SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 3
Neel was at work in the restaurant when a young girl came in. It was Dia...she is one of the girlfriends of Neel. Actually she was because Neel has broke up with her a few days ago. Ofcourse the same story...she really loved him and she wanted to marry him. Neel had told her that he likes her but not the same way she does. They had a quarrel...and Neel left her alone.
It was the first time when they meet each other after that day. Neel walks to her table and give her the menucard. She takes the card and looks him right in his eyes...he smiles and ask her if she is fine.
Dia: One coffee please
Neel: I know you are angry..but we can still talk normally..right..?
She looked the other way...and Neel wrote the order on his paper. He asked her if she wanted anything else but she didn't gave a answer so he left to the kitchen. After some minutes he gave her the coffee...and he went right back to his work.
Boutique
Saloni had her own boutique in the Abbey Road. She had started to save money for her boutique when she was 11 years old. It was her dream to have her own boutique and when she was 20 years she had opened this boutique in London.
After she saw the room in the morning she went to the boutique. She gave a customer advice about some clothing styles when her best friend Manisha called Saloni on her phone. Saloni asked her colleague if she wanted to help the customer. She went to her room and took the phone.
Saloni: How are you Manisha...? It's so long ago we talked with each other.
Manisha: Yes..I was so busy with work and the kids. But we have much to talk about so what do you think...shall we meet each other tonight at the restaurant in the Pudding Lane. Aryan will work today at home so he will take care of the kids.
Saloni: I think that's a wonderful idea..see you at 5 o'clock in the Pudding Lane.
Manisha: Okay...bye
Restaurant
It was almost 5 o'clock when Neel went outisde to throw the trash in the container. He turned around and saw a beautiful lady on a bike. She put her bike against a tree and locked. She was wearing a black dress and black shoes with high heels. She had a blue scarf around her and open hair. She went inside and Neel ran after her...he looked at her. She was standing by the bar and there was nobody to help her so he walked to the bar.
Neel: Hello madame, how can I help you...?
Saloni: Hai..I have a table reserved for two. It's on the name Saloni
He looked in the guestbook and told her that it's table 25. He took her scarf and brought her to the table.
Neel: Do you want to drink something while you are waiting...?

Saloni: A glass of water please...

Neel went to bar and after a minute he came back with a glass of water. Saloni was looking at some fashion magazines and smiled to Neel when he gave her the glass of water. He went back to the bar... but he was still staring at her.

After a half hour Nahar came to the restaurant...he went to Neel and started to tell about what happend in the morning. He told him that Saloni has taken the room. Neel heard it but he gave no attention...he was still looking at Saloni. She was sitting there alone...he thought that if he was her boyfriend he would never let her wait so long.
Saloni phone goes...it was Manisha. She couldn't come because her husband had a urgent meeting so she had to take care of her kids. Saloni told her that it's no problem and that they will make a new appointment. She thought that she can better order something here because otherwise she had to cook at home.
She turned to the bar and saw Nahar there...they look in each other eyes. Neel was also looking at her...and he thought that she was looking at him. Saloni waved to Nahar...and both Nahar and Neel waved back
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I will update really soon. Hope you all like it πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by jaanlover - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Reena jaan..😊😊

such a cute update =)
i loved it so much...
i like the sense of fashion Saloni favors..
bechara Neel..
so Saloni is alone with two hot guys.. her new housemates.. cool..
I loved it so much...
I can truly Imagine and picture the scene..

have a great day.. take good rest.. no tension.. stress free.. relax..
all d best ..

hugs n kisses
shobby (aap ki Fan and friendπŸ˜›πŸ˜› )
Edited by shobbybee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AHAHAHA, diiii .. that's such an amazing surpriseeeee!!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† hahaha, omg .. MANISHAAA πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ofcourse i wasn't there .. agar mein hoti toh kab ka Nahar mere peechche aajata 🀣🀣 omg .. thats too good diiiiiii ... i loved itt t.. thnx a tonnnnnnnnnn.... great episode .. love triangle has started ... omg .. can't wait till next partt & sorrryy for my looong comment loveeee, manisha <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: shobbybee

Reena jaan..😊😊

such a cute update =)
i loved it so much...
i like the sense of fashion Saloni favors..
bechara Neel..
so Saloni is alone with two hot guys.. her new housemates.. cool..
I loved it so much...
I can truly Imagine and picture the scene..
have a great day.. take good rest.. no tension.. stress free.. relax..
all d best ..
hugs n kisses
shobby (aap ki Fan and friendπŸ˜›πŸ˜› )

Thank you so much my jaan...Your comments are always so warm and generous
You always make me feel so good πŸ˜›
I'm very happy that you loved it...
Hmm...Saloni with two hot guys...let's see what will happen πŸ˜‰
I will update really soon dear
Take care and have a wonderful day
Aapki dost Reena
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: xmanisha

AHAHAHA, diiii .. that's such an amazing surpriseeeee!!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† hahaha, omg .. MANISHAAA πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ofcourse i wasn't there .. agar mein hoti toh kab ka Nahar mere peechche aajata 🀣🀣 omg .. thats too good diiiiiii ... i loved itt t.. thnx a tonnnnnnnnnn.... great episode .. love triangle has started ... omg .. can't wait till next partt & sorrryy for my looong comment loveeee, manisha <3

Jaanu...I'm happy that you loved my suprise πŸ˜ƒ
Tum bhi naa...haan haan jab tum waha pe hoti to Nahar aap ki hi peeche aa jaata...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Lekhin line bahot lambhi hai...kyon ki mein bhi line mein hoon Nahar ke liye πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Thanks for your wonderfyl and very sweet comments. It means a lot for me
Yepz..Love trianle has started....
Will update really soon
Aapki Reena di
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

very nice part di! i really liked it. cool and nice........!

you again prove that you are nice writer.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpana_j

very nice part di! i really liked it. cool and nice........!

you again prove that you are nice writer.

Thanks you so much dear...You are such a sweetheart
I will update really soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
I have write the first part already of my new update...I will write the last part tonight and post the new update tomorrow in the evening.
Have a wonderful Sunday
With love Reena
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaanlover

I have write the first part already of my new update...I will write the last part tonight and post the new update tomorrow in the evening.

Have a wonderful Sunday
With love Reena

that's great di!
can't wait .. 😊😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have write the first part already of my new update...I will write the last part tonight and post the new update tomorrow in the evening.
Have a wonderful Sunday
With love Reena
Thank you di! yor are so sweet.........
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