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I loved this Episode #6 Engagement and Nahar's Jealousy. I loved all the episodes. Excellent writing 👏
Thanks mamis for nice comments.
I loved this Episode #6 Engagement and Nahar's Jealousy. I loved all the episodes. Excellent writing 👏
Thanks mamis for nice comments.
Preview Episode #7
Nahar is home expecting Saloni to come and he can explain why he left?
Saloni wins the best actress and Drama wins trophy but Saloni is sad.
She can't wait to see Nahar and talk to him. She just keep seeing angry and upset Nahar and feels sad.
As soon as Drama ends She asks Samar to take her to Nahar. Ambika opposes But she requests Ambika agrees.
She comes and applogize to Nahar for upsetting him.
Nahar sees her red eyes and appologize to her. He breaks down and talks about his life and how much Saloni means to him.
Saloni tells him about How much Neel has done for him and no one means to her as much s Nahar does.
Nahar tells her he wants to get married immidately.
Saloni says she wants to wait till her college finishes
They have argument over it. Saloni explains her reasons and Nahar agrees.
They finally kiss and make up.
Nahar tells her he did not have food entire evening and Saloni says the same. Nahar cooks for her and feeds her.
By the time Saloni leaves it is 4 am.
When she gets home Ambika is still awake and very upset
Read the next episode to read how naahr Saloni kiss and make up and what happens to saloni after she goes home.It is a one very emotional and Romamtic episode
Originally posted by: angel_83191
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Love At First Sight
Episode #7 Nahar's Past
Seeing Saloni crying Nita asks the reason for Nahar leaving?
" Nita whatever I tell you, you have to promise me not to tell anything to Neel. Naahr thinks Neel loves me. I am sure he got bothered by 2 of us working together and left. How can he think that way? We 3 are best friends from childhood. I never thought about Neel that way. I should not have worked in the drama and upset Nahar." says Saloni crying.
"Saloni I think Nahar is right. I had also suspected this for a long time. But could not say fearing you might feel bad. I have a same feeling for Neel that Neel has for you." confessed Nita. Saloni was shocked and about to say something then she saw Neel coming there and Saloni stops crying. Neel asks her if anything is wrong. Saloni tells him just something went in her eyes and bothering her. She signs Nita not to tell Neel anything. They all watch the program. Finally they announce winners Saloni and Neel wins best actor actress award and their Drama first prize. Saloni and Neel congratulate each other. Saloni pretends to be happy but just wishing that the award ceremony is over soon then she can go to see Nahar.
As they leave Saloni asks Sahil to take her to Nahar's place. Ambika says it is late and see should go tomorrow. Saloni insists that she needs to see him tonight as she saw him upset leaving hall. She won't be able to sleep if she did not see him tonight. Narpat tells Ambika to let her go. They reach Nahar's house. Nahar invites them in but Narpat says it is late and they should go home. But they will leave Saloni and she can come home with him. Thay all leave.
Saloni was holding her tears all this time cries loudly hugging Nahar.
"I am sorry I hurt you. I know you are very upset with me. I saw you leaving very angry. I should not have participated; But Neel has done a lot for me. Neel is the one who gave me the confidence to start my singing and dancing. I had a talent but never had courage to do anything. One day I was singing and he came by and heard me and forced me to learn. He is the one who taught me to sing .Nita me and Neel are childhood friends. I was always the shy one so they always took care of me like younger sibling even though we are same age. First time I went on the stage, I was 7 years old. I started crying rather than performing. Neel took microphone from my hand and started singing in between the music he told me to sing with him closing my eyes. While I was singing he stopped and I finished the song myself. Every time I got upset he will bring his drums and starts beating them and I will start dancing. He always took care of me whenever I was upset. Even though he has no parents and lives with his distant uncle and supports himself. If I had said no to accept the role I am sure I would have broken his heart. I only have admiration for him for what he has done for me. But then I ended up breaking your heart. Please forgive me. I only love you and you are the only person who matters most to me in this world. I can not see you hurt. I cried so much after you left." says Salonil with tears in her eyes.
Nahar wiping her tears and hugging her and gently massaging her back tells her.
"Saloni please don't cry. You are breaking my heart. Please stop. I am really sorry. I made you cry. I sometimes behave like a small child and do stupid things. I walked out from there in anger and could not concentrate on anything. I just kept seeing Neel and You and feeling jealous. Then I came to my senses and wanted to come back. But I felt so ashamed for behaving like child and decided against it. I know how much you love me. But you don't know how much I love you. For me you are the only person exist in my world. Saloni your Nahar is very alone and lonely in this whole wide world. I don't know If I ever loose you than what will happen to Me." said Nahar crying and kissing her all over starting from her head. When he kisses her lips Saloni stops him.
"Nahar I want to be with you as much or more. But we should not cross our limits. We don't want to do something we regret later. I am yours and always be yours. But we will wait till we get married to have physical relations. Please don't cry. I can't see my Naahr that way. Don't ever feel alone. Every time you feel lonely just close your eyes and extend your arms. You will find me in your arms." Says Saloni lovingly and hugs and gently rubs his chest and kiss on his heart. She hears his heart beating very fast.
" Saloni you will never know what is loneliness is like. You have mama, papa , brother sister and friends. I lost my parents when I was barely 10 years old. My parents got killed in the car accident coming from a party and my dad was drunk. My mom was pregnant that time. I was so excited that I will have brother or sister. I will never forget that night. I was feeling very uneasy but finally had gone to sleep. My uncle came to wake me. We went to hospital my dad was already dead but my mom was still hanging there and wanted to see me. I sat by her and she held my hand and said something and gave my hand in uncle's hand and closed her eyes forever. I cried and cried. Sumer uncle is very nice and loving. But aunty is very mean. She told me so many times when I was growing up that I am manhoos and because of me my parents got killed. She always treated me badly and made me feel stranger in my own home. They were living off my dad's wealth but she always treated me like I was living off uncle's wealth. Few times uncle saw it uncle aunty had so many fights about me. Then uncle sent me far away to study. She also taught my cousins to treat me badly. So every time I went there it was like I was stranger in my own home. As I got older and started understanding things her treatment changed. But I cannot go to my own house and stay there now because I see my mom in the every corner of my home and how aunty treated me. Uncle tells me so many times to come for holidays. But I rather live here alone than go to those painful memories. So I stay here alone. Pay attention to my business. I have few friends. But not like your friends." says Naahr feeling very sad. Saloni feels like crying so much but controls her tears and comforts and hugs him. They sit on the bed. Naahr lies on Saloni's lap while Saloni plays with his hair and gently kisses his head.
" I wish I can take all the bad memories and pain from your life. I am with you and I will always be with you. I will never let you feel lonely again. Your saloni is by your side always. I love you so much and you now have whole family, mama,papa, Sahil. , Shweta and me. You have to come and stay with us more often." says Saloni lovingly and kisses his forehead.
"You know what Saloni I feel like not letting you go and marry you tomorrow morning and keep you here with me Would you marry me tomorrow please." says Nahar lovingly getting up from her lap and holding her hands.
"I also like to marry you right now and stay here and never leave you, but I have to finish my school. You have just started your business that needs lot of your time. You also have to travel a lot. If you would leave me alone how would I live? It is only 5 months left for my school to finish. Then you will have more time and I will be able to be with you without worrying about my exams and school. I want to spend at least 2 weeks day and night when we will be alone and no one else there." says Saloni lovingly and hugs him again while Naahr plays with her hair. He kisses her neck and her forehead.
"Yes madam your wish is my command and we will do whatever your heart desires. It makes perfect sense. But still my desire to be with you will not be fulfilled soon. I forgot to tell you uncle has asked us to go to our estate for diwali. He is going to call papa regarding this. So we will have Diwali together and hopefully this time I won't feel bad there because my Saloni will be with me there all the time. Oh saloni I love you so much. And I am very hungry. I did not eat anything after lunch. What about you. "Says Nahar hugging her,
"I too did not have any food after lunch. I was too worried about drama then you got upset so I could not eat anything afterwards. I am also very hungry. I was wafting for you to ask me. But you never asked me. I forgot to tell you I got a trophy and our drama also won first prize. And Nita loves Neel. She told me tonight. We have to do something to get them together." says saloni smilingly holding his face in her hands and gently kissing his eyes.
"Congratulations I have no doubt in my Saloni's ability. Sorry you had to starve because
of me. Now your humble servant will make food for you while you seat and rest. You are not allowed to touch anything in my kitchen madam. One hot plate is coming up. He carries saloni in the kitchen and put her on the chair. He mixes batter for egg less omelet. Cuts onion tomatoes and chilles and cooks like professional while Saloni is admiring him. He brings first omelet to Saloni and starts feeding her while 2nd one sizzles. Saloni feeds him the 2nd one. They both bite each others hand while feeding each other. Saloni looks at the clock and the time is 3-45 am she panics.
"Oh my God when I came here it was 11-30 pm. We spent so much time together. But I still feel like spending more time with you. I feel like time should stop and I can stay with you forever but I know mama must be up and will be very upset. Would you please take me home now?" says Saloni begging. Nahar takes her home. Saloni rings the doorbell. Ambika opens the door and asks Naahr to stay there. But nahar refuses and leave.
" Saloni you spent over 4 hour that also at night time. You should know better. I did not expect this from you. You disappointed me very much.Wait till you get married. I hope you did not do anything you are not supposed to do lado. At this age it is hard to control your feelings and emotions. Mistakes do happen that young girls your age regret whole their life." Says Ambika firmly.
"Sorry mama I took so long. But rest assure Mama we will never do anything we are not suppose to do. Naahr was very upset. He was crying remembering his parents and told me everything that happened to him while he was growing up and we talk about so many things. How can I leave him alone when he is upset and crying? Mama naahr has suffered a lot and he is very lonely can we invite him here more often? We are the only family he got." Says Saloni lovingly. Ambika tells her she will do that and kisses her head and leave. Saloni goes to bed very happy. Tonight Naahr is also very happy and feels so close to saloni and goes to sleep.
To be continued
Your comments are welcome and awaited.
Now the song dedication
Saloni sings to Nahar after Nahar cries telling his life story
Agar mujhse Muhobbat hai mujhe sab apne ghum dedo
In ankho ka harek ansoo mujhe mere sanam dedo
agar mujhse muhobbat hai
Nahar Saloni to each other
jeet hi lenge baazi humtum Prem ka bhawra chhute na
Pyar ka bandhan janam ka bandhan
janam ka bandhan chhute na
Milane ki khushi na milne ka gum
khatme zagde ho jaye
Tu tuna rahe mai mai na rahu ek dujhe me kho jaye
Mai bhi na chodu pal bhar daman tu bhi pal bhar ruthena
pyar ka bandhan janam ka bandhan
janam ka bandhan chhute na pyar ka bandhan chhute na
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