DIRA (FF)- HUMAARI AJAB KAHAANI- All parts (1-13) on Page 35 - Page 25

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Doc.love

ARULYAAA!!!!

Itnaaa beautiful...itna poignant...itna touching!!!โค๏ธโญ๏ธ
What an amazing closure!๐Ÿ‘
Aur itne acchay se timelines ki transition dikhai hai. So smooth!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Ratan's growth into a mature and responsible man was sooo awesome!
Hats off to you bro. The Eclampsia portion was very touching yar. I had tears in my eyes while reading it. I know how bad and how dangerous it is. My childhood best friend,my cousin sister had Pre-eclampsia, resulting in renal failure. ๐Ÿ˜ญ Her baby got delivered in 7th months...the baby is fine mashaAllah but my cousin is on thrice a week dialysis regime.. I have actually seen her in that ICU...in coma... Doctors had given up on her...her liver and lungs had started to damage too. Docs had told us that one heart attack and she would be no more. ๐Ÿ˜ญ I have actually spent days by her side reciting Quran to her... and when she regained consciousness and opened her eyes, I was the 1st person she saw and acknowledged.
Your whole ff was beautiful Arulya...but this last part touched me very much.
I loved it.. absolutely! You are an awesome writer mashaAllah.Keep writing buddy.. โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Lots of love to you...๐Ÿค—


Thanks Ayesha dear.. you had always been v encouraging and motivating.. And u played a v imp part in encouraging me to finish this FF..๐Ÿ˜Š
I have always enjoyed reading ur comments.. Ek alag sa connection feel hota hai..๐Ÿ˜Š
Ya, ecclamsia is a very complicating disease, as it affects many maternal organs, apart from hampering fetal growth.. Hav seen many patients like Diya, in hospital..๐Ÿ˜’ feel very sad for them..
Dear, M really happy that u loved the FF.. Such appreciation from a great writer and a very dear fren, like u, is so touching and heartwarmingโค๏ธ
Lots of love to you too๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ
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Posted: 6 years ago
wow feels so nice actually i wanted our serial to be like this relationship after marriage ..but CV did was they completely runine dit .ofcourse sony channel too has its hand in that.

nice ending thank u arulya
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014

wow feels so nice actually i wanted our serial to be like this relationship after marriage ..but CV did was they completely runine dit .ofcourse sony channel too has its hand in that.

nice ending thank u arulya


Thanks Vijaya for liking the update..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
M glad u liked this story of Diya and Ratan๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Beautifully written
Love the ending
Keep writing
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Beautifully written
Love the ending
Keep writing


Thanks Plmzaq... Happy that loved my FF and its ending..
Hope to see u again in some other post as well
Thanks again for ur crisp and positive comments..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi, how are you now...
Sorry I was not well and had to complete my project also it was hectic pressure, so could not read the last part.

Just now I finished and really you have given a good end๐Ÿ‘. Loved the whole FF , it's awesome continue with writing.๐Ÿ˜Š...



One small suggestion, just imagine for RLHN 2 and write a story starting with DIRA's love acception. You , Ayesha and others( don't bash me , it's my weakness I don't remember the names , my friends and relatives scolds me a lot fo this) try to get a story.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Doreman

Hi, how are you now...

Sorry I was not well and had to complete my project also it was hectic pressure, so could not read the last part.

Just now I finished and really you have given a good end๐Ÿ‘. Loved the whole FF , it's awesome continue with writing.๐Ÿ˜Š...



One small suggestion, just imagine for RLHN 2 and write a story starting with DIRA's love acception. You , Ayesha and others( don't bash me , it's my weakness I don't remember the names , my friends and relatives scolds me a lot fo this) try to get a story.


yeah ayesha ,arulya surabhi ,mrs weasley and all others who r writers in this forum please try preparing a script for RLHN 2 i.e life after diya gets pregnant ..children born ..funny scens of diya maturity and ratan immaturity ..i.e those scenes like diya preparing for honeymoon ..and keeping all unnecessray items and ratan objecting ..i.e these type of cat and mouse type fights

CV left loose ends in rlhn ..that terrorist is in jail ..yash mom in jail , abhay in jail ..if they conspire it could be a potent viliany
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Doreman

Hi, how are you now...

Sorry I was not well and had to complete my project also it was hectic pressure, so could not read the last part.

Just now I finished and really you have given a good end๐Ÿ‘. Loved the whole FF , it's awesome continue with writing.๐Ÿ˜Š...



One small suggestion, just imagine for RLHN 2 and write a story starting with DIRA's love acception. You , Ayesha and others( don't bash me , it's my weakness I don't remember the names , my friends and relatives scolds me a lot fo this) try to get a story.


Thanks dear.. m glad that liked the update..
M fine now.. thanks for ur concern๐Ÿ˜Š
Great idea.. but, maine dira ke baare mein ab tak jo bhi story sochi thi, i hav put in most of that imagination in this FF, though main last update mein fast ho gayi (as i needed to finish it soon).. story imagine karne ke liye ab DIRA ka dose (tv par) kahan se milega? Ayesha, surbhi, Angel and others are great writers and they can do magic.. i can give my inputs..
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


yeah ayesha ,arulya surabhi ,mrs weasley and all others who r writers in this forum please try preparing a script for RLHN 2 i.e life after diya gets pregnant ..children born ..funny scens of diya maturity and ratan immaturity ..i.e those scenes like diya preparing for honeymoon ..and keeping all unnecessray items and ratan objecting ..i.e these type of cat and mouse type fights

CV left loose ends in rlhn ..that terrorist is in jail ..yash mom in jail , abhay in jail ..if they conspire it could be a potent viliany


Yaar, yash ki mom to good ho gayi thi last mein, abhay' sis also turned good..
Rahe male villians, woh kuch conspiracy plan karen, to baat kuch aur ho..
Serial ka aaj last telecast hai, uske baad to dil hi baith jaayegA.. it will be like cutting wings of all the imaginations we used to have for DIRA..
To write something/ imagine something, u need some boost or a trigger, woh kahan se milege ab๐Ÿ˜”.. ayesha, surbhi, angel and all others are awesome with great writing skills.. hope they write something new and diffrent.. M always here to give my inputs..
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: arulya


Yaar, yash ki mom to good ho gayi thi last mein, abhay' sis also turned good..
Rahe male villians, woh kuch conspiracy plan karen, to baat kuch aur ho..
Serial ka aaj last telecast hai, uske baad to dil hi baith jaayegA.. it will be like cutting wings of all the imaginations we used to have for DIRA..
To write something/ imagine something, u need some boost or a trigger, woh kahan se milege ab๐Ÿ˜”.. ayesha, surbhi, angel and all others are awesome with great writing skills.. hope they write something new and diffrent.. M always here to give my inputs..


o yash mom did not turn out to be good.priya yash mom is in jail

abhay sis turned out to be good but abhay can be shown bad
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