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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Chapter 10

Woww new twist
10 saal pehle kya hua tha
Aur yeh kaun h sayad gaurav loving it

Thankyou glad you are loving it
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Chapter 11

Awsm too good
Past is pain full but end is awsm

Thankyou so much dear😳
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Chapter 12
Woww awsm yr
Such a perfect man he is
Awsm date
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Chapter 12

Woww awsm yr
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Awsm date

Thankyou so much
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Chapter 15

Two months of waiting , two months of longing , People says that "Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass , its about learning to dance in the rain".Raj and Kriti knows that , the profession they had chosen for them , they cannot have enought time for themselves also , but in love , the wait is worth it . They knew that they can't be together half a day like normal couples after getting married also , but again the wait is worth it . They talked almost everyday on phone , the smile always made the way to their face when they says I Love You to each other , they really started missing each other so much , but once again the wait is worth it.

IN US

Raj was on his bed trying to sleep , but the sleep is now far away from his eyes . He was only thinking of one thing , or to be specific one person , his and only his Kriti.

"TU HI MERI SHAB HAI , SUBAH HAI

TU HI DIN HAI MERA

TU HI MERA RAB HAI , JAHAAN HAI

TU HI MERI DUNIYA

TU WAKT MERE LIYE MAIN HU TERA LAMHA

KAISE RAHEGA BHALA HOKE TU MUJHSE JUDA

O O O O HO HO

O O O O O O"

Raj smiled when Kriti's beautiful smiling face flashed in front of his eyes , which is always in his heart and mind

IN INDIA

At the same time , Kritika was at dining table for breakfast , Disha had left for her office , and she had to go for an advertisement shoot around 10:00 am , she was sitting idly not having her breakfast also which was there in front of her for more than half an hour. She was lost in thinking of someone so special to him . Of course who else other than Raj.

"AANKHON SE PADHKE TUJHE

DIL PE HAI MAINE LIKHA

TU BAN GAYA HAI MERE

JEENE KI EK WAJAH (2)

TERI HANSI TERI ADAA

AURO SE HAI BILKUL JUDAA

O O O O HO HO

O O O O O O "(guys imagine it in female version)

A smiling face of Raj with mischievous look in his eyes flashed in front of her eyes . She smiled widely.

But people also says that "Nothing ever goes away until it has taught us what we need to know". This wait has taught them the meaning of each other in their lives . If they had liked each other company before , now they nedded each other company . If they had liked each other presence before , now they needed to feel each other presence and lastly if they had loved before , they now wanted to be loved by each other .

Two months passed away and now it was the time of reunion . The two souls who eagerly wanted to see each other are finally getting their destination .

Raj had not informed Kriti about his arrival and he direcly went upto Kritika's home , he opened the door with a spare key and entered inside . He knows that Kriti is at home as she had only informed him that today she will be at home . He searched her in hall and then he went upto her bedroom . He stopped at the door when he listened her voice , she was humming a song and he got lost in that voice .

He slowly opened the door and saw her near her wardrobe , arranging something in it . He saw her , yes after two months finally he saw her and got lost in her . She was wearing a yellow top with white shorts . But he was just looking at her face .

He slowly walked upto her and stands behind her . Then he puts his both hands on her waist and pulled her to himself and then kept his both hand on her stomach . Kriti first gasped in shock but then she realized that touch was none other than of Raj , his Raj.

Raj kissed her earlobes at which Kriti closed her eyes , then he whispered

R-I missed you

And Kriti instantly turned and hugged him . He also hugged her very tightly and closed his eyes . After two moths he was feeling her so close to him and she was feeling that she had returned to her home . After 10 miutes they finally separated and Raj took Kriti in long and passionate kiss , they stopped when they both become breathless . Kriti again hugged him and Raj also reciprocated it .

A(in his arms only)-I missed you too

Raj broke the hug and then kissed her forehead and then they both got seated on the couch in Kriti's room.

Kriti in Raj's embrace only and Raj one arm around her .

K-aapne bataya kyu nahi ki aap aane waale ho

R-surprise dena tha tumhe , I hope you liked it

K(smiled)-I loved it

R-arrey ha , by the way , mujhe tumhe ek khaas chiz batani hai

K-accha , kya

R-yehi ki mujhe "Screen Awards" ki taraf se invitation aaya hai

K-really (excitedly)mujhe bhi

R(amusedly smile)-wow that's great , tumhe invitation kaunse award ke liye
aaya hai

K-vo actually mera nomination hua hai for "Best Emerging Actress Award on Small Screen"

R-wow Kriti that's really nice , mujhe to apni career itne jaldi koi award nahi mila tha ,even itne jaldi nominate bhi bahi kiya gaya tha, brilliant you are

K(smiled by getting complements from Raj , as he was the one who has become her idol)-thankyou , waise aapko kaunse award ke liye nominate kiya gya hai

R-for "Best Actor of the year on small Screen" (as Raj had not done bol;ywood movies for year)

K-wow , I am sure wo award aapko hi milega

R-and I am sure ki the star actress ka award tumhe hi milega.

Kritika smiled and kissed his cheeks , then she went downwards to make coffee for both of them , and Raj followed her .

Raj in the kitchen was observing her and a thought was running in her mind .

He came out of her trance when Kritika hold the coffe mug in front of him . He take the coffee mug from her and sat on the slab of the kitchen while Kriti stands beside him . They both started enjoying the coffee .

Then suddenly Raj placed his mug aside and looked at Kriti , who was still enjoying the coffee

R-Krti tumse kuch puchu?

Now she lookd at raj and raised her brow telling hi to continue

R-agar main tumse shaadi karlu , to tumhare career pe kitna affect padega

Kritika started coughing by his sudden questions about their marriage

K-raj ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho , humari shaadi ki baat achaanak se kaise
aayi aapke dimaak mein

R-Kriti main sirf itna puch raha hu ki agar hum dono ne shaadi ki to tumhare career pe kitna affect padega

K(smiled)-Raj kuch khaas nahi bas main thodi zyada jaldi successful ho jaaungi , afterall aapka saath tab hamesha hamesha ke liye ho jaayega na

R(smiled)-Kriti mera saath aaj bhi humesha humesha ke liye hi hai

Kritika smiled and lowered her head , but Raj got relieved as if his whole problems are now solved .

SCREEN AWARDS NIGHT

Raj and Kriti's family both are present , but they had to seat far away from each other . Kritika's family already knows about her daughter and Raj's relation and they are very happy for them . They also knows Raj's family now and had developed a special bond with them also specially with Shriya

And then the award ceremony began , and being really a very talented actress Kritika got award for the "best emerging actress on small screen", all big stars were present there and when they clapped for her , she felt emotional . She hugged all her family and then went upto stage . She received award and then thanked all the people in her life , also silently thanks Rajeev by her eyes on which he smiled and gave her a thumbs up , she smiled and went back to her seat.

After some more awards the name of "Best Actor On Small Screen" had announced by none other than SRK . And of course none other than of Rajeev Khandelwal. The whole hall burst out in loud applauds when he went upto the
stage.

He took award from SRK and Krtika giggles at that scene as her love was taking award from her childhood crush. He then went upto the mike

R-hello ladies and gentlemen , Main yaha aaj sirf thanks kehne ke liye nahi khada hu , ya sirf ye batane ke liye nahi khada hu ki main kitna khush hu . Main jaanta hu ki meri family ne mere liye bahut kuch kiya hai , mujhe yaha is manch tak lane ke liye bahut kurbaaaniyan di hai , aur main un sab ka dil se shukra guzaar hu , mere liye meri family meri sab kuch hai , mere dost mere liye sab kuch hai (looking towards Gaurav , who smiled), meri princess mere liye sab kuch hai(looking towards Shriya who gave her a flying kiss that he returned), meri naani mere liye sab kuch hai(looking towards naani , who smiled at him), lekin ek koi aisa bhi hai jiske liye main uski duniya hu , jo mere liye meri zindagi hai , aur aaj main aap sabke saamne uska haanth mangana chahta hu (looking towards SRK , who was still standing at stage)permission hai sir?

SRK(smiled and laughed)-dekho yaar permission to bilkul hai lekin uske pehle (walked towards him , and put his hand around his soulder)tumhe apne us saathi ke liye gaana gaana padega , whats say audience

All-yeee

R-arrey sir aap kaha mujhe gaana gaane laga rahe hai , main vaise bhi itna accha nahi gaata

SRK-dekho yaar ishq kiya hai to pariksha to dene hi padegi , aur gaana bhi puraana gaana hai , chalo shuru ho jaao

R-matlab aur koi option nahi hai

SRK-nahi

By then Kritika had totally gone into shocking state , she just not know what was happening

R(taking deep breadth)-ok , sir(looking towards old stars)agar koi galti ho jaaye to plz maaf kar dena (all smiled at him , as he was going to commit to a girl in front of whole world , without any fear , a symbol of true love).

SRK-arrey yaar uska naam to bataao

Rajeev looked at Kritika whose cheeks are now cherry red.

R(smiled)-gaane ke baad

SRK shrugs

Rajeev starts

"O mere dil ke chain

O mere dil ke chain

Chain aye mere dil ko dua kijiye

O mere dil ke chain

Chain aye mere dil ko dua kijiye"

(Instrumental Break)

Raj looked at Kriti who was still blushing

"Apna hi saaya, dekh ke tum

Jaane jahan, sharma gaye

Abhi to ye pehli manzil hai

Tum to abhi se ghabra gaye

Mera kya hoga socho toh zara (Rajeev kept his one hand on his heart)

Haaye aise na aahein bhara kijiye (Raj saw her and he was confirmed that she
is breathing heavily due to excessive shyness)

O mere dil ke chain

Chain aye mere dil ko dua kijiye

(Instrumental Break)

Aap ka armaan, aap ka naam

Mera tarana aur nahin (Kritika lowered her eyes)

Inn jhukti palkon ke siva

Dil ka thikana aur nahin

Jachta hi nahi, aankhon mein koi (moving his eyes all over the hall)

Dil tumko hi chaahe toh kya kijiye (pointing his one hand towards her , who was now not looking less than a blushing bride)

O mere dil ke chain

Chain aye mere dil ko dua kijiye

All the people now got to know who the queen is of Rajeev's heart and started cheering him when came down from the stage , moving towards his love all the way singing

Yu to akela bhi aksar

gir ke sambhal sakta hu main,

tum jo pakadlo haath mera

duniya badal sakta hu mai

He sat on his knees in front of her who was feeling that now she will burst out due to this double extra happiness and looking shyly towards Rajeev

Manga hai tumhe, duniya ke liye,

Ab khud hi sanam faisala ki jiye

O mere dil ke chain

Chain aye mere dil ko dua kijiye

O mere dil ke chain

R(still on his knees and everybody surrounding them )- Kriti aaj kuch nahi kahunga , sirf puchunga , kya tum meri banogi , WILL YOU MARRY ME.

Kritika finally let the tears flow from her eyes , tears of happiness and loveliness . She just nodded vigorously and then hugged him tightly who has gotten up now
They both hugged each other tightly , and everybody cheered them . Old stars give them blessing and new starts give them good wishes buy their cheering and clapping.

After sometime in front f Kriti's home

Raj was side hugging Kriti , with their back supported by car

K-thanks Raj

R-kisliye

K-meri is shaam ko life ki sabse khubsurat sham banana ke liye

R-shaam to meri khush numa hui hai , afterall tumne shaaadi ke liye haan jo
kardi .

K(smiled)-main bahut khush hu Raj

Raj pulled her closer from her waist

R-aur tumhari khushi mere liye duniya ki sabse badi gift hai , aur iss smile ke liye main duniya ki saari takleefe akele face karne ke liye tayyar hu

K(putiing her arms around his neck)-agar aap duniya ki saari takleefe akele face karenge to ye smile hi nahi bachegi , kyuki saari problems hum milke face karenge , kyuki ab aap sirf aap aur main sirf main nahi hu , ab hum hum ban chuke

Rajeev smiled and pulled her more closer and touched his forehead from hers.

R-I LOVE YOU

K-I LOVE YOU TOO

END

Ok so finally ff ended

Hope you all liked it

Do tell me if you want an epilogue or not

Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice...
Loved it...
It ended so soon...
Of course need a epilogue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
VAISHU...!!!! That was more than AMAZING...!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
Seriously...I don't have words yr...!!!
What should I say now...Wese gaane ne to kisi cheez ki yaad dila di sahi mein...😳
Ofcourse we need an epilogue...
But mera fav. ff going to end...😭
Chal yr bht hua rona dhona hogaya thoda sa dance bhi kr lete hain...tere ff k complete hone ki khushi mein...
Wese sach mein yr Update was awesomeee...!!!πŸ‘
Waiting for the epilogue...do update it soon dear...πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb.ff complete ho gaya...feeling sad.but i'm hpy it's a hpy ending of our kaya.thnx vaishu to give a lovely story fr us
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful ff Vaishnavi!
Loved it throughly...
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What a romantic update
Loved it
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