok I won't stop. new episode is already posted.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 12234



Don't worry. Don't be rushed, but don't think that we're not like drooling in anticipation for you next dhamakedar, masaledar, romantic episode!!! (We are) 😆

yes I know you are and here is your episode.😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Finally Done! 😃

Great Skills Yaar 👏 Can't wait til the next episode 😃
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Originally posted by: ramas


ok I won't stop. new episode is already posted.



YES!!! PARTY TIME!!! You're not stopping!!! Wooooooooooo-hooooooooo!!! High fives all around!! I love the fanfic you can't stop know. There is soooo much more stuff left!!! Continue writing!!!! 👏
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👏

Simply breath-taking! Fabulous, romantic, wonderful, happy, perfect, fantabulous, what more can i say???

You have amazing skills!!! Your stories are:

sweeter than chocolate,
redder than roses,
more romanticer (if that's a word) than paris,
Prettier than the moon.

Sorry, but I can't say more than that. I loved this episode. IT SHOULD BE MADE INTO REAL SAAT PHERE (hint, hint to directors) I loved it!! It was so sweet and romantic, and trusting, and special and suspenseful. The romantic scenes are very very cute. (Makes me wonder if our fabulous writer here has had similar experiences 😆 😉 ) I loved the way you incorporated a twist. But i'm sure that this will bring about more caring, and love between nahar and saloni. If say that saloni will take excellent care of nahar and that will just increase their affections for each other. Excellent writing. Just stunning. You have very powerful skills!!!! I'll end this post with another round of applause!!!!
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 12234

👏

Simply breath-taking! Fabulous, romantic, wonderful, happy, perfect, fantabulous, what more can i say???

You have amazing skills!!! Your stories are:

sweeter than chocolate,
redder than roses,
more romanticer (if that's a word) than paris,
Prettier than the moon.

Sorry, but I can't say more than that. I loved this episode. IT SHOULD BE MADE INTO REAL SAAT PHERE (hint, hint to directors) I loved it!! It was so sweet and romantic, and trusting, and special and suspenseful. The romantic scenes are very very cute. (Makes me wonder if our fabulous writer here has had similar experiences 😆 😉 ) I loved the way you incorporated a twist. But i'm sure that this will bring about more caring, and love between nahar and saloni. If say that saloni will take excellent care of nahar and that will just increase their affections for each other. Excellent writing. Just stunning. You have very powerful skills!!!! I'll end this post with another round of applause!!!!
👏

good one!😆👍🏼

and totally agree with everything else u said!!! ramas is an excellent writer!!...and you are an awesome commenter!😃

Edited by punjabi_kuri36 - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36



good one!😆👍🏼


and totally agree with everything else u said!!! ramas is an excellent writer!!...and you are an awesome commenter!😃



thanks. I can't write like rakshadidi can but at least i can comment. 😉
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