SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: nicole22

I love it you are such a good writer. keep up the great jobπŸ‘

can't wait for the next part.

Thanks for your sweer comments dear πŸ˜ƒ
I will update really soon
with love Reena
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
you're great di! sorry for replying so late.. was so busy with school etc. no manisha anymore .. well .. thnx again for including me (or atleast my name πŸ˜†) in this amazing ff =$ great great great update, can't wait for the next part.. do continue soon!.. love love love..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: xmanisha

you're great di! sorry for replying so late.. was so busy with school etc. no manisha anymore .. well .. thnx again for including me (or atleast my name πŸ˜†) in this amazing ff =$ great great great update, can't wait for the next part.. do continue soon!.. love love love..

Thanks a lot dear...You comments means a lot for me πŸ˜ƒ
Hmm hamaari rishtey mein no sorry...I understand that you were busy
Well you will come back soon in my story πŸ˜‰ I'm glad you loved it
I will update really soon...all the best with school
With love Aapki Reena di
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
wait anaxiouly di........................................................πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Will post the next part tomorrow
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Part 5
Neel took her hair away from her face and they looked in each other eyes. Saloni was suprised to see Neel in front of her...she left the boxes and it felt on the ground.
Saloni: What are you doing here...? Didn't Nahar paid the bill of yesterday..?
She takes her purse and was talking to herself..''these mens.. they can have a diner with you in a expensive restaurant but when they have to pay...'' Neel had to smile and Saloni looked up...he took her purse and closed it.
Neel: I'm Neel...
Saloni: Yeah?so what...? How much was it...? please tell me quick...I have to do many other things
Neel: I'm your other housemate...Nahar had told you about me...the very lazzy Neel.
They look at each other and it took a while before Saloni realised that Neel was her other housemate. She started to laugh and told him sorry..they gave each other a hand. Neel told her that he will help her to bring her stuff inside...they were both bringing the boxes and bags inside and on the same time Neel told her about his life and work.
After a hour when they had bring all the boxes and bags inside they were really tired. Saloni let herself fall on the couch while Neel has bring something to drink. She took a glass of juice and pulled her shoes off. Neel was looking at her and he couldn't stop looking at her...she was really beautiful. She had done her hair together with a pin..and she was wearing a green dress.
Neel had switched the tv on and he was watching a cricket match. Saloni told him that she will take a shower and get some rest..Neel nodded his head and told her if she need something she must say it.
In the evening when Saloni came out of her room...she couldn't sleep. Neel was already in his bedroom and she heard him snoring. She was walking through the hall when she saw Nahar's room...the door was open. She looked quicky in his room...it was a beautiful room. Than she went to the terrace and saw Nahar there...he turned to her and they looked at each other. Saloni took a chair and sat beside him... she smiled.
Saloni: What are you doing here so late...?
Nahar: I couldn't sleep...whenever I can't sleep I come here and watch to the dark sky and the beautiful stars. It gives me the peace I need.
Saloni looked up to the dark sky...she told Nahar that it is really beautiful. He looked at her and smiled...he asked her about Neel and she told him everything. They were talking with each other till late in the evening...it was starting to get cold. Nahar pulled a scarf arround Saloni and told her that they must go inside now. Before Saloni went to her room she gave Nahar a kiss on his cheek and wished him sweet dreams...Nahar doesn't knew what to do after that kiss and smiled to her and whent to his room.
The next morning when Neel woke up he saw Nahar and Saloni in the kicthen. Nahar was reading the newspaper and Saloni was making breakfast for them. She saw Neel and asked him what he wanted to eat...he told her that he wanted a toast with jam. Nahar told Neel that a girl Sania had came in the morning for him...Neel smiled and asked him what she told him. He told him that she will be wait for you by the restaurant. Neel took his bag and went to the door...Saloni yelled after him that his toast was ready but it was too late...he already left
Nahar smiled and told Saloni that if it is about a girl than Neel is the first one there. They eat their breakfast and they left to go their work.
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This part is special for my sweet Nazia di...I really want to make you happy these days, and for my Raksha di, Simran di, Manisha and my great friends Judy and Arpana.
and ofcourse for all the SP fans
Sorry for the mistakes...I hope you all will like it
Will continue really soon
Edited by jaanlover - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
great part di as like other and also i am the first to commentπŸ˜‰
so the love story of nahar saloni begining ....and this time no longer wait for next part please di..........πŸ˜‰
aaj ke liye itna bas because i am not felling well but aap ke part ke liye sub kuch fevar
take care di. and no longer wait for next part,and no exuses ok........πŸ˜‰
your loving sister swati.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
It's really good, its a nice modern story. Love the exchanges between the characters..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: arpana_j

great part di as like other and also i am the first to commentπŸ˜‰

so the love story of nahar saloni begining ....and this time no longer wait for next part please di..........πŸ˜‰
aaj ke liye itna bas because i am not felling well but aap ke part ke liye sub kuch fevar
take care di. and no longer wait for next part,and no exuses ok........πŸ˜‰
your loving sister swati.

Thank you so much sweetheart. Your comments are really sweet and it means a lot for me.
I'm happy that loved the new part 😊
You are not feeling well...take some rest dear and get well soon. I will pray that you will feel better really soon.
I will update really soon
With lots of love aapki Reena di
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Oh Reenu, Excellently put together. Keep up the good work.
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