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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas


Nita I will post next episode Thursday hopefully.



Great!

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Posted: 18 years ago
yes THURSDAY! i cant wait!!! though take ur time...after all thursday is THANKSGIVING! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

yes THURSDAY! i cant wait!!! though take ur time...after all thursday is THANKSGIVING! 😊

yes it will be posted on Thursday because I do intend to finish it tomoorrow.

Edited by ramas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Preview Episode #9
Saloni is angry with Nahar.
She walks out crying Nahar follows her and asks her to drop her home
In the car he appologize and tries to talk Saloni keeps quet .
They reach Saloni's home and she locks her self in her room Nahar bangs the door but she doesnot open
Ambika asks Nahar to leave her alone
Nahar explains to Ambika whole Neel Neeta story
Ambika tells him not to feel bad Saloni will come out when she is calm
Saloni comes out and apologize
They got to Neeta house and kiss and make up
Saloni makes a plan and forces Neeta to go with them
They go to Neels's house Neel has also locked himself up in his room
Again Saloni makes a plan to get him out of his room
Then Saloni tells him to get Neeta from the car outside his home While Nahar comforts Neel's uncle about Neel
Neel brings Neeta in his house they all have fun
Then Neeta tells Saloni in the car Neel has accepted their relation. and thanks Nahar. Nahar announces he wants to celebrate Neel and Neeta's getting together next day.
They celebrate bhaiduj at Nahar's house
Saloni is over whelmed
Next day in the celebration something very exciting happens that can change Neel's life and makes all four very happy

Read this very romantic, excting ,emotional episode to find out Saloni's plan, what nahar suggests that makes all 4 of them so happy. i am alsmost done with it. So will try to post by this evening. It has come out very beautiful episode.

Edited by ramas - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow! Rakshadidi. Sounds incredibly romantic. Neel and Neeta and Nahar-Saloni. Great couples! May they be together forever and their love keep growing. I can't wait! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMGSH im looking forward to the whole episode!! it sounds so sweet. aaaw i wonder ka jadoo hoyga that all 4 will be happy. 😉 sounds VERY romantic and awesome!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 12234

wow! Rakshadidi. Sounds incredibly romantic. Neel and Neeta and Nahar-Saloni. Great couples! May they be together forever and their love keep growing. I can't wait! 😛

I will post this today. Thank you.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Love At First sight

Episode #9 Neel's Acceptance of Neeta
Nahar tries to comfort Saloni holding her but she pushes him away and keeps crying. She walks away and get out of his home. Nahar runs after her and tells her he will take her home. She agrees, in the car he tries to talk and explain why he did what he did.
"Saloni I am really sorry to hurt you. Please stop crying. I was only trying to help Neeta and Neel in getting them together. Remember you told me once that Neeta loves Neel and we should do something. Please forgive me if I stepped out of my limits and ruined everyone's mood and diwali. But please don't cry. I can't see you like this." Says Nahar beggingly.
Saloni does not respond but she stops crying. They reach Saloni's home. She opens the door and walks in without waiting for him. Nahar follows her. But she runs in her room and locks the door. Nahar knocks the door please Saloni open the door. Ambika comes out of her room and welcomes Nahar. She asks Nahar to come and sit in the living room. She offers him tea and snacks. Nahar takes tea and talks to Ambika..
"I had invited Neel and Neeta. Neeta loves Neel. But Neel doesn't know yet. I told him that Neeta loves him. Neel got upset with Neeta and Saloni for not telling him. Neeta got upset with Saloni. All 3 of them are upset with me now. Saloni is very upset and left my house and came and locked her self in her room. She is not talking with me. Mummyji .I wanted to celebrate diwali with Saloni and her friends instead ruined everyone's diwali.. I don't know what to do about it now. Mummijy I was planning to invite your family to my home for dinner since today is bhaiduj " says Nahar politely. Ambka comforts him.

"Don't worry beta everything is going to be fine. Just leave Saloni alone. She is a very understanding girl. When she gets very angry she just locks herself rather than saying anything to hurt any one in anger. She will come out when she feels calm. We are lucky to have daughter like Saloni. She will die before hurting anyone. Beta I request you to take care of my Saloni. And don't let anyone hurt her. She will never say anything. She hides all her sorrows and her pain. She always cares for others but for herself. For Neeta Neel and Saloni they cannot stay mad at each other. You might have done a favor to Neeta by telling Neel how she feels about him. I have a faith something good will come out of it. Now smile and take Saloni to Neeta' s house when she comes out. Then you 2 will figure out what to do. About bhaiduj we will have so many after your marrage so don't' worry." Says ambika lovingly and Nahar smiles. They talk about Sumer and his family. Saloni comes out in few minutes and apologize to Nahar. Nahar notices her eyes are all red.
"Beta take Nahar in your room. He wants to talk to you. Forget about whatever happened and have a faith. May be Nahar did a favor to Neeta by telling Neel since .she was unable to tell him how she feels about him. Saloni takes him n her room. Nahar hugs her and tells her how sorry he is for hurting her and her friends.
"No I am sorry. I was upset with you. But you apologize so many times and I did not respond. Please forgive me. I was rude to you. I know how much you love me and you will never do anything to hurt my friends or me. Come to think of it moma is right . you actually did a favor to Neeta by telling Neel. We will go to Neeta's house. First I want to eat something and I love you very much Nahar." Says saloni joyfully kissing him. Nahar's face lights up.
"Saloni today is bhaiduj and I wanted to invite your family since this is your first bhaiduj. I alerady have done some preparation and have to cook some more food. " says Nahar lovingly. Saloni feels very happy and holds his face and kisses his forehead and hugs him.
"Nahar you didn't have to do it. We are not even married yet. Yes I would love to celebrate bhaiduj today. Thank you so much. You are so loving and caring. I am really lucky to have such a wonerful life partner.' Says Saloni lovingly. Nahar hugs her nd kiss her lips. They eat snacks and leave for Neeta's house after letting Ambika know about the dinner at Nahar's place. Ambika is very happy to see both of them so happy and smiles.
When they reach Neeta's house Neeta invites them in. Saloni notices her eyes are red too.
Nahar first appologize to Neeta then Saloni does.
" First I felt very bad that Naharji told Neel what I was suppose to tell him. But I could never have courage to tell him fearing and knowing that Neel loved you and I will loose my best friend. After your engagement with Naharji, I tried so many times to tell Neel about my feelings for him. But I was worried about being rejected and was leaving with a burden on my heart. I am glad now Neel knows how I feel about him and I have a feeling he loves his best friend too, but doesn't Know it yet. So Naharji I should thank you for lifting this big burden from my heart and doing me a favor. Saloni is very lucky to have you. I hope I get that lucky and Neel accepts my love. Saloni I am not angry with you anymore. So don't feel bad and smile silly it is diwali time for happiness and celebration.
Says Neeta smilingly. Saloni and Neeta hug each other.

"Thank you Neeta for forgiving us. I am sure everything is going to be fine. We should all go to Neel's house." Says Saloni cheerfully.Neeta tells her she is not sure how Neel will feel seeing her. Besides she does not want to face Neel or his rejection. Saloni tells her she will handle everything and Neeta must accompany them. Neeta and Saloni feeds each other sweets.
When they reach Neel's house Saloni asks Neeta to wait outside and promises her she will make Neel bring her in his house. Neel's uncle tells Saloni what is wrong Neel has locked himself in his room ever since he got back from your house. Is everything all right with all of you?
"Uncle don't worry. I will get Neel out of his room in a minute.
"Neel I have come to your home with Nahar first time. But if you don't want to welcome us in your home for Diwali and stay mad with us that is fine. Neeta is also mad and sitting outside. We will still love you as our best friend and bye. Shouts Saloni and hides behind Nahar. Neel opens the door and shakes hand with Nahar and welcomes him.
"Thank you Naharji for coming to my home. Where did pagal Saloni go? Where is Neeta." Says Neel jokingly. Saloni comes out and gently hits him..
" You are calling your best friend pagal. Didn't I got you out of your room.. Neeta is waiting in the car. You have to go and get her. .I dragged her here. But she wouldnot come inside. She is very upset." says Saloni mischievously..
Neel goes out to get Neeta while Nahar Saloni talk to his uncle. Uncle expresses his concern about Neel's shyness and willing to accept help from anyone. Nahar assures him that he will do his best to make sure Neel has a good life. Since he does not have a brother he considers him as his younger brother. His uncle gets emotional and hugs Nahar.
Neel comes back with Neeta. Uncle makes tea and they all enjoy tea and snacks.
In the car Nahar tells saloni if you want I will leave you at Neeta's place and pick you up later so you 2 can talk.
"Naharji I know you want to know what happened between Neel and me. Neel was first upset with me. Then he told me he is not worthy of me since I come from such a well to do family. But he loves me too and he needs time to make himself something than he wll think about marriage. I accepted his condition. I can't thank you enough for saying my feeling to Neel. It turned out to be best day of my life and I awe all this to you. Saloni you are really very very lucky. I am lucky to since I got such a nice jiju." Says Neeta joyfully. Saloni and Neeta hugs each other.
"Oh Nahar I am so happy and lucky to got you. I awe you big applogy. Thank you for making my best friends and me so happy. Now we all can hang out together. This cause for a celebration." Expresses Saloni cheerfully.

" I am so happy Saloni that finally we all will have lot to celebrate this diwali and I am lucky to have you and your wonderful friends in my life. Yes we will have big celebration tomorrow night and this one is on me." Says Nahar smiling They drop Neeta to her home and drives back to Nahar's.
Saloni ask him about what needs to be done for the evening. Nahar tells her everything is under control. She needs to check firt how good a cook he is gently taping her face.
They reach home. Nahar tells he is very tired and emotionally very drained and wants to rest in her lap a little. Saloni agrees he lies in Saloni's lap while Saloni is playing with his hair. Nahar goes to sleep. Saloni .watches him and thinks how lucky I am to get such a wonderful man he is not only so beautiful outside but inside too and makes herself promise not to get angry with him ever. She dozes off too resting her head on sofa. Nahar wakes up in an hour and sees Saloni sleeping gets up and gently kisses her head and cheeks. Saloni wakes up and hugs him. Then they go to kitchen and Nahar shows her what he already preapred and what needs to be done. Together they finish cooking. Saloni watches him. He looks so cute in apron and hat. She kisses him and put kajal from her eyes behind his ear. Saying you look so cute kahi meri nazar na lag jaye aaapko. Nahar hugs her.
"madamji you always look so beautiful to me. Except when you cry. I hate my saloni that time. I want my Saloni to always smile and never cry. I hate tears and sadness. "Says Nahar lovingly.

"I promise to take away all the sadness and tears from your life and fill your life with joy and happiness as long as I live. My Nahar' s happiness is most important to me than anything else. I also want to marry you as soon as possible. . I cannot stay away from you anymore. I love my Nahar so much." Says Saloni getting emotional taking Nahar's hand in hers. They both hug each other and kiss.
They both finish cooking . They freshen up and change and decide what to do about celebration tomorrow .Narpat Ambika, Sahil and Shweta arrives and have dinner. When Saloni tells Ambka Nahar made everything. Ambika is surprise.
"Saloni you are lucky when ever you don't want to cook you can just order jawaisa to make food for you. I wish your papa can cook like Nahar!" says Ambika jokingly.
"I would love to cook food for your daughter mummyji. But she is way better cook then me. As for papaji when ever you feel like eating food cooked by papaji call me and papaji and I wll cook it for you." Says Nahar politely. Narpat smiles.
Saloni does puja then do arati of sahil and teases him to quicikly get married and give her bhabhi. Sahil gives her and Nahar gifts. They all are so happy. Nahar calls Sumer they too have gathered for bhaiduj and Narpat talks to him and asks Sumer to come back. Sumer promises to come at his earliest convience.

Next day Saloni, Nahar, Neel and Neeta gets together in a nice restaurant. Saloni feels first time that Neel and Neeta are feeling awkward in front of them. Neeta is trying to sit close to Neel but Neel moves away.
"Neel are you embarrassed because of me and Nahar siting here. We can go out for few minutes if you want. Let us go Nahar ". She holds Nahar's hand and pretends to leave.
"Saloni don't even try. No I am not embarrassed at all. I got my best friend as my lover why should I? But I am not going to spare you. I hope Naharji don't mind me hitting my friend."says Neel hits Saloni gently on her back. Then he hugs and kisses Neeta on her lips. Neeta tries to move away but he holds her and kisses her. Neeta blushes and gets tears of joy in her eyes and thnaks Saloni with her eyes. Saloni smiles.
"Neel you are an inspiration to me. Now it is my turn to kiss my girl. Thank you Neel. Says Nahar smilingly. Then Nahar grabs Saloni hard and kisses her. Now Saloni is blushing. They enjoy the dinner.
"Neel do you consider me your friend? I feel like you are my younger brother and I always hear so many nice things about you. Since I don't have close family would you be my younger brother?" asks Nahar.
"Sure Naharji. I don't have any family either. I love to be your younger brother and then I will be Saloni's devar then I can bother her and order he around. But I will never call you bhabhi saloni because you will be still my best friend and our little Saloni." Says Neel smiling mischievously. Saloni shows him her thumb.

"Ok Neel now you have accepted me as your older brother. You have to do something for me. I will not pressure you till your college finishes but I need someone very trustworthy in my business. Would you like to be my partner. I will invest money and we will work together with 50/50 partnership. I cannot trust any stranger or relative in my business. But I trust you 100%. I have a partner now but he needs money so he wants to get out and I need another partner. By accepting this you will do Saloni and me a big favor so what do you say? No pressure and take your time." Asks Nahar being very serious. Saloni and Neeta are so happy and the all look at Neel.
"Sure Nahar ji why not. Glad to be your younger brother, your partner and Saloni's devar Neeta's lover now and later her husband." Says Neel looking very happy. He shakes Nahar's hand and they both hug. Saloni and Neeta also hug each other and get tears of joy in their eyes.

In the car Saloni hugs and thanks Nahar.
"You are amazing. All this years we tried to help Neel so many times but he never accepted it and you told him once and he agreed. I love you so much today and I am so proud that I will be married to a most wonderful human being. You are truly remarkable. Thank you for coming in my life. First you made Neeta happy today you made Neel happy. Their happiness means a world to me after you and my family. Today I want to scream and tell everyone how much I love my Nahar. " says Saloni and gets very emotional and hugs him tight then hold his face in her hands kisses him everywhere on his face and lips. Nahar is so happy and smiles. Nahar starts the car and they drive to Saloni's home.

To be continued




Edited by ramas - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
yey! I'm the first one to post.

......INCREDIBLY ROMANTIC!!! ( I loved it) All the cute scenes with the two perfect couples. Especially nahar in a chef's hat but before thatm him sleeping in saloni's lap and saloni going to sleep. I can completely imagine that. It was great.

......INCREDIBLY ADDICTING!!! Your stories are like smoking, though i've never tried mind you. But i've heard that smoking is very addicting and if you really get addicted you can't go without it for long or else you would get sick. With me i'm completely addicted to your stories. If i don't read a new one every couple of days then i'm story sick.

In short, this was just another one of your great stories. I loved it's romance and i hope to see more romantic scenes between nahar and saloni soon. I know they're coming since nahar and saloni will get married soon!!!!!(squeal) In the end when saloni was about to scream with love.........awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Once again, can't wait for another fun-filled, incredibly romantic, superbly written episode by you rakshadidi.

Your loyal fan,
Nita
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh and putting the kajal from her eyes. (INCREDIBLY CUTE!!!!!) Loved it! Also really like how you don't take an issue and prolong it FOREVER-------------- like the real serial does. I loved the way you solved this one (sweetly and romantically (If that's a word).
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