Season 2: aage kya hoga? ( combined story game) important note pg 78 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one! Kavika and Chaitali just love the writing of both of you.. keep it up you both๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Anita:beta kabir! itna naraz hone wali kya baat he isme..? Maine aapko mana kia tha na ki Ananya se nahi mil sakte.. ab shadi mai hi milna usse samjhe?
Kabir(pouting): but ma I am missing her so much.. aur ab toh vo mujhse naraz bhi ho gyi hai aur kah rahi thi ki khana bhi nahi khayegi.. ab main kya karu..?
Anita: main kya kahu beta..ab tum hi samjao ananya ko.. meri baat wo sunti kaha hai..?
Kabir: okay ma main kuch karta hu..
Anita: Kabir beta! Main janti hoon ki tum yeh sab nahi mante par beta hum to mante hai na! Tum Ananya se nahi mil sakte abhi..
Kabir: okay ma, I understand and I respect your views.. fine main abhi APNI Ananya se milne nahi ja raha hu..

Anita smiled after listening him and left his room. Rajveer dropped Anita to her house..
In ananya's room:
Ananya was sitting in the middle of her bed sulking and thinking that Kabir was angry on her..
Ananya(talking to herself): Wah! kabir apko to yeh pata bhi nahi hai ki main aapko kitna miss kar rahi hu.. aur apne to seedha mujhe phone par dant diya..
Suddenly she came out of her thoughts when her phone rang.. It was Kabir who was calling her...
Ananya cut the call deliberately and made a sulking face but Kabir again called her.. she cut the call again but kabir called her again n again...

After some time she gave up and received his call because she too just wanted to talk to him and wanted to listen his sexy voice..
Ananya(showing her fake anger): aap kyu itni der se mujhe pareshan kar rahe he..? mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni..
Kabir(smirking):Wow Darling! ab mera call karna tumhe pareshan karne lag gaya.. very nice
Ananya: ha toh! mujhse baat mat kijiye.. sun liya..?
Kabir(still smiling): yadi mai jabarjasti tumse baat karu toh..? kya karogi..?
Ananya: me phone cut kar dungi
Kabir(naughtily): soch lo jaan! jitna mujhe abhi tadpaogi na utna sud samet wapis lunga main wo bhi hamari suhaagraat me! jitne nakhre abhi dikhane hai dikha lo but hamari suhaagraat aane do sab barabar karunga, I promise!
Ananya blushed very hard after listening his words and hid her face in the pillow..
Kabir: Kya hua..? chup kyu ho gayi..? oh! now I got it tum abhi se hamari suhaagraat ke bare me soch rahi ho na, You naughty girl... muuaaahhh..๐Ÿ˜‰
Ananya(still blushing very hard): Ka... kabirrr.. ye... aap kya bol rahe ho..?
Kabir(now serious): Ananya please khana kha lo na... dekho tum khana nahi khaogi toh main bhi nahi khaunga..
Ananya: nahi mujhe khana nahi khana hai bas..
Kabir( in a husky voice said): okay mat khao, me bhi nahi khaunga.. aur haan hamari "special night" ke liye taiyaar rehna main tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi jane nahi doonga us raat..
Ananya blushed even more and said
Ananya(in a low voice): accha kabir, me khana kha lungi aap bhi kha lijiye par is tarah mujhe itna sharmane par mazboor mat kijiye...
Kabir: That's my ananya! chalo jao aur abhi khana khao pehle, phir hum baad me baat karte hai Okay darling..
Ananya: Okay Kabir but aap bhi khana kha hi lena..
Kabir: yes darling.. don't worry and I LOVE YOU.. and Missing you so much..
Ananya: I LOVE YOU TOO Kabir and I am missing u too.. Bye..
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Sorry for this long part
Edited by cuteprateeksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next...Ananya had a ritual bath and dressed up for the Kalirey ceremony. ...
Richa, Trisha and Baby were present since they would be tying the Kalirey on her hand...

First Ananya's uncle made her wear the suhaag ka chooda ( marriage bangles) given by maternal uncle...

Anita's eyes were moist as she saw hwr daughter wear the first sacred marriage jwellery worn by married woman...

Next Richa, Trisha and Baby tied the Kalirey around her wrist...

R: aaj main bohot kush hu yaar!

A: sach! ye kabir ke naam ki jewellery pehenkar apne aap ko complete mehsuss kar rahi hu...

Meanwhile in Kabir's house...

R: oye chote! chal halaal hone ke liye tayyar hoja aur ghodi tujhe halaal hone ke liye swayam escort karegi!

Kabir made a face but eventually bursr out laughing. ...

S: achcha! toh koi shaadi ka laddoo khaakar pachta raha hai...
Sandhya said glaring at Rajveer...

R: uh..n..nahi..s..sandhya...v..vo..

Kabir was amused to see his dada stammer like this...

R: chote! ek baat yaad rakhiyo! galati chahe kisi ki bhi ho par maafi tu hi mangega...

M: aur chaachu agaraap chaachi ki baat nahi sunoge na toh vo aapko sofa pe sulaayengi jaise mummy papa ko sulaati hai...


Sandhya and Rajveer glared at Monu while Kabir burst out laughing and picked Monu up affectionately. ...




Edited by akyabiggestfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Lage raho mere pyaare writers...
SR ka scene to Maine dediya.
If you want I can write a morning after ka scene.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Wow ... keep continuing this is so fun to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The barat left Kabirs house in full swing. It was a simple, elegant and a classy wedding but there was love all in the air .

Anita and the girls ( Richa, Baby, Trisha) welcomed their Jiju in traditional style with haar and aarti

The Kashyap house was a treat for eyes. It was very elegantly decorated with a welcome tangelo diyas lilies . The house had the fresh frangance of the flowers . Everyone around seemed happy and enjoying the occasion but Kabirs eyes were awaiting his bride. It was close to 24hours since he had not seen him he was just getting too anxious

R: Arey baby aur sunny paji shaadi ke phele aaj ki breaking news suni???

Everyone around gave Richa a surprised look withKabir giving what are you talking look

B: Arey haan Richa Mai bhi yahi sochne ki koshih kar rahi hoo

K: Tum ladkiya Kya baat kar rahi ho???

R; Jiju shaadi ka din hai , baraat bhi aa gayi , sabke chere khil rahe hai aur aap khud ko dekhiyE Khalid sir ka manicure kharab ho Gaya ho asie shakal kyun bana rakhi hai a apne???
Kya The Kabir Sharma ko bhi shaadi ke naam se darr lagta hai?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Kabir: huhh?? Kabir Sharma kisi se nahi darta
and saali saahibaas jab aap logo ka no. aayega toh mai dekhta hu ki aap logo ko koan bachata hai aapke pyaare Jeeeju se ..๐Ÿ˜‰

Richa: oh ho Baby hum toh dar gaye

Baby: haan ji Richa ji mai toh dar gayi
haaawww ab??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome updates! Good going guys!
Kabir: Accha yeh baate chodho yeh batao meri ananya kaha hai? voh kesi hai? Usne kuch kaha-piya? Voh kab aageyi mere paas? Aree kuch toh bolo!

Baby: Jeeju tussi itne sawaal pucchoge toh hum jawab kese denge. hume computer samajh rakha hai kya??

Kabir: Mazaak karna band karo mene jo poocha hai uska answer do!

Richa: Ohoo! Jeeju bade jaldi hai ananya se milne ke liye. Meri ananya meri ananya kar rahe hai.

Kabir feels shy.

Baby: Aree dekho toh humare dulhe raja humari dulhan se bhi zaada sharma rahe hai.

Kabir: Accha aaj kal tum bahut bolne lag gaye ho dekh loonga tumhe offfice mein. Vese ab toh mein ananya se mil sakta hoon na! Plz le chalo na mujhe uske paas. Plz. Plz.

Baby: Jeeju ab na bade naughty ho! Vese toh ofice mein discipline ki ramanyan gate rehte ho aur jab se ananyaji se milne ke liye saari hade par kar chuke hai. Hume phasane ka iraada hai kya.

Kabir: Yaar tum toh meri madad kardo. Mein anaya ko sirf door se dekhonga aur kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalega. Plz le chalo na!
Baby: Haan mein kuch sochti hoon. Par iska credit aapko mujhe dena padega!
Kabir: Haan zaroor. par jaldi socho mein intezaar kar raha hoon!
Richa was not interested in the convo her eyes for searching for someone else๐Ÿ˜ณ
Seeing this kabir remembered his ananya's gift.

Kabir(thinks): Richa dont worry ronnie/daljeet se jald hi milogi!

Kabir to Baby: Vese baby dont u think mere alaawa koi aur bhi kisi ka intezaar kar raha hai vo bhi badi bezabri se!(Pointing towards richa)

Baby: Haan jeeju mujhe bhi lag raha hai koi toh hai jiske dil mein dakh dakh ho rahi hai voh bhi zor zor se!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Hey everyone
I am basically trying first time writing on kaya
Hope it will be OK

Here in ananya's room -

Ananya is sitting before the mirror seeing herself clad in the bridal wear
With a beautiful lehenga with a designer blouse , jeweleries, the bridal red and white chooda which always tells her that the time will arrive soon to be, Mrs kabir sharma whole...

She remembers how she met him first time, how he always used to insult her, how he always teach her, how he always be with her, how he share her all pain and sorrow, how he passionately loves her...

Remembering his love the recent conversation with him...

Their wedding night
Remembering this ananya become all red..
Anu- I love you so so many much Mr sharma


Suddenly her phone beeps..
A new message

Jaaneman plz abhi itni sharmaakar laal mat ho, abhi bhi time hai shaadi mai,
Main control kaise karunga.. Be ready fast..
Phir jaldi SE shaadi karke tumhe dekhata hoon
Mr sharma KO pareshaan karne kaa nateja... My jaan..

Your Mr sharma
Waiting ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Hey new on this forum
Hope I don't create a mess
Generally write ariya story...
Plz tell
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ananya starts looking here and there as she reads the message and Kabir smiles at her to be wife's anxiousness.
Ananya again receives a text from Kabir
"Itna bechain mat ho dhundh nhi payogi mjhe
Suddenly baby comes to kabir saying, "Jeeju tussi to pakka marwaoge ab apne apni heer nu taadke ho gya To chale aunty ji dhundh rhi hai aapko "
Kabir makes a pout face sees ananya one more time and goes along with Baby .
Here Richa comes to Ananya
Richa:Chaliye madam pandit g ne bulaya hai varmala ke liye
Ananya :ha bas chal(saying while straightening her palluu)
Richa:(helps her and says) Tu aj sachmuch bahut sundar lg rhii hai ananya aj Roni hota to kitna khush hota tjhe aise dulhan ke roop me dekh ke
Ananya:Haa yaar main bhi use bahut miss kr rhi hu

Both having tears in their eyes suddenly Anita enters saying "kya kr rhe ho tum dono pandit g kbse awaaz lga rhe hai " but stops seeing her beautiful daughter in her bridal attire and recalling the childhood moments where once she was dressed as a bride takes some kajal in her finger and applies behind her ear saying "meri beti ko kbhi kisi ki nazar na lage" and wiping her and ananya's tears saying "Chalo beta mahurat ka waqt ho gya ab aur intezar mat karwao mere bete se"

Saying this all of them come out with Ananya
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