Originally posted by: manaalkhan
wow!! amazing story.. Bechara Kabir
i hope ananya ko jldii hosh ajaye...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM..๐
Originally posted by: manaalkhan
wow!! amazing story.. Bechara Kabir
i hope ananya ko jldii hosh ajaye...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM..๐
Was awesome!!!!!!.
please make the chapters a bit more lengthy...Greedy๐๐
Kabir: Miss Kashyap isse pehele ki hum andar jaaye
aapke saare cameras working condition mai hai na
I mean sab kuch check kar liya tha na aapne
Ananya : sir maine sab dekh liye
everythings working
Kabir: great then
let the show begin
Kabir and Ananya start off with the investigation of the house
The house appeared to be a normal one except for one room
the strange thing about that room was that it was a sort of make up room
where all masks , clothes and many more things for perfect disguise for there
Ananya: sir yeh toh bahut ajeeb cheez hai
yeh masks yeh disguises
Kabir: sahi keh rahi hai aap Miss Kashyap
hum dono ne jitni bhi research ki iss bande k baare mai
iske make up passion ka toh pata hi nhi chala
Suddenly they could hear some foot steps
as if someone was approaching the room
they immidiately hid in the balcony as there was no place to escape
The man came inside and locked the room
Kabir and Ananya peeped from the balcony to see the who the person was
and they were shocked as it was none other than
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ASHWIN RAJATH
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Kabir: maa plz aisa mat kijiye
meri beti mujhse mat cheeniye
Anita: aur jo tumne kiya uska kya Kabir
meri beti aaj coma mai hai
tum samajhte ho ki coma kya hota
Kabir: maa Ananya ko kuch nhi hoga
mai..mai jaanta hu ki woh theek ho jaaayegi
woh hum sab ko chod kar nhi jaa sakti
Anita: kabir aisa kya huaa tha tum dono k beech?
Ananya ka accident kaise huaa?
Kabir: maa hum dono k beech ek ladaai hui
Ananya itne gusse mai thi ki woh gaadi ki chaabhi uthai aur chali gayi
Anita: gaadi...!!
kabir usse driving acche se nahi aati
aur aisa kya huaa ki usse itna gussa aya
Usse gussa aata hai mai maanti
bahut gussa aata hai
par woh kabhi aisa nhi karti hai
aisi kya ladaai hui tum dono k beech mai Kabir
ki Ananya ne itna bada kadam uthaya
Kabir: maa usse sach pta chal gya
Anita: kaisa sach kabir
Kabir: jo itne saal se aap aur mai jaante hai
par Ananya aur Armaan nhi
Anita: kyaa...!!
aise kaise ho sakta hai
Kabir yeh sach hum dono ke alaawa aur koan koan jaanta hai jo woh Ananya ko bta sake
Kabir: Tarini
Anita: par Tarini kyu bategi Ananya ko
aur bhi koi hoga Kabir
yaad karne ki koshish karo
aur yeh koi aisa hai jo tum dono ko nuksaan pahuchana chaahta hai
Kabir: Siddhant
Anita: koan Siddhant?
koan hai yeh Kabir?
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Balcony
Kabir and Ananya are whispering
Ananya: sir yeh toh wahi jo mar chuka tha
par yeh toh
Kabir: yeh toh mai bhi nhi samajh paa raha hu Miss Kashyap ki aise kaise ho sakta hai
iski toh dead body bhi baramad hui hai
KYU BHAI KABIR SAHAAB AAP BAHAAR KYU KHADE ANDAR AAIYE
Kabir and Ananya had no option other than to move out
( Ashiwn Rajath: AR)
AR: kya kabir sahaab aap humaare ghar aaye aur balcony mei jaakar baith gaye
not fair ji
Ananya and Kabir were too shocked
AR: aaree kya huaa aap log itna shocked kyu hai
yeh soch rahe hai ki mai zinda hu
yeh kaise ho sakta hai
meri body toh police ne apni hirasat mai li hai
Kabir: sach bataao tum koan ho
AR: arre mai kabir sahaab
aap mujhe kaise bhool sakte hai
humare toh puraane sambandh hai
Kabir: kehena kya chaahte ho
AR: bhool gaye woh pharma scan case
ek hi toh chashmadeed gavah tha tumhaare paas
hearing the word pharma case Kabir turns to see Ananya
just to ensure she does nt understand which pharma case they r talking about
and by god s grace she didnt
Kabir: Siddhant Bhagat?
AR: arre waah Kabir saab pehechaan liye aap hume
Kabir: par yeh kaise ho sakta hai
woh toh 8 saal pehele gaayab ho gya tha
AR:woh yahi hai Kabir sahaab aapke saamne
AR removed his mask and revealed hi true self
AR: kal jo mara woh koi aur tha
usse maine apne chehre ka mask pehena diya tha
taaki duniya ki nazro mei mai mar jaau aur apna kaam zaari rakhu
Ananya :kaisa kaam
AR: aare wahi drugs vagera vagera
kyu Kabir sahaab aap k tote ud gaye kya mujhe itne saal baad dekh kar
TOTE AB TUMHARE UDENGE
SIDDHANT BHAGAT YOU ARE UNDER ARREST
Came Inspector Khurana s voice
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Anita: Siddhant ?
koan Siddhant?
Kabir: Siddhant Bhagat
Shreya Bhagat ka bhai
Hope the mystery was nt stupid
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Originally posted by: shinyshajil
Wow yar!! Really nice!! I did not expect this twist!!! Awesome
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