Originally posted by: Sokool27
Great update.
Shall be glad to read Kabir and Ananya's direct conversation .Please continue asap.Thanks for the pm.
Thank you! π³
That's coming up in the next update, which will be up quite soon! π
Originally posted by: Sokool27
Great update.
Shall be glad to read Kabir and Ananya's direct conversation .Please continue asap.Thanks for the pm.
Wow Ri is a real man to accept such a big problem in public
Originally posted by: KaYa_licious
Amazing Work Dear
Hridhawan showed a great courage to accept the truth in front of whole world.Ananya..She is perfect example of beauty with brains.She easily solved the case and supported Hridhawan in proving him innocent..Poor Kabir..He is trying to give lot of explanation about the effect of Ananya on him...And finally satisfied himself with conclusion that he drew..I will again say that it's a perfect example of.."Romanch Bhi aur Romance Bhi"Update SoonandThanks a lot for PM..
Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
''Three things can't be long hidden-the sun,the moon and the truth''.--Buddha.
That was a startling piece.The core theme of the case is very refreshing.Being the fairer and acclaimed weaker sex women have sometimes taken undue advantage of men to feed their cheap popularity and selfish means.And moreover the case gave a moral not to jump into conclusions without deep probing and thorough background analysis.The Hamletian dilemma of Kabir was beautifully illustrated with a touch of psychological views.As writers(Karma) you have wrapped up the entire case in a clear and meticulous way,which is a commendable job.ππAwaiting with intense eagerness for the fresh forthcoming update.Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.π
Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
Awesome update dear
loved itThe case details were nicely written!π Flawless!ππΌKabir's thoughts about Ananya were interesting, the fight of his heart n mind was amazing n amusing too!π€£ He tried hard to concentrate but couldn't!πHe was too shocked in the end!πRi-Zara's story is good! The twist in the end was really unexpected! But this is what I'll expect from my dear "Twister!"π€Beautifully written dear! Superb!πthanks for pmdo continu soon!
I loved this chapter π
It was written beautifully πCan't wait to read the next chapterπ³
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