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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART-1

This is after that shreya's fiasco happened at restaurant.
Kabir: To challe Ms kashyap coffee pe. Essi jagah le jaunga jaha shreya definitely bagal wali seat pe to nai hogi.

Ananya: Anything for you Mr sharma.

N they both went for a coffee. Silent roads of delhi soothing music of Michael buble. Each other's presence. Fingers entwined with each other's hand was all they needed a perfect time for two love birds.
Finally they reached one little cafe which luckily was open.
Kabir ordered espresso and ananya ordered hot chocolate. They both leaned on he bonnet of the car. Ananya holding kabir's arm n her head resting on on his shoulder.

Kabir: To Ms kashyap ab ho gai na apki evening ekdam perfect

Ananya: Not replying. Just leaning on him n thanking her stars for kabir. Hold his hand tighter and said. Thank you kabir thank you so much for everything for accepting my love. For reciprocating my love. You made my life beautiful ever.

Kabir taking her n his glass keeping it aside n holds ananya's hand

Ananya: u never need to thank me darling. All i did was for myself. I needed someone to love me. I needed someone to care for me. I needed the pampering i needed the support I needed the unconditional love which you provided without asking anything. I needed the satisfaction which ur smile provides. I needed the music which ur laughter provide. So please never ever thank me. All i did was for myself.

Ananya looked at him like baby staring at her mother lovingly. She just took her hands out of kabirs hold and hugged him tightly like never before. Caressing his back. Telling him how much she loved him by her fingers. Kabir did the same. After a long both broke the hug and decided to concentrate on their respective drinks.

After a while both headed home. Outside Ananya's home. Kabir came out of the car to bid a bye to his darling. She quickly pecked his lips and turned to go. But suddenly she felt a pull n trash!! Directly into her Mr sharma's arm.

Kabir: Not so soon Ms kashyap
And then he took her lips into his and then they didn't realise where their simple kiss turned into a hot,passionate, hungry kiss. Kabir never tasted a hot chocolate as sweet as it tasted from ananya's mouth. And ananya never got addicted to espresso before tasting it from kabir's month. Both finally parted and ananya tried to leave but kabir had held her firmly against his chest.

Ananya's eye telling him to leave while kabir made face.

Ananya: jane do na kabir bahout late ho gaya hai

Kabir: nah

Ananya: please

Kabir: achha ek sharat pr kal tumhe me pick karunga aur shaam ko hum saath me dinner karenge cooked by the great chef kabir sharma.

Ananya: Giving him her full blown smile. Is it? I am ever ready for this deal.

And then he left her and ananya quickly pecking her cheek ran fast as she knows the consequences of being slow few minutes before.

FEW MOMENTS LATER
ON TEXT MESSAGE

kabir: Hi baby missing u and ur kiss

Ananya: abhi 30 mins bi nai huve apko muhje kiss kare aur kya miss kar raho ho?

Kabir: ab kya kare my darling's kiss is vert addicted thoda bi raha nai jata. Ab jaldi se bags pack karo aur yaha aa javo.

Ananya blushed hard at his msg

Ananaya:Is it Mr sharma? Waise aap bhi kuch kum addictive nai ho. And not so soon kabir baby.

Kabir: Okay okay ab so jaao kal pata hai na i am picking u up. Good night darling. And my dreams.

Ananya: Good night to you too, our sweet dream and i LOVE YOU.

Kabir: I Know

Ananya got angry n immediately dialled kabir's number.

Ananya: challo jaldi se I love you bolyee.

Kabir: kyun? Iske bina neend nai aayegi.

Ananya made pouty face. Kabir realised and chuckled. Soon kabir said: I LOVE YOU MY PRINCESS! Ab jage so javo n miss me

Ananya: I love you too. Bye

Soon ananya drifted to sleep unknown of what was gonna come thru her way.

Next morning she woke up n first thing she did was to see her wallpaper on phone. In which ananya is sitting on kabir's lap n kabir was busy nuzzling his nose on her neck. She smiled wide kissed on kabir face's on the screen and got up to get ready.

Soon there was bell on the door n ananya jumped from the seat n ran to open the door which didnt went unnoticed by her mom n brother. She opened the door n there he stood more dashing than yesterday. Her kabir in white shirt n navy blue blazer.

Kabir pulled ananya so that they were outside her house adjacent to the door. Ananya was pinned by kabir between wall n his body. Kabir's eyes did quick scan on ananya. She was wearing an peach coloured offshoulder top n blue jeans.

Kabir pecked her lips n said good morning my darling. Ananya hide her face in his neck n softly kissed there. Good morning to you too my prince charming. Soon their moment was disturbed by anita calling: kaun hai ananya?

Ananya : ji ma woh kabir hai.

Anita: to andar bolavo na and suno me aur arman bahar ja rahe hai

Ananya: theek hai ma. ji aaiye kabir. *winks*

Kabir took anita's blessing hugged armaan

Ananya did her breakfast and kabir silently was admiring her. Ananya offered him coffee but kabir shook his head n told : ananya i told you yesterday only now my fav is hot chocolate

Ananya soon realised what was he trying to say n offered her lips instead of the hot chocolate mug. Kabir didnt waste a millisecond n grabbed her neck and pulled her into a wild kiss. Kabir sucked her lower lip gently. His lips were giving soft massage to her lips. Ananya soon grabbed his upper lip n sucked it hardly. Kabir loved that n he bit her corner of lower lip so she chukled n then kabir entered her month. After long exploring their months enough they broke for air.

Kabir: Hmm yummy today it was more sweeter.
It is getting better day by day.

Ananya just shook her head n went to her room to grab her purse.

soon ananya n kabir were in kabir's car.

When kabir took the wrong road.

Ananya: Apne galat rasta le liya kabir. Ab hame aur bi late ho jaayega. N she made a pouty face.
Kabir just smiled and continued driving ignoring her statement.

Ananya: kabir aap sun rahe hai na HUMNE GALAT RASTA LE LIYA HAI.

kabir still ignored and continued driving.

Ananya lost it n decided to keep mum.

Soon they were in an isolated place. There was one huge villa. Big garden , fountain sprinkling water in pool. Kabir as a gentleman opened ananya's door and forwarded his hand to her. To say ananya was shocked would be an understatement. They entered the villa in most royal way. Soon the big door opened and there stood lots n lots of people.
Richa ronnie sunny baby khalid manav malvika anita armaan kabir's brother and bhabi.
There were huge white coloured 3 tier cake.

Ananya was in deep shock she was registering the times happening around. Kabir didnt took a sec to understand what was ananya going through. Suddenly kabir twirled her n he was on his knees holding a beautiful solitaire for ananya. He inhale deeply n spoke

Kabir: Will you turn Mrs sharma from Ms kashyap ?

Ananya's heart was lepting with joy n tears were gathering in the eyes. She immediately shook her head in yesss and forwarded her hand. With in 0.01 sec kabir slide the ring in her finger n stood up and pecked her forehead lovingly she hugged for her dear life n whispered millions of thankyou on his chest. Soon the whole villa was full of claps and whistles.

Ananya realised something and went to anita. Ananya was questioning her mother with her eyes that she willingly approved their relationship or not? Her mother understood n she put her hand on Ananya's elbow.

Anita: ananya kabir ne muhje khud uske past ke bare me bata diya tha jab kal tum uske liye resto me wait kar rahi thi tab kabir yaha ghar pe aya tha Usne muhje khud sab kuchh bata diya kyun ki tum sunna nai chati thi aur kabir muhje koi andhere me nai rakhna chahta tha. Isi liye usne muhje sab bata diya uske aur shreya ke bare me aur muhje koi problem nahi hai. Jab tumhare papa ne isse select kiya tha to me kese mana kar sakti hun with that she hugged her daughter. She further told. I trust kabir as much as i trust you. Jo insaan yeh samjta hai ke bado ke ashirwad ke bina choote kabhi khush nahi reh sakte woh insan kabhi galat nahi hota. Aur yeh sab kabir ne plan kiya hai yeh sab uska idea tha.

Ananya couldnt thank god enough for giving her kabir. She was so grateful to god. She looked at kabir was a busy on a call. She ran towards him and gave him most powerful hug from behind kabir was taken aback he turned and held her with one hand and ended the call with another hand.

Kabir: kya huva future mrs sharma?

Ananya just held him tight n let some tears wet his shirt. Kabir too hugged her tight realising the situation.

Ananya: kabir ap itne achhe kyun ho? Apne mere sari problems ek sec me solve kardi muhjje nai pata mene aaisa kya kiya ke muhje aap mile. Aap jese itna achha inas muhje mere pyar ke roop me mila. Thank you so much and with that she lazily toed up n kissed his neck. Kabir groaned in pleasure. Knowing his situation she placed another kiss with that she kissed his tip of chin.
But unluckily their moment got broken when anita announced the cake cutting.

Kabir and ananya cut the cake n fed each other and rest of the people. Ananya was covered by all her friends who was showering congratulations to her.
Richa: yaar ananya i am soo happy for you. tuhje to bus itne khush dekhna hi muhje bahout pasand hai. God bless u both

Trisha: ananya tune to bahout bada hath mara yaar. The gr8 kabir sharma ab tere fiance hai kitne hot hai yaar opps now he is my jiju. But seriously yaar i am so happy for you babes.

Ronnie: sachhi yar ananya tujhe ussse achha banda nai mil sakta. He is so perfect yaar. Congratulations to you both.

Sunny: ab to shenai bajegi kkn me kabir weds ananya. Mate tune to bahot hi achhe pita ji dhundhe hai.

Ananya hugged all of them she was so happy today.

Soon kabir's brother n bhabhi hugged both of then n kaya took their blessing. khalid malvika n manav congratulated Kabir n ananya
All were gone by now only Anita n armaan was left.
Anita: ananya beta tuhje to pata hai ki arman ke colleges start ho rahe aur usse hostel me nai rakhna muhje to isiliye me uske sath ja rahi uska appartment me sab set karvane ke liye to muhje 1-2 mahina lagega to me yeh chahti hu ke tu tab tak kabir ke waha shift ho ja. Ab to tum dono engaged bhi ho to koi problem bhi nai hai. Theek hai

Ananya was soo happy that her mom trusted them so much.

Ananya: theek hai ma i love you kab ja rahe ho aap log.

Anita: Dus abhi nikal hi rahe hai 1 ghante me flight hai Bangalore ki.

Ananya: okay ma take care n arman tu bhi. Bye

Anita n armaan left now the love birds were all alone.
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So guys this was it. This is first ever time i wrote any story. Phew! I personally don't like writing its always the last option for me but sanya told me to atleast try so i did. Hope i didnt disappointed any1. We have brilliant writers on our forum n this was just nothing in front of that but yeah I atleast tried. Plz honest comments and yes i can continue too if u want as i am free all the day coz of my vacations.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Kabir plans surprise for ananya
Anita wholeheartedly accepts kabir
Beautifully written
Continue soon
When you do plz pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing...😳
Such a cute and lovely story.
I told you that give it a try...
and the result is so amazing...
The story is awesome
Update the next part soon
Waiting eagerly
And
Thank you so much for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much plmzaq i will surely continue. And thank you so much for giving it a read. I must say people here are so genuine. I will surely do u PM as soon as i learn how to do it 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaYa_licious

<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Amazing...😳</font>

<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Such a cute and lovely story.
I told you that give it a try...
and the resultis so amazing...
The story is awesome
Update the next part soon</font>
<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Waiting eagerly
And</font>
<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thank you so much for PM</font>



sanya tumhe to jitna thank you bolu utna kam hai. Sirf tumhe hi PM aaya hoga shayad 😆 ab continue karna to banta hi hai.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: KabirAnu



sanya tumhe to jitna thank you bolu utna kam hai. Sirf tumhe hi PM aaya hoga shayad 😆 ab continue karna to banta hi hai.


Karna padega hi..😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi
The up is really good
I really liked it
After a long time me read something on
Kaya
The aftermath of kaya dinner date is really well presented
The kiss the ring ,the proposed ceremony
Wow
I love the way you send Anita jee and armaan out of station
Kaya don't have to kiss secretly now hehe
Let's see what holds in the future
Plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

Hi

The up is really good
I really liked it
After a long time me read something on
Kaya
The aftermath of kaya dinner date is really well presented
The kiss the ring ,the proposed ceremony
Wow
I love the way you send Anita jee and armaan out of station
Kaya don't have to kiss secretly now hehe
Let's see what holds in the future
Plz cont soon and pm me


Aww thank you soo much! Glad u like it. And yeah hahah i thats why send armaan n anita jee. And now kabir n ananya in kabir's house now it will be more fun. Sure i will send you pm 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome beginning dearie
Mast hai pura idea and story
Waiting for update
Update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely starting
Kabir and Ananya are so cute and wonderful together
I am already in love with this
Do continue it and sooon update it
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