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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Interesting intro
Looking to read this one..
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Congratulations on your new story
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Introduction is just Captivating

looking forward to reading this story
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u so much friends 4 supporting my 1st DiRa SS

Is loving you a mistake? Part 1

Sharmishtha arranged dinner.
Shekar came for dinner.
Shekar:Where is Diya?
Sharmishtha:I will call her now.
She went to Diya's room to call her.She was shocked to see an unconscious Diya.
She shook her body:Diya...wake up beta.
Diya did not respond.
The tensed Sharmishtha screamed:Shekar...
Shekar came running.
Shek:What happened Sharmi?
Shar:Diya is unconscious.
He was shocked:What?
They called the doctor home.
Dr:Don't be scared.Nothing is wrong with Diya.She will wake up soon.
Shar:Then why is she like this?
The doctor became dull:Diya is in school.Right?
Shar:Yes,12th STD.
Slowly Diya opened her eyes.
Dr:Sorry to say that Diya is pregnant.
Shekar,Sharishtha and Diya were shocked.
The doctor went out.Sharmishta saw Diya with open eyes.
Diya was scared:Maa...
Sharmishtha slapped her.Diya was in tears.
Shekar:How did this happen Diya?
Diya was crying.

Sharmi:Your friendship with Ratan crossed the border.Right?
Diya cried silently.
Sharmi:Ratan and you broke the trust of the parents.

Diya cried:Sorry ...please forgive me.
Shekar and Sharmishtha hugged her weeping.Diya's sister Sanjana too joined them tearfully.


Shekar and Sharmishta met Ratan's parents Ahem-Gopi.They were shocked to know it.
Ahem-Gopi started beating Ratan.
Ahem:We sent you to school to study.But you went to school for this?
Gopi:Are you not ashamed Ratan?You are just in school.But you made your friend pregnant?Do you know what you did?



Ratan was not able to face his parents.
Gopi cried:Since Ratan is my old child I pampered him a lot.That's why he became like this.
Ahem:Gopi,don't blame yourself.It's not your fault.It's completely his fault.He misused the freedom we gave him.
Sharmi:Not only Ratan,our daughter Diya is also responsible for it.
Shekar:We should find a solution.
Sharmi:Abortion?

Gopi-Ahem were shocked.
Gopi:No..please don't abort the baby.It's our grand child.Why should we punish an innocent child?
Can't we conduct Ratan-Diya's wedding?
Shekar:Ratan is younger to Diya.He is only in 10th STD now.Means only 15 years old.We need to wait till he turns 21 to get them married.Diya will turn 18 in a year.Is wedding practical?
Ahem:Can't you all wait?
Gopi:Ratan and Diya have to get married.They can't erase what happened.They love each other.
Shekar:Ok...then I have an idea.We will shift to US as I already had thoughts about it.If the delivery is there our reputation will also be not ruined.after 6 years we will return and that time Ratan and Diya can get married.
Ahem-Gopi smiled.


Shekar Sharmishtha took Diya's TC from the school.
Diya-Ratan met each other.
They shared a painful eye lock.
Ratan:A small mistake of ours is taking you away from me.
Diya:Wish we never did that mistake.Then this would not have happened.We could have been together.

Ratan:Ya.I will miss you Diya.
Diya:I will miss you too Ratan.I don't know how I will live without you for 6 years.I hope these 6 years will fly fast.

Ratan:Even I can't wait for these 6 years to pass.

Shekar grabbed her hand:It's time to go Diya,.Come.
They bid good-bye tearfully.



Diya and family reached US.
Shekar looked gloomy.
Sharmishtha:What happened Shekar?
Shekar:Will these 6 years change Ratan and Diya's relationship?Will they both love each other the same way after 6 years too?
Sharmishtha:They will have a baby to bind them together Shekar.Their relationship can't break.


Shekar:I hope so.
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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What!! 17 years old Diya is preggy with 15 years old Ratzz's baby ??😲 She's gonna be teenage mom!! 😲Head twisting moment for me! Your writing gives me heart attackπŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
Anyway, nice writing...πŸ˜‰
Waiting for next part πŸ˜‰
Edited by -Nags- - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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first off all ratan diya relatonship is based on 9 years gap ..if thats removed then its no more rLHN or PPK story ..
this is like a different story ..its not ratan diya story ..only characters named ratan and diya to make rLHN fans read it ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
The story is quite different and rational...
Diya is pregnant with ratan's child in teenage...
Their parents want her to abort the child but they dont want to do that now so they shifted to US...
Now lets see what happens after 6 years...
I just love the plot and storyline...
You nailed it !!
Lovely pics...and eagerly waiting for next
Edited by Riana31 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
controversial story
with separation...
let see where the journey begins...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
Plz pm me
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Nice awesome superb lovely emotional update dear
Thanks for pm
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