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jafg99

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Posted: 6 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Doreman
Loved this update. By this they will come to know how much they care and love for eachother. And also we'll get DIRA scenes😉 Diya naa naa and Ratan yes yes😉

Thanks dear for liking the update...😆😆😆

Dira scenes will start fron next update onwards..

There will be emotions, tom and jerry like fights... and of course Romance (later on).. 😳😳

First two updates didnt have much emotions, as i was little busy with work and i had to post updates soon.. So didnt do the emotional finishing of the scenes..

But in next update, i will add the emotional component..👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014

yeah i liked the bold part .he was a kid back then.somehow she convinced and sent him to london .but now he is a jadoo haha diya games wont work with him 😊

Ya u r right... Diya's mind games wont work on Ratan now... Infact its time for Ratan to play his game 😃😃 on diya😳😳

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jafg99

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Posted: 6 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Waiting
Plz update soon

Ya sure, Plmzaq😊...

Will try my best to post the next update soon...👍🏼

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VARUNI2014

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Posted: 6 years ago

#54

thank u arulya for giving us what we missed badly in RLHN

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Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014
thank u arulya for giving us what we missed badly in RLHN

Welcome Vijaya...😊

M happy that m able to entertain u with DIRA FF..😆😆

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jafg99

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Posted: 6 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon

Thanks plmzaq dear 😆😆😆

M glad u liked the update..

Sorry, Update 2 was posted in a hurry so just forgot to mention abt it in d title.. Will b careful next time..😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

#57

Wait...

WHAT!!!!😲😲

Arulya ka new ff aaya...uske 2 parts post hue...aur mujhe pata nahi chala!!!!😲😲😲

😕

I read them sooo late... 😭😭

Kher... Now that I have read the 2 parts, Arulyaaa...wah wah wah... Majoo aagiyoo!!!😃😃👏

What a merger between ppk and rlhn!👏

Ati uttam!👍🏼⭐️

You have maintained ppk wali Diya's innocence yar... 😊 Thats sweet to read. Rlhn wali Diya kabhi London se aiwi nahi wapis aajaty. Ratan ka aur uske doston ka sar phaad ker aaty!😆😆 No jokes apart, I like this extremely vulnerable side of Diya which we didnt see much in Rlhn. In the show, she was almost always in control of the situation... mujhe show mien Diya ka kabhi koi hasty ya purely jazbaati drastic step yad nahi hai...

Dekha jaye tou shes wrong here...but of course if we consider her vulnerability towards Ratan, something like that is kind of understandable... 😆

I m glad Ratan is more composed and shaant in your FF. You have kinda reversed the roles of both of them which I loved absolutely!👏

Ratan ke haath per jo chot lagy hai, woh kahin uss ne apne dost se jo Diya ke naam se chida raha tha, uski pitayee tou nahi keri hai?😃😃

Writing tou tumari hai hi zabardast... Love the dialogues that you write.. 👍🏼

Kher yar.. buht maza aaya padh ker... abh next update jaldi ker dena dost... 😳😳

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VARUNI2014

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Posted: 6 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Wait...
WHAT!!!!😲😲
Arulya ka new ff aaya...uske 2 parts post hue...aur mujhe pata nahi chala!!!!😲😲😲
😕
I read them sooo late... 😭😭
.
.
.
Kher... Now that I have read the 2 parts, Arulyaaa...wah wah wah... Majoo aagiyoo!!!😃😃👏
What a merger between ppk and rlhn!👏
Ati uttam!👍🏼⭐️
You have maintained ppk wali Diya's innocence yar... 😊 Thats sweet to read. Rlhn wali Diya kabhi London se aiwi nahi wapis aajaty. Ratan ka aur uske doston ka sar phaad ker aaty!😆😆 No jokes apart, I like this extremely vulnerable side of Diya which we didnt see much in Rlhn. In the show, she was almost always in control of the situation... mujhe show mien Diya ka kabhi koi hasty ya purely jazbaati drastic step yad nahi hai...
Dekha jaye tou shes wrong here...but of course if we consider her vulnerability towards Ratan, something like that is kind of understandable... 😆
I m glad Ratan is more composed and shaant in your FF. You have kinda reversed the roles of both of them which I loved absolutely!👏
Ratan ke haath per jo chot lagy hai, woh kahin uss ne apne dost se jo Diya ke naam se chida raha tha, uski pitayee tou nahi keri hai?😃😃
Writing tou tumari hai hi zabardast... Love the dialogues that you write.. 👍🏼
Kher yar.. buht maza aaya padh ker... abh next update jaldi ker dena dost... 😳😳

actually arulya based teh haracters of ratan and diya based on ppk .

in ppk ratan is so sure about his choice since childhood.he is not a confused kid.diya was /is always his PARI. and as for diya in ppk she was married to ratan .so she started loving him since childhood so she ahs that particular emoional connection with ratan even before he returned from london .so she behaved like that.

it was not like she is innocent or anything when she went to london. .we can rather say she was like too emotional at that point of time coupled with 1) seing him after 12 years and being in love with him all these years and she hastily took decision.

where as in RLHN she was just a pehredr to ratan and she did not have any emotional connectivity with ratan till she married him .she has some vulnerability towards ratan before marriage

.that vulnerability also after ratan came from london .before ratan came from london she was just a little bit possessive towards him and that too in a protector kind of way.

Edited by VARUNI2014 - 6 years ago

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jafg99

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Posted: 6 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Wait...
WHAT!!!!😲😲
Arulya ka new ff aaya...uske 2 parts post hue...aur mujhe pata nahi chala!!!!😲😲😲
😕
I read them sooo late... 😭😭
.
.
.
Kher... Now that I have read the 2 parts, Arulyaaa...wah wah wah... Majoo aagiyoo!!!😃😃👏
What a merger between ppk and rlhn!👏
Ati uttam!👍🏼⭐️
You have maintained ppk wali Diya's innocence yar... 😊 Thats sweet to read. Rlhn wali Diya kabhi London se aiwi nahi wapis aajaty. Ratan ka aur uske doston ka sar phaad ker aaty!😆😆 No jokes apart, I like this extremely vulnerable side of Diya which we didnt see much in Rlhn. In the show, she was almost always in control of the situation... mujhe show mien Diya ka kabhi koi hasty ya purely jazbaati drastic step yad nahi hai...
Dekha jaye tou shes wrong here...but of course if we consider her vulnerability towards Ratan, something like that is kind of understandable... 😆
I m glad Ratan is more composed and shaant in your FF. You have kinda reversed the roles of both of them which I loved absolutely!👏
Ratan ke haath per jo chot lagy hai, woh kahin uss ne apne dost se jo Diya ke naam se chida raha tha, uski pitayee tou nahi keri hai?😃😃
Writing tou tumari hai hi zabardast... Love the dialogues that you write.. 👍🏼
Kher yar.. buht maza aaya padh ker... abh next update jaldi ker dena dost... 😳😳

I missed u, yaar.. kahan thi tum???😡

I know its ramazan time😊, and u must be busy.. i thought of sending u a msg, but then thought- msg padhne ke liye bhi to forum par hi aana padega.. and u must b v busy these days, tabhi to tumari koi post bhi padhne ko nahin mili, itne dino se...😕

I was eagerly waiting for ur reviews.. M happy that u liked the merging...😳

In RLHN, diya wasnt in love with ratan in the beginning, thats why we cud see her stronger side v well. But when she fell in love with Ratan, v g ot to see her vulnarable side.. in this FF, since she had always seen her husband in ratan, and he was away from her for 12 long years, so, That situation in London's night club, had hurt her v much.. she cudnt tolerate that..

But here ratan is more composed, with clear thoughts in his mind.. he knows wat diya means to him.. he had been waiting for her for last 12 years.. lets see wat he gonna do to bring diya back..

And yes, the injury in ratan's hand is bcoz of the same reason which u thought... Its good na that Diya left, otherwise socho, ratan aur diya dono milkar, 😡😡uss bande ki kaise dhulaayi karte...

Chalo koi na, poori baat diya ko pata chal hi jaayegi, aur ratan usko manaa hi lega.. I have full confidence in this RATAN..👍🏼

Edited by arulya - 6 years ago

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desiseriesfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Wait...
WHAT!!!!😲😲
Arulya ka new ff aaya...uske 2 parts post hue...aur mujhe pata nahi chala!!!!😲😲😲
😕
I read them sooo late... 😭😭

DIE!

Edited by nancy505 - 6 years ago

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