Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Awesome update arulya!
Absolutely loved the amazing DiRa scene The way he hugged her tight and was confessing his feelings to her!
And I am excited for the mumbai sequence :D
Superb story man, keep it up! 👏
Originally posted by: Doc.love
Veryyy nice update... 👏👏👏 Please post the next update soon... its so hard to wait.. 😳😳😆
Awesome, beautiful...👏 waiting for next update.. update soon...
Originally posted by: DiRa_Love
its awesome Arulya! Ratan ka bulb jal gaya!! he realised his feelings🥳
waiting for the next update
Thinking about how to go ahead in Update V.. Thoughts are still unclear... jaldi se Ratan aur Diya ko mila dun, yaa thoda intzaar karwaoon ratan ko? Aur kya ratan se intzaar hoga bhi ?
Part 5
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Ratan is too excited to go to Mumbai to meet Diya.. But then, he thinks- agar main Mumbai, marriage attend karne to liye, akela jaunga, to Diya aur Kakimasaa ko mujh par shaq ho jayega.. Aisa karta hun, Ayush banna aur Esha bhabhisaa ko bhi, saath aane ke liye puch leta hun.. Wahan par woh mera saath bhi de denge, diya ko manaane mein.. Haan, yeh theek rahega.. He goes and asks both of them if they cud accompany him, they cudn't refuse.. They both want Ratan and Diya to be together and stay happy in their married life... So all three get ready to leave for Mumbai.. In flight, Ratan is quite anxious and tense thinking, how Diya will react to see him, there in Mumbai..He asks Esha - bhabhisaa, agar mujhe wahan dekh kar, diya ko gussa aa gaya to? Esha asks him to relax and says- don't worry datahukum, aapko chinta karne ki bilkul bhi zaroorat nai hai.. Hum apni jiji ko bahut achche se jaante hain, woh aapko dekh kar sirf aur sirf khush hongi.. Aap dekhiyega.. Ratan- aap sure hain? Esha- haan, 100%.. Ratan- aap kahti hain, to main maan leta hun.. He feels little relieved now, after Esha' s assurance..
On other hand, Diya and her Masaa have already reached Mumbai. For them, Sajjan Singh had booked one of the villas, which is quite close to the venue of marriage (a farm house). Masaa takes Diya to first floor room and asks her to keep her luggage in that room, as one can see a great serene view from that room's balcony.. There is a lovely garden around the villa, along with a small swimming pool. Security guards are also posted for their safety. Masaa -Diya, hume umeed hai, aapko yeh jagah theek lagi hogi.. Aapke room ki balcony se, baahar ka bahut khoobsurat nazaara dikhta hai, aapko achcha lagega iss room mein.. Hum wahan neeche waale room mein, apnaa samaan rakhwa dete hain.. Aap, ab thoda aaram kar lijiye, safar mein thak gayi hongi.. Shaam ko hume, ajay haisaab ke wahan jaake, unn sab se milna hai, wahan shaadi ki rasme already shuru ho chuki hain.. Diya- theek hai, masaa. Aap bhi ab aaram kar lijiye..
Diya unpacks her bags.. She goes to balcony.. It's a lovely sunset view she sees from there... She watches the sun setting.. and thinks- Ratan, iss suraj ki tarah, humara rishta bhi doob gaya.. Nahin sambhaal paaye hum, humare rishte ko... Hume maaf kar dijiye, hum apne papasaa ki baat nai taal paye.. unko kahte bhi to kya kahte..? Jab aap humse pyar hi nai karte, to kis haq se..? Kis haq se hum papasaa ko, aapke aur humare divorce ke liye manaa karte.. Hum bhi taiyaar nai hain, divorce ke liye.. Par hum kya karte..? Nai kah paaye hum, papasaa ko kuch.. Aur aap bhi to shayad yahi chahte honge.. Aap bhi to iss shadi se khush nai they.. Hum nai chahte, iss shaadi ka bojh, iski ghutan, aapko aur pareshaan kare.. Hum aapko hamesha khush dekhna chahte hain, Ratan, bas.. Iske liye agar hume apne pyar ko kurbaan karna pade to, hum peeche nai hatenge.. Aapki khushi ke liye hum aapse dur, bahut dur chale jayenge.. Her mind is trying to console her, but her heart is still in deep pain..Her heart still desires for Ratan, love of her life.. Though, diya is trying really very hard to deal with her heartbreak and their separation, but she is not able to get Ratan out of her thoughts.. Her heart.. her mind.. her everything belongs to him.. She belongs to him.. She wants Ratan to be with her, now, and forever.. She wants to spend her whole life with Ratan, in his arms. This is her one and only wish- To be with Ratan, right now, right here.. But she knows that's impossible.. She has now come very far away from Ratan..
Meanwhile, Ratan has also reached Mumbai, along with Esha and Ayush banaa. Ratan- Achcha, Esha bhabhisa, hum Mumbai to aa gaye, ab aage jaana kahan hai..? Ayush- datahukum, aapne humari biwi ko kya samjha hai? Woh pakki planning se aayi hain.. iss baar aapki naiyaa to paar lagwaake hi rahengi, ye.. Ratan- oh achcha..! kya plan hai, fir.. mujhe bhi bataiye, jaldi.. Ratan is so anxious to know the plan.. Esha- plan yeh hai ki, Humne pata kar liye hai, Diya baisaa aur Masaa kahan ruke hain. Humne bhi, hum sab ke liye, unke next waala villa book karwa liya hai..Aur hum sab, wahan jaake, aise behave karenge, jaise hum sach mein, yeh shaadi hi attend karne aaye hai.. aur hume nai pata, ki Diya baisaa aur Masaa bhi yahan aane waale hain .. ok? Ratan- kya? iss sab ki kya zaroorat hai, Esha bhabhisa? I mean, of course diya ke next waale vila ki zaroorat hai, par acting as if we didn't know that Diya and kaakisaa are here, is it needed? Esha-Haan datahukum, it's needed.. Hum nai chahte ki, ab kuch bhi gadbad ho..aap bas humare plan ke hisaab se chaliye.. ok? Ratan doesn't argue more and says- ok.. They leave for their villa. While entering the villa, Ratan just looks around, hoping to catch a glimpse of Diya, from the next villa. Esha knew who Ratan was looking for. Esha - datahukum, bas thodi der aur intzaar kar lijiye.. abhi sham ko hum, shaadi waale ghar jayenge, wahan aap apne pyar se mil lijiyega.. theek hai..? Ayush- apne pyar se, haan? He teases Ratan. Ratan-kya.. ayush banaa..! Aap bhi, na...! (then accepting the fact) waise haan, mera pyaar, DIYA.. bas kuch der aur, uske baad main aapse milne aa raha hun, Diya..
In the evening, Masaa goes to Diya's room, to check if she is ready to go to Ajay Singh' s place.. She asks- Diya? Kya aap taiyaar hain? Diya- haan, Masaa.. hum ready hain.. She is looking so sober, yet very beautiful today.. She is wearing a beautiful peach colored lehnga choli, with bright red colored net dupatta.. She is wearing small beautiful diamond ear studs and red bangles.. She has left her hair open and brought them in front, over one shoulder.. today, she hasn't put kumkum in her hairline, but she is still wearing that small red bindi on her forehead.. Masaa is very happy to see her beautiful daughter.. She picks one red rose from the flower vase and fixes it in her hair, which has added even more freshness and brightness to Diya's beautiful look.. Later, they leave for the Ajay Singh' s place.
On the other hand, Ratan wasn't able to wait till evening. Diya was in his mind every second and he was missing Diya's presence near him.. He wanted both emotional and physical closeness with Diya.. He was eagerly waiting to meet her, see her again. He checked his watch multiple times and he wondered why time is moving so slowly. He again started getting weird thoughts- like wat if diya doesn't agree to meet him... What if she slaps him for trying to meet her again, even after papasaa's warning.. wat if.. wat if.. so many wat ifs ... wat if' just kept flashing in his mind and he was like dying in anticipation.. He tells his mind to stop thinking anything bad... Bas, bahut ho gaya... aaj main diya se woh sab kah kar hi rahunga, jo main unse kahna chahta hun.. uske baad, jo bhi hoga, dekha jayega, mujhe manzoor hoga.. Par apne pyaar ko, ek mauka to dekar hi rahunga.. Now, Ratan knew that love doesn't only mean happiness and togetherness, it also means strength and trust within one's own love.. He assures himself - Mujhe apne pyar par poora baharosa hai.. Agar mera pyar sacha hai, Main apni Diya ko waapis jeet lunga..
Before leaving for the venue, he just checked himself in mirror and he was looking just great.. So handsome that any girl wud love to be with him today. But he didn't want just any girl, he wanted his girl, His Diya. All three leave for the venue.. It's a big venue with grand decoration.. Beautiful place.. And a very lovely evening.. Ratan's eyes are eagerly searching for his Diya.. He is not able to find her.. He asks Esha and Ayush banaa to check.. Esha- haan, haan, datahukum.. Hum yahan iss liye hi to aaye hain.. Chaliye patidev, jaa kar diya baisaa ko dhundte hain.. They both leave to look for Diya, at other places of farm house.. They both found Masaa first.. They go and meet her. They both try to look surprised to see her (as if they didn't know that she was here).. Masaa, aap..? Khamma ghani.. Masaa- khamma ghani, ayush banna, esha baisaa.. Esha- Masaa, aap yahan? Masaa- haan, Woh Hum yahan diya baisaa ke sath aye hain, aapke papasaa nai aa paye iss shaadi ke liye, par ghar se, kisi ko to aana tha na, isliye.. aap log bhi? Ayush- haan, kaakisaa.. hum bhi issi shaadi ko attend karne aye hain, Ajay singh saa ne bahut insist kiyaa shaadi attend karne ke liye, manaa nai kar paye.. Par, agar hume pata hota ki, aap log bhi aane waale hain, to hum sab surajgadh se saath hi aa jate.. chaliye koi baat nai, yahan to mil hi gaye.. Kahan hai Diya baisaa..? Dikh nai rahi woh (this was his real question)?
Masaa- haan, woh wahan pool side par, ajay bhaisaab ki beti, Mehar, bahut zid kar rahi thi.. Diya manaa nai kar payi.. isliye.. Esha- oh achcha..? To woh wahan hain.. Masaa ek minute, shayad humara phone aa raha hai, hum abhi aate hai.. Suniye, aap masaa ke saath rukiye.. Ayush- haan theek hai.. Esha leaves.
Masaa- Ayush banaa, aap dono hi aaye hain, shaadi attend karne? Ghar se koi aur nai aa paya? Ayush- nai, datahukum bhi aaye hain, humare saath.. Masaa gets little worried to hear this, as seeing Ratan here will make Diya sad again... On the other hand, Esha is calling on Ratan's mobile. Esha- datahukum, woh Diya baisa.. Ratan- Diya pool side par hain.. Esha- haan, par aapko kaise pata? Ratan- Mujhe apne pyar ko dhundne main zyaada waqt nai laga, Esha bhabhisaa.. Main unse mil kar aata hun..
Diya was busy talking to Mehar (the bride to be), when she suddenly gets a strange feeling, the same feeling she used to have when Ratan used to be besides her. She just stopped talking.. Her heart told her that Ratan is here.. She cud now recognize his scent.. Next moment she heard her name from the person who mattered the most to her, who owned her.. Diya.. ! says Ratan. Diya hears Ratan's voice, the voice, she wanted to hear all her lifetime.. The voice that cud lighten up her mood in fraction of seconds... The voice that had touched her soul.. The voice that had ability to shoot up her hormones to sky high levels.. Diya turns back to find Ratan standing just behind her.. She cudnt believe her eyes.. Ratan was standing in front of her, just few inches away... though her heart and mind were passionately missing him tonight and she really wanted him to be with her, she cud not actually believe that it has really happened.. or is it just her imagination..
Ratan calls her name again- Diya..! Diya is shocked, as well as so happy to know that that Ratan is actually standing next to her.. He comes close to her.. Diya had wished for it and but now she is not able to cope up with her emotional turmoil, in front of Ratan... She was losing her bearings.. Her heart is extremely happy to see Ratan and is beating really very fast.. She is trying very hard to hold back her feelings but her eyes were saying it all, they are now teary.. Ratan cud see everything, how his presence was making her weak, emotionally.. Diya somehow cud manage to ask- Ratan aap ,yahan? Mehar- Ratan? Kaun? Ratan is totally smitten by her bright, pure, gracious yet sensual looks, today.. He moves closer to diya.. He takes his left hand around her bare waist and pulls her near him and says very proudly- Main, Ratan Maan Singh, iss puri duniya ki sabse khoobsurat lady, Diya, ka eklauta husband.. Ratan gave an amorous look to diya. Diya was surprised to see this sudden change in Ratan's behavior. Yes, he had behaved like this earlier, in front of others.. He had done this before, when they both had to act for their so called fakey marriage.. But, this time it didn't look fake.. It felt real...Very real.. And feelings with which, Ratan said Diya ka husband', were so new, which Diya had never seen. Diya had never experienced it before.. This kind of display of true affection and love... What is it? He is looking, so happy, so excited tonight.. What has happened to Ratan, tonight? - Diya was thinking. She didn't know, but it was Ratan's love for her, which was showing, and cudnt be hidden anymore..
Diya just cud not react in front of Mehar.. She had to allow Ratan to hold herself, but Ratan's touch, that soft unexpected touch of ratan's hand on her waist, was doing something to her.. His scent was making her weak.. She cud feel shivers down her spine.. Her face started blushing and Mehar cud easily see that.. Mehar- Oh, to aap hain, the lucky one.. Ratan- haan, main hi hun, woh lucky one.. aur iss luck ko, ab kabhi bhi, main apne aap se dur nai jaane dunga.. Mehar- kya.. ? Kya kaha aapne? Ratan- nai, kuch nai.. Ratan was enjoying that moment.. He was actually enjoying holding Diya, so close to him.. Diya, the most beautiful lady, he had ever seen.. God's best creation.. His wife.. Right beside him.. The soft and sensitive touch of her body was like soothing Ratan's pain, pain of separation from Diya..
Mehar- Diya ne to mujhe kaha tha ki, aap nahin aa payenge.. Ratan looks in Diya' s eyes and says - haan, par diya se, ek pal bhi dur nai rah paya, to chalaa ayaa, apne pyar ke paas.. Diya just got lost in his eyes, when he said this.. Ratan too cud not take his eyes off diya.. They both wanted to live this moment to its best.. Diya in her mind- pata hai, Ratan.. Aapse yeh sun-ne ke liye humne kitna intzaar kiya hai.. Ratan in his mind- Diya, bas ab intzaar khatm... Looking at them, so much in love, Mehar says- oh.. Wow.. kitna pyar hai aap dono mein.. kitne achche lag rahen hain, aap dono ek saath... This just brings both of them back to their senses.. Chaliye, main ab kabab mein haddi ka kaam nai karungi.. Main ab chalti hun.. Aap dono, please carry on..Enjoy. Mehar leaves..
Diya tries to move away from Ratan, as she feels there is no need to them to act now.. But Ratan is not ready to let her go.. He tightens his grip on her waist.. Diya is surprised to see this.. Diya- Ratan, aapko ab acting karne ki zaroorat nai hai.. Mehar jaa chuki hai.. hume chodiye ab aap.. Ratan- acting kaun kar raha tha? Diya- kya matlab? Ratan- Haan, diya.. maine jo kuch bhi abhi kaha, sab sach tha.. Mujhe bahut kuch kahna hai aapse, aap plz chaliye mere sath.. Ratan holds her hand and takes her to one corner.. He is holding her against the wall, he is so close to her now, that they can feel each other's breath.. Diya is trying to let herself free from Ratan's tight grip... Diya- Ratan, hume ab kuch nai sun-na.. hume chodiye... humara divorce hone wala hai.. ab inn sab baton ka kuch matlab nai.. aap hume.. Before Diya cud say anything more, Ratan places his finger on her mouth- Ssshsh..!. Diya, bas ab ek aur shabd bhi nai.. Ab aap kuch nai bolengi.. Main jo kahunga, woh aapko sun-na padega.. Diya is able to see immense passion in Ratan's eyes.. Diya feels helpless in this situation and doesn't say one more word. She surrenders completely..
Ratan now holds her shoulders and says- diya, main jaanta hun, main bilkul idiot hun.. main nahin samajh paya ki pyaar kya hai.. par aapse yun alag hoke, jo baichaini, jo bebasi, jo takleef mujhe hui, woh main aapko bata nai sakta.. Har ek pal, saalon jaisa mahsoos ho raha tha.. Main.. Before he could confess his love properly to Diya, they hear- Diya..? diya baisaa, kahan hain aap? Masaa is searching for her.. Deep within her heart, Diya wanted to hear it all, what Ratan wanted to say. But Diya has to go now, and Ratan too can't ask her to wait any longer.. He loosens his grip over her and moves away from her.. Diya starts walking away from Ratan, then suddenly Ratan holds her hand and stops her.. Ratan- Diya.. mujhe aapse baat karni hai..
Diya turns back and looks into his eyes... She cud see the pain in his eyes, his desire to speak to her, meet her again, the need to show and prove his love for her.. She had not seen Ratan so helpless before, but she cant even stay here with him, any longer.. She just left without saying a word.. Ratan felt so broken.. He got the opportunity to meet Diya and speak to her, but may be- his luck didn't favour him.. Ratan cudnt stop blaming himself and his fate.. Esha and Ayush tried to calm him down and try again later.. But he is inconsolable.. He left that place to spend some time alone.. Esha and Ayush also leave for their villa. Ratan returns back in half an hour. He calls Esha- Esha bhabhisa.. Mujhe aapse ek urgent favour chahiye... Abhi.. Esha- haan, haan, boliye... kya favour? Ratan- aap abhi, issi waqt diya aur kaakimasaa ke paas jaaiye, aur unse kahiye ki aap unhe bahut miss rahi hain... Esha- oh.. ok.. par hum unhe itna miss nai kar rahen.. Ratan- oh..fo.. jhooth nai bol sakti kya aap? Boliye aap unhe bahut miss kar rahi hain, esp diya ko.. aur aaj raat aap unke saath wahin rukna chahti hain.. Aur uske baad, Diya mujhse milne ayengi.. aur esha bahabhisaa, aapko wahan rah kar, yeh sambhalna hai ki, kaakimasaa ko kuch pata na chale.. Esha- ok, aur uske baad? Ratan- uske baad main sambhaal lunga... Esha- par kya aapko yakeen hai, ki Diya baisaa aapse milne aayengi..? Ratan- mujhe itna to bharosa hai, meri diya par.. Woh zaroor ayengi... Aur, Ayush banna sorry, aaj aapko akele hi kaam chalana hoga, bhabhisaa ke bina.. Ratan winks. Ayush responds embarrassingly - haan, haan.. koi baat nai.. Esha-yeh plan kaam to karega na? Ratan- aap bas mere plan ke hisaab se chaliye.. ok.. Aapne bhi yehi kaha tha na, mujhe airport par? Esha- theek hai, datahukum.. aap jaisa kahen.. chaliye..
Esha goes to Diya and Masaa's villa.. She tells them that she was missing both of them badly and had not spent quality time with them since long... They ask her to stay with them for the night (as was planned by Ratan).. After talking to her Masaa for some time, Esha goes to Diya's room at first floor.. She closes the door.. Diya is sitting on a chair.. She is lost in her thoughts.. She is still thinking about wat happened some time back, in farm house.. She is thinking about Ratan.. Wat all he had said, wat all he cudnt say.. But today He was different.. His touch was different.. His emotions were different.. Diya thinks- Shayad mujhe unki poori baat sun leni chahiye thi.. Woh kitna upset, kitna pareshaan lag rahe they, diya.. Har waqt itna sakht-dil kaise ho sakti ho tum.. Jo tumhe theek lagta hai, bas wahi karti ho.. Tumne jab, apne pyaar ka izhaar karne ke plans banaaye they, to unme se kitni baar tumhare plans bhi fail hue they.. par tumne bhi, haar nahin maani, aur kai baar koshish ki.. Ek baar apne aapko ratan ki jagah rakh kar dekho.. kya ratan ko ek aur mauka nai de sakti tum.. Par aaj, jab ratan ne tumse kaha ki, woh baat karna chante hain, tumne to Ratan ki baat ka koi jawaab hi nai diya.. aise hi chali aayi.. ab to Ratan, tumse milna bhi nai chahenge.. sochenge, kitna attitude dikhati hai yeh ladki.. apni zid mein, tum theek se unse mili bhi nai, theek se ratan ko dekha bhi nahin.. She is still trying to clear her doubts, when she again gets that strange feeling.. Her heart tells her- Ratan is here... She goes near balcony.. Ratan is standing there, who had climbed up the balcony with the help of ladder (hiding from the guards).. Seeing Ratan again, made Diya so happy, that she just forgot abt everything else (all that separation or divorce issues). Ratan goes near Diya and hugs her tightly, diya too is responding in same manner. She lets herself free from all the mental restrictions.. This warm hug on such an unexpected moment, was the one thing, these two needed badly at this moment... Hug was so tight, hardly any air cud pass thru the gap between their bodies.. Flesh to flesh contact was just increasing the intensity of their emotions.. Both were so lost in joy that they forgot -Esha had entered the room long back. Esha comes and tries to cough, clearing her throat... huunh..huunh.. They both feel embarrassed and break the hug.. They move little away from each other.. Esha- datahukum.. sab kuch iss balcony ke liye hi plan kiya tha, to mujhe kyu yahan bulaya? Diya- matlab? Esha- haan, diya baisaa, yeh sab datahukum ka plan hai, hume yahan bulanaa.. Ratan- Esha bhabhisaa ko yahan bulaanaa, aur Diya aapko, apne saath, ek khaas jagah le jaanaa.. Diya- kya? Iss waqt, hum kahin nai jaa rahen hain aapke saath.. Ratan- sirf ek baar, Diya.. Mujh par itnaa vishwaas to karti hain na aap? Diya- aap par hume, khud se bhi zyaada vishwaas hai, Ratan... Ratan is so happy to hear this... This is wat he needed, one chance to show his love, one chance to prove his love for Diya...
Diya- par masaa ko pata chalega to? Ratan- ussike liye hi to, esha bhabhisaa yahan hain.. Esha- haan, diya baisaa, hum sambhaal lenge.. Ratan- To chaliye.. Diya- haan, haan... chalte hain, par kahan? Ratan- surprise hai...
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to be continued...
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