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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

Hi

the up is really good
so Ananya and Kabir are married and Kabir is troubling and ignoring better say
Aww..Poor she
Plz cont soon and pm me

Thank u,dear๐Ÿ˜ณ
I'll cnt. Soon๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Heyy just read both the updates ..
Both are really amazing..
Kaya are married and kabir is behaving quite rudely with ananya
Ananya is heartbroken..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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I'll cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: manaalkhan

very nice Ud..! wondering what happened in the past...
anyways looking forward for another UD..
continue soon & thanks for the PM..

I'll try to cont soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Hi guys here is the new updt. for u all ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


CHAPTER 3


Ananya was dressed in a of white and red saree. She was looking damn beautiful. When she came out of the room she saw Kabir was already there. He was wearing a black tuxedo.
"O God, he is just looking like some Greek God." Ananya thought. Then she quickly brushed away her thought as Kabir was aware of her present.
"Why is she going to the party like this!" Kabir frowned.
"Umm...let's go. U r quite ready." Ananya said narrowing her eyes.
"So what's ur problem. Tum ase kiu jaa rahi ho jase shadi hai tumhari. Oh...mato bhul hi gaya tha ki aap newly wed bride hai" Kabir said moving towards the gate.
Ananya was at the verge of crying. But she controlled herself and went outside. Then she sit in the car and kabir starts driving. The whole drive to the venue was silent. When they went inside Kabir immediately went to his old friend circle. Which was also invited there. Ananya was left alone. Then she saw kabir's best friend's wife Naisha. She went to her. Naisha hugged her. They were talking just then Naisha asked "Ananya how is ur relation with kabir?I mean..."
"Hmm...I don't know Naisha he behaves so weird with me. He is not the same." Ananya replied.
"It'll take time Ananya. Be brave" said Natasha.

On the other hand kabir was talking with his and his dad's friends and business partners. Then he headed some of THESE men's wives were gossiping about Ananya. He was very angry at this but somehow manage himself and his anger.

Where Ananya and Natasha were talking suddenly a aunty came and asked Ananya "are tum to vohi hona Ananya kashyap. Vohi Jo TV pe..."
"Are Mrs Sent aap yeha. Achcha hua main aapse issue milvana chahti hu. Ye he mari bahu Ananya. " Kabir's mom said to her indicating at Ananya.
"Yeh hai apki bahu...Maine to aap logo ko Sharif jamjha that per aap log to ...are aise ladkio ko to samaj mei rahnahi nahi dena chahiya. Or ap logo me toh ghar ki bahu baba liya. " said Mrs sen.
Ananya was just crying all the while nd the all the people were looking at her. She expected that kabir would come and defend her but he didn't. Then she just walked outside the party. Kabir came behind her and said "kar di na party kharab. Main isiliye nahi ana chahta that. Jaha jati ho San barbad karti ho. " he said looking away from her.
"How can u say this kabir? I'm ur wife. U should've come there nd support me at least. But u didn't. How can u be so rude?" Ananya said still hoping that kabir will give her some solace.
"Now stop this drama nd get in the car. Puri raat eaha nahi bath sakte. Tumhe toh adat hai ratko sl*g alag jageh rehne ka mujhe nahi hay. Kal she office join bhi karna hai office Jake kamana hai ea kuch or hi Marne ka soch rahi ho" kabir said while entering the car.
"Kabirrr..." Ananya literally screamed.
"Stop screaming and get into the car" kabir said shrugging his solders.
Ananya was crying the whole journey of returning home which seems to a hell to her now.

"Ananya u have to cry a lot ahead,baby. Don't shatter so quickly. Jo mere sath kia hai uska badla toh main leke rahungi" someone said outside from the party venue.


So guys this was it. Tell me how it was...๐Ÿ˜›
I'll be waiting for ur feedbacks...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by eufara_naghm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Ohhh sad for annu...

Kabir behave so rude. . ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: zinya

Ohhh sad for annu...

Kabir behave so rude. . ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Feeling sad for anu but story is superb
Keep it up
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
So Ananya has done something for which the news was in TV and a disgrace for the society according to Mrs. Sen!
Natasha a good support for her I hope.
A third party angle also revealed in the UD. UD was nice suspense still hanging .
A humble request please check spelling if possible, hope am not offending you.
Good wishes
Sutapa๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by sutapabanerjee - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Sahira
Thanks for the PM.
Keep it up and you are updating fast.
Love
Sutapa
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Hi Sahira,
Good concept,
But feeling sad to read that Kabir is treating Ananya bad.
She deserves better.
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