KaYa SS : Jatishwar *Ch 5 & 6 - pg 12/13* New! - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SumuDaEscapist

Beautiful... and heartbreaking.
amar kanna pachhe [:'(]

onek din aage ekti kobita likhecilam... tomar story'r shathe mile gelo..

Aaj Elo Shopno dekhibar raat
Aaj elo shopnopuroner raat...
Jogot phele tor namey mishe jawar raat
Shob bhule kal shuru korbo ek notun probhat

Bhalobashar shakhi debe j chaad
Aaj elo amader bhalobashibar raat...

tomar chokher cheye bujhini laglo kokhon shei chaade grohon...
nimishei shukhe laglo agun
nimishei amar shopno dohon.

aadhar hoye gelo jogot
khuje aar pachhi na poth...
hridoi thomke korchhe j bhoi..
ashbe ki kono moha bipod...

Aaj elo shopno bhagoner raat..
Aaj elo dukho dahoner raat..
polok fele, haralam e koi..
aaj elo amar shesh raat.

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[The night of dreaming has come,
The night of fulfiling dreams has come
The night ababndon the world for ur sake, has come.
Forgetting everything(bad) tomorrow morning we'll start anew.

The moon shall be a witness of our love,
The night to love has come.

I was so lost in Your eyes I didnt notice when.
An eclipse hid the moon

In instant (our) happiness was set ablazed,
In an instant our dreams were burnt.

The world has become dark
Cant find the way..
My heart grips in fear,
maybe some trouble is on its way.

The night of shattered dreams has come.
The night to burn in sadness has come.
In the blink of an eye where am I lost.
The night has come to be my last.]

~ Sumaya


PLz update soon.. really eager to see how present day KaYa unfolds.


Aww dear! *tight hugs* I cried too *Sniff*

By the way... the poem that you wrote stole my heart... i am going to include that in my story *with due credit to you...* seriously... you are wonderful! Pen down more! *loads of love your way/*

With another tight hug,

Shree


Thanks!

Originally posted by: tingding

Pls pls update soon. This story is the best I've read, really looking forward to the updates


Thank you so much dear, really means a lot for me!


Will try soon!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Do update soon dear
SumuDaEscapist - beautiful poem dear, loved it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Plzzz update naa cant wait anymore!!! 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Cuteariya : sorry for the delay... but very soon you're going to get the update!
@ Neha : Updating soon Neha dear! Yes, that is indeed a beautiful poem!

@ annabethpercy : updating as soon as i can dear!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Onek sundar hoache πŸ‘
Ami kadche 😭
Tumi lhum bhalo likho 😊
Ami notun Porsche tomar golpo
OtulonioπŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Haii dear friend , l just read your story. Its truly awesome.l loved each & every beat of it. Please don't stop writing this ff.update soon
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