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Finally he realised . Diya's expression of emotions 😭and controlling 😭infront of Ratan . Great writing. Waiting for next update.
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Such a fabulous update arulya!
Absolutely amazing!! πŸ‘
The way you concluded that ratan is in love, woww, just loved it! His conquest with the mind and heart was lovely to read.
Kya classic likha hai tumne boss!
Can't wait to read the next part!
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its awesome Arulya! Ratan ka bulb jal gaya!! he realised his feelingsπŸ₯³
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Part 4

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Meanwhile at Diya's home- after Diya returns, she informs her Papasaa that she had to go to kesar mahal for some urgent work, related to their project.. Sajjan Singh gets very upset after hearing this.. Diya tries to make him understand that this project is very important, that's why she had to go.. But Sajjan Singh is not willing to hear or understand any explanation... Sajjan Singh- Diya baisaa, aaj to aap kesar mahal chali gayi, par main nai chahta ki, aaj ke baad aap wahan dobara kabhi bhi jayen.. Waise bhi ab aapka uss jagah se koi rishta nai raha.. Aapke aur datahukum ke rishtey ka koi bhawishya hi nai hai, hum sabko pata hai.. Aur aap bhi yeh achchi tarah se jaanti hain. Fir aap kyun aisa kar rahi hain? Ab Achcha hoga ki, aap khud ko iss nakaamyaab rishtey ke bandhan se azaad kar de.. Humne aaj subah hi ek wakeel se baat kar li hai, woh aapke aur datahukum ke divorce ke papers lekar aata hi hoga..

Diya is very hurt hearing this. Divorce..? Though she knew this had to happen, but so soon.. But wat can she say to her papasaa.. She has no reason to stop him, from going ahead with formalities of her divorce.. She knows, Ratan doesn't love her and they have no future together. It's better that divorce gets over soon, so that at least Ratan can move on with his life, and if it happens early, it's better for Ratan, He can find a better girl, of his type.. Now it's time that she lets him go, to live his life the way he wants.. Sajjan Singh- Diya baisaa, aap jitna jaldi, pichli baaton ko bhula dengi, utnaa hi aapke liye achcha hoga.. Hum aapko kush dekhne chahte hum, bas... Aur haan, Aaj aap papers sign kar dijiye, kyunki kal aap aur aapki masaa, Mumbai jaa rahen hain.. Diya- Par papasaa... Sajjan Singh- Humaare ek bahut khaas dost, Ajay singh, ki beti ki shaadi hai.. Hum shayad nai ja payenge, isliye atleast aap aur aapki masaa to chale jaaiye, humare pariwaar ki taraf se... Jagah badlegi to aapko bhi theek lagega.. Nahi to aap puraani baaton ke baare mein hi sochti rahengi, jo hum bilkul nai chahte.. Diya baisaa, aap ko ab apni aane waali zindagi mein aage badnaa hai.. Diya thinks- Papasaa, hume nai pata aage kya hoga..? Par ratan ke bina, apni aage ki zindagi sochna bhi humare like mushkil hai.. humse nai ho payega.. But she doesn't want to disappoint her papasaa, as her parents had already gone thru a lot becoz of her (when she had left her home 12 years ago, when Abhaysaa rejected her during the marriage, when Abhaysaa questioned Ratan and Diya's relationship and suspected her character, and now in kesar mahal, when he had to bring her married daughter back home). She deoesn't want her parents to suffer anymore, because of her.. So she assures her papasaa that she will obey his words, She will sign the divorce paper and leave for Mumbai tomorrow..

She goes to her room and starts crying badly.. Her masaa comes and tries to console her.. Masaa knows how much Diya loves Ratan and how hard it had been for Diya to leave Ratan.. And now divorce... She advises her- Diya, plz kalkaa ma par bharosa rakhiye.. Shayad yehi aapke bhagya mein likha tha.. Aap dono ko shayad alag hona ho thaa.. Hum jaante hain, yeh sab aapke liye bilkul bhi aasaan nai hoga, par waqt sab zakhmo ko bhar deta hai.. Aap bhi samay ke saath iss sadme se ubhar jaayengi.. Aap zindagi ke iss kamzor mod par, apni himmat nai chodengi... Ek kshtrani hain aap.. Apna hausala banae rakhiye.. Sab theek ho jayega.. Aur Mumbai jaakar, mahoul badlega to, aapka mann bhi thoda halka ho jayega.. Aap chinta mat kijiye.. Aapki masaa hamesha aapke sath hain...

Next morning, in Kesar Mahal: Ratan had been dreaming abt Diya, the whole night.. (DREAM- Diya calls him- Ratan.. Ratan.. uthiye naa! Ratan- nai diya, abhi nai... plz thodi der aur.. Diya- uthiye ratan, bahut der ho gayi hai.. Ratan instead pulls her, close to him and says- aisa kijiye diya, aap bhi mere saath so jaiye.. aaiye.. aaiye naa.. Diya- arey, nai... Nai, kaakusaa... Ratan- kaakusaa? Diya, Aap mujhe kaakusaa kyu bula rahi hain? Diya- kyunki hum diya nai hain, hum Yash hain) Ratan opens his eyes and finds Yash there, who had been trying to wake him up... Ratan- Yash banaa, aap? Aap kab aaye? Yash- jab aap, diya baisaa ko apne saath sone ke liye bula rahe the... Ratan feels very embarrassed to hear this and says- Oh..maine aisa kuch kaha kya? Nai, shayad aapne kuch galat sun liya.. Yash- Hum jaante hain humne kya suna.. aur ab aap humse nai chupa sakte ki, aap ko bhi diya baisaa se bahut pyar hai.. Ratan still not willing to accept this in front of Yash- nai, nai to.. Aisa kuch nai hai. Yash- Aapko pata hai kaakusaa, Diya baisaa ko jab ehsaas hua tha ki woh aapse pyar karti hain, to unhone ghar mein sab se pahle hume hi bataya tha, kyuki woh hume apna sacha dost maanti thi.. Par aap shayad humne apna dost nai maante, isliye aap hume nai batana chahte hain..Chaliye koi baat nai.. Ratan- Arey nai, yash banaa. Aap mere aur diya ke sabse khaas dost hain.. Aur aap bilkul theek samajh rahen hai ki.. Yash- ki?

Ratan- Ki, mujhe diya se pyar ho chuka hai... Haan yash banaa, I am in love... Totally in love with my diya... Aapne kabhi socho tha ki, main.. Main Ratan Maan Singh, kabhi kisi se pyaar karungaa? Itna pyar karunga.. ki khud ko hi bhool jaoon.. Yash- Kaakusaa, Hume bahut khushi ho rahi ki.. Aakhir aapne, diya baisaa ke liye apna pyar, time rahte hi realize kar liya.. chaliye ab kiski wait kar rahen hain? Jaaiye, aur jaldi se diyaa baisaa ko apne dil ki baat kah daliye.. Ratan- haan, yash banaa.. mujhse bhi nai ruka jaa raha... main jaldi se taiyaa hokar, diya ko milne jaata hun.. He goes to get ready..

Ratan gets ready and tries diya mobile number so that he can ask her to meet and speak his heart out... Diya finds her mobile ringing.. Its Ratan's call.. She is about to answer the call, the very next moment she is reminded of wat papasaa had told her last nite.. Hence she prefers not to answer Ratan's call.. Ratan calls again and again... Numerous times... This makes Ratan very restless and anxious.. He asks Yash to make a call to Diya.. Yash also tries Diya's number, but again she doesn't respond (Diya knew that Ratan would have taken yash's help to speak to her). Ratan- Yash banaa, kya Diya ne phone uthaaya? Yash- Nai kaakusaa, unhone phone nai uthaya.. Shayad woh kahin busy hongi... Kuch der baad fir try kariye... Hum bhi try karenge.. Nai to, woh khud bhi phone kar lengi, aapki itni saari missed calls dekh kar... Aap chinta mat kariye.. Ratan- Kaise chinta na karun, Yash banaa... Mujhe diya se abhi baat karni hai, unse milna hai..(Ratan is looking so impatient now) Apne dil ki baat kahni hai, unse, Abhi... Mujhse nai rukha jaa raha... kya main unke ghar chala jaaun? Yash- Nai, bilkul nai kaakusaa.. Plz aisa karne ka sochiye bhi nai... Agar Sajjan tausaa ne aapko wahan dekha, to aapki khair nai.. Baat bigad bhi sakti hai.. Plz kuch der wait kar lijiye.. Ratan- ok.. Ratan eagerly waits for Diya's call.. He also tries her number in between... but neither she answers his calls nor she calls him back... Ratan isn't able to hold back himself any more.. And he takes his car and heads for Diya's home, without thinking abt consequences..

Ratan reaches Diya' s home.. He asks security guard if Diya is inside.. Security guard knows Ratan and says- Haan datahukum, diya baisaa ghar par hi hain.. Ratan- Aur kaakusaa? Kaakisaa? Security guard- Nai datahukum, woh dono bahar gayen hain..

Ratan is happy to hear this.. Ratan goes inside the house and heads straight to diya's room. Diya is sitting near the window, thinking about Ratan.. Her face looks very sad and her eyes are teary.. Wind coming thru the window, is blowing her hair strands.. Ratan enters her room and finds Diya.. He goes near Diya.. Diya is not able to notice him, as she is lost in her thoughts.. Ratan calls Diya..

Ratan- diya..? Diya turns her head to look back, she finds Ratan standing just behind her... As soon as she turns back, Ratan hugs her tightly, very tightly (as if his heart needed her, to beat again)... Diya is also very happy to see her Ratan back, she too hugs him passionately, as she had been missing him very badly.. Both don't utter a word, as they just wanted to live this moment fully. They found immense emotional happiness in each other's arm and the physical contact of their bodies, just increased the intensity of their hug.. Both didn't want this moment to end.. They were at peace with this long and sublime hug and their souls, their heartbeats had become one, this moment..

Ratan (still hugging diya)- diya, maine aapko bahut miss kiya.. bahut, bahut zyaadaaa.. kab se aapke milne ki koshish kar raha hun.. aapke jaane ke baad laga, jaise maine khud ko hi kho diya ... jaise dil ne dhadakna hi band kar diya.. jaise main sirf ek bejaan laash hun... Diya is not saying anything, she is just listening to ratan... Ratan- Diya, nai rah sakta hun, main aapke bina... ek din bhi nai,, ek pal bhi nai..Diya is trying to understand wat ratan wants to say.. Ratan- Diya, mujhe maaf kar dijiye.. Main jantaa hun, main bahut duffer hun, bilkul idiot hun.. Na to main aapke pyaar ko samajh paaya, Nai hi apne... Par, aap to mujhe bahut achche se jaanti hain, main aisa hi hun.. Mujhe nai samajh aati, yeh baaten, aasani se.. plz mujhe maaf kar dijiye.. Ab mujhe ehsaas ho gaya hai, diya...Diya's heart starts beating fast, thinking wat ratan is gonna say now..Ratan- Ehsaas ho gaya hai ab mujhe, diya, ki main aapse bahut pyaar...

Datahukum aap? Sajjan singh enters diya's room, followed by diya's masaa.. Ratan is as shocked to see them, as they are to see him in diya's room, hugging her... Ratan cudnt speak one more word after seeing them. He breaks the hug and stands little away from diya.. Both diya and Ratan feel little embarrassed.. Sajjan singh- Datahukum, aap yahan? Aap yahan kya kar rahen hain, aise diya ke room mein..? Ratan- woh kaasusaa... woh, main diya se milne aaya tha.. Sajjan singh- Milne aya tha? Ab aur kya baaki hai, datahukum.. Diya ki zindgai barbaad karne ke baad, ab kya Karen aaye hain yahan aap? Diya didn't say a word in front of her parents.. Ratan- Nai kaakusaa, aisa nahin hai..Main to yahan, diya ko kahne aaya tha ki.. Sajjan singh- bas datahukum, bas.. bahut ho gaya... Bahut khel liye aap hamri beti ke dil se, unki zindagi se.. Ab aur nahin.. Ek shabd bhi nahin... Datahukum, agar aapke mann mein, humaare liye zara si bhi izzat baaki hai, to abhi, issi waqt, yahan se chale jaiye.. Ratan- kaakusaa, par..meri baat to suniye.. Sajjan singh- aapne agar kabhi bhi humko, mann se apna kaakusaa mana hai to, abhi iss waqt, plz... Ratan cudnt dare to argue and had to leave now. He starts going out.. He turns back and looks at Diya.. Diya had assured her papasaa last night that she will obey his words, so she doesn't say anything, but her eyes said it all. She needed Ratan to complete what he wanted to say, she wanted him to stay and be with her.. Ratan too wanted Diya to stop him, he wanted her to say something.. (Diya, aap kuch kahti kyun nai hain.. kya aap mujhe nahin rokengi? aap jaanti hain, main yahan aapse apne dil ki baat kahne aaya tha, woh sune bina hi, aap mujhe yahan se jaane dengi.. diya plz kuch to kahiye.. plz kaakusaa ko samjhaiye..) He knew she wanted to stop him, as he cud see the pain and tears in her eyes, seeing him go.. Ratan kept turning back, to look at diya, thinking that she will say something.. But her lips didn't utter anything, he wanted to hear.. Diya ki aanken bhi palak japkaaye bina, ratan ko jaate hue dekhti rahi, jaise bahut kuch kahna chahti ho.. par papasaa ke baat ka bhi maan rakhna tha usey.. So she lets ratan go, with a heavy and aching heart ..

Ratan reaches kesar mahal. Yash meets him as he enters his room.. Kaakusaa, kahan chale gaye they aap? Hum kab se aap ko dhundh rahe they.. But Ratan is heartbroken and didnt hear anything watever Yash said.. kaakusaa.. ? kya hua? Sun rahen hain aap? Aap kahan gaye they? Ratan has tears in his eye, he looks devastated..and its worrying Yash and he asks again-Kaakusaa..? kahan gaye they aap.. He holds ratan's shoulder and shakes him, to bring him back to his senses. Ratan is still very saddened by wat all happened at diya's house.. Yash- kahan gaye they aap, kaakusaa? Ratan- diya ke ghar.. Yash- kya? Humne aapko manaa kiya tha wahan jaane se.. kyun gaye aap? Ratan- To kya karta yash banaa... mujhse nahin ruka gaya... Main Diya se milna chahta tha, unhe dekhna chahta tha, unse apni dil ke baat kahna chahta tha.. Yash- to kya, aap mile unse? aapne kaha unse, jo aap kahna chahte they? Ratan- Main diya se mila, par woh nai kah payaa, jo kahne ke liye main itna bekaraar tha.. Yash- kyu, aisa kya hua wahan? Kyun nai kah paye, aap, apne dil ki baat, diya baisaa se? Ratan- yash banaa, main kahne hi wala tha, par tabhi wahan kaakusaa aa gaye. Mujhe diya ke paas dekh kar, unhe bahut gussa aa gaya, aur mujhe tabhi ke tabhi, wahan se jaane ke liye kah diya.. Yash- aapko unhe samjhaana chaiye tha na. Ratan- woh meri ek baat bhi sun ne ko taiyaar nai they.. Yash- diya baisaa ne kuch nai kaha? Ratan- apne papasaa ke saamne woh kuch nai kah payi. Par mujhe yakeen hai, woh mujhe rokna chahti thi.. mujhe aise jaajte dekh, unka mann bhi dukhi tha.. Maine dekha unki aakhon mein, mere liye unka pyaar, mere liye unki takleef..

Yash- jo hua, achcha nai hua.. Inn sab se, yeh to pata chalta hain ki, diya baisaa ke papasaa, aapse bahut hi naraaz hain... aapko ab sabr se kaam lena hoga, nai to baat bahut bigad sakti hai.. aap samajh rahen na, kaakusaa..Ratan- haan, yash banaa.. main ab dhyaan rakhunga.. Par jab tak diya se apne dil ki baat nai kah leta, chain se nai baithunga... Yash- theek hai, kaakusaa, par zara savdhaani se..

Next moment, Esha baisaa enters and says - datahukum, aapke liye koi legal document aaya hai.. Ratan- mere liye? Esha- haan, zara dekhiye.. Ratan is deeply shocked to read the papers.. Papers of divorce...! Tears start flowing from his eyes, which had hopes to get Diya back in his life. All the dreams of spending his lifetime with his sweetheart, Diya, were broken.. The most shocking thing was Diya's signature on those papers... How can Diya sign these papers? She loves me.. She cant do this.. No, this is not possible..Ratan thinks.. He looks towards Yash, who too can't believe his eyes.. Esha is also surprised to know about the divorce. Ratan feels as if everything is finished, Diya doesn't want him in her life now. He has always hurt her.. Yash tries to console Ratan and says- kaakusaa, zaroor kuch galat-fahmi hui hogi.. Diya baisaa to aapse behad pyar karti hain.. Woh aapne unse apne dil ki baat nai kahi, isliye yeh sab confusion mein hua hoga .. hum diya baisaa se baat karenge.. hum batayenge unhe ki aap unse kitna pyar karte hain.. unhe pata hota to woh aisa kabhi nai karti.. hum baat karenge unse..

Esha is happy to know that Ratan also loves Diya.. Esha too tries to convince Ratan-Datahukum, diya baisaa ne divorce papers par sign, papasaa ke dabaaw mein, aa kar kiye honge.. waise bhi diya baisaa ko lagta hai ki aap unse pyaar nai karte, shayad yehi soch kar unhone yeh kadam uthaya hoga.. agar unhe pata chal gaya hota ki, aap bhi unse utnaa hi pyar karte hain to, woh aisa kabhi nai karti.. Aapko apne dil ki baat jald se jald unhe bataani hogi.. warna der ho jayegi.. papasaa ka gussa to aap jaante hain..

Both Ratan and yash agree with Esha, on this.. Esha- hum kuch karte hain.. hum koshish karke, diya baisaa ko, aaj kisi bahaane se, ghar se bahar le ayenge, tab aap unse achche se baat bhi kar lena, aur kah dena woh sab, jo aap kahna chahte hain.. theek hai? Ratan- sach mein esha bhabhi saa? Aap mujhe diya se milwa sakti hain? Esha- hum apni puri koshish karenge.. hum abhi ghar par phone karte hain..She calls, but nobody picks up the call.. She tries diya's number, then Masaa's number, but their mobiles are switched off.. She then calls her papasaa to know abt Diya and Masaa.. He tells her that both Diya and Masaa have gone to Mumbai to attend marriage function of Ajay Singh's daughter. He tells her that he had some prior work commitements and he cudnt go with them. He asks if Esha had any important work, to which she says- Nahin, kuch nai, papasaa. Bas waise hi, mann kiya tha, Diya baisa se baat karne ka. Isliye phone try kar rahe they. She disconnects the call. Ratan- kya hua, esha bhabhi saa? Hui aapki baat? Kya kaha unhone? Esha- Diya aur Masaa to Mumbai chale gaye, Ajay Singh uncle ki beti ki shaadi attend karne ke liye.. kuch dino ke baad hi wapis ayenge..

Ratan is sad to hear this.. Now he will not be able to meet diya at least for next few days.. Suddenly, Esha gets an idea. Idea..! Datahukum, aap bhi to Ajay singh ko jaante hain na? Ratan- Ajay singh? Kaun ajay singh? Esha- arey woh, Bikaner waale Ajay singh.. Kaakimaasa aur kaakusaa unko bahut achche se jaane hain.. Ratan- jaante honge, to? Esha- to, iss hisaab se aap bhi unke jaan-ne waalo mein aate hain.. Ratan- haan, to? Point kya hai? Esha- point yeh hai ki, unki beti ki shaadi ka invitataion to kesar mahal bhi ayaa hoga, na.. Ratan- oh haan, yeh to maine socha hi nai.. To aap chahati hain ki, main apni diya se milne Mumbai jaaun.. Esha and yash say it together- haan...

Esha- shaadi aur reception dono, Mumbai mein hi planned hai.. atleast ek hafte ka programme to hoga hi.. Aur sabse important baat to humne aapko batayi hi nai.. Ratan- kaunsi baat? Esha- yahi ki, papasaa waha nai honge.. To aap aaram se, jo bhi karna chahte hai, woh kar sakte hain... Ratan asks mischievously- kya kahna chahti hain aap? Esha- aap khud samajhdaar hai, datahukum.. Yash also laughs hearing this.. Ratan-woh to hai.. Yash banaa, humare liye jaldi se, Mumbai ki ek ticket book karwa dijiye, plz.. Yash- haan, haan.. kaakusaa. Aur Wapsi ki do tickets? Ek aapki, aur ek diya baisaa ki, aapke saath..? He pokes ratan with elbow, teasing him..

So Ratan is going to Mumbai to meet her Diya... Will he be able to express his love? Will she accept him?

To be continued...

Edited by arulya - 6 years ago
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Veryyy nice update... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Please post the next update soon... its so hard to wait.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
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Awesome, beautiful...πŸ‘ waiting for next update.. update soon...
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Awesome update arulya!
Absolutely loved the amazing DiRa scene The way he hugged her tight and was confessing his feelings to her!
And I am excited for the mumbai sequence :D
Superb story man, keep it up! πŸ‘
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Awesome, each part of your ff is just a fine wine which is getting better and better with the flow.❀️
Another good writer joins our RHLN FF writing group.πŸ€—
Keeps on writing dear.😳

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Thinking about how to go ahead in Update V.. Thoughts are still unclear... jaldi se Ratan aur Diya ko mila dun, yaa thoda intzaar karwaoon ratan ko? Aur kya ratan se intzaar hoga bhi ?
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Awesome, each part of your ff is just a fine wine which is getting better and better with the flow.❀️

Another good writer joins our RHLN FF writing group.πŸ€—
Keeps on writing dear.😳


Thank You so much for ur lovely comments... πŸ˜ƒ
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