KaYa FF: Heart Beat PART 9 Pg 17 ( 14 th October) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: manaalkhan

wow!! amazing story.. Bechara Kabir
i hope ananya ko jldii hosh ajaye...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM..๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Jefann

Was awesome!!!!!!.

please make the chapters a bit more lengthy...
Greedy๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›


will try my best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome and a heart touching one !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

Awesome and a heart touching one !!!


thank u very much๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Lovely update.. ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ


thnax

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sana70

Awesome update ๐Ÿ˜Š


thanx๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Kabir: Miss Kashyap isse pehele ki hum andar jaaye

aapke saare cameras working condition mai hai na

I mean sab kuch check kar liya tha na aapne


Ananya : sir maine sab dekh liye

everythings working


Kabir: great then

let the show begin


Kabir and Ananya start off with the investigation of the house


The house appeared to be a normal one except for one room


the strange thing about that room was that it was a sort of make up room


where all masks , clothes and many more things for perfect disguise for there


Ananya: sir yeh toh bahut ajeeb cheez hai

yeh masks yeh disguises


Kabir: sahi keh rahi hai aap Miss Kashyap

hum dono ne jitni bhi research ki iss bande k baare mai

iske make up passion ka toh pata hi nhi chala


Suddenly they could hear some foot steps

as if someone was approaching the room


they immidiately hid in the balcony as there was no place to escape


The man came inside and locked the room


Kabir and Ananya peeped from the balcony to see the who the person was


and they were shocked as it was none other than

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ASHWIN RAJATH


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Kabir: maa plz aisa mat kijiye

meri beti mujhse mat cheeniye


Anita: aur jo tumne kiya uska kya Kabir

meri beti aaj coma mai hai

tum samajhte ho ki coma kya hota


Kabir: maa Ananya ko kuch nhi hoga

mai..mai jaanta hu ki woh theek ho jaaayegi

woh hum sab ko chod kar nhi jaa sakti


Anita: kabir aisa kya huaa tha tum dono k beech?

Ananya ka accident kaise huaa?


Kabir: maa hum dono k beech ek ladaai hui

Ananya itne gusse mai thi ki woh gaadi ki chaabhi uthai aur chali gayi


Anita: gaadi...!!


kabir usse driving acche se nahi aati

aur aisa kya huaa ki usse itna gussa aya


Usse gussa aata hai mai maanti

bahut gussa aata hai

par woh kabhi aisa nhi karti hai


aisi kya ladaai hui tum dono k beech mai Kabir

ki Ananya ne itna bada kadam uthaya


Kabir: maa usse sach pta chal gya


Anita: kaisa sach kabir


Kabir: jo itne saal se aap aur mai jaante hai

par Ananya aur Armaan nhi


Anita: kyaa...!!

aise kaise ho sakta hai


Kabir yeh sach hum dono ke alaawa aur koan koan jaanta hai jo woh Ananya ko bta sake


Kabir: Tarini


Anita: par Tarini kyu bategi Ananya ko

aur bhi koi hoga Kabir

yaad karne ki koshish karo

aur yeh koi aisa hai jo tum dono ko nuksaan pahuchana chaahta hai


Kabir: Siddhant


Anita: koan Siddhant?

koan hai yeh Kabir?


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Balcony


Kabir and Ananya are whispering


Ananya: sir yeh toh wahi jo mar chuka tha

par yeh toh


Kabir: yeh toh mai bhi nhi samajh paa raha hu Miss Kashyap ki aise kaise ho sakta hai

iski toh dead body bhi baramad hui hai


KYU BHAI KABIR SAHAAB AAP BAHAAR KYU KHADE ANDAR AAIYE


Kabir and Ananya had no option other than to move out


( Ashiwn Rajath: AR)


AR: kya kabir sahaab aap humaare ghar aaye aur balcony mei jaakar baith gaye

not fair ji


Ananya and Kabir were too shocked


AR: aaree kya huaa aap log itna shocked kyu hai

yeh soch rahe hai ki mai zinda hu


yeh kaise ho sakta hai

meri body toh police ne apni hirasat mai li hai


Kabir: sach bataao tum koan ho


AR: arre mai kabir sahaab

aap mujhe kaise bhool sakte hai

humare toh puraane sambandh hai


Kabir: kehena kya chaahte ho


AR: bhool gaye woh pharma scan case

ek hi toh chashmadeed gavah tha tumhaare paas


hearing the word pharma case Kabir turns to see Ananya

just to ensure she does nt understand which pharma case they r talking about

and by god s grace she didnt


Kabir: Siddhant Bhagat?


AR: arre waah Kabir saab pehechaan liye aap hume


Kabir: par yeh kaise ho sakta hai

woh toh 8 saal pehele gaayab ho gya tha


AR:woh yahi hai Kabir sahaab aapke saamne


AR removed his mask and revealed hi true self


AR: kal jo mara woh koi aur tha

usse maine apne chehre ka mask pehena diya tha

taaki duniya ki nazro mei mai mar jaau aur apna kaam zaari rakhu


Ananya :kaisa kaam


AR: aare wahi drugs vagera vagera


kyu Kabir sahaab aap k tote ud gaye kya mujhe itne saal baad dekh kar


TOTE AB TUMHARE UDENGE

SIDDHANT BHAGAT YOU ARE UNDER ARREST


Came Inspector Khurana s voice


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Anita: Siddhant ?

koan Siddhant?


Kabir: Siddhant Bhagat

Shreya Bhagat ka bhai



Hope the mystery was nt stupid


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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Wow yar!! Really nice!! I did not expect this twist!!! Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice update..hope ananya regains her consciousness soon...can't see Kabir's broken state...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

Wow yar!! Really nice!! I did not expect this twist!!! Awesome


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