KaYa SS : Jatishwar *Ch 5 & 6 - pg 12/13* New! - Page 10

absolutely no words dear

Yar rulla diya muje;!! I just couldn't control my tears!! I adore you and how?? Well everytime I get a pm I call out to all my dearest gods that let it be shrees update!; Ananya is deaf and blind!! Yarr!! I know you won't disappoint us... She is my age!! *jumps*
Can't wait for an update!!

Beautiful... and heartbreaking.
amar kanna pachhe [:'(]

onek din aage ekti kobita likhecilam... tomar story'r shathe mile gelo..

Aaj Elo Shopno dekhibar raat
Aaj elo shopnopuroner raat...
Jogot phele tor namey mishe jawar raat
Shob bhule kal shuru korbo ek notun probhat

Bhalobashar shakhi debe j chaad
Aaj elo amader bhalobashibar raat...

tomar chokher cheye bujhini laglo kokhon shei chaade grohon...
nimishei shukhe laglo agun
nimishei amar shopno dohon.

aadhar hoye gelo jogot
khuje aar pachhi na poth...
hridoi thomke korchhe j bhoi..
ashbe ki kono moha bipod...

Aaj elo shopno bhagoner raat..
Aaj elo dukho dahoner raat..
polok fele, haralam e koi..
aaj elo amar shesh raat.
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[The night of dreaming has come,
The night of fulfiling dreams has come
The night ababndon the world for ur sake, has come.
Forgetting everything(bad) tomorrow morning we'll start anew.

The moon shall be a witness of our love,
The night to love has come.

I was so lost in Your eyes I didnt notice when.
An eclipse hid the moon

In instant (our) happiness was set ablazed,
In an instant our dreams were burnt.

The world has become dark
Cant find the way..
My heart grips in fear,
maybe some trouble is on its way.

The night of shattered dreams has come.
The night to burn in sadness has come.
In the blink of an eye where am I lost.
The night has come to be my last.]

~ Sumaya

PLz update soon.. really eager to see how present day KaYa unfolds.

Pls pls update soon. This story is the best I've read, really looking forward to the updates

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice update dear

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Awww thanx for double treat...& as I read chap 5, I dreaded reading chap 6, coz I knew something heartbreaking gonna happen 🥺 dats why I read both chapter on different days 😆😆😆 & thank U, for giving bor-bau a phool shojja & enough time to romance 😳😳

Aww, thanks for ur comment... yeah u predicted right (abt the heartbreaking stuff.) Yeah, they did deserve a tiny little phool shojja <3

For once I thought Kabir literally gonna be reading out story to Partho on wedding night, a story about handsome Rajkumar & his love 😆😆😆but thank you Rana da 😆😆😆 for atleast this small happiness love birds cud enjoy before big disaster 😭

Well Rana da understands somethings which Partho can't *chuckle* True, tears of joy before sadness.

So, shuru se shuru karte hai 😆😆😆 chap 5 was a bliss & dreamy lolz Kabir's friends had fun pulling groom's leg & teasing him 🤣

Thanks a ton!

Liked Kabir & his Darjeeling & Darling's dreams ☺️...both had such b'ful dream 😳😳😳 though I loved Kabir's ideas more, they were more romantic 😛😆...& he surprised me, the first thought he got when he heard Darjeeling 😈😆 b/w the sheets 😆😆 he had one track focus 😈😈

Haha, yeah... well it's wedding night so can't blame him for the one track mind 😆 😆 😆

Guess wedding made Kabir more naughty & romantic 😳😆 or may be boy was waiting for wedding to show his romantic side 😛😆

Haha, well a wedding does change a man and with Kabir being so in love with his wife, what would stop him from expression on his"night".

Chapter 6, very honestly I didn't wanted to read it 😭😭 i wanted it to skip till you posted chap 7 😆😆😆...felt bad for Kabir 🥺 he cudn't fulfill his dreams in single birth ...it was so heart wrenching to see two of them die such brutually 😭😭😭


I know, I dreaded writing that chapter myself! I felt so terrible for having penned it down, their rebirth was the only solace I had while writing this!

Awww you made Miss Kashyap deaf & blind 😭😭😭...now how she will see Kabir 🤔... mann ki aankhon se 😕...Hope Kabir wud be completely fit & fine ...no disability to him...for their love story to progress either of them have to be fully fit & fine 😊😊😊

Yeah, there's a reason why *probably just because I am evil* True.. but does Kabir even remember? 😈

excited to see how these two gonna meet in this janam...will it be instant romance like last time they meet fell in love & get married...if yes,then hopefully this time Kabir will be able to fulfill his darling & darjeeling dreams 😃...of having four kids 😛😆

Glad you are excited! Haha, instant or not... this janam would *most probably* be a happy ending one! 😆

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Originally posted by: KaYa_licious

It's beautiful Chapter.

Loved each part of it.

Thanks a ton dear!

Kabir's friend teased him.

Aww..So cute

I loved to read Bengali dialogues whether I understand it or not.

It feels so real.

Thank u so much! Initially i was a bit hesitant but I am glad you loved it!

Every scene is so detailed and beautiful that one can easily visualize the it.

I loved Ronnie. He took Partho with him.

"Do not Disturb KaYa.." .😆

Hehe, well Ronnie understands few things 😉

Kabir and Ananya were amazing..

Speechless about their intimate moments..☺️

Hehe, gee thanks ☺️

Their conversation part was mind blowing.

The two planned their lifestyle after end of war.

They even planned the name of their children..

Awww

That was truly my most fav part while penning this one!

But the war will cast its shadow on their happy life

And All the dreams are going to shatter..

No problem..

They will fulfil in 2015...

Kabir's two children or may be three..😳

Hahahahahah... yeah that's true!

Coming chapters may have lot of bloodshed and persecution..

And the story of KaYa will end tragically

and then the beginning of new chapter of their life.

The era of 2015..Independent India

Excited for all this...

Update Soon and thanks a lot for Pm..

In the end want to say..

Apani oekjana audhbut lekhaka..

Ami apanara galpa anek bhalobhasi

( I may write wrong. I don't know Bengali. Just took help of Google Translate)

Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment! Aww you even took the trouble for penning down a few words in Bengali! *tight hugs* Ah, don't think about the errors, I perfectly understood what you wanted to say, jazbaat shabdo se zyaada hoti hai 🤗

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Just read the last two updates and I am still in shock...everything was so beautiful and perfect for kabir and ananya and all of a sudden death and cruelty surrounded them...it was so heart wrenching to read about their death and separation. ..I shouldn't say separation because they died in each other's arms...and I am even more shocked to read that in next birth ananya is blind and deaf...how will the story progress if she can't see anything. ..if she can't hear kabir's voice even?? Really looking forward to read further. ..

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Shruti11

wow what an amazing part do update soon and pm me

Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya

absolutely no words dear

and I mean it when I say no words