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This FF starts at a really good point of time.. Unique concept ! Would love to read ki agar a is a hota toh kya hota.. Do continue soon plz.. :-)
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This FF starts at a really good point of time.. Unique concept ! Would love to read ki agar a is a hota toh kya hota.. Do continue soon plz.. :-)

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Kabir Sharma
A 28 years old journalist , recently got divorce . A very brave and strong character but broken from inside . Loves his family so , and can do anything to protect his family

Ananya Kashyap
A 20 years old girl , recenly is studuing journalism . A 3rd year student who loves her family so much . Her father got biased but she does not believe on whole world , but one man who takes stand for his father , and it is none other than Kabir Sharma . She trust him because of all the people ony he supported his father . She is innocent , naive but full of passion .

Rajveer Sharma
Kabir's big brother , loves his younger brother so much but recenlty was angry with him . He is a caring man , loves his family so much.

Sandhya Sharma
Rajveer's wife and sister in law of Kabir . A motherly figure to Kabir and loves her family so much and especially treats Kabir as his little brother .

Moksh Sharma (Monu)
Son of Rajveer and Sandhya and nephew of Kabir . A 8 year old boy , and loved by all the family member.But mostly loved by his Kabir Chachu


Anita Kashyap
Mother of Ananya and her little brother Armaan . A very responsible and caring mother who loves her children very much


Armaan Kashyap
Ananya's brother , 15 years old , His role model is his sister who always protect him and always teach him to do his best


Rest of the character will be introduced in the story itself .
I will update tomorrow




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Vaishu plzzz update chapter one...I m eagerly waiting for it yr...plz plz...and nice character sketch... 😃
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Vaishu plzzz update chapter one...I m eagerly waiting for it yr...plz plz...and nice character sketch... 😃

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Plz plz update chapter 1 we r eagerly waiting dear
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Awesome character sketch
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Chapter 1

"A house is said to be a home when there is happiness and freshness all around. But my house is not a home anymore. How much I try to bring my children out from the worst phase of their life but every time I fail because there is no one who can replace a place of father in the life of children . How I wish to protect my children from feeling lonely , but it is nearly impossible . And how can I forget my baby girl Ananya who is not baby anymore , she has become mature , how she always helps me , how she always protect Armaan , how she always concentrate at her studies so she can get scholarship . I really thank god for giving me such a idol daughter . She is the back bone of my family , I am so happy to get Ananya as my daughter" her chain of thought broke when she heard dorebell ringing.

She went upto the door and open it , she saw a old man standing at front of her . He looks like he is in his early 50's . Anita not got good vibes from him, she doesn't knows him so ask

An-aap?

M-namaster Anita ji , main Sudhir ka dost hu

An-oh , sorry maine aapko pehchana nahi , please come

They both enter inside . Anita gestured him to seat

An-Aap kuch lenge chai , coffee?

M-arey nahi nahi main to bas aap log se milne aaya tha , dekhne aaya tha ki sab thik hai ya nahi (with a sad face) main jaanta hu ki mujhe thoda pehle aa jana chahiye tha , Sudhir ko is duniya se gaye hue 4 mahine ho gaye par main ab aaya , actually main kisi kaam se bahar gaya hua tha isliye mujhe pata nahi tha Sudhir ke baare mein aur jaise hi pata chala main vaapas India aaya aur sabse pehle aaplog se milne aa gaya.

An(sad smile)-ji , thankyou aapne hamare baare mein itna socha

M-Arey ye kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap , Sudhir mera dost tha , uski family yani meri family

Anita smiles and then they started talking abut the conditions that Kashyap family has bear. Suddenly the man asked

M- Bhabhi kya Sudhir ne kabhi aapko kisi file ke baare mein bataya tha

An(confused)-file , kaisi file

M-vahi file bhabhi jismein usne vo saari medicine ki reports rakhi thi , agar vo file hume mil gayi to vo Sudhir ki begunahi ka proof ban sakti hai

An-nahi, mujhe to aisi koi bhi file ke baare mein Sudhir ne kuch nahi bataya

M-bhabhi please acche se yaad kijiye , Sudhir ne kabhi zikra to kiya hi hoga us file ka

An-nahi , mujhe is baare mein kuch nahi pata

Now the man was getting irritated , he wants the file by hook or crook so in angry tone he shouted

M-kaisi patni hai aap , aapko apne pati ki cheezo ke baare mwin kuch ahi pata , hadh hai , ek file ke baare mein hi to pucha maine , par lagta hai aapke pati aap pe zara sa bhi trust nahi karte

An(angry and hurt)-ab aap apni hadh paar kar rahe hai

M-main hadh paar kar raha hu! , tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui aisa bolne ki , ek to tumhare pati ne tumpe zara sa bhi bharosa nahi kiya , tum to patni ke naam par kalank ho

Anita got shocked hearing this but then one boy voice broke his trance

B(shouted)-uncle aap meri mom se tameez se baat kijiye

An(loud voice)-Armaan , tum bahar kyu aaye , room mein jaao

Ar-nahi ma , inki himmat kaise hui aapse is tarah baat karne ki , ye aapse itni badtmeezi se baat kar rahe hai aur aap chup chap sehen kar rahi hai

Not the man got very angry and went upto the boy . He raised his hand in order to slap him . Anita got numb by seeing this scene in front of her and Armaan got scared but as the man move his hand and slap him , the hand got caught by someone . The trio got shocked . Two person doesn't know him but one person knew him very well

The person caught his hand and threw it , The person was looking very angry and he just slap the man infront of him , who is the actual reason for the Kashyap family condition and now also he was giving them pain

P-Mujhe pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha ki tum yaha zaroor aaoge , vaise to main yaha in sab se milne aaya tha , but ab jab tum mujhe mil hi gaye ho to meri ek baat sunlo , tumhe vo file kabhi bhi nahi milegi , and that's my promise to you

M(in angry and seething tone)-Kabir tumhari aadat nahi jaayegi na , dusro ke mamalo mein dakhal dene ki

K(sarcastic smile)- kya karu RG , dusre jab galat kaam karte hai to dakhal to dena padega na

RG got angry and left the house because he knows that there is no point to argue with Kabir as Kabir will win
After RG left Kabir heard a shocked voice

An(in low and shocked tone)-RG

Anita and Armaan got shocked hearing RG's name , now they got to know that why the man had come , so he could also snatch the last hope, the last proof so that her husband and his father can be proved innocent . Anita is relieved that Sudhir doesn't tell her about that file , but she was also shocked , she was very angry on herself that could she trust anybode in this point of time

Anita sat on the sofa with a thud and started crying , Armaan came to her with a glass of water . She drinks it and then hugged Armaan .

Kabir looked at them , he knows why they are crying like this . He decided to give them some time so that htey can recover from the shock. But after sometime when they does not stop crying he goes to them and sat on the other sofa which is a single seated and sat at it

K-Mrs. Kashyap , dekhiye I know ye sab aapke liye bahut shocking tha , RG ka is tarah ghar ke andar aa jana aur aapse vo file maangana and jo kuch bhi 4 mahino pehle hua uske baad to ye hadh thi , but aapko strong rehna padega not only for your children but for your husband jinhe justice milna abhi baaki hai

Anita stopped crying and look at him , there were many questions in her mind , after hearing RG and his conversation she got to know that he was the only person who had taken stand for his husband , who had supported him till last but their family never saw him . She only heard his name that too by her daughter's mouth who from 5 month has become a big fan of him . But now after getting a shock she was little hesitant to trust him also

Kabir notices her hesitation and said with a assuring voice

K-Mrs . Kashyap please aap apne upar itna pressure mat daaliye , I know abhi abhi jo hua uske baad aap kisi pe trust nahi karna chahengi aur aapke saath main koi zabardasti bhi nahi karunga like aapko mujhpe trust karna hoga and all , ye sab decision main aap par aur aapki family par chodta hu , main to sirf yaha aapko ye letter dene aaya tha . Actually ye letter mujh tak kal hi pahucha , shayad meri family ne shift kiya isliye kuch zyada hi late ho gaya , khair ye letter aapke husband Mr.Kashyap ka hai

And with this he forwarded his hand to give her the letter but she was not in the state to read and Armaan understands it so he took the letter from him and started reading the letter for her

After reading the letter both son and mother has tears in their eyes . Anita was shocked also when she got to know that his husband trust Kabir so much . She felt guilty for not trusting him and joined her hands in front of him seeking apology from him

An-I am sorry Kabir mujhe aap pe trust karna chahiye tha , actually jo kuch bhi aaj hua uske baad main dar gayi thi

Kabir hold her hands and says

K-iski koi zaroorat nahi hai Mrs. Kashyap , main samajh sakta hu ki aap log pe kya beeti hogi in 4 mahino mein , aur mujhe yaha pehle hi aa jana chahiye tha par apne personal issues ke chakkar mein main apna aapko hi bhul gaya ki main kaun hu

And then he lowers his head remembering his past . Anita saw this and decide to leave this topic because she can see how unconfortable he looks . She went upto the kitchen to fetch some water for him.

Armaan was only looking at the letter and was remembering the gold memories , the time he spent with his father . Kabir looked at him , he knows exactly what this boy infront of him is feeling after all he has also lost his father and that too at the age of 15

K-so tumhara naam Armaan hai right(he tries to start a conversation)

Armaan nod his head

K-tum kaunsi claas mein ho?
Ar-10th mein

K-oh means 1st board exam , mehnat karni padegi , kya plans hai future ke

And with this they two start conversaton . Anita seeing them felt emotional , she knows how Armaan missed his father , how he missed a man with whome he can share all his feeling , and when she saw him talking with Kabir she really felt he is too small to be strong .

Armaan instantly developed a liking for Kabir in his heart because Kabir was the only person who has trusted his father and his father also trusted no one othe than Kabir . He started to talk to him freely

After sometime Anita returns with tea and some snacks

K-Mrs. Kashyap iski koi zaroorat nahi thi , main to bas yaha aap sabse milne aaya tha , aap log ko takleef uthane ki zarrorat nahi hai

An-ismein takleef kaisi Kabir , tumne jo bhi hamare puri family ke liye kiya vo hamare liye sabse badi baat hai , jab tumne Sudhir ka saath diya to anjaane mein hi hum sabka bhi saath diya aur ye sab to uske mukaable kuch bhi nahi

Kabir smiles hearing this and then got engrossed in conversation like how Sudhir got trapped , what they can do to prove him innocent and they totally lost the time track

At 6:00 pm

The dorebell rang and then they realized that from one and a half hour they were talking

An-Armaan jao darwaza kholo Ananya hogi

Ar-ji ma

Armaan went upto the door to open it , here Kabir also got anxious to meet her . He wanted to meet her since he entered in the house but he could not find her anywhere and he also cannot ask anybody because that will be not good . He wants to meet her because he wants to see the face of a determined and strong daughter . Before the letter also he had listen many things about Ananya when he and Mr. Kashyap meets . Mr. Kashyap always in free time talks about his daughter that how strong she is, how bravew she is . And in the letter also he has specifically mentioned the name of Ananya , So he eagerly waited for her so that he can see how a 20 year old girl can be so strong.

Armaan opens the door and Kabir hears two voices which are arguing on something , both are female

1st V-tu kyu nahi su rahi hai yaar meri baat

2nd V-aur tu kyu nahi samajh rahi hai meri baat

1st- Anu yaar common please na ek ghante ki hi to baat hai please maan ja na

A-yaar trishu plz mujhe nahi jaana

An-Ananya Trisha kya hua tum dono darwaaze pe khade hue lad kyu rahe ho

T-Aunty dekhiye na main ise kab se keh rahi hu ki ye mere saath baby ki birthday party mein chale par ye maan hi nahi rahi

An-Ananya kyu nahi jaana beta?

A-ma mujhe abhi kahi nahi jaana , mera subah se mood bahut off hai

And with this she went inside her room

Trisha gave a pleading look ton Anita and Anita gave a helpless look to her
All this while Kabir was listening their conversation and came to know that this is not easy to be strong.Trisha went upto the room Anita and Armaan are standing at the door I also came somewhat near the room so I could hear the conversation however curiosity kills the man

Inside the room

T-ananya yaar plz na , tera mood cheerful ho jaayega agar tu party mein hamare saath chalegi

A-but trisha mujhe jana hi nahi hai hai , aaj papa ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai yaar

Anita and Armaan become very sad hearing this and Kabir also

T(in understanding tone)-Ananya main tujhse kuch puchu

A-ha puch

T-pehle tu yaha aa bed pe aur baith mere paas

Ananya went up to the bed and sat beside Trisha

A-le baith gayi ab puch

T-agar tujhse koi ye kahe ki teri papa ne crime kiya tha , unhone nainsaafi ki thi apne patients ke saath , to tu kya karegi

A(in angry tone)-kya karegi matlab kya trisha , use kas ke ek thappad maarungi , use bahut sunaungi , aakhir vo hota kaun hai mere papa ke baare mein aisa kahne wala

T(smiles a little)-nahi Ananya tu aisa kuch nahi karegi

A(in again angry tone)-kyu nahi karungi?

Anita and Armaan got tensed seeing this and Kabir got confused that why her friend is behaving like this with her.

T-kyuki tu khud hi nahi maanti ki tere papa nirdosh hai

A😡-trisha tu kya bole ja rahi hai , kuch bhi faltu bolne se pehle ek baar soch to liya kar

T-main kuch faltu nahi bol rahi hu Ananya , yehi sach hai aur agar ye sach nahi hai to bata tu kyu hamesha apne papa ko yaad karke roti hai

A(now having tears in the eyes)-kyuki vo mere saath nahi hai

T-nahi Ananya tere aansu is wajah se nahi girte ki tu apne papa ke saath nahi hai balki us wajah se girte hai ki tere papa ke saath bahut kuch hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha , aur Ananya tere papa bhi tujhse ye expect nahi karte ki tu is wajah se roye ki unke saath ye sab kyu hua , tu unki angel hai , vo hamesha tujhe khush dekhna chahte hai , tere papa ke jaane ke baad jab tune Armaan aur aunty ko sambhala tab tune tere papa ko pakka proud feel karwaya hoga ki unki angel kitni strong hai , par tune kabhi socha hai ki jab tu ye sochti hogi ki unke saath ye sab kyu hua , jab tujhe unpe daya aati hogi to unhe kitna bura lagta hoga , vo to fir yehi samjhenge unki angel unhe strong nahi maanti aur unke liye roti hai , vo unpe trust nahi karti, yaar Sudhir uncle was a great man aur unhone hamesha tujhe khush dekhna chaha , aur aaj jab tu udaas hogi unki wajah se to unhe kitna bura lagega , so plz Ananya tujhe is tarah rona nahi chahiye , ha agar tu sach mein dukhi hai ki tere papa ab tere saath nahi hai to tu ro le par kabhi ye mat sochna ki vo tere saath kyu nahi hai

Ananya hugs Trisha tightly . Anita and Armaan have tears in their eyes and Kabir also . He was feeling proud on the friendship of those two , he remembers of his friend Tarini , how she also give strength to him when he goes weak

A-Trisha thankyou so much yaar , agar tu nahi hoti to main pata nahi kya karti

T(smiles)-uski naubat nahi aati , aur vaise bhi jab meri mom ki death ho gayi tab tu hi ek thi jisne mujhe sambhala tha

A-vo mera farz tha

T-aur ye mera farz tha ,(after breaking the hug)chal ab fatafat ready hoja , I am waiting outside

A-coming

Trisha went outside and Anita hugged her thanking her , then they all came to the living room and sat on sofa only then Trisha notices Kabir and asked aunty about him

T-aunty ye kaun hai?

An-beta ye Kabir hai Mr.Kabir Sharma , journalist

T(shocked and happy)-to aap hai Kabir Sharma , my god aapki itni tareef suni hai maine anu se ki main to aadhi pagal ho gayi , usko jab bhi dekho tab sirf aapke baare mein baat karti rehti hai Kabir sir aise hai, Kabir sir vaise hai , Kabir sir ne ye kiya , unhone vo kiya , kitna acche ne news ko represent karte hai my god , mere to kaan dard ho gaye the aapki baatein sun sun kar

Kabir smiles hearing this , he knew about Ananya's hero worshipping by her mother but when he hears it from Trisha , he realize how much important he is for her .
After sometime Ananya come to living room wearing a sky blue frock untill her knees , her hair left open , she was looking very beautiful. As she come in front of everyone Kabir looked at her.

All were praising her for her beauty , but Kabir praises her silently in his heart for being innocent yet intelligent at same time , for being naive but brave at same time . He looked in her eyes , her eyes represent how strong she is . She is truly a reflection of her father .

Ananya notices him and got confused seeing him

A-ma ye kaun hai

T(teasingly)-lo jiske baare mein hum din raat baat kiya karte the , use yaad kiya karte the ab jab vo saamne aaye to use bhula diya , not fair Ananya

A(confused)-matlab

T-oho matlab ye wahi hai , tere superhero , the great Mr. Kabir Sharma

Ananya got shocked hearing this , she looks at him unable to believe that he was sitting in front of him. Kabir looked at her and smiled at her

K-hello

A-h..h..hi

Kabir smiles seeing her shocked and then continues

K-aapke father se aapki bahut tareef suni thi maine , vo hamesha kehte the ki aap bilkul unke jaisi hai, aaj jab aapko saamne dekha to sach mein aise hi laga ki Mr.Kashyap ki reflection hai

Ananya smiles a happy smile with tears in her eyes , she always like when anybody says that she is reflection of her father but when she hears from her idol , she got very happy and delighted

Seeing her Kabir decides that it is not right time to talk about it and it is not right time to give her the letter and to make her emotional , after all she was going to her friend's birthday party .

T-mm Ananya plan cancel to nahi haina party mein jaane ka(Ananya glares at her )nahi matlab tujhe agar tere superhero ke saath thoda time spend karna hai to its ok

Ananya slightly blushes when she hears that Trisha call him her superhero but again glares her telling her not to say one more word
Trisha chuckles seeing her and Kabir shook his head at the crazy girl in front of him and then he decided to leave

K-ok Mrs. Kashyap ab main chalta hu

An-ok Kabir , thankyou so much tum yaha time pe aa gaye

A-time pe aa gaye matlab

An-vo beta

but Armaan cut her in between

Ar-are matlab Kabir sir agar thoda late aate to unhe koi ghar pe nahi milta , hum sab bahar jaane wale the na lekin Kabir sir jaldi aa gaye aur uski wajah se hume unse milne ka mauka mil gaya

Anita and Kabir smiles at him , both were thinking how mature he is. Ananya getting satisfied with the answer nod her head

T-Kabir sir ab aap jab nikal hi rahe ho to hume drop kar do na

Ananya stares at him shockingly saying "what"
Kabir also get shocked with sudden request but recovers quickly , he instantly got to know that this girl is upto something but he cannot say no also

An-Trisha beta kya bol rahi ho , ye kyu tumhe drop karenge I mean inhe kahi aur jana hoga na , tum dono jao ok

K(little hesitant)-nahi Mrs.Kashyap its ok main inhe drop kar dunga

A-sir Trisha aise hi bol rahi thi , aapko takleef lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Kabir smiles at her

K-its ok Ananya , main drop kar deta hu

T-ha ananya vo itna zid kar rahe hai to unhe drop karne de na

Kabir again shook his head hearing her

A(little hesitant)-o ok

And then they bid bye to and left the house

END

I hope the chapter was ok
Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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