KaYa FF: Heart Beat PART 9 Pg 17 ( 14 th October) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: NandiniRaizadaa

Hey please continue

The first part was wonderful

You see everyone is a bit stressed out due to separation track

That's why maybe no one responded after you posted recap but many people liked the first part

Please continue please


hmm
I understand
i ll contnue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Dr: Mr Sharma Ananya coma mai hai


Kabir: What..??


Dr: yes Mr Sharma


Kabir: yeh aap kya keh rahe hai

meri Ananya coma mai

yeh nhi ho sakta hai


Dr: mai samajh sakta hu ki aap abhi kaisa mehsoos kar rahe honge


Kabir:aap nhi kar sakte doctor

aap mazaak kar rahe hai na


Dr: aapko kya sach mai laggta hai ki mai iss waqt mazaak kar raha hunga

Mr Sharma aapki wife yaha jis condition mai aayi thi



"Koan Si Condition doctor"


"kya huaa hai meri bachi ko"


"woh theek hai na"


Kabir: maa


Anita: ek minute Kabbir

tum dekh nahi rahe ki mai dr se baath kar rhi hu


haa toh hum kaha the dr

kya huaa hai meri bachi ko

aur aap kis haalat ki baath rahe hai


Dr: aap ki beti ka bahut bura accident huaa tha jisme..


Anita: yeh aap kya keh rahe hai

accident?


Kabir tumne toh mujhe kaha tha ki Ananya ko labour pain shuru ho gya isliye tum usse hospital laaye ho

toh yeh dr kya bol rahe hai ki Ananya ka accident huaa tha


Kabir: maa woh..


Anita: Kabir kuch pooch rahi hu tumse

yeh accident kaise huaa


dr meri beti theek toh hai na?

usse zyaada chot toh nhi aayi na?


Dr: mam Mrs Sharma coma mai hai

unka bahut bura accident huaa tha

jisme unka kaafi blood loss huaa hai

humne bahut koshish ki woh coma mai na jaaye

par hum fail ho gye hai


Anita:kyaa


Dr: mai chalta hu

mujhe aur bhi patients ko dekhna hai


Anita takes the baby from Kabir s arms


Anita: jab tum meri beti ka khyaal nhi rakh paaye

toh meri naatin ka kya rakhoge


tum jaao yaha se Kabir

Ananya ki maa aur uska bhai zinda hai uska khyaal rakhne ke liye


Kabir: maa


Anita: Mrs Kashyap Kabir


Kabir: maa


Anita: Mrs Kashyap

plzz tum jaao yaha se Kabir

plzz Jaao yaha se


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For Ananya Kabir was her idol

her hero

her role model coz he was the only one who supprted her father


And For Kabir

Ananya wwas his image

as time flew by he became protective of her

he wanted to preserve her innocence and save her from this shrewd world

he made sure by hook or crook that he accompanied her in all her stings

he didnt know why he was so protective of her

but he always wants to be what she is

he doesnt want to her become a victim of the negatives of the world


Ananya and Kabir shared a spl bond which was nt of a boss and junior

bt something else

which they themselves did nt knew


Ashwin Rajaths Mansion:


Ananya: aap ??

aap yaha kya kar rahe hai


Kabir:Miss Kashyap shaayad aap bhool rahi hai ki mai ek democratic country ka vaasi hu

aur mai jaha chaahe apni marzi se jaa sakta hu


Ananya: wow congrts

ab aap bataenge ki aap yaha kyu aaye hai


Kabir: jaha Khabar waha Kabir aur jaha Kabir waha Khabar

shaayad aap bhool rahi hai ki aap yaha mera interview lene nhi

sting karne aai hai


Ananya: thank u so much SIR ki aapne mujhe yaad dila diya \

varna mai toh yaha picnic manane aayi thi


Kabir: chalo kuch toh acha kiya maine

ab chaliye

puri raath kya yahi bitaani hai


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Edited by priyajan12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome :) . I am feeling bad for Kabir :(.
Buddy request sent :)

Aur jaane se pehle :
Updates thode lambe rakhna :P :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Loved it to the core ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Kritikapawle

Awesome :) . I am feeling bad for Kabir :(.

Buddy request sent :)

Aur jaane se pehle :
Updates thode lambe rakhna :P :D


will try that surely๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Awesome
Beautiful update

Though you have made Anita a bit too harsh , more then what she is but I am sure you have a reason :)

Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
wow!! amazing story.. Bechara Kabir
i hope ananya ko jldii hosh ajaye...
Continue soon.
Thanks for PM..๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Was awesome!!!!!!.
please make the chapters a bit more lengthy...
Greedy๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by Jefann - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: zakter

Loved it to the core ๐Ÿ‘


thank u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: NandiniRaizadaa

Awesome

Beautiful update

Though you have made Anita a bit too harsh , more then what she is but I am sure you have a reason :)

Please continue


well both mother and daughter are impulsive
its not permanent anger
u ll know in nxt part
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