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Posted: 9 years ago

Ananya walks out of the room and she is surprised to see Bhabi had finished all the cooking and was waiting for Ananya to come and join for lunch. Rajveer bhaiya and Monu were watching TV, while Ananya walked out. Seeing Ananya bhabi says,

Bh: Ananya, itni sundar lag rahi ho, ekdum pari jaise 😊

Ananya goes and hugs Bhabi and slowly whispers in her ears,

A: Sorry bhabi aankh hi nahi khuli, shaadi ke functions se itna thak gayi thi, ki pata hi nahi chala dophar kab ho gayi

Bhabi said throttling her throat,

Bh: Accha beta, shaadi ke functions ne aapko thaka diya tha ya Devarji ni... 😉

Ananya blushed hard, and tried to escape bhabi's innumerable questions and leg pulling. Just then Rajveer bhaiya comes there

R: Ananya, bahut joro ki bhook lagi hai yaar, chota kaha hai? Chalo lunch karte hai...😃

Just then Kabir walks to the living area all dressed up and looking as handsome as ever.

K: Good morning Bhaiya bhabi...

R: Chote, shaadi ho gayi who thik hai, samay ka pata bhi nahi raha tuze, morning nahi afternoon ha😆😆i, hum lunch pe wait kar rahe hai...

K: Haan bhaiya who bus, yeah Ananya ki baatein khatam hoti, toh mai sota and right time jagata na...😳

Ananya raises her eyes, and says

A: Meri baatein..???😡😡

Just then bhabi jumps to the rescue,

Bh: Accha accha bahut baatein ho gayi, Ananya and Kabir, tum dono bhagwan ke samne matha teko, thank him for the new beginning aur lunch karne baitho. Humhe 2pm tak Ananya ke ghar pauchana hai, Satyanarayan ki puja rakhi hai Auntyji ne...

Just then the landline phone starts beeping and Ananya answers it. It was Anita on the other line..

An: Ananya beta mai kabse phone try kar rahi thi, almost 20 times call kiya tuze maine subah se, tu phone kyun nahi answer kar rahi thi?

A: Maa par raat ko aapse baat karne ke baad phone ki ring baji hi nahi, phone toh hamesha mere saath hi tha..

Just then Ananya checks her phone to find it on silent.. and then she gives Angry daggers to Kabir...

K: Haan shayad maine galti se silent pe daal diya tha...

A: Haan Ma kabir ne silent pe kar diya tha.. waise aap phone kyun kar rahi thi? Kuch kaam tha?

An: Arey beta aaj puja hai na ghar me, 4pm panditji aa jayenga, tum log 2pm tak pauch jao. Aur haan yaar rakhna, the newly wedded couple jo puja mein baitha hai they are not supposed to eat until after the puja..

A: Kya.?? We can't eat till Puja..

An: Only you and Kabir, everyone else can... Accha tum jaldi se tayar ho jao and come soon.. am waiting for you guys...

Ananya disconnects the phone and narrates the conversation to everyone.

A: Bhaiya Bhabi aap log khana kha lijiye, mai kuch juice and fruits cut kar deti hoo , Kabir aap who kha lena...

Bhaiya bhabi and Monu sit for lunch on the table and Kabir joins them.

After a minute Kabir says,

K: Aap sabko khana khata dekh bahut bhook lag rahi hai.. I'll go check juice bana ya nahi..

Bhabi gives a naughty look to Kabir and says,

Bh: Juice leke hi bahar aana.. kahi bhook se chakkar na jaye..

Kabir gives his naughty smirks and enters the kitchen. Ananya was busy peeling oranges and bananas, she was gonna make mixed fruit juice.

Kabir goes and hugs Ananya from behind and says:

K: Ananya vishwas hi nahi hota, ki tum Mrs.Sharma ho, aur yaha asie ghar mein hum sab 1 saath. Tumne na sirf meri Zindagi mein khushiya bhar di hai, but muze 1 nayi zaindagi di hai. Ananya tum sach mein muze poora karti ho, tum ho toh mai hoo, tum nahi toh mai nahi... Maine agar kabhi bhi tumhe hurt kiya dukh diya toh anjane mein Ananya, and I promise ki abse har savera 1 naya savera hoga... Haar roj mai tumhe phele se zadya pyaar karunga...

I wanna grow old with you Ananya, I want to walk this path of life holding your hands forever and ever ... I love you baby...😊

Ananya and Kabir get emotional and speechless, both close their eyes in anticipation sinking in every word Kabir just said, and then Ananya just murmurs, I love you too Kabir...

Just then Kabir kisses her neck and opens his eyes, just to see those crazy love bites all over her neck and back..

K: Ananya yea kya? Sare love bites ekdum visible hai..?? Tum asie kaise bahar aa gayi??

A: Haaw... maine toh dhyan hi nahi diya... shoot bhabi ne dekh liya hoga, na jane kya soch rahi hogi mere bare meri... ekto mai lunch time mein uthi, uppar se asie... mera impression toh gaya... aur Maa unhe pata chala toh maar hi dalegi muze... Kabirrr... all of this is because of you... Na toh aap pagal se pyaar karte aur na yeah sab hota...

K: Toh firse sab meri galti hai?...

Edited by chats53 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ananya throwing daggers at Kabir through her eyes and spoke

Ananya(A):ha toh apki hi sari galti hai.. aap na to mujhe puri raat pyaar karte aur na hi ye sab hota...

and she blushed after realizing what she just said...

Kabir held her waist even more tightly and whispered in her ear...

Kabir(K): accha! aur mood kisne banaya tha..? Hmm..? aur naughty girl you were also enjoying that so beautifully remember you were pleading to me to do such things...

Ananya blushed so hard this time and turned to face Kabir...

A(now facing him, but looking down): Kabir please aap na ye sab baate itni jor se mat boliye... dada aur bhabi sun lenge... mujhe bahut sharm aa rahi he please...

Kabir smiled at her innocence and spoke naughtily

K: sun lenge toh...? I don't care... such to yeh Mrs. Shrama ki kal raat aap bhi...

As he spoke Ananya just put her index finger on Kabir's lips just to shut him...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just then bhabi entered the kitchen to check on the 2 love birds
Bh: juice ban Gaya??
Seeing Kabir holding Ananya bhabi says
Bh; Kabir tum dono ko jaldi hi honeymoon pe chale Jana chaiye.. Waise bhi last kuch weeks tough rahe and abb yeah shaadi ki bhaag daud
You guys should get some me time..
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Ananya blushed hard listening to what Bhabi said but tried to ignore and concentrate on juice making. Later she and Kabir had some juice and everyone got ready to go to Ananya's house for Puja. Kabir and Ananya in Kabir's car and Bhaiya, Bhabi , Monu in Bhaiya's car as bhaiya needed to finish some paperwork of his house after the puja.
While they were driving, Kabir said

K:Ananya I know mai khud ko repeat kar raha ho, but kitna ajeeb hai na, kuch mahino phele maine office se chup chup ke, Malvika aur baki sab se bahane banake tumhe drop karne aata tha, aur aaj hum as man and wife iss car se ja rahe hai. Wahi raste, wahi manzil, bus mera humsafar abb hamesha ke liye mere saath hai.

Ananya lifted their entwined hands to her lips and kissed Kabir's hand.

A: Kabir aap baton ke champion ho... Abb jaldi chaliye maa wait kar rahi hai..

K: Even I can't wait to be there... I think I have the biggest ever surprise for you, and I am sure it is going to make you very happy...

A: Surprise.. Kabir aapke suprises se abb muze daar lagne laga hai.. I hope aap kal raat jaise wale koi surprise ki baat toh nahi kar rahe na?

K: Ananya, surprises are not to be told.. You just keep thinking ... tumhe daar lage ya nahi yea surprise tumhe milkar rahega... aur who bhi sabke samne...

A: Kabirrr... Nooo I am done with your surprises... raat ke 5-7 ghante kafi nahi the ki abb aap muze sabke samne embarrass karenge?

K: Embarrass? Mrs.Sharma, mai kal aapko embarrass kar raha tha? Bhooliye mat aapke demands, I can still show you my back which has all starches, thanks to the amazing long nails you love to keep...

A: Shhh kabir.. jo bhi hai aap yahi bataiyee..

K: Madam jab mai aapko kehta tha thoda decorum maintain karte hai, thoda PDA rakhte hai tab toh aap sunti nahi thi, abb jab shaadi bhi ho gayi toh aap muze PDA maintain karne bol rahi hai.. Bhool jao..

Saying this Kabir pulls the car at Ananya's house, she gets off the car

A: Kabir aapne kuch asia waisa kiya na toh yaad rakhiye mai baat hi nahi karungi aapse...

And saying this she walks in the house.

All her KKN friends, Richa, Baby, Sunny, Tarini, Anurag, everyone is home and waiting for Kabir and Ananya..

An: Kaha reh gaye the beta aap log kabse wait ho raha hai...

Ananya goes and hugs her mom and Armaan and then Richa and Baby...

R: Oho Ananya ji, badi khil rahi hai...hooth bhi bade suje huae lag rahe hai.. lagta hai Jiju ne raat bhar..

A: Oye chup kar tu.. maar khani hai kya?

S: Oyee matee mere bhanje bhanja ke aane ki tayari ho gayi...

A: Sunny ke bacche tu toh ruk hi ja...

Saying this Ananya runs behind Sunny trying to hit him,, Kabir watching the whole scene all this while just loving the innocence of his wife. After a little while Pandit comes and they do the Satyanarayan Puja. Post puja everyone is chit chatting and having a good time.

Malvika and Khalid also grace their presence..

K: Come in Khalid..

A: Khalid sir and Malvika what a pleasant surprise.. Please come in..

Kh: Haan humhe Kabir ne invite kiya tha, keh raha tha ki who Ananya koi special surprise dena chahata hai and he wanted that surprise in front of everyone...

Ananya by now is very scared, crazy thoughts start crossing her mind. She tries to smile in front of Khalid and Malvika and makes them comfortable and then pulls Kabir to a side...

A: Yeah sab kya hai Kabir?? Richa, Baby, Sunny, Armaan,Tarini aur abb malwika and Khalid bhi..sab kisi surprise ki baat kar rahe hai.. Kabir you are killing me.. I beg of you please kal jaise koi harqat mat karna.. ghar pe aaj aap jo bologe I'll listen to you but yaha sabke saamne please Kabir..please please please

K: Mrs.Sharma surprise toh planned hai, but agar aap promise karti hai that you'll listen to everything I say, aaj ke liye hi sahi, toh I can think about things... saying this he goes towards Khalid and Malvika for a conversation. In the meanwhile Inspector Khuarana also joins in the celebration. All the close people to Ananya and Kabir are present at the house.

Ananya's heart is racing at 200 miles/hour. She doesn't know what Kabir is going to talk about, but she tries to ignore it and try to keep chit chatting with her friends and family.

After a little while the lights of the house go dim and then there is focus light on Kabir. He is standing in the middle of the room:

K: Hi friends.. Thank you to each one you for gracing us with your presence. Jaise aap sab jante hi hai, yea baat mai kal shaadi pe bhi kar sakta tha, but I had many more people around yesterday. The news that I wanted to share with you guys today is very special to my heart and hence I wanted us selected few to be around when I talk about it.

Ananya in her mind, yeah toh news ki baat kar rahe hai, but keh rahe the ki surprise is for me, asie kya surprise news hogi?? Kahi humara honeymoon toh announce nahi kar denge na...Oh God.. yeah Kabir bhi na..

Kabir continues:

Kaha se shuru karu.. uss Kabir se jisko aap sab jante hai ya uss Kabir see jisko mai janta hoo..Chaliye usse shuru karta hoo jisee koi nahi janta.. Choti se family ka simple sa ladka tha, simple life aur bus 1 yakeen ki kisi din woh 1 saccha reporter banega.. but jaldi hi zindagi ke kadawee zeher ne usse das liya.. aur woh life mein akela hota gaya.. na koi dost na koi saathi.. bus 1 lakshya.. EIC banane ka, power pane ka.. Aur asie hi chalte chalte woh 1 angel se mila..

Woh Angel hamesha full of life, na zindagi se koi sikhayat aur na koi ghum, khush rehna aur sach pe chalna bus yahi aata tha usko.. uski 1 smile hi kafi hai aapka din khubsorat banana ke liye,.. uska bacchon jaisa dil, jismein hamesha sabke liye pyaar.. uski family uski strength.. aur uske FRIENDS uski life. Is Angel ne muze unknowingly puri tarah badal diya.. mai pathaar se insaan kab ban gaya muze pata hi nahi chala... mera dil firse dhadkne laga, firse pyaar karne laga.. mai firse jeene laga..usne muze apni life mein shaamil kar liya, uske friends mere friends ban gaye aur uski family abb meri family.. par achanak jane anjane mein mujhse ki huai galti uske samne aa gayi.. uske doston ne aur maine milke bahut samjhane ki koshish ki yea bus majboori thi but usse waqt laga samjhane mein, aur iss bech saccahai uske saamne lane ke liye muze asie kuch karna pada jo mai kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi chatata tha.. Acche logo ke pass raste kaam aur mushkil zadya hoti hai.. isliye kabhi kabhi na chate huae bhi bahut kuch karna padta hai... but aaj mai aap sabke saamne haath jodke khada hua.. and especially in front of my Angel..Ananya, this was my only option to expose RG but I want to gift you your friend back..

Friends.. Daljeet aur koi nahi Ronnie hai, and this was our trick to try our luck with RG and Shreya..

Everyone froze after what Kabir said, there was pin dropped silence. Ananya was stunned and unmoved; tears had started trickling down her eyes... Richa was frozen too.. And then suddenly Ronnie walks in the room...

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I am sorry this got a little too big, but bringing back Ronnie i wanted to finish alone as no one else would know what suprise my mind had planned.. I hope you all are happy that Ronnie is back 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ... this was an expected surpise ... Hoping the next will not have an MU, everyone takes this on right spirit.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes I m very happy 😊..welcome back Ronnie 😛
Thanks to both of u Kavikas n chaitali for bringing back Ronnie.


Edited by Aalina. - 9 years ago
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Awesome update chaitali!! And u know that i was thinking of the same twist too! I am a liitle angry that u stole my idea but happy as now it is reavealed. I was just about to write it but in a different way. But its just awesome!!👏
Ananya: Ronnie zinda hai? Kaise?? Aur aapne mujhse yeh chupaya kyo?

Richa: Ronnie toh zinda hai! Tu saachi mein zinda hai! Kaha tha tu? Tujhe pata hai meri kya haalat ho rahi thi. In fact yaha sab pagal ho rahe the. Tu itne din chupkar betha. Kyo??

Richa cannot control herself and runs into ronnie's arms. Ronnie also loved richa and wanted to confess in front of everyone. He wanted to welcome his new love in his life to make it bright again!

Richa: Promise kar tu kahi nahi jaeyga! Kahi bhi nahi. Mein tujhse itne dino se apni dil ki baat kehna chahti thi par zubaan se nikalti hi nahi thi. Par aaj jab tumhe vaapas paya hai mein kehti hoon. That i love you ronnie. I love you so much . Pls dont leave me! mAIn marr gayi thi tere bina. Plz ronnie.

Ronnie: I luv u too. Tu meri acchi friend bhi hai aur mera pyaar bhi. I will never ever leave u i promise.
(Richa starts cryind and ronnie wipes her tears away. Everyone is smiling that the lovers had met and kaya were luking at each other.)

kABIR(WHISPERS): Ananya, tum khush ho!
aND GIVES HER A SIDE HUG.
Ananya: Aap sabse acche ho! I luv u. thank you very much mere friend ko lotane ke liye.

Ananya(to ronnie): Oyee. Bas ho gaya rona dhona. Kaha tha tu. Meri parwah nahi hai na! Aur yeh vaapas zinda kese hoa.

Ro: Tu apne hero se hi puch le kabir sir ke bina toh mein kabhi bach nahi paata!

Kabir: Chalo guys aaj toh batana hi padega!
Ronnie ko jab tinu ka phone aaya tha toh usne mujhe address sms kiya tha aur sab kuch bata diya tha. Mein us time bahut tensed tha. And suddenly an idea struck my mind.I took a break.
To be conitinued..
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Posted: 9 years ago
On R se cliffhangers!
Good you got Ronnie back.
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Originally posted by: kavikas

Awesome update chaitali!! And u know that i was thinking of the same twist too! I am a liitle angry that u stole my idea but happy as now it is reavealed. I was just about to write it but in a different way. But its just awesome!!👏

Ananya: Ronnie zinda hai? Kaise?? Aur aapne mujhse yeh chupaya kyo?

Richa: Ronnie toh zinda hai! Tu saachi mein zinda hai! Kaha tha tu? Tujhe pata hai meri kya haalat ho rahi thi. In fact yaha sab pagal ho rahe the. Tu itne din chupkar betha. Kyo??

Richa cannot control herself and runs into ronnie's arms. Ronnie also loved richa and wanted to confess in front of everyone. He wanted to welcome his new love in his life to make it bright again!

Richa: Promise kar tu kahi nahi jaeyga! Kahi bhi nahi. Mein tujhse itne dino se apni dil ki baat kehna chahti thi par zubaan se nikalti hi nahi thi. Par aaj jab tumhe vaapas paya hai mein kehti hoon. That i love you ronnie. I love you so much . Pls dont leave me! mAIn marr gayi thi tere bina. Plz ronnie.

Ronnie: I luv u too. Tu meri acchi friend bhi hai aur mera pyaar bhi. I will never ever leave u i promise.
(Richa starts cryind and ronnie wipes her tears away. Everyone is smiling that the lovers had met and kaya were luking at each other.)

kABIR(WHISPERS): Ananya, tum khush ho!
aND GIVES HER A SIDE HUG.
Ananya: Aap sabse acche ho! I luv u. thank you very much mere friend ko lotane ke liye.

Ananya(to ronnie): Oyee. Bas ho gaya rona dhona. Kaha tha tu. Meri parwah nahi hai na! Aur yeh vaapas zinda kese hoa.

Ro: Tu apne hero se hi puch le kabir sir ke bina toh mein kabhi bach nahi paata!

Kabir: Chalo guys aaj toh batana hi padega!
Ronnie ko jab tinu ka phone aaya tha toh usne mujhe address sms kiya tha aur sab kuch bata diya tha. Mein us time bahut tensed tha. And suddenly an idea struck my mind.I took a break.
To be conitinued..


Kavikas muze agar tum bol deti that you wanted to write this, so I would have defiently stepped back.. nevertheless am glad..I love the twist you are giving...I can't wait.. continue soon.😊
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Kavikas muze agar tum bol deti that you wanted to write this, so I would have defiently stepped back.. nevertheless am glad..I love the twist you are giving...I can't wait.. continue soon.😊

Its ok yaar. you write or i write its the same no? Well sorry for leaving the story discontinued as i had some urgent work. really sorry will continue right away wait.
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