Season 2: aage kya hoga? ( combined story game) important note pg 78 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Awesome! All writers are giving awesome updates.
Ananya: Yeh kya kar rahe hai aap? Utariye mujhe. Koi dekh lega plz.

Kabir: Aree tumhe nae lessons nahi lene. Future mein kaam aange mrs.sharma.

Armaan: Didi jeeeju ne aap ko acche se gud night keh diya ho toh so jao.

Ananya: Wah armaan kya timing hai!

Kabir: Tum dono bhai-behen mujhe romance nahi karne dete.

Ananya: Aww. Fas gaye bichare.

Kabir: Tum is Kabir Sharma ko jaanti nahi ho! Mein jab puri duniya ke saamne shaadi ke liye propose kar sakta hoon to sab ke saamne tumhe "LESSONS" bhi de sakta hoon. DOON?

Ananya: Nahi! Accha mein haari aap jeete.ab plz mujhe neeche utariye.

Kabir: Chalo mein tumhe tumahre room tak chod deta hoon.

Ananya: Sirf chodna hi hai ok mr.sharma!

Kabir: Haan sirf chodunga hi half mrs. sharma.

Continue plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
KABIR: GOOD NIGHT AND MISS ME ...I LOVE U
ANANYA: LOVE U TOO AB JAYE BHI...

THE NEXT MORNING HALDI PREPARATIONS ARE GOING ON FULL SWING
Ananya is dressed in a beatiful yellow net sari with flower accessories
and everyone waiting for the shagun haldi which was to be come from kabir's place.

AT KABIR'S PLACE:
...
KABIR: bas bhi kijiye dada apne shadi ka sara gussa aj hi nikalenge kya...peela bandar banakar choda hai mjhe...bhabhi dekhiye na dada ko

BHABHI: kyu pareshan kr rhe ho hamare dulhe raja ko ...(applying more haldi on kabir's nose teasingly)

KABIR:kya bhabhi aap bhi

DADA: Kabir me tere liye bahut khush hu pichle kuch saalo me tjhpr jo beeti hhai jo maine tere sath kia uske liye mjhe maaf krdena(their eyes gets a little moist)

KABIR: ab kuch bhi galat nhi hoga dad hum sb sath rhenge ek family ki tarah aap me bhabhi monu aur ananya ek badi khush haal family ki tarah

BHABHI:(On seeing Richa and sunny entering) Aree Richa aao aao

RICHA:woww jiju kya lag rhe ek minute isi baat pe ek selfie to banti hai

KABIR:wo to sb thik hai sali g pr kya aap bhi mjhe haldi lgane aayi hai???

RICHA:i dont mind by the way(applying haldi to kabir) BUT me ananya ke liye aapko lagayi hui haldi le jane aayi hu u know shagun ki haldi

KABIR: U mean meri utri hui haldi ananya ko lagegi???

RICHA: Anita aunty ne to aisa hi kaha tha ...kitni romantic hai na ye rasam. (winking at kabir)

BHABHI : ye lo richa aur meri devrani ko achche se rang dena mere pyare devar ke pyaar ke rang me

KABIR: Are me bhi chlta hu tumhare sath

RICHA: jiju apse kal aunty ne kaha tha na ki ap ananya se nhi mil skte shadi tk mjhe bhi kafi strict instructions diye hai aunty ne

KABIR:Kya yaar achchha thik hai photos khich ke mjhe forward krna me dekhna chahta hu ki meri ananya mere pyaar me rangne ke baad kaisi lgti hai
(just den ananya calls )

ANANYA: Ap bahot cute lg rhe hai haldi lagagkr

KABIR:How do u know about it tum mjhpr spy kr rhi ho not fair ananya

ANANYA:mere spies ne hi to mjhe apki sari khabar di aur photos bhi

(kabir realizes his and richa's selfie)

KABIR:acha Mrs.Sharma bahut mja aa rha hai na aapko dekh lunga tumhe

ANANYA: ohoo kaise dekhenge maa ne to mna kia hai apko yaha aane se aur to aur aj ghar me sakht pehra hai ap to kya apki parchayi bhi aj ghar me nhi aa paayegi(ananya chuckles)

KABIR:Achcha beta challenge accepted me ghar bhi aaunga aur tumhe apne haathon se haldi bhi lagaunga

ANANYA:We"ll see MR.SHARMA...

(KABIR SMIRKING ON HIS EVIL IDEAS)




SORRY IF I RUINED IT BUT COULDN'T RESIST MYSELF SORRY ONCE AGAIN

Edited by aaliya9872 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
All are literally smearing Kabir's face with haldi...
K: bhaabhiii! dekho na!
Kabir said just like a baby...

Sa: owlee mele devar ji...rukiye...beta Monu aajao...

M: haan mamma...

Sa: beta ye dekho aapke chachu kitne achche lagrahe haina...

M: ( giggling) chaachu! hum na school picnic ke liye circus gaye the na tabhi waha jo clown tha na aap ekdum uske jaise lagrahe ho!

All burst out laughing and Kabir made a face...

K: achcha beta...tujhe bhi dekhlunga...

M: aap kuch nahi karsakte...meri chaachi aapki boss hai...

Kabir stared open mouthed at him...

K: hmmm..
toh apni boss se toh milna padega ab toh...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Riya is Back!! Lovely! U made the story more interesting aaliya dear ruin nahi kiya!
Kabir: Ab mein Ananya se toh milkar hi rahoonga!
Suddenly an idea strikes Kabir.

Ananya: Ma aur kitni haldi lagaogi aur ab tum log kyo laga rahe ho haldi bas hogaya na!

Richa: Are tujhe jeeju ke pyaar mein nahi rangna!

Ananya blushes and gets sad remembering Kabir. She was missing him.
Suddenly a man enter he was no other than bhadresh kutty!
Ananya: Yeh kese yaha aa gaye?

Anita: Tum kon ho beta?

Bhadresh: Aayio ama jaan mein ananya ki jaan mera matlab uska dost uski ek case me madat karti. Aaj is shubh mohrat par voh mujhe invite karti.

Anita looked at ananya and asks thru her expressions if she invited him.
Ananya was confused what to do but all was in vain in front of kabir's love.

Ananya: Haan ma. Yeh hai mr.bhadresh kutty! Inhone mere ek case mein bahut mada ki thi. He is very cute u know and winks at bhadresh.

Bhadresh kutty gets naughty and takes some haldi and goes to ananya to apply it on her face.

Bhadresh: What a beauty! Kya tum lagti! Aaj tum pure angel lagti my Jaan!

Ananya: Flirting toh bahut acchi kar lete hai mr.kutty. ab jaldi jaayi aur logo ko bhi lagani hai haldi.

Kabir applies haldi on ananya's face and goes near her ear and whispers.

Kabir/Bhadresh Kutty: Naan unn Nai Kandalikrin! Mein challenge jeet gaya!

Ananya too whispers: Agar mein sabke saamne chila kar bolu aap kon hai toh kya karenge mr .kutty?

Bhadresh: Tum mujhe fasao aur mein tumhe puri duniya ke saamne kiss kardonga!
Ananya blushes.

Anita (coughs): umh.umh..Mr kutty aap mujhe bilkul mere daamad ki tarah lag rahe hain.

Bhadresh gets shocked.
Kabir: Nahi ama na. Hum toh underworld don hain.

Anita goes near kabir and pinches his ears.

Anita: Underworld don haan! Kabir tum kabhi nahi sudhar sakte na fir aa gaye. Mein shaadi cancel kar doongi bahut ho raha hai.
Ananya laughs.

Kabir: AAPKO kese pata chala?
Anita: Ma ko sab pata hota hai. Ananya tumhare kaarname batati hai! Ab jaa rahe ho ya nahi!

Kabir: jA raha hoon. Bye! zoor se kaan kheecha.
And kabir runs away leaving all laughing.
Anita: Mera naughty damaad.

Sorry guys if destroyed the fun but bhadresh kutty ko kahi se bhi laane ka mann kar raha tha sorry.
Edited by kavikas - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
As Kabir was started moving out of the Kashyap house
Sandhya: Oh hoo toh yaha hai Bhadresh Sahaab

Rajveer: haa apni Jaan Se milne aaye hai

K: ab aap dono plzz shuru mat ho jaana
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya

As Kabir was started moving out of the Kashyap house

Sandhya: Oh hoo toh yaha hai Bhadresh Sahaab

Rajveer: haa apni Jaan Se milne aaye hai

K: ab aap dono plzz shuru mat ho jaana

Hehe nice one!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Hiii...
Kabir was angry now and he just walked away without a word...
Rajveer and Sandhya were left stunned on the doorstep. ...

A: arrey bhaiyya bhaabhi! aaiyye na!

S: vaise main toh apni devrani ko haldi lagane aayi hu...I know ajeeb lagta hai par hum devraani jethani bankar nahi behne bankar rahenge!

Ananya smiles as Sandhya applied haldi to her...

R: vaise Kabir ko kya hua? Kaafi udaas aur naaraz hokar chala gaya...

A:uh...kuch nahi...bas ma ne daant diya...

S: hmmm...ab tumhe hi manana hoga usse...bada ziddihai vo...pakka mooh phulaakar betha hoga apbe kamre mein...

A: aww! ek baat hai kabir bade cute hai!

S: use aisa kabhi mat bolna...usse bada gussa aata hai...Rajveer ne bataya tha ki vo bachpan mein kaafi chubby tha aur sab uske gaal kheech kheechkar use cute bulaate the aur vo mooh phula leta tha...


A: awww! kite cute honge vo...bhaiyya mujhe photo zarur dhikhayega. ...


In Kabir's room...

Kabir was sitting on his bed...with an angry expression...clutching a pillow...

K: ab toh main bilkul nahi milunga...sirf main hi tadpe ja raha hu...use toh parvah bhi nahi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Iam loving this ❤️
Awesome writers 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sandhya enters the room and goes to Kabir.
Sandhya: Kisne kaha parwah nahi hai! Tumhe pata hai ananya tumhe kitna miss kar rahi hai. Usne subah se khaana nahi khaya.

Kabir: Kyo nahi khaya? Kabir gets worried.

Sandhya: Kyoki voh keh rahi hai ki jab tak kabir use i love nahi kahe ga vo khana nahi khayegi.

Kabir: Kaha toh tha i love u voh bhi tamil mein! Par ma ne mujhe bagah diya vaha se. Mat khaye khana! mein uske liye tadap raha hoon aur use zara si bhi parwah nahi hai meri.

Ananya was on the video call on sandhya's mobile and was listening to the convo.
Ananya: Accha ab toh mein bilkul nahi khaongi. Aap ko meri parwah anhi hain mein pagalon ki tarah apko manane ke liye sandhya bhabhi se request ki. Bye!

Kabir gets shocked hearing ananya's voice and searches for her and then sees his bhabhi holding the mobile. Ananya had tears in her eyes.

Kabir: aree. mera voh matlab nahi tha! I love you darling tum khana kha lo plz nahi toh mein bhi khaana nahi khaonga! Plz for me pls eat ur food. Love you im missing u badly. Ma ne daant diya isliye gusse mein keh diya!

Anita: Jab ma pyaar kar sakti hai toh daant nahi sakti!
Kabir: ARee ma aap!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Fully enjoying it.👏👏👏...love each n every writer here...all r awesome
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