KaYa TS: Akhri khat chapter 3_pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Hey Doll... Kaushi this is so Awesome,,, ⭐️👏
Beautiful n a story full of emotions thru Ana's letter... the last one..😳
Got sad to know Kabir is gone from her life.. from their Kavya's life..
Wud love to know why n to whom Ana is writing this letter... Kabir who is gone.. or the Kabir who can come back .,, plzz do write more,...
Keep rocking like this... always waited for your stories last year.. n happy that you are back... 😃
God bless..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Ananya is pouring her heart in her last letter to Kabir! So loving, and emotional!
Kaushi, this is a heart rending update, penned down by you dearie 👏

I so loved her words to her hubby, all of nowhere is he listening to her heart, and their daughter is also there. Along with her, every one wud be wishing Ananya had not let him go to meet Laxman that day.
Loved your way of telling the story through her letter, You very well woven the story until now⭐️
Though getting sad every now and then, i wish he is alive and is in coma only. And one day he will be back. But can that be?
Lovely TS in progress dear, am waiting to know what is awaited for the mother daughter duo and to whom this letter will reach!
Thanks sweetheart for this fabulous work, luv ya to the core ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Chapter 3

Tumhare jaane ke gham mein main toh ro bhi nahi skti thi...Wqt hi kaha tha mere paas..Mujhe toh Kavya ko bhi sambhalna tha na...Tumhe pta h Kabir...Kisi ne mera sath nahi diya...na mere ghar waalo na or na hi tumhare...Sbne taane dene ke alawa or kch nahi kiya...Sbne kaha ke esa toh hona hi tha... Kyuki humari shadi koi apashakun thi...Or pta nahi kya kya...Mene delhi chhod diya Kabir...Or Kavya ko le kr Mumbai aa gai...Bht mehenat kri mene toh Kavya ko ek acchi zindagi de pa rhi hu...Tumhe pta 1 saal tk toh us ke sawalon ka koi javab hi nahi tha...Woh puchhti rehti thi k...Papa kaha hain..Papa kaha hain...Koi jawab ni tha mere paas...Kya kehti use k us k papa ab kbi laut k nahi ayenge...? Tum toh bs hume chhod ke chle gye or humne kya jhela.. usse tumhe kya frk pdta h...Tumne promise kiya tha mujhe...Ke tum kabhi mujhe chhod ke nahi jaoge...Kabhi kisi situation mein mujhe akela nahi chhodoge...Kya hua un waadon ka...Un kasmon ka..? Sb bhul gye tum...1 saal baad jb Kavya thodi samjhdar hui toh use bhi smjh a gya...K ab tum kbi laut k nahi aoge...Jb raato mein main roti thi toh Kavya ne mujhe sambhala..Bht choti h vo...Pr bilkul tumpar gai h...Humesha mujhe sambhala h usne...Use bht kami lgti h tumhari...Pr jb main yeh sb notice krti thi toh bhaag kr mere paas ati thi or mujhe bolti thi ke..mumma aap hi mere liye sb kch ho..Main papa ko miss nahi krti...Pr main janti hu woh tumhe hr pal yaad krti h...Humesha...1 saal pehle main Kavya ko summer vacations mein Shimla le gai thi...Socha tha k usko b toh or baccho ki trha khush rehne ka adhikar h...Waha pohoch kr hotel mein check in kiya or...Phir sham ko hum dono ghumne chale gye...Waha hr bacche ko apne papa ke sath enjoy krte dekh kr...Kavya bht udaas ho gai thi kabir...Achanak se vo behosh ho gai...Or mujhe...Mujhe smjh hi nahi a rha tha main kya kru...Main hotel pohochi...Kavya ko bht tez bukhar ho rha tha..Hotel k staff members ne waha Doctor ko bulaya..Unhone Kavya ka check up kiya...Use medicines di...Baki sabhi doctors ki trha..Agle din Kavya thoda accha mehsoos kr rhi thi...Or Dr. Jatin usse dubara milne aaye...Unhone usse bht saari baatein ki...Or meri choti si bacchi ko uss din mene bht wqt baad khul k hasta hua dekha...Phir hum waha 6 din or ruke...Or Dr. Jatin Kavya se roz milne aate rhe..Jis din hum wapas Mumbai ane waale the us din Kavya ki ankhon ke aansu the...Kyuki vo Jatin se dur nahi jana chahti thi...Shayad Jatin me use vo pyaar mila tha jis k liye meri bacchi taras rhi thi...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Jatin..hmm interesting
Continue soon
Thank you for the pm


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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
yes kaushiki jee , Nice story chapter 1 2 and 3...😃 I read it and liked it and loved it very much ...

Thanks for sharing...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Jatin, interesting character and thoughtful progress in the story Kaushi 👏
I liked that little Kavya gets someone with whom she can smile like she wanted to continue with Kabir!
I feel Kavya and Jatin are quite close now. Pls do continue this very lovely story dear, am looking forward to the new and new twist you are introducing every time 😳
Thanks sweetie, for the beautiful turn in Ananya's life 😊
In wait for the next, Luv ya ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
My heart broke for ananya & kavya
Poor baby kavya how much she miss her papa
Those so called families they r worst they left ananya & kavya after kabir death so disgusting
Ananya saw really hard time without kabir
Now kavya finding the love of father on Dr jatin
I wish kabir would back to ananya & kavya
Now what will ananya do?
Continue plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Kaushu...U r the best writer...👏
I just love ur stories...❤️
Nd I m eagerly waiting for the next part...
Love uh...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Nice update my Doll... ⭐️👏
I loved Jaitn's intro.. though i cant see anyone else than kabir in the life of Ana,,, 😳
Kavya... my heart goes for the little girl... 🤗
Hope all this goes well for the life of her.. !

Has Ana accept Jatin.. ?? / she is writing for the last time to Kabir.. that means she is ready to take on with Jatin n thus this last letter.. But yeah your take will be the last Kaushi... 😉
Story is going too strong... thanks for the beauteous dear..
Keep the good job intact... will wait for the next.. God bless you.. !
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